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class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"%E3%80%8C%E8%A8%8E%E6%8B%8D%E6%96%87%E3%80%8D%E7%AF%84%E4%BE%8B\"><\/span><strong>\u300c\u8a0e\u62cd\u6587\u300d\u7bc4\u4f8b<\/strong><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h4>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\u201cEveryone around me kept me from succeeding.\u201d 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