{"id":1466,"date":"2022-11-09T17:02:46","date_gmt":"2022-11-09T08:02:46","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.com.tw\/?p=1466"},"modified":"2023-08-28T10:24:59","modified_gmt":"2023-08-28T01:24:59","slug":"what-all-top-tier-colleges-look-for-5-tips-for-writing-your-admissions-essay","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/tw\/blog\/what-all-top-tier-colleges-look-for-5-tips-for-writing-your-admissions-essay\/","title":{"rendered":"\u4e00\u4efd\u6587\u4ef6\u8d70\u5929\u4e0b &#8211; 5\u500b\u7f8e\u570b\u7559\u5b78\u7533\u8acb\u6587\u4ef6\u5beb\u4f5c\u6280\u5de7"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<div id=\"ez-toc-container\" class=\"ez-toc-v2_0_17 counter-hierarchy counter-decimal ez-toc-grey\">\n<div class=\"ez-toc-title-container\">\n<p class=\"ez-toc-title\">Table of Contents<\/p>\n<span class=\"ez-toc-title-toggle\"><a class=\"ez-toc-pull-right ez-toc-btn ez-toc-btn-xs ez-toc-btn-default ez-toc-toggle\" style=\"display: none;\"><i class=\"ez-toc-glyphicon 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class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\u5df2\u7d93\u5e74\u5e95\u4e86\uff0c\u5f88\u591a\u7533\u8acb\u7f8e\u570b\u6709\u540d\u5b78\u6821\u7684\u671f\u9650\u5df2\u7d93\u5230\u4e86\u3002\u96d6\u7136\u4f60\u53ef\u80fd\u5f88\u65e9\u5c31\u6c7a\u5b9a\u4f60\u7684\u5922\u5e7b\u5b78\u6821\uff0c\u53ef\u80fd\u5728\u6700\u5f8c\u5e7e\u5468\u53c8\u6c7a\u5b9a\u591a\u7533\u8acb\u5e7e\u9593\u5b78\u6821\uff0c\u4ee5\u514d\u4f60\u7684\u5922\u5e7b\u5b78\u6821\u9580\u6abb\u592a\u7a84\u64e0\u4e0d\u9032\u53bb\u3002\u9019\u4e9b\u5b78\u6821\u53ef\u80fd\u662f\u5e38\u6625\u85e4\u806f\u76df\u5b78\u6821\uff0c\u50cf\u662f\u9054\u7279\u8305\u65af\uff08Dartmouth\uff09\u3001\u53f2\u4e39\u4f5b\uff08Stanford\uff09\u548c\u8036\u9b6f\uff08Yale\uff09\uff0c\u5176\u4ed6\u7684\u5b78\u6821\u53ef\u80fd\u6bd4\u8f03\u4e0d\u56b4\u683c\uff0c\u4f46\u662f\u9084\u88ab\u6b78\u985e\u70ba\u540d\u6821\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u7576\u958b\u59cb\u5bebCommon Application 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\u5df2\u7d93\u5e74\u5e95\u4e86\uff0c\u5f88\u591a\u7533\u8acb\u7f8e\u570b\u6709\u540d\u5b78\u6821\u7684\u671f\u9650\u5df2\u7d93\u5230\u4e86\u3002\u96d6\u7136\u4f60\u53ef\u80fd\u5f88\u65e9\u5c31\u6c7a\u5b9a\u4f60\u7684\u5922\u5e7b\u5b78\u6821\uff0c\u53ef\u80fd\u5728\u6700\u5f8c\u5e7e\u5468\u53c8\u6c7a\u5b9a\u591a\u7533\u8acb\u5e7e\u9593\u5b78\u6821\uff0c\u4ee5\u514d\u4f60\u7684\u5922\u5e7b\u5b78\u6821\u9580\u6abb\u592a\u7a84\u64e0\u4e0d\u9032\u53bb\u3002\u9019\u4e9b\u5b78\u6821\u53ef\u80fd\u662f\u5e38\u6625\u85e4\u806f\u76df\u5b78\u6821\uff0c\u50cf\u662f\u9054\u7279\u8305\u65af\uff08Dartmouth\uff09\u3001\u53f2\u4e39\u4f5b\uff08Stanford\uff09\u548c\u8036\u9b6f\uff08Yale\uff09\uff0c\u5176\u4ed6\u7684\u5b78\u6821\u53ef\u80fd\u6bd4\u8f03\u4e0d\u56b4\u683c\uff0c\u4f46\u662f\u9084\u88ab\u6b78\u985e\u70ba\u540d\u6821\u3002 \u7576\u958b\u59cb\u5bebCommon Application 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