Premium Admissions Essay Editing Service
Admission essays for college and graduate schools are some of the most important documents you will ever write. Therefore, it is imperative that you spend a good amount of time revising your work to make the right impression on the admissions officer or graduate faculty.
Wordvice’s Premium Admissions Editing Service is one way we are helping you to make this impression. This service allows you to receive feedback from your editor beyond the usual sentence-level corrections. In addition to grammar, mechanics, and style revisions, you will receive extended suggestions about how to change and improve your essay’s content, organization, and authorial tone—all of which are crucial factors in getting into the school or program of your choice. Our editors understand what admissions officers are looking for and help you check all the right boxes to get into the school or program of your choice.
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Why Choose Wordvice?
Wordvice has provided English language proofreading services for thousands of students, and a great many of our admissions essay clients have been successfully admitted to prestigious colleges and graduate schools, including Harvard, Stanford, Columbia, INSEAD, UC Berkeley, and dozens of others. We have processed over 11,000 application essays for international students (including Common Application Essays, Statements of Purpose, personal statements, and Letters of Recommendation) and maintain a customer satisfaction rating of 4.7 out of 5.0, with 82% of our admissions clients being repeat customers.
Such outstanding results are possible because we tailor our revisions to the needs of the applicant, their specific document, and the institution(s) to which they are applying. Because our proofreading and editing approach is guided by the actual standards used by colleges and universities to assess admissions essays, our editors focus on making revisions with the all-important target reader in mind.
By using our Premium Admissions Editing Service, applicants stand to greatly improve their chances of acceptance into colleges and graduate schools. Whereas our standard editing service guarantees proper grammar, spelling, mechanics, style norms, and natural written English, Wordvice’s Premium Admissions Editing Service provides you with more than just corrections: it gives you the tools you need to elevate your application through extended feedback that includes comments, suggestions, and critiques of the individual elements of your essay.
Our Premium Admissions Editors
Wordvice editors are among the best in the industry, and our Premium Admissions editors are the best of the best. We have admissions experts from a variety of backgrounds and academic fields with extensive experience, high levels of qualification, and proven success in editing admissions documents. Our editors have an average of over 5 years of essay proofreading experience and have received an average customer rating of 4.7 out of 5.0, along with top ratings by our managing editors. More importantly, we proactively educate our editors in the latest trends and practices in admissions to help you optimally leverage your academic history.
With our outstanding editors and rigorous quality control process, Wordvice has provided superior admissions editing services for years. Our Premium Admissions Editing Service takes this service to a whole new level, helping students improve their chances of getting accepted into their dream school.
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What Makes Premium Admissions Editing Different?
Extensive Revisions and Marginal Comments
Our Premium Admissions Editing Service provides essay proofreading and revision included in our standard service, along with editing for word choice, style, tone, clarity, and flow. Your editor will give detailed feedback about content and organization and ensure that your essay addresses the question, instructions, or prompt provided for your specific admissions document (Statement of Purpose, Common Application essay, personal statement, etc.). More detailed revision means deeper improvement of your paper and a more decisive edge over applicants with similar academic backgrounds.
The Review Letter Provides Two Forms of Feedback
The Overall Comment summarizes the essay’s strengths and suggests improvements.
The Overall Comment (or “Letter from the Editor”) provides a succinct but compact evaluation by the editor in charge of your first revision and gives you general feedback about your essay and any major issues noted by the editor. Your editor will note the strengths of your work and explain concrete ways in which you can improve it further.
The Admissions Essay Checklist analyzes central writing components of the essay in detail.
Whereas the Overall Comment gives you an idea of where your essay’s strengths and weaknesses lie, the Essay Checklist gives a point-by-point breakdown of four major writing categories in an essay (Content, Organization, Transitions, and Description), assesses how your essay meets or fails to meet the standards for each category, and provides detailed suggestions for how to improve your writing in each of these categories.
Sample Review Letter and Admissions Essay Checklist
Sample PaperReview Letter
Unlimited re-submissions and revisions within 14 days
After the first revision, authors often need to make further changes before submitting their essays to colleges and universities. Receiving multiple revisions and making appropriate changes is a great way to dramatically improve the overall impact of your writing. We thus urge authors to make use of our unlimited revision services. If no more than 20% of the original content has been altered, authors can receive revisions for up to14 days. (Please bear in mind that each re-submission will require an additional 48 hours to deliver.)
Communicate with your editor via our direct messaging system
Sending instructions and questions about your document to your project manager and waiting for an answer can take up valuable time during the drafting process. Therefore, our Premium Admissions Editing Service provides 14-day direct messaging with your editor so that you can more easily communicate any questions or instructions you may have. Our goal is to make it easier to improve the effectiveness and clarity of your work using this direct communication channel.
Writing Categories Addressed by the Admissions Essay Checklist
ContentDoes the essay contain the required information?
What relevant information did the applicant include about the topic?
Does the essay coherently and consistently address the question/prompt?
StructureIs the essay well organized?
Does the essay include an effectively composed Introduction, Body, and Conclusion?
Does the essay logically support the main argument or purpose of the essay?
TransitionsAre your paragraphs and ideas clearly and logically connected?
Does each paragraph begin naturally and use appropriate transition terms?
Are the beginning and ending of each paragraph appropriate?
DescriptionDoes your writing communicate facts and events effectively?
Did you include a motivation or causal reason for the details listed?
Did you use details to evidence your claims (“showing” vs. “telling”)?
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Our Premium Admissions editors revise every aspect of your writing, focusing on content, purpose, organization, and authorial voice, while also managing your essay’s word count (when requested). We guarantee 100% error-free writing while improving clarity and strengthening the organization and flow of your work. We improve your writing so that you can genuinely impress the reader and get into the school of your dreams.
Premium Admissions Essay
Sample PaperPremium Admissions Essay
- Eliminate grammatical errors (grammar, punctuation, and spelling)
- Replace and revise words and phrases to improve readability
- Substantive feedback on topic development
- Revise for coherent logic and clarity
- Reduce word count (up to 10% of document)