{"id":1051,"date":"2017-01-20T14:03:00","date_gmt":"2017-01-20T05:03:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.com.tw\/?p=1051"},"modified":"2024-11-06T13:27:38","modified_gmt":"2024-11-06T04:27:38","slug":"improve-writing-edit-nominalizations","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/tw\/blog\/improve-writing-edit-nominalizations\/","title":{"rendered":"\u8ad6\u6587\u5b57\u6578\u8d85\u904e\u9650\u5236\u6642\uff0c\u8a72\u5982\u4f55\u7e2e\u6e1b?"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<div class=\"wp-block-file alignright\"><a id=\"wp-block-file--media-4fa831b3-481c-48fa-986d-4df4bc0308f5\" href=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/tw\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/11\/17163226\/Editing-101-avoid-nominalizations.png\">Editing-101-avoid-nominalizations.png<\/a><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u4f5c\u70ba\u4fee\u6539\u6280\u5de7\u7cfb\u5217\u7684\u7b2c\u4e00\u7bc7\uff0c\u6211\u5011\u8981\u6559\u4f60\u5982\u4f55\u52a0\u5f37\u81ea\u5df1\u7684\u5beb\u4f5c\u529b\u9053\u3002\u63a5\u4e0b\u4f86\u5e7e\u7bc7\u5247\u6703\u4ecb\u7d39\u6700\u5e38\u5728\u53f0\u7063\u4f5c\u8005\u5beb\u4f5c\u4e2d\u898b\u5230\u7684\u5beb\u4f5c\u554f\u984c\uff0c\u4e5f\u5c31\u662f\u5197\u8a5e\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div id=\"ez-toc-container\" class=\"ez-toc-v2_0_17 counter-hierarchy counter-decimal ez-toc-grey\">\n<div class=\"ez-toc-title-container\">\n<p class=\"ez-toc-title\">Table of Contents<\/p>\n<span class=\"ez-toc-title-toggle\"><a class=\"ez-toc-pull-right ez-toc-btn ez-toc-btn-xs ez-toc-btn-default ez-toc-toggle\" style=\"display: none;\"><i class=\"ez-toc-glyphicon ez-toc-icon-toggle\"><\/i><\/a><\/span><\/div>\n<nav><ul class=\"ez-toc-list ez-toc-list-level-1\"><li class=\"ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2\"><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-1\" href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/tw\/blog\/improve-writing-edit-nominalizations\/#Tip_1_%E9%81%BF%E5%85%8D%E5%8B%95%E8%A9%9E%E5%90%8D%E8%A9%9E%E5%8C%96\" title=\"Tip # 1: &nbsp;\u907f\u514d\u52d5\u8a5e\u540d\u8a5e\u5316\">Tip # 1: &nbsp;\u907f\u514d\u52d5\u8a5e\u540d\u8a5e\u5316<\/a><\/li><li class=\"ez-toc-page-1 ez-toc-heading-level-2\"><a class=\"ez-toc-link ez-toc-heading-2\" href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/tw\/blog\/improve-writing-edit-nominalizations\/#%E4%BB%80%E9%BA%BC%E6%99%82%E5%80%99%E8%A9%B2%E4%BF%AE%E6%94%B9%E5%8B%95%E8%A9%9E%E5%90%8D%E8%A9%9E%E5%8C%96\" title=\"\u4ec0\u9ebc\u6642\u5019\u8a72\u4fee\u6539\u52d5\u8a5e\u540d\u8a5e\u5316?\">\u4ec0\u9ebc\u6642\u5019\u8a72\u4fee\u6539\u52d5\u8a5e\u540d\u8a5e\u5316?<\/a><\/li><\/ul><\/nav><\/div>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Tip_1_%E9%81%BF%E5%85%8D%E5%8B%95%E8%A9%9E%E5%90%8D%E8%A9%9E%E5%8C%96\"><\/span><strong>Tip # 1: &nbsp;\u907f\u514d\u52d5\u8a5e\u540d\u8a5e\u5316<\/strong><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\u5148\u770b\u770b\u4ee5\u4e0b\u7bc4\u4f8b:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ol>\n<li>We should take into consideration several factors.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>He must make a decision about what to do.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>They gave us information about the new research program.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<p>\u4f60\u89ba\u5f97\u4e0a\u9762\u7684\u53e5\u5b50\u6709\u4ec0\u9ebc\u554f\u984c\u55ce?\u9019\u4e9b\u53e5\u5b50\u5728\u6587\u6cd5\u4e0a\u4f86\u8aaa\u5b8c\u5168\u6b63\u78ba\uff0c\u4f46\u662f\u56e0\u70ba\u4f7f\u7528\u4e86\u540d\u8a5e\u5316\u7684\u52d5\u8a5e\u800c\u5c0e\u81f4\u529b\u5ea6\u4e0b\u964d\u3002\u4e5f\u5c31\u662f\u4e0d\u76f4\u63a5\u4f7f\u7528\u6709\u529b\u7684\u52d5\u8a5e\u800c\u9078\u7528\u9019\u4e9b\u52d5\u8a5e\u7684\u540d\u8a5e\u578b\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ol>\n<li>We should&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">take into consideration<\/span>&nbsp;several factors. [7\u500b\u5b57]<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>He must&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">make a decision<\/span>&nbsp;about what to do. [9\u500b\u5b57]<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>They&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">gave<\/span>&nbsp;us&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">information<\/span>&nbsp;about the new research program. [9\u500b\u5b57]<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<p>\u7d05\u8272\u90e8\u5206\u5c31\u662f\u52d5\u8a5e\u540d\u8a5e\u5316\uff0c\u6211\u5011\u53ef\u4ee5\u5c07\u9019\u90e8\u5206\u76f4\u63a5\u7528\u4e00\u500b\u52d5\u8a5e\u66ff\u63db\u3002\u9019\u6a23\u5c31<strong>\u53ef\u4ee5\u5c07\u5b57\u6578\u7e2e\u6e1b\u4e26\u7dad\u6301\u5728\u9650\u5236\u5167\uff0c\u5beb\u4f5c\u6642\u6ce8\u610f\u6587\u6cd5\u7d50\u69cb\u4e00\u5b9a\u80fd\u5920\u7701\u4e8b\u4e0d\u5c11&nbsp;<\/strong>\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ol>\n<li>We should&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">consider<\/span>&nbsp;several factors. [5\u500b\u5b57]<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>He must&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">decide&nbsp;<\/span>about what to do. [7\u500b\u5b57]<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>They&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">informed<\/span>&nbsp;us about the new research program. [8\u500b\u5b57]<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>\u52d5\u8a5e\u540d\u8a5e\u5316\u9084\u6709\u53e6\u4e00\u500b\u7f3a\u9ede\u5c31\u662f\u5bb9\u6613\u5beb\u51fa\u88ab\u52d5\u8a9e\u614b\u7d50\u69cb\u3002<\/strong>\u4e0d\u591a\u8aaa\uff0c\u4e00\u8d77\u770b\u770b\u4ee5\u4e0b\u7bc4\u4f8b\u5427:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u00d7<\/span>&nbsp;The&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">analysis<\/span>&nbsp;of how X-factor impacts B gene expression&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">was conducted<\/span>. [11\u500b\u5b57]<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u221a<\/mark>\u00a0\u00a0We\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">analyzed<\/mark>\u00a0X-factor&#8217;s impact on B gene expression. [8\u500b\u5b57]<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u5229\u7528\u628a\u540d\u8a5e\u5316\u8f49\u6210\u4e00\u500b\u52d5\u8a5e\uff0c\u8f15\u8f15\u9b06\u9b06\u628a\u53e5\u5b50\u7531\u88ab\u52d5\u8f49\u6210\u4e3b\u52d5\u8a9e\u614b\u4e26\u6210\u529f\u7e2e\u6e1b\u5b57\u6578\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote\"><p>\u5982\u679c\u4f60\u6aa2\u8996\u904e\u5e38\u898b\u7684\u52d5\u8a5e\u540d\u8a5e\u5316\uff0c\u53ef\u4ee5\u767c\u73fe\u4e00\u500b\u6a21\u5f0f\u3002\u52d5\u8a5e\u4f7f\u7528\u50cf\u662f&#8221;make&#8221;\u548c&#8221;take,&#8221; \u52d5\u540d\u8a5e(verb+ing), \u6216\u540d\u8a5e\u7531<em>&nbsp;-tion<\/em>,&nbsp;<em>-sion<\/em>,&nbsp;<em>-ment<\/em>,&nbsp;<em>-ence<\/em>, \u548c&nbsp;<em>-ance&nbsp;<\/em>\u7d50\u5c3e\u7684\uff0c\u5f88\u9ad8\u6a5f\u7387\u90fd\u6709\u4e00\u500b\u76f8\u5c0d\u61c9\u7684\u52d5\u8a5e\uff0c&nbsp;<strong>\u6240\u4ee5\u7576\u4f60\u5728\u4fee\u6539\u82f1\u6587\u6642\uff0c\u5229\u7528\u5c0b\u627e\u529f\u80fd\u627e\u51fa\u9019\u4e9b\u7d50\u5c3e\u548c\u52d5\u8a5e\u5f8c\u4fee\u6b63\u5c31\u597d\u56c9!<\/strong><\/p><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"%E4%BB%80%E9%BA%BC%E6%99%82%E5%80%99%E8%A9%B2%E4%BF%AE%E6%94%B9%E5%8B%95%E8%A9%9E%E5%90%8D%E8%A9%9E%E5%8C%96\"><\/span><strong>\u4ec0\u9ebc\u6642\u5019\u8a72\u4fee\u6539\u52d5\u8a5e\u540d\u8a5e\u5316?<\/strong><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\u6709\u6642\u5019\u52d5\u8a5e\u540d\u8a5e\u5316\u7684\u78ba\u662f\u5fc5\u9808\u6216\u7121\u6cd5\u907f\u514d\u7684\uff0c\u4f46\u76ee\u524d\u4f86\u770b\u6211\u5011\u662f\u904e\u5ea6\u4f7f\u7528\u4e86\u3002\u4e0b\u65b9\u6211\u5011\u5217\u51fa\u5e38\u898b\u7684\u61c9\u4fee\u6b63\u540d\u8a5e\u5316\u7684\u60c5\u6cc1:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ol>\n<li>\u7121\u610f\u7fa9\u52d5\u8a5e + \u52d5\u8a5e\u540d\u8a5e\u5f62:\u522a\u9664\u7121\u610f\u7fa9\u7684\uff0c\u5c07\u52d5\u8a5e\u540d\u8a5e\u5f62\u8f49\u63db\u70ba\u4e3b\u8981\u52d5\u8a5e\u3002\n<ul>\n<li>Joe will&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">conduct research<\/span>&nbsp;on the impact of the recent drought on local wildlife. \u2192&nbsp;Joe will&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">research<\/span>&nbsp;the recent drought&#8217;s impact on local wildlife.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>The board will&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">make a decision<\/span>&nbsp;next week about whether to accept you next week. \u2192&nbsp;The board will&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">decide<\/span>&nbsp;next week whether to accept you.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u7576\u52d5\u8a5e\u540d\u8a5e\u5f62\u662f\u88ab\u52d5\u8a9e\u614b\u7d50\u69cb\u7684\u4e3b\u8a5e\u6642:\u627e\u51fa\u771f\u6b63\u7684\u4e3b\u8a5e\uff0c\u4e26\u5c07\u52d5\u8a5e\u540d\u8a5e\u5f62\u8f49\u63db\u70ba\u8a72\u4e3b\u984c\u7684\u52d5\u8a5e\u3002\n<ul>\n<li>The&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">approval&nbsp;of the plan was given by<\/span>&nbsp;the committee yesterday. \u2192&nbsp;The committee&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">approved<\/span>&nbsp;the plan yesterday.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u52d5\u8a5e\u540d\u8a5e\u5f62\u5169\u5169\u76f8\u63a5: \u8f49\u5316\u7b2c\u4e00\u500b\u52d5\u8a5e\u540d\u8a5e\u5f62\u70ba\u52d5\u8a5e\uff0c\u4fdd\u7559\u7b2c\u4e8c\u500b\u6216\u5c07\u5176\u8f49\u5316\u6210\u7591\u554f\u5b50\u53e5\u3002\n<ul>\n<li>Their&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">interpretation<\/span>&nbsp;of the&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">implementation<\/span>&nbsp;of the institute&#8217;s program was insightful. \u2192&nbsp;They insightfully&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">interpreted how<\/span>&nbsp;the institute&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">implemented&nbsp;<\/span>its program.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>First was their&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">introduction<\/span>&nbsp;of their&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">analysis<\/span>&nbsp;of dreams by the trauma patients. \u2192&nbsp;First, they&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">introduced how<\/span>&nbsp;they&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">analyzed<\/span>&nbsp;the trauma patients&#8217; dreams.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\u7576\u4e3b\u8a5e\u4e2d\u7684\u52d5\u8a5e\u540d\u8a5e\u5f62\u8207\u8b02\u8a5e\u7684\u52d5\u8a5e\u540d\u8a5e\u5f62\u6642:&nbsp;\u5c07\u5169\u500b\u52d5\u8a5e\u540d\u8a5e\u5f62\u8f49\u6210\u52d5\u8a5e\uff0c\u8003\u91cf\u5169\u8005\u7684\u95dc\u4fc2\u4e26\u52a0\u4e0a\u5408\u7406\u7684\u9023\u63a5\u8a5e(because, when, if, although, even though, despite, etc.)\u3002.\n<ul>\n<li>Her&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">understanding&nbsp;of the situation was evidenced by the&nbsp;quitting&nbsp;of<\/span>&nbsp;her job. \u2192&nbsp;She&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">understood<\/span>&nbsp;the situation &#8230; she&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">quit<\/span>&nbsp;her job \u2192&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">When<\/span>&nbsp;she&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">quit&nbsp;<\/span>her job,&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">she showed<\/span>&nbsp;she&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">understood<\/span>&nbsp;the situation.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<p>\u73fe\u5728\u4e00\u8d77\u4f86\u7df4\u7fd2\u4eca\u5929\u6240\u5b78\u7fd2\u5230\u7684\u6771\u897f\u5427!\u770b\u5b8c\u4e4b\u5f8c\u5f80\u4e0b\u5c31\u53ef\u4ee5\u770b\u5230\u89e3\u7b54\u5695!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>\u521d\u968e<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<ol>\n<li>We made an agreement not to buy the house.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>They reached the conclusion that we should run a new cohort study.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Our review of the test results will begin tomorrow.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>\u9032\u968e<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<ol start=\"4\">\n<li>The discovery of a new planet by the Frankfurt Observatory 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