{"id":4003,"date":"2022-10-26T11:13:51","date_gmt":"2022-10-26T02:13:51","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.com.tw\/?p=4003"},"modified":"2023-09-15T16:07:11","modified_gmt":"2023-09-15T07:07:11","slug":"what-colleges-look-for-in-essays","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/tw\/blog\/what-colleges-look-for-in-essays\/","title":{"rendered":"\u570b\u5916\u5927\u5b78\u5165\u5b78\u7533\u8acb\u82f1\u6587Essay\u5beb\u4f5c\u7bc4\u4f8b\u8207\u6307\u5357"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>\u5927\u5b78\u5165\u5b78\u7533\u8acbEssay\uff08college 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class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\u512a\u79c0\u7684\u5927\u5b78\u751f\u5fc5\u9808\u5177\u6709\u7684\u6700\u91cd\u8981\u7d20\u8cea\u4e4b\u4e00\u662f\u80fd\u5920\u5f9e\u932f\u8aa4\u4e2d\u5438\u53d6\u6559\u8a13\u4e26\u514b\u670d\u6311\u6230\uff0c\u4ee5\u7372\u5f97\u6210\u529f\u3002\u52aa\u529b\u8868\u73fe\u51fa\u9019\u4e00\u9ede\uff0c\u5c0d\u65bc\u64b0\u5beb\u5177\u6709<a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/tw\/blog\/writing-common-app-essay-prompts\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u901a\u7528\u7533\u8acb\u683c\u5f0f\u7684\u547d\u984cEssay\uff08Common App Essay 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class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"%E5%A6%82%E4%BD%95%E5%9C%A8%E5%85%A5%E5%AD%B8%E7%94%B3%E8%AB%8BEssay%E4%B8%AD%E8%AB%96%E8%BF%B0%E7%A9%8D%E6%A5%B5%E5%90%91%E4%B8%8A%E7%9A%84%E5%93%81%E8%B3%AA\"><\/span><strong>\u5982\u4f55\u5728\u5165\u5b78\u7533\u8acbEssay\u4e2d\u8ad6\u8ff0\u7a4d\u6975\u5411\u4e0a\u7684\u54c1\u8cea<\/strong><span 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class=\"wp-block-quote\"><p><strong>\u58de\u7684\u5beb\u6cd5\u793a\u4f8b\uff1a\u53ea\u7a7a\u6d1e\u5ba3\u7a31\uff0c\u672a\u63d0\u4f9b\u8b49\u64da<\/strong><\/p><p>My teacher once told me that I was the most skilled and intelligent student she\u2019s ever taught, and I believed her. When I set a goal, there\u2019s no stopping me. I\u2019ll work at it until it\u2019s achieved\u2014even if it\u2019s to my own detriment.<\/p><p>\u6211\u7684\u8001\u5e2b\u66fe\u7d93\u544a\u8a34\u6211\uff0c\u6211\u662f\u5979\u6559\u904e\u7684\u6700\u6709\u624d\u80fd\u548c\u6700\u8070\u660e\u7684\u5b78\u751f\u3002\u6211\u76f8\u4fe1\u5979\u7684\u8aaa\u6cd5\u3002\u7576\u6211\u8a2d\u5b9a\u4e00\u500b\u76ee\u6a19\u6642\uff0c\u6c92\u6709\u4eba\u80fd\u5920\u963b\u6b62\u6211\u3002\u6211\u6703\u70ba\u4e4b\u52aa\u529b\uff0c\u76f4\u5230\u5be6\u73fe\u70ba\u6b62\uff0c\u5373\u4f7f\u6211\u5c07\u70ba\u6b64\u4ed8\u51fa\u5f88\u5927\u4ee3\u50f9\u3002<\/p><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote\"><p><strong>\u597d\u7684\u5beb\u6cd5\u793a\u4f8b\uff1a\u7528\u5177\u9ad4\u7684\u8b49\u64da\u5448\u73fe<\/strong><\/p><p>In sophomore year, I decided to set a goal to raise more money for Relay for Life than any other student involved. I asked my neighbors, family, teachers, and even my paster, who sat through my 20-minute prepared speech about why donating to this campaign would be the best use of his money. I spoke to community groups. I did three straight weekends of door-to-door fundraising. And in the end, my efforts paid off\u2014I succeeded in raising over $500 more than any other student.<\/p><p>\u5728\u5927\u5b78\u4e8c\u5e74\u7d1a\u6642\uff0c\u6211\u6c7a\u5b9a\u8a2d\u7f6e\u4e00\u500b\u76ee\u6a19\uff0c\u70ba\u6211\u53c3\u52a0\u7684\u201c\u751f\u547d\u63a5\u529b\u201d\u6d3b\u52d5\u7c4c\u96c6\u5230\u6700\u591a\u7684\u8cc7\u91d1\u2014\u2014\u8981\u6bd4\u5176\u4ed6\u53c3\u8207\u9019\u500b\u6d3b\u52d5\u7684\u5b78\u751f\u7c4c\u96c6\u5f97\u66f4\u591a\u3002\u6211\u63a2\u8a2a\u4e86\u6211\u7684\u9130\u5c45\u3001\u5bb6\u4eba\u3001\u8001\u5e2b\uff0c\u751a\u81f3\u6211\u7684\u7267\u5e2b\u3002\u7576\u6211\u7684\u7267\u5e2b\u807d\u5b8c\u6211\u6e96\u5099\u768420\u5206\u9418\u6f14\u8b1b\u5f8c\uff0c\u4ed6\u660e\u767d\u4e86\u70ba\u4ec0\u9ebd\u5411\u9019\u500b\u6d3b\u52d5\u6350\u6b3e\u5c07\u80fd\u5920\u6700\u5927\u7a0b\u5ea6\u5730\u7528\u597d\u4ed6\u7684\u9322\u3002\u6211\u9084\u5411\u793e\u5340\u5718\u9ad4\u767c\u8868\u6f14\u8b1b\u3002\u6211\u9023\u7e8c\u4e09\u500b\u5468\u672b\u6328\u5bb6\u6328\u6236\u9032\u884c\u7c4c\u6b3e\u3002\u6700\u5f8c\uff0c\u6211\u7684\u52aa\u529b\u5f97\u5230\u4e86\u56de\u5831\uff0c\u6211\u6210\u529f\u5730\u6bd4\u5176\u4ed6\u5b78\u751f\u591a\u7c4c\u96c6\u5230\u4e86500\u591a\u7f8e\u5143\u3002<\/p><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"%E8%A1%A8%E7%8F%BE%E5%87%BA%E4%B8%BB%E8%A7%80%E8%83%BD%E5%8B%95%E6%80%A7%E5%92%8C%E9%9B%84%E5%BF%83%E5%A3%AF%E5%BF%97\"><\/span><strong>\u8868\u73fe\u51fa\u4e3b\u89c0\u80fd\u52d5\u6027\u548c\u96c4\u5fc3\u58ef\u5fd7<\/strong><span 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class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"%E5%B1%95%E7%A4%BA%E8%87%AA%E6%88%91%E5%8F%8D%E7%9C%81%E7%B2%BE%E7%A5%9E%E5%92%8C%E6%88%90%E9%95%B7%E8%B6%B3%E8%B7%A1\"><\/span><strong>\u5c55\u793a\u81ea\u6211\u53cd\u7701\u7cbe\u795e\u548c\u6210\u9577\u8db3\u8de1<\/strong><span 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class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"%E7%94%A8%E6%98%8E%E7%A2%BA%E7%9A%84%E9%96%8B%E9%A0%AD%E3%80%81%E4%B8%AD%E9%96%93%E5%92%8C%E7%B5%90%E5%B0%BE%E7%B5%84%E7%B9%94%E6%96%87%E7%AB%A0\"><\/span><strong>\u7528\u660e\u78ba\u7684\u958b\u982d\u3001\u4e2d\u9593\u548c\u7d50\u5c3e\u7d44\u7e54\u6587\u7ae0<\/strong><span 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class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Essay%E5%B0%8E%E8%AE%801%EF%BC%9A%E9%97%9C%E6%B3%A8%E4%BD%A0%E7%9A%84%E5%80%8B%E4%BA%BA%E7%89%B9%E8%B3%AA\"><\/span><strong>Essay\u5c0e\u8b801\uff1a\u95dc\u6ce8\u4f60\u7684\u500b\u4eba\u7279\u8cea<\/strong><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\u64b0\u5beb\u5165\u5b78\u7533\u8acbEssay\u7684\u4e00\u7a2e\u6709\u6548\u65b9\u6cd5\u662f\u5728\u6587\u7ae0\u7684\u958b\u59cb\u90e8\u5206\u5148\u63cf\u8ff0\u4f60\u5177\u6709\u7684\u7a4d\u6975\u5411\u4e0a\u7684\u6027\u683c\u7279\u5f81\uff0c\u7136\u5f8c\u7528\u5177\u9ad4\u4e8b\u4f8b\u5c55\u793a\u4f60\u662f\u5982\u4f55\u8868\u73fe\u9019\u4e9b\u7279\u5f81\u7684\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote\"><p><strong>\u5f9e\u4f60\u7684\u7d20\u8cea\u958b\u59cb\u8ad6\u8ff0<\/strong><\/p><p>A student wants to show that he is determined and tenacious. He thinks about times when he went above and beyond what was necessary to succeed in high school. He thinks of how he became the only student at his school to participate in three or more AP classes while also being involved in multiple sports and extracurricular activities. He also thinks of his volunteer work with his church at a local homeless shelter, where he made friends and connections with shelter guests and high-profile members of the community. These are the qualities around which his essay is focused.<\/p><p>\u4e00\u500b\u5b78\u751f\u60f3\u986f\u793a\u4ed6\u505a\u4e8b\u60c5\u7684\u6c7a\u5fc3\u548c\u9811\u5f37\u6bc5\u529b\u3002\u4ed6\u60f3\u5230\u4e86\u5728\u9ad8\u4e2d\u6642\u4ee3\u81ea\u5df1\u4ed8\u51fa\u984d\u5916\u52aa\u529b\u8d85\u8d8a\u8ab2\u7a0b\u8981\u6c42\u800c\u7372\u5f97\u5de8\u5927\u6210\u529f\u7684\u90a3\u4e9b\u7d93\u6b77\u3002\u4ed6\u60f3\u5230\u4e86\u81ea\u5df1\u662f\u5982\u4f55\u6210\u70ba\u5b78\u6821\u88cf\u552f\u4e00\u7684\u53c3\u52a0\u904e\u4e09\u9580\u6216\u66f4\u591aAP\u8ab2\u7a0b\u7684\u5b78\u751f\uff0c\u540c\u6642\u9084\u53c3\u8207\u4e86\u591a\u9805\u9ad4\u80b2\u6d3b\u52d5\u548c\u8ab2\u5916\u6d3b\u52d5\u3002\u4ed6\u9084\u60f3\u5230\u4ed6\u8207\u6559\u6703\u4e00\u8d77\u5728\u7576\u5730\u7684\u7121\u5bb6\u53ef\u6b78\u8005\u6536\u5bb9\u6240\u505a\u904e\u8a8c\u9858\u8005\u5de5\u4f5c\uff0c\u4ed6\u5728\u90a3\u88cf\u8207\u6536\u5bb9\u6240\u7684\u4f4f\u5ba2\u548c\u793e\u6703\u4e0a\u7684\u77e5\u540d\u4eba\u58eb\u5efa\u7acb\u4e86\u670b\u53cb\u95dc\u7cfb\u548c\u806f\u7cfb\u3002\u9019\u4e9b\u7d93\u6b77\u90fd\u80fd\u5920\u5728\u4ed6\u7684Essay\u4e2d\u9ad4\u73fe\u51fa\u4ed6\u7684\u54c1\u8cea\u3002<\/p><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Essay%E5%B0%8E%E8%AE%802%EF%BC%9A%E9%97%9C%E6%B3%A8%E5%80%8B%E4%BA%BA%E6%95%85%E4%BA%8B\"><\/span><strong>Essay\u5c0e\u8b802\uff1a\u95dc\u6ce8\u500b\u4eba\u6545\u4e8b<\/strong><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\u53e6\u4e00\u7a2e\u64b0\u5bebEssay\u7684\u65b9\u6cd5\u662f\u4ee5\u4e00\u500b\u6545\u4e8b\u958b\u59cb\uff0c\u7136\u5f8c\u52aa\u529b\u5c55\u793a\u90a3\u4e9b\u80fd\u5920\u8b49\u660e\u4f60\u7684\u826f\u597d\u54c1\u8cea\u7684\u4f8b\u5b50\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote\"><p><strong>\u5f9e\u8b1b\u4e00\u500b\u6545\u4e8b\u958b\u59cb\u5beb\u8d77<\/strong><\/p><p>A student\u2019s sibling has been fighting cancer for the past three years, and he feels that this is an important experience that has shaped who he is today. He considers how the difficulties of this experience have changed him and help distinguish him from other applicants.&nbsp;<\/p><p>\u4e00\u4f4d\u5b78\u751f\u7684\u5f1f\u5f1f\u5728\u904e\u53bb\u4e09\u5e74\u88cf\u4e00\u76f4\u5728\u8207\u764c\u7665\u4f5c\u9b25\u722d\u3002\u9019\u4f4d\u5b78\u751f\u89ba\u5f97\u9019\u6bb5\u8207\u5bb6\u4eba\u5171\u5ea6\u7684\u7d93\u6b77\u662f\u5851\u9020\u4ed6\u6210\u70ba\u4eca\u5929\u7684\u4ed6\u7684\u91cd\u8981\u95b1\u6b77\u3002\u4ed6\u601d\u8003\u9019\u6bb5\u7d93\u6b77\u4e2d\u9047\u5230\u7684\u5404\u7a2e\u56f0\u96e3\u5982\u4f55\u6539\u8b8a\u4e86\u4ed6\uff0c\u4e26\u6709\u52a9\u65bc\u4f7f\u4ed6\u5f9e\u5176\u4ed6\u7533\u8acb\u8005\u4e2d\u812b\u7a4e\u800c\u51fa\u3002<\/p><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>\u901a\u904e\u5728\u6587\u7ae0\u958b\u982d\u4ecb\u7d39\u4ed6\u7684\u9019\u6bb5\u6545\u4e8b\uff0c\u9019\u4f4d\u7533\u8acb\u8005\u80fd\u5920\u5c07\u4ed6\u8981\u5728\u6587\u7ae0\u4e2d\u8868\u9054\u51fa\u4f86\u7684\u7a4d\u6975\u54c1\u8cea\u8207\u4ed6\u7684\u500b\u4eba\u6545\u4e8b\u4e2d\u7684\u7d30\u7bc0\u5b8c\u7f8e\u7d50\u5408\u8d77\u4f86\uff0c\u4f8b\u5982\uff1a<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\u4ed6\u5f88\u7368\u7acb\uff0c\u56e0\u70ba\u4ed6\u66fe\u7d93\u9700\u8981\u4ee5\u4e00\u7a2e\u56b4\u8085\u548c\u6301\u4e45\u7684\u65b9\u5f0f\u7167\u9867\u4ed6\u7684\u89aa\u4eba\uff0c\u800c\u4ed6\u7684\u540c\u9f61\u4eba\u5247\u4e0d\u9700\u8981\u8655\u7406\u9019\u4e9b\u68d8\u624b\u7684\u554f\u984c\u3002<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u4ed6\u5f88\u5c08\u8a3b\uff0c\u56e0\u70ba\u5b9a\u671f\u8655\u7406\u91ab\u7642\u7dca\u6025\u60c5\u6cc1\u4e26\u672a\u5f71\u97ff\u4ed6\u5728\u8ab2\u7a0b\u4e0a\u53d6\u5f97\u597d\u6210\u7e3e\u548c\u53c3\u8207\u793e\u5340\u5de5\u4f5c\u3002<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u4ed6\u5bcc\u6709\u540c\u60c5\u5fc3\uff0c\u56e0\u70ba\u4ed6\u4e86\u89e3\u56f0\u96e3\u7684\u5883\u9047\u80fd\u5920\u7d66\u4eba\u5011\u5e36\u4f86\u600e\u6a23\u7684\u5f71\u97ff\u3002<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p>\u7121\u8ad6\u4f60\u9078\u64c7\u4ec0\u9ebdEssay\u984c\u76ee\uff0c\u4f60\u7684\u6587\u7ae0\u61c9\u7576\u5411\u62db\u751f\u4eba\u54e1\u63d0\u4f9b\u5177\u9ad4\u7684\u8b49\u64da\uff0c\u8b49\u660e\u4f60\u662f\u4ed6\u5011\u5b78\u6821\u7684\u7406\u60f3\u4eba\u9078\u3002\u4f60\u7684\u6587\u7ae0\u61c9\u8a72\u6709\u4e00\u500b\u4ee4\u4eba\u96e3\u5fd8\u7684\u5f15\u8a00\uff0c\u6293\u4f4f\u8b80\u8005\u7684\u8a3b\u610f\u529b\uff0c\u4e26\u5f15\u5c0e\u8b80\u8005\u95b1\u8b80\u5168\u6587\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"%E5%9C%A8Essay%E7%9A%84%E7%B5%90%E8%AB%96%E4%B8%AD%E9%87%8D%E8%A4%87%E8%AB%96%E8%BF%B0%E4%BD%A0%E7%9A%84%E7%89%B9%E8%B3%AA\"><\/span><strong>\u5728Essay\u7684\u7d50\u8ad6\u4e2d\u91cd\u8907\u8ad6\u8ff0\u4f60\u7684\u7279\u8cea<\/strong><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\u76e1\u7ba1\u6587\u7ae0\u7684\u5f15\u8a00\u975e\u5e38\u91cd\u8981\uff0c\u80fd\u5920\u70ba\u5168\u6587\u6307\u51fa\u6e05\u6670\u800c\u5bcc\u6709\u5f71\u97ff\u529b\u7684\u65b9\u5411\uff0c\u4f46\u662f\u6587\u7ae0\u7684\u7d50\u5c3e\u6216\u7d50\u8ad6\u4e5f\u975e\u5e38\u91cd\u8981\uff0c\u56e0\u70ba\u7d50\u5c3e\u662f\u7559\u5728\u8b80\u8005\u8166\u6d77\u4e2d\u7684\u6700\u5f8c\u4e00\u7247\u8a18\u61b6\u3002\u64b0\u5beb\u5f37\u6709\u529b\u7684\u6587\u7ae0\u7d50\u8ad6\u7684\u597d\u65b9\u6cd5\u662f\u91cd\u5fa9\u4f60\u5148\u524d\u8a0e\u8ad6\u904e\u7684\u91cd\u8981\u54c1\u8cea\uff0c\u5305\u62ec\u56de\u9867\u500b\u4eba\u6545\u4e8b\u7684\u7d30\u7bc0\uff0c\u6216\u8005\u91cd\u5fa9\u5728\u6587\u7ae0\u958b\u982d\u4ecb\u7d39\u904e\u7684\u500b\u4eba\u54c1\u8cea\u3002\u4e0b\u9762\u7684\u4f8b\u5b50\u5c55\u793a\u4e86\u4e00\u500b\u597d\u7684\u7d50\u5c3e\u6216\u7d50\u8ad6\u80fd\u5920\u6355\u6349\u5230\u5b78\u6821\u6240\u770b\u91cd\u7684\u90a3\u4e9b\u6771\u897f\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote\"><p><strong>\u901a\u904e\u91cd\u8907\u4f60\u7684\u7279\u8cea\u4f86\u7d50\u675f\u4f60\u7684\u6587\u7ae0<\/strong><\/p><p><em>\u201cDuring my high school years, my qualities of leadership, initiative, and hard work have helped shape me to become the strong student I am today. As the head of our school\u2019s volunteer group, I showed that even a teenager can make a big impact. As a student achieving high grades in all three of my AP courses, I demonstrated my dedication to education about all. Finally, as a daughter of working-class immigrant parents, I have used my value of hard work to achieve things my parents never thought possible. These values have contributed to making me the conscientious and successful student and person I am now, and they will surely continue to assist and guide me in my academic and professional career.\u201d<\/em><\/p><p>\u5728\u6211\u7684\u9ad8\u4e2d\u6642\u4ee3\uff0c\u6211\u7684\u9818\u5c0e\u529b\u3001\u4e3b\u89c0\u80fd\u52d5\u6027\u548c\u52aa\u529b\u5de5\u4f5c\u7684\u54c1\u8cea\u5e6b\u52a9\u6211\u6210\u70ba\u4eca\u5929\u9019\u6a23\u4e00\u500b\u5404\u65b9\u9762\u90fd\u6bd4\u8f03\u5f37\u7684\u5b78\u751f\u3002\u4f5c\u70ba\u6211\u5011\u5b78\u6821\u8a8c\u9858\u8005\u5718\u9ad4\u7684\u8ca0\u8cac\u4eba\uff0c\u6211\u5c55\u793a\u51fa\u5373\u4f7f\u662f\u4e00\u500b\u9752\u5c11\u5e74\u4e5f\u80fd\u7522\u751f\u5de8\u5927\u5f71\u97ff\u3002\u4f5c\u70ba\u4e00\u500b\u5728\u4e09\u9580AP\u8ab2\u7a0b\u4e2d\u90fd\u53d6\u5f97\u9ad8\u5206\u7684\u5b78\u751f\uff0c\u6211\u5c55\u793a\u51fa\u81ea\u5df1\u5c0d\u63a5\u53d7\u6559\u80b2\u7684\u91cd\u8996\u3002\u6700\u5f8c\uff0c\u4f5c\u70ba\u7236\u6bcd\u662f\u6253\u5de5\u968e\u5c64\u79fb\u6c11\u7684\u5973\u5152\uff0c\u6211\u7528\u52aa\u529b\u5de5\u4f5c\u7684\u50f9\u503c\u89c0\u5be6\u73fe\u4e86\u6211\u7236\u6bcd\u5f9e\u672a\u60f3\u904e\u80fd\u5920\u5be6\u73fe\u7684\u4e8b\u60c5\u3002\u9019\u4e9b\u50f9\u503c\u89c0\u6fc0\u52f5\u6211\u6210\u70ba\u73fe\u5728\u9019\u6a23\u4e00\u500b\u81ea\u89ba\u548c\u6210\u529f\u7684\u5b78\u751f\uff0c\u5b83\u5011\u4e00\u5b9a\u6703\u5728\u6211\u672a\u4f86\u7684\u5b78\u8853\u548c\u8077\u696d\u751f\u6daf\u4e2d\u7e7c\u7e8c\u5e6b\u52a9\u6211\uff0c\u6307\u5f15\u6211\u524d\u884c\u3002<\/p><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"%E6%9C%89%E8%B6%A3%E7%9A%84Essay%E9%A1%8C%E7%9B%AE\"><\/span><strong>\u6709\u8da3\u7684Essay\u984c\u76ee<\/strong><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\u7db2\u8def\u4e0a\u6709\u6578\u4ee5\u767e\u8a08\u7684\u95dc\u65bc<a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/tw\/blog\/tips-for-writing-college-admissions-essays\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u64b0\u5beb\u5927\u5b78\u5165\u5b78\u7533\u8acbEssay<\/a>\u7684\u8cc7\u6e90\uff0c\u5305\u62ec<a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/tw\/blog\/2022-2023-%e7%be%8e%e5%9c%8b%e5%85%b1%e9%80%9a%e7%94%b3%e8%ab%8bcommon-app%e9%a1%8c%e7%9b%ae%e5%92%8c%e5%af%ab%e4%bd%9c%e7%af%84%e4%be%8b\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u5982\u4f55\u64b0<\/a><a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/tw\/blog\/writing-common-app-essay-prompts\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u5beb\u901a\u7528\u5165\u5b78\u7533\u8acb\u7684Essay<\/a>\u3002\u96d6\u7136\u4f60\u53ef\u4ee5\u627e\u5230\u5e7e\u5341\u500b\u6709\u610f\u601d\u548c\u5167\u5bb9\u8c50\u5bcc\u7684Essay\u984c\u76ee\uff0c\u4ee5\u4e0b\u662f\u5e7e\u500b\u5178\u578b\u7684\u597d\u984c\u76ee\uff0c\u5b83\u5011\u5c40\u9650\u6027\u4e0d\u5927\uff0c\u53ef\u4ee5\u6839\u64da\u4f60\u7684\u7368\u7279\u60c5\u6cc1\u548c\u500b\u4eba\u6545\u4e8b\u4e88\u4ee5\u6539\u9020\uff1a<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ol>\n<li><strong>A unique extracurricular activity or passion<\/strong> \u4e00\u7a2e\u7368\u7279\u7684\u8ab2\u5916\u6d3b\u52d5\u6216\u71b1\u60c5<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>An activity or interest that contrasts heavily with your profile<\/strong> \u4e00\u9805\u8207\u4f60\u7684\u81ea\u6211\u4ecb\u7d39\u8cc7\u6599\u6709\u5f88\u5927\u53cd\u5dee\u7684\u6d3b\u52d5\u6216\u8208\u8da3\u611b\u597d<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>A seemingly insignificant moment that speaks to larger themes within your life&nbsp;<\/strong>\u4e00\u500b\u770b\u4f3c\u5fae\u4e0d\u8db3\u9053\u537b\u5c0d\u4f60\u7684\u751f\u6d3b\u5177\u6709\u91cd\u5927\u610f\u7fa9\u7684\u6642\u523b<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>Using an everyday experience or object as a metaphor to explore your life and personality&nbsp;<\/strong>\u63a1\u7528\u65e5\u5e38\u7d93\u6b77\u4f5c\u70ba\u67d0\u7a2e\u96b1\u55bb\u4f86\u5c55\u793a\u4f60\u7684\u751f\u6d3b\u548c\u500b\u6027<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>An in-the-moment narrative that tells the story of an important moment in your life<\/strong> \u95dc\u65bc\u4f60\u751f\u547d\u4e2d\u4e00\u500b\u91cd\u8981\u6642\u523b\u7684\u8b1b\u8ff0<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"%E5%A4%A7%E5%AD%B8%E5%85%A5%E5%AD%B8%E7%94%B3%E8%AB%8BEssay%E5%AF%AB%E6%B3%95%E7%9A%84%E8%A3%9C%E5%85%85%E6%B3%A8%E6%84%8F%E4%BA%8B%E9%A0%85\"><\/span><strong>\u5927\u5b78\u5165\u5b78\u7533\u8acbEssay\u5beb\u6cd5\u7684\u88dc\u5145\u6ce8\u610f\u4e8b\u9805<\/strong><span 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