{"id":570,"date":"2016-04-15T14:15:00","date_gmt":"2016-04-15T05:15:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.com.tw\/?p=570"},"modified":"2023-10-18T16:23:33","modified_gmt":"2023-10-18T07:23:33","slug":"achieve-high-score-in-the-toefl-independent-writing-section-2","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/tw\/blog\/achieve-high-score-in-the-toefl-independent-writing-section-2\/","title":{"rendered":"\u5341\u500b\u6487\u6b65\u8b93\u4f60\u6258\u798f\u7368\u7acb\u5beb\u4f5c\u62ff\u9ad8\u5206(2\/2)"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>\u63a5\u7e8c\u4e0a\u4e00\u7bc7\uff0c\u63a5\u4e0b\u4f86\u63d0\u4f9b\u7b2c5~6\u500b\u6487\u6b65\u63d0\u5347\u6258\u798f\u4f5c\u6587(TOEFL Independent Writing)\u5206\u6578\uff0c\u5e0c\u671b\u5927\u5bb6\u770b\u5b8c\u8981\u7167\u8457\u505a\u5594~<\/p>\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">\n<figure class=\"aligncenter size-full\"><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" width=\"500\" height=\"334\" 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class=\"ez-toc-list ez-toc-list-level-1\"><li class=\"ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2\"><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-1\" href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/tw\/blog\/achieve-high-score-in-the-toefl-independent-writing-section-2\/#6_%E7%AD%94%E9%A1%8C%E5%89%8D%E5%85%88%E9%80%B2%E8%A1%8C%E8%85%A6%E5%8A%9B%E6%BF%80%E7%9B%AA\" title=\"6. \u7b54\u984c\u524d\u5148\u9032\u884c\u8166\u529b\u6fc0\u76ea\">6. \u7b54\u984c\u524d\u5148\u9032\u884c\u8166\u529b\u6fc0\u76ea<\/a><\/li><li class=\"ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2\"><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-2\" href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/tw\/blog\/achieve-high-score-in-the-toefl-independent-writing-section-2\/#7_%E5%AF%AB%E4%B8%8B%E7%AB%8B%E5%A0%B4%E9%87%8D%E9%BB%9E%E5%8F%A5\" title=\"7. \u5beb\u4e0b\u7acb\u5834\u91cd\u9ede\u53e5\">7. \u5beb\u4e0b\u7acb\u5834\u91cd\u9ede\u53e5<\/a><\/li><li class=\"ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2\"><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-3\" href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/tw\/blog\/achieve-high-score-in-the-toefl-independent-writing-section-2\/#8_%E7%B5%A6%E5%87%BA%E7%89%B9%E5%AE%9A%E7%9A%84%E5%8E%9F%E5%9B%A0%E5%8F%8A%E7%B4%B0%E7%AF%80%E8%AA%AA%E6%98%8E\" title=\"8. \u7d66\u51fa\u7279\u5b9a\u7684\u539f\u56e0\u53ca\u7d30\u7bc0\u8aaa\u660e\">8. \u7d66\u51fa\u7279\u5b9a\u7684\u539f\u56e0\u53ca\u7d30\u7bc0\u8aaa\u660e<\/a><\/li><li class=\"ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2\"><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-4\" href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/tw\/blog\/achieve-high-score-in-the-toefl-independent-writing-section-2\/#9_%E6%96%87%E4%B8%8D%E9%9B%A2%E9%A1%8C\" title=\"9. \u6587\u4e0d\u96e2\u984c\">9. \u6587\u4e0d\u96e2\u984c<\/a><\/li><li class=\"ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2\"><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-5\" href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/tw\/blog\/achieve-high-score-in-the-toefl-independent-writing-section-2\/#10_%E6%9C%89%E6%99%82%E9%96%93%E5%B0%B1%E6%AA%A2%E6%9F%A5%E4%BD%9C%E6%96%87\" title=\"10. \u6709\u6642\u9593\u5c31\u6aa2\u67e5\u4f5c\u6587\">10. \u6709\u6642\u9593\u5c31\u6aa2\u67e5\u4f5c\u6587<\/a><\/li><li class=\"ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2\"><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-6\" href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/tw\/blog\/achieve-high-score-in-the-toefl-independent-writing-section-2\/#%E5%BB%B6%E4%BC%B8%E9%96%B1%E8%AE%80\" title=\"\u5ef6\u4f38\u95b1\u8b80\">\u5ef6\u4f38\u95b1\u8b80<\/a><\/li><\/ul><\/nav><\/div>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"6_%E7%AD%94%E9%A1%8C%E5%89%8D%E5%85%88%E9%80%B2%E8%A1%8C%E8%85%A6%E5%8A%9B%E6%BF%80%E7%9B%AA\"><\/span>6. \u7b54\u984c\u524d\u5148\u9032\u884c\u8166\u529b\u6fc0\u76ea<span 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sentence\uff0c\u52d9\u5fc5\u6e05\u695a\u8868\u660e\u652f\u6301\u6216\u662f\u53cd\u5c0d\uff0c\u4e0d\u8981\u5beb\u8ddfPrompt\u4e00\u6a21\u4e00\u6a23\uff0c\u63db\u500b\u52d5\u8a5e\u63db\u500b\u5012\u88dd\u8b93\u8001\u5e2b\u77e5\u9053\u4f60\u7684\u5beb\u4f5c\u80fd\u529b\u3002<br>\u8209\u9019\u4e00\u500b\u984c\u76ee\u201cIn some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. 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