{"id":1182,"date":"2017-04-05T15:15:00","date_gmt":"2017-04-05T06:15:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.com.tw\/?p=1182"},"modified":"2023-11-03T17:54:20","modified_gmt":"2023-11-03T08:54:20","slug":"addressing-wordiness-issues","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/tw\/blog\/addressing-wordiness-issues\/","title":{"rendered":"\u7cbe\u9032\u5b78\u8853\u5beb\u4f5c\u6280\u5de7\uff1a\u6539\u5584\u8d05\u8a5e\u8207\u8a9e\u614b\u7b49\u554f\u984c"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>\u5982\u679c\u4f60\u6709\u770b\u904e\u6211\u5011\u4e4b\u524d\u7684\u6587\u7ae0\u975e\u82f1\u6587\u6bcd\u8a9e\u8005\u5e38\u898b\u5beb\u4f5c\u8b2c\u8aa4\u7684\u5206\u6790\u5831\u544a\uff0c\u4f60\u53ef\u80fd\u6709\u767c\u73fe\u5176\u4e2d<strong>32%\u7684\u932f\u8aa4\u662f\u8207\u98a8\u683c\u898f\u7bc4\u76f8\u95dc\u3002<\/strong>\u6211\u5011\u5c07\u4ecb\u7d39\u5206\u6790\u5831\u544a\u4e2d\u767c\u73fe\u7684\u5beb\u4f5c\u898f\u7bc4\u932f\u8aa4\u4e26\u5217\u51fa\u4e00\u4e9b\u53ef\u4ee5\u5e6b\u52a9\u4f60\u6539\u5584\u7684\u6280\u5de7\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div 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\u201cbe\u201d + past participle of Verb + by + Noun1 \u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#008000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0Noun1 + Verb + Noun2<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u60f3\u53c3\u8003\u5176\u4ed6\u8cc7\u8a0a\uff0c\u53ef\u53c3\u8003\u4ee5\u4e0b\u9023\u7d50:\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/owl.english.purdue.edu\/owl\/resource\/539\/05\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Purdue Online Writing Lab (OWL)<\/a><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"http:\/\/www.dailywritingtips.com\/7-examples-of-passive-voice\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Daily Writing Tips<\/a><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"http:\/\/www.quickanddirtytips.com\/education\/grammar\/active-voice-versus-passive-voice\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Grammar Girl<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"2_%E8%B4%85%E8%A9%9E\"><\/span>2. \u8d05\u8a5e<span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\u8d05\u8a5e\u7684\u539f\u56e0\u6709\u5f88\u591a\uff0c\u4f8b\u5982\uff1a\u904e\u591a\u7684\u4ecb\u8a5e\u5b50\u53e5\u3001\u586b\u5145\u8a5e\u548c\u52d5\u8a5e\u540d\u8a5e\u5f62\u3002\u6211\u5011\u91dd\u5c0d\u5404\u500b\u554f\u984c\u90fd\u6709\u63d0\u4f9b\u6587\u7ae0\u8aaa\u660e:\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/tw\/blog\/improve-writing-eliminate-prepositions\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u6559\u4f60\u5982\u4f55\u7e2e\u6e1b\u82f1\u6587\u5b57\u6578: \u6d88\u9664\u4ecb\u8a5e<\/a>\n<ul>\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0in addition to \u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#008000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0also<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0take into consideration \u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#008000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0consider<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/tw\/blog\/avoid-fillers-powerful-writing\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u82f1\u6587\u5beb\u4f5c\u6642\u5225\u518d\u4f7f\u7528\u901924\u500b\u586b\u5145\u5b57(Filler Words)\u8ddf\u7247\u8a9e!<\/a>\n<ul>\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0This is actually good \u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#008000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0This is good.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0I just want to say I like this song. \u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#008000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0I like this song.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/tw\/blog\/improve-writing-edit-nominalizations\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u8ad6\u6587\u5b57\u6578\u8d85\u904e\u9650\u5236\u6642\uff0c\u8a72\u5982\u4f55\u7e2e\u6e1b?\u4fee\u6539\u52d5\u8a5e\u540d\u8a5e\u5f62<\/a>\n<ul>\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0He must make a decision about his future. \u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#008000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0He must decide his future.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0This study takes many factors into consideration.\u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#008000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0This study considers many factors. OR This study contemplates many factors.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u8d05\u8a5e\u5e38\u4f34\u96a8\u53e6\u4e00\u500b\u554f\u984c\uff0c\u5c31\u662f<strong>\u91cd\u8907\u6027\u3002<\/strong>\n<ul>\n<li>\u9664\u975e\u662f\u4f7f\u7528\u5c08\u696d\u8853\u8a9e\uff0c\u5426\u5247\u61c9\u8a72\u8981\u76e1\u91cf\u907f\u514d\u5728\u77ed\u77ed\u5e7e\u884c\u5167\u5c31\u91cd\u8907\u4f7f\u7528\u540c\u6a23\u7684\u5b57\u3002<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\u4f7f\u7528\u540c\u7fa9\u5b57<\/strong>\u6216\u8003\u616e\u4f7f\u7528\u4e0d\u540c\u53e5\u578b\uff0c\u4f8b\u5982\u8907\u5408\u53e5\u3002<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\u7576\u4f7f\u7528\u540c\u7fa9\u5b57\u6642\uff0c\u8a18\u5f97\u8981\u8003\u91cf\u5beb\u4f5c\u98a8\u683c\u8207\u5167\u5bb9\u3002<\/strong>\n<ul>\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0I like the house. The house is on a hill.\u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#008000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0I like the house on the hill.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u60f3\u53c3\u8003\u5176\u4ed6\u8cc7\u8a0a\uff0c\u53ef\u53c3\u8003\u4ee5\u4e0b\u9023\u7d50:\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/owl.english.purdue.edu\/owl\/resource\/572\/01\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Purdue Online Writing Lab (OWL)<\/a><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"http:\/\/www.dailywritingtips.com\/50-plain-language-substitutions-for-wordy-phrases\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Daily Writing Tips<\/a><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Grammarly<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"3_%E4%BB%A3%E5%90%8D%E8%A9%9E%E6%8C%87%E7%A4%BA%E4%B8%8D%E6%B8%85\"><\/span>3. \u4ee3\u540d\u8a5e\u6307\u793a\u4e0d\u6e05<span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\u7576\u4f7f\u7528\u6240\u6709\u4ee3\u540d\u8a5e\u6216\u6307\u793a\u4ee3\u540d\u8a5e\u6642\uff0c\u76e1\u91cf\u8b93\u4ee3\u540d\u8a5e\u96e2\u5b83\u4ee3\u8868\u7684\u540d\u8a5e\u8d8a\u8fd1\u8d8a\u597d\u3002<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u4e00\u822c\u4f86\u8aaa\uff0c\u628a\u4ee3\u540d\u8a5e\u8ddf\u5176\u6240\u4ee3\u7a31\u7684\u540d\u8a5e\u5206\u958b\u6703\u5bb9\u6613\u8b93\u4eba\u6df7\u6dc6\uff0c\u5c24\u5176\u662f\u4e2d\u9593\u9084\u6709\u593e\u5165\u53e6\u4e00\u500b\u985e\u4f3c\u7684\u540d\u8a5e\u6642\u3002 \u4f8b\u5982\uff1a&#8221;his&#8221;\u5728&#8221;Joe gave Mark his book.&#8221;\u53e5\u4e2d\u5bb9\u6613\u8b93\u4eba\u641e\u4e0d\u6e05\u695aJoe\u7d66\u7684\u66f8\u5230\u5e95\u662fJoe\u7684\u9084\u662fMark\u7684\u3002\u60f3\u907f\u514d\u9019\u500b\u554f\u984c\u53ef\u4ee5 (1) \u91cd\u8907\u4f7f\u7528\u540d\u8a5e\u800c\u975e\u4ee3\u540d\u8a5e (\u4f46\u9019\u65b9\u6cd5\u6703\u9020\u6210\u91cd\u8907\u6027) \u6216 (2) \u91cd\u65b0\u6392\u5217\u53e5\u578b\uff0c\u5982\u4ee5\u4e0b\u7bc4\u4f8b:\n<ul>\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0Joe gave Mark his book.\u00a0\u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0Joe gave Mark Joe&#8217;s book (awkward repetition!)\u00a0\u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#008000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0&#8220;Joe gave his book to Mark.&#8221; OR &#8220;Joe returned Mark&#8217;s book to him.&#8221; [\u7b2c\u4e00\u53e5\u53cd\u6620\u51fa\u66f8\u7684\u64c1\u6709\u8005\u662fJoe\u800c\u7b2c\u4e8c\u53e5\u5247\u8868\u660e\u662fMark\u7684\u3002]<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u60f3\u53c3\u8003\u5176\u4ed6\u8cc7\u8a0a\uff0c\u53ef\u53c3\u8003\u4ee5\u4e0b\u9023\u7d50:\n<ul>\n<li>Emory College of Arts and Sciences<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"http:\/\/bethune.yorku.ca\/writing\/pronoun\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Bethune College, York University<\/a><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"http:\/\/www.chompchomp.com\/terms\/pronounreference.htm\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Grammar Bytes<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"4_%E6%94%BF%E6%B2%BB%E4%B8%8D%E6%AD%A3%E7%A2%BA%E6%88%96%E5%86%92%E7%8A%AF%E7%94%A8%E8%A9%9E\"><\/span>4.&nbsp;<strong>\u653f\u6cbb\u4e0d\u6b63\u78ba\u6216\u5192\u72af\u7528\u8a5e<\/strong><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\u96d6\u7136\u6b64\u985e\u932f\u8aa4\u7684\u5360\u6bd4\u4e0d\u9ad8\uff0c\u4f46\u9084\u662f\u6709\u63d0\u51fa\u4f86\u8a0e\u8ad6\u7684\u50f9\u503c\u3002<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u5728\u9019\u500b\u4f86\u81ea\u65bc\u4e0d\u540c\u80cc\u666f\u8207\u570b\u5bb6\u7684\u4eba\u6bcf\u5929\u4e92\u52d5\u983b\u7e41\u7684\u6642\u4ee3\uff0c\u6211\u5011\u5fc5\u9808\u610f\u8b58\u5230\u81ea\u5df1\u7684\u8a00\u8a9e\u80fd\u5982\u4f55\u5f71\u97ff\u4ed6\u4eba\u3002\u5176\u4e2d\uff0c\u6211\u5011\u66f4\u61c9\u8a72\u6ce8\u610f\u4e0d\u8981\u96a8\u610f\u767c\u8868\u4efb\u4f55\u53ef\u80fd\u5192\u72af\u4ed6\u4eba\u7684\u8a55\u8ad6\u3002\u5728\u9019\u6a23\u7684\u524d\u63d0\u4e4b\u4e0b\uff0c\u7814\u7a76\u5beb\u4f5c\u9762\u81e8\u5de8\u5927\u7684\u8003\u9a57\uff0c\u56e0\u70ba\u7814\u7a76\u6642\u5e38\u6d89\u53ca\u4e0d\u540c\u7a2e\u65cf\u3002\u7576\u63cf\u8ff0\u81e8\u5e8a\u5be6\u9a57\u4e2d\u7684\u53c3\u8207\u8005\u6216\u793e\u6703\u4e2d\u7684\u7fa4\u9ad4\u6642\uff0c\u61c9\u8a72\u5c0f\u5fc3\u907f\u514d\u4f7f\u7528\u5230\u8cb6\u4f4e\u7279\u5b9a\u65cf\u7fa4\u7684\u7528\u8a9e\u3002<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u7576\u63d0\u5230\u4eba\u7fa4\u6642\uff0c\u76e1\u91cf\u4f7f\u7528\u6982\u62ec\u6027\u7684\u7528\u8a5e\u4ee5\u53ca\u975e\u6b67\u8996\u6027\u7684\u5ba2\u89c0\u63cf\u8ff0\u3002\u4f46\u4e0d\u9700\u8981\u70ba\u4e86\u8ffd\u6c42100%\u7684\u653f\u6cbb\u6b63\u78ba\u800c\u5c0d\u81ea\u5df1\u904e\u65bc\u82db\u523b\u3002\u4ee5\u4e0b\u7bc4\u4f8b\u63d0\u4f9b\u53c3\u8003:\n<ul>\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0Each man must fend for himself.\u00a0\u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#008000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0People should fend for themselves. 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