\uc720\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \ub2e8\uc5b4\uc218 \uc81c\ud55c\uc740 \uc5bc\ub9c8\ub098 \uc5c4\uaca9\ud55c\uac00\uc694?<\/h2>\n\n\n\n
\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uac01 \ub300\ud559\uc5d0 \uc9c1\uc811 \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud558\ub4e0 \ucee4\uba3c\uc571\uc744 \ud1b5\ud574\uc11c\ub4e0 \ud544\uc694\ud55c \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218 \uc81c\ud55c \ubc94\uc704 \ub0b4\uc5d0 \uc788\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. <\/p>\n\n\n\n
\ucee4\uba3c\uc571\uc740 \uac01 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0 \ud544\uc694\ud55c \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub97c \uc9c0\uc815\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uacfc\uac70\uc5d0\ub294 650\ub2e8\uc5b4\uc5d0\uc11c \uc774\uc81c\ub294 500\ub2e8\uc5b4\ub85c \ubc14\ub00c\uc5c8\uc9c0\ub9cc, \ud604\uc7ac \uc8fc\uc81c \ubcc4 \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub294 250~650\ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc0ac\uc774\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub97c \ub118\uac8c \uc368\ub3c4 \ub418\ub098\uc694?<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
\uac01 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218 \uc81c\ud55c \ubc94\uc704\ub97c \ubc97\uc5b4\ub098\uc9c0 \uc54a\ub3c4\ub85d \uc8fc\uc758\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub97c \uc790\uc138\ud788 \ubcf4\uc138\uc694. \uba85\uc2dc\ub418\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc740 \ud55c, \ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc81c\ud55c\uc744 \ucd08\uacfc\ud558\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc2ed\uc2dc\uc624.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218 \uc81c\ud55c\uc744 \ub118\uc5b4\uac00\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc138\uc694.<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
\uc5b4\ub5a4 \ub300\ud559\ub4e4\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc9c1\uc811 \uc190\uc73c\ub85c \uc368\uc11c \uc6b0\ud3b8\uc73c\ub85c \ubcf4\ub0bc \uc218 \uc788\ub3c4\ub85d \ud5c8\ub77d\ud560 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uc9c0\ub9cc, \ub300\ubd80\ubd84\uc758 \ub300\ud559\ub4e4\uc740 \ub9cc\uc57d \uadf8\uac83\uc774 \ucd5c\ub300 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub97c \ub118\uc73c\uba74 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ub04a\uc744 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\ub3c4\ub85d \uc124\uacc4\ub41c \uc628\ub77c\uc778 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud560 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc774 \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uadf8\ub0e5 \ub118\uaca8\ubc84\ub9b4 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
\uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\ub4e4\uc740 \uaca8\uc6b8 \ud734\uac00\ucca0\uc5d0 \uc0b0\ud0c0\ubcf4\ub2e4 \ub354 \ubc14\uc069\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub4e4\uc740 \ud558\ub8e8\uc5d0 \uc218\uc2ed\uc5d0\uc11c \uc218\ubc31 \ud3b8\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc77d\ub294\ub370, \uadf8\ub4e4\uc758 \ub300\ubd80\ubd84\uc740 \uac70\uc808\ub2f9\ud560 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ucee4\uba3c\uc571\uc73c\ub85c \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc5d0 \uc2e4\ud328\ud558\uba74 \uadf8 \uc774\uc720\uac00 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc774\ub098 \ub2e4\ub978 \uac83 \ub54c\ubb38\uc778\uc9c0 \ud655\uc778\ud558\uc2ed\uc2dc\uc624. \ub9cc\uc57d\uc5d0 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc81c\ud55c \ucd08\uacfc \uac19\uc740 \uc5b4\ucc98\uad6c\ub2c8\uc5c6\ub294 \uc774\uc720\ub85c \uc2e4\ud328\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \ub108\ubb34 \uc548\ud0c0\uae5d\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc9c0\uc2dc\uc0ac\ud56d\uc744 \uc798 \uc9c0\ud0a4\ub294 \uac8c \uc88b\uc740 \ud559\uc0dd\uc774\ub77c\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc904 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
\ub9cc\uc57d \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \ubc95\uce59\uc744 \uc900\uc218\ud558\ub3c4\ub85d \uc2e4\ud589\ud588\ub294\ub370, 99\uba85\uc774 \uc9c0\ud0a4\uace0 \ub2e8 \ud55c \uba85\uc774 \uc9c0\ud0a4\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc558\ub2e4\uba74 \uadf8\ub0e5 \ub118\uc5b4\uac00\uaca0\uc2b5\ub2c8\uae4c? \ubb3c\ub860 \uadf8\ub807\uc9c0 \uc54a\uaca0\uc8e0. \uadf8\ub7ec\ubbc0\ub85c, \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc785\uc2dc\ub97c \uc704\ud574 \ucd5c\uc18c\ud55c \ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \ub300\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218 \uc81c\ud55c\uc5d0 \uad00\ud55c \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc9c0\uc2dc\ub3c4 \ub530\ub974\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c \uadf8\ub4e4\uc758 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0\uc11c \uc720\ub2a5\ud55c \ud559\uc0dd\uc774 \ub420 \uac83\uc774\ub77c\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n
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<\/figure><\/div>\n\n\n\ub2e8\uc5b4\uc218 \uc81c\ud55c\uc774 \ubb38\uc81c\uac00 \ub420 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uc88b\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc4f0\uae30 \uc704\ud55c \ubc1c\ud310\uc774 \ub420 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ubcf4\ub2e4 \uc801\uac8c \uc368\ub3c4 \ub418\ub098\uc694?<\/h2>\n\n\n\n
\ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub97c \ucd08\uacfc\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \uba85\ubc31\ud55c \ubb38\uc81c\uc774\uba74\uc11c\ub3c4 \uacb0\uc815\uc801\uc778 \ubb38\uc81c\uc774\uc9c0\ub9cc, \ubc18\ub300\ub85c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uac00 \uc5bc\ub9c8\ub098 \uc9e7\uc544\uc57c \ud558\ub294\uc9c0\ub97c \uacb0\uc815\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \uc880 \ub354 \uae4c\ub2e4\ub86d\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. <\/p>\n\n\n\n
\ucd5c\uc18c \ub2e8\uc5b4\uc218\uc640 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218 \ubc94\uc704\uc5d0\ub3c4 \uc8fc\uc758\ub97c \uae30\uc6b8\uc774\uc138\uc694.<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
\uc77c\ubd80 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\uc5d0\ub294 \uc81c\uc548\ub418\ub294 \ucd5c\uc18c \ub2e8\uc5b4(\uc608: 500~650\ub2e8\uc5b4)\uac00 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc704\uc5d0\uc11c \uc5b8\uae09\ud55c \ubc14\uc640 \uac19\uc774, \uc628\ub77c\uc778 \ud14d\uc2a4\ud2b8 \ucc3d\uc5d0\ub294 \ucd5c\ub300 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\uc5d0\uc11c \uc0ac\uc6a9\uc790\ub97c \ucc28\ub2e8\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. 500\ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc774\uc0c1\uc744 \uc785\ub825\ud558\ub77c\ub294 \ube68\uac04\uc0c9 \ud14d\uc2a4\ud2b8\uac00 \ub730 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc \ud56d\uc0c1 \uc9c1\uc811 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218 \uc9c0\uce68\uc744 \ub2e4\uc2dc \ud655\uc778\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc88b\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc744 \ube5b\ub098\uac8c \ud560 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
\uc65c \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc740 \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc758 \uc790\uae30\uc18c\uac1c\uc11c\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \ucd5c\uc18c\ud55c\uc758 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub9cc \uaca8\uc6b0 \ub9de\ucd94\uc5b4 \uc4f0\ub098\uc694? \uc774\uac83\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc218\ub9ce\uc740 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\ub4e4 \uc0ac\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \ub4dc\ub7ec\ub0a0 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uc88b\uc740 \uae30\ud68c\uc774\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \uc644\uc804\ud788 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\uba74\uc11c \ub2e8\uc5b4\uc640 \ud45c\ud604\uc744 \ud604\uba85\ud558\uac8c \uc120\ud0dd\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \uc911\uc694\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc608\uc2dc\ub97c \uc801\uc808\ud558\uac8c \ub123\uc73c\uc138\uc694. <\/h3>\n\n\n\n
\uc5b4\ub5a4 \ud2b9\uc815\ud55c \uc608\uc2dc(\uc788\uc5c8\ub358 \uc77c, \ubcf8\uc778\uc758 \ud589\ub3d9)\ub4f1\uc744 \ub354\ud574\uc11c \uc694\uad6c\ud558\ub294 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218 \ubc94\uc704\uc758 \uae00\uc744 \uc4f8 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\ub807\uac8c \ud558\uba74 \uc8fc\uc694 \uc0ac\ud56d\uc744 \ubcf4\uac15\ud558\uba74\uc11c \uc911\ubcf5\ub41c \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \uc4f0\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ubc29\uc9c0\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\ub4e4\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \ub3c5\ud2b9\ud55c \uacbd\ud5d8\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \ub4e3\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uc88b\uc544\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub97c \ub9de\ucd94\uc5b4 \uc4f0\ub294 \uac8c \uc65c \uc774\ub807\uac8c \uc5b4\ub824\uc6b8\uae4c\uc694?<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218 \ubcf4\ub2e4 \uc801\uac8c \uc4f0\ub294 \uac8c \uc65c \uc5b4\ub824\uc6b8\uae4c\uc694?<\/h2>\n\n\n\n
\uc6b0\ub9ac\ub294 \uc774\uc81c \uc65c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218 \uc81c\ud55c\uc744 \uc5b4\uae30\uc9c0 \uc54a\ub3c4\ub85d \uc62c\ubc14\ub978 \ubc94\uc704\ub97c \uc720\uc9c0\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc911\uc694\ud55c\uc9c0 \uc54c\uc558\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc \uc65c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218 \uc81c\ud55c \ubc94\uc704\uc5d0 \uba38\ubb34\ub974\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uadf8\ub807\uac8c \uc5b4\ub824\uc6b4 \uac83\uc77c\uae4c\uc694?<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \ubb38\ub2e8\uc774 \ud6a8\uacfc\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ub098\ub258\uc5b4 \uc788\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
\uac00\uc7a5 \ud6a8\uacfc\uc801\uc778 \uac83\uc740 \uac04\ub2e8\ud558\uac8c \uc11c\uc220\ub420 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uac00\uc7a5 \ud6a8\uacfc\uc801\uc778 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \ud6a8\uc728\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc870\uc9c1\ud558\uace0, \uad6c\uc131\ud558\uace0, \uc18c\ud1b5\ud569\ub418\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\uac83\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc785\uc2dc\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \uae38\uc774\uac00 \uc9e7\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uc758\ubbf8\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc544\ub2d9\ub2c8\ub2e4; \uadf8\uac83\uc740 \uac01\uac01\uc758 \uc694\uc810\uc774 \uac04\uacb0\ud574\uc57c \ud55c\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uc758\ubbf8\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. <\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4, \uae00\uc744 \uae54\ub054\ud55c \ubb38\ub2e8\uc73c\ub85c \ub098\ub204\uc138\uc694. \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ud559\uc5c5, \ub9ac\ub354\uc2ed, \uc790\uc6d0 \ubd09\uc0ac, \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc744 \uc704\ud55c \ubcc4\ub3c4\uc758 \uc139\uc158\uc73c\ub85c \uad6c\uc131\ud558\uc138\uc694. \uacfc\uc678 \ud65c\ub3d9\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc139\uc158\uc744 \ubc18\ub4dc\uc2dc \ucd94\uac00\ud558\uc138\uc694. \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\uac00 \uc0c1\uad00\uc774 \uc5c6\uac8c \ub290\uaef4\uc9c0\ub3c4\ub85d \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uad6c\uc870\ub97c \ub3c5\uc790\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c \uba85\ud655\ud788 \ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uac00 \uc8fc\uc81c\uc5d0 \uad00\ub828\ub418\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc740 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \ud558\uace0 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
\ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub97c \uc904\uc774\ub294 \ub370 \uc5b4\ub824\uc6c0\uc744 \uacaa\uace0 \uc788\ub2e4\uba74, \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\uc640 \uad00\ub828\uc774 \uc5c6\ub294 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc774\ub098 \uc804\uccb4 \ub2e8\ub77d\uc744 \ucc3e\uc544\ubcf4\uc138\uc694. \ubd88\ud544\uc694\ud55c \uc815\ubcf4\ub97c \ucd94\uac00\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \uc27d\uac8c \ube60\uc9c8 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ud568\uc815\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc77c\ud654\ub098 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\uac00 \ud765\ubbf8\ub86d\uace0 \uc7ac\ubbf8\uc788\uc744 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uadf8\uac83\ub4e4\uc774 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc65c UC\ub098 \uc2a4\ud0e0\ud3ec\ub4dc\uc5d0 \uac00\uace0 \uc2f6\uc740\uc9c0\ub97c \uc124\uba85\ud558\ub294\ub370 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub420\uae4c\uc694?<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uac00 \uc815\ud655\ud55c \ub3d9\uc0ac\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uc9c0 \ubabb\ud558\uace0 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
\uc774 \ud301\uc740 \uc880 \uc0ac\uc18c\ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uae38\uc774\uc640 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub97c \uc904\uc774\ub294 \ub370 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub420 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc4f8 \ub54c\ub294 \ud56d\uc0c1 \uac00\uc7a5 \uc801\uc808\ud55c \ub3d9\uc0ac, \ud2b9\ud788 ‘\ud55c’ \ub3d9\uc0ac\ub9cc \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uc138\uc694. \uc804\uccb4\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub97c \ud06c\uac8c \uc904\uc77c \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\uac83\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc798\ubabb\ub41c \ub3d9\uc0ac\ub97c \uc120\ud0dd\ud560 \ub54c, \uc885\uc885 \uba85\ud655\ud558\uac8c \ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \ub354 \ub9ce\uc740 \ub2e8\uc5b4\ub97c \ucd94\uac00\ud574\uc57c \ud558\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc608\uc2dc<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n\ud3c9\uade0\uc801\uc778 \uae34 \ubb38\uc7a5: \u201cI hit the ball so hard it went over the fence.\u201d <\/em>
\uac04\uacb0\ud558\uba74\uc11c \ud6cc\ub96d\ud55c \ubb38\uc7a5: \u201cI smashed the ball over the fence.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n“hit”\ub77c\ub294 \ub3d9\uc0ac\ub294 \uc804\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc11c\uc220\uc801\uc778 \ud589\ub3d9 \ub3d9\uc0ac\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\uac83\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uacf5\uc744 \uce58\ub294 \uc815\ub3c4\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc5b4\ub5a0\ud55c \ub9e5\ub77d\ub3c4 \uc81c\uacf5\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc73c\uba70, \uadf8\ub807\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 “\uadf8\ub807\uac8c \uc138\uac8c”\ub098 \ub2e4\ub978 \ubd80\uc0ac\uac00 \uc790\uc5f0\uc2a4\ub7fd\uac8c \uc815\uaddc \ub3d9\uc0ac\uc5d0 \ucd94\uac00\ub418\uc5b4 \ucd94\uac00 \uc815\ubcf4\ub97c \uc81c\uacf5\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub3d9\uc0ac\ub97c “smashed”\uacfc \uac19\uc774 \uc880 \ub354 \ub9e4\ub825\uc801\uc778 \uac83\uc73c\ub85c \uc644\uc804\ud788 \ubc14\uafb8\uba74 \ud544\uc694\ud55c \ubaa8\ub4e0 \ucee8\ud14d\uc2a4\ud2b8\uac00 \uc81c\uacf5\ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc740 11\uac1c\uc758 \ub2e8\uc5b4\ub97c 4\uac1c\ub85c \uc904\uc600\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4!<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \uc815\ud574\uc9c4 \ud615\uc2dd\uc774\ub098 \uad6c\uc870\uc5d0 \uc5bd\ub9e4\uc5ec \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
\ub300\ud559\uc5d0 \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud558\ub294 \ub9ce\uc740 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc740 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc11c\ub860, \ubcf8\ub860, \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uacb0\ub860\uc73c\ub85c \uad6c\uc131\ub41c \uc804\ud1b5\uc801\uc778 \uad6c\uc870\uc5d0 \ub9de\ucd94\ub824\uace0 \uc2dc\ub3c4\ud558\ub294 \ud568\uc815\uc5d0 \ube60\uc9d1\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
650\ub2e8\uc5b4\ub9cc \uc788\uc73c\uba74, \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc740 \uacf5\uc2dd\uc801\uc778 \uc5c4\uaca9\ud55c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uad6c\uc870\ub97c \uc0dd\ub7b5\ud568\uc73c\ub85c\uc368 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub97c \ub9de\ucd9c \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub300\uc2e0, \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc5d0 \uace7\ubc14\ub85c \uc9d1\uc911\ud558\uc138\uc694. \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc758 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uacfc \uacbd\ud5d8\uc740 \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc758 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \uac00\uc7a5 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uc694\uc18c\uc774\uba70, \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc740 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \ub2e8\uc5b4\ub97c \ud544\uc694\ub85c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc785\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \ub2e8\uc5b4\uc218\ub97c \ucd95\uc18c\ud558\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95<\/h2>\n\n\n\n
\uc5ec\uae30 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \uae38\uc774\ub97c \uc904\uc774\uae30 \uc704\ud55c \uba87 \uac00\uc9c0 \uac04\ub2e8\ud55c \uc870\uc5b8\ub4e4\uc774 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uba3c\uc800 \uc804\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ud301\ubd80\ud130 \uc544\ub798 \ubb38\ubc95\uacfc \uad50\uc815 \uad00\ub828 \ub2e8\uacc4\ub85c \ub118\uc5b4\uac00\uaca0\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc4f8 \ub370 \uc5c6\ub294 \ubd80\uc0ac\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc138\uc694.<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
\uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \ubd80\uc0ac\uac00 \ub108\ubb34 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc9c0 \uc54c\uc544\ubcf4\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95\uc740 \ub2e4\uc74c\uacfc \uac19\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub3d9\uc0ac \uc8fc\ubcc0\uc5d0\uc11c “ly” \ub2e8\uc5b4\ub97c \ucc3e\uc73c\uc138\uc694. \uc885\uc885, \uc774\ub7f0 \uc720\ud615\uc758 \ubd80\uc0ac\ub294 \uc758\ubbf8 \uc788\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uc131\ucde8\ud558\uae30 \ubcf4\ub2e4\ub294 \ub2e8\uc9c0 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub97c \ucc44\uc6b0\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ub418\ub294 \ub2e8\uc5b4\uc77c \ubfd0\uc774\uace0 \uad6c\uc5b4 \ud68c\ud654 \uc601\uc5b4\ub97c \ubc18\uc601\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf4\uace0 \uac01\uac01\uc758 \ubd80\uc0ac\uac00 \uc815\ub9d0 \ud544\uc694\ud55c\uc9c0 \uacb0\uc815\ud558\uc138\uc694. <\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc608\uc2dc<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n\ubd88\ud544\uc694\ud55c \ubd80\uc0ac: \u201cate quickly\u201d, \u201cran quickly\u201d<\/em>
\uac15\ud55c \ub3d9\uc0ac: \u201cdevoured\u201d, \u201crushed\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n\ub2e4\uc74c\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \uc0ad\uc81c\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \ubd80\uc0ac \ubaa9\ub85d\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4:<\/p>\n\n\n
\n![\"\ub2e4\uc74c\uc740](\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/12150554\/5.jpg\")
<\/figure><\/div>\n\n\n\ub2e8\uc5b4\uc218\ub97c \ucc44\uc6b0\uae30\ub9cc \ud558\ub294 \u2018filler\u2019 \ub2e8\uc5b4\ub4e4 \uc5c6\uc560\uae30 <\/h2>\n\n\n\n
\ud544\ub7ec \ub2e8\uc5b4\ub294 \uc2b5\uad00\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ub420 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. “ctrl + f” \ub610\ub294 \ub9e5 \uc720\uc800\ub77c\uba74 “cmd + f” \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc9c0\uae08 \ubc14\ub85c \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf4\uace0 \uc774\ub4e4\uc744 \ubaa8\ub450 \uc0ad\uc81c\ud558\uc2ed\uc2dc\uc624. \uadf8\ub7f0 \ub2e8\uc5b4\ub4e4\uc740 \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc758 \uae00\uc5d0 \uc804\ud600 \uc911\uc694\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. <\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc608\uc2dc<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\nFiller \ub2e8\uc5b4 \ud3ec\ud568: \u201cI found myself actually surprised about how much I learned\u201d<\/em>
Filler \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc0ad\uc81c: \u201cI was surprised at how much I learned\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n“Actually”\ub77c\ub294 \ub2e8\uc5b4\ub294 \uc804\ud600 \uc4f8\ubaa8\uac00 \uc5c6\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc740 \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc774 \ub180\ub790\ub2e4\uace0 \ubd84\uba85\ud788 \uc11c\uc220\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uac8c\ub2e4\uac00, “finding yourself”\ub294 \uad6c\uc5b4\uc801\uc778 \ud45c\ud604\uc73c\ub85c \ud615\uc2dd\uc5d0 \uc5b4\uc6b8\ub9ac\uc9c0 \uc54a\ub294 filler\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\ub108\ubb34 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc804\uce58\uc0ac\ub294 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc138\uc694.<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
\uc804\uce58\uc0ac\ub294 as of, to, for, by, from, in, and on \uac19\uc740 \ud754\ud788 \uc4f0\uc774\ub294 \uc5f0\uacb0 \ub2e8\uc5b4\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\uac83\ub4e4\uc740 \ud2b9\ud788 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uacfc\uac70\ub97c \uc11c\uc220\ud560 \ub54c, \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \uc9c4\uc220\uc758 \ub9e5\ub77d\uc5d0 \ub530\ub77c \ud544\uc694\ud558\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc8fc\uc758 \uae4a\uac8c \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf4\uace0 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \ub2e4\uc2dc \uc4f0\ub3c4\ub85d \ubc14\uafb8\uace0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub97c \uc904\uc774\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc608\uc2dc<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\nToo many prepositional phrases: \u201cI struggled to work in a team in order to get a good grade in the group project\u201d<\/em>
Fewer prepositional phrases: \u201cI struggled with the team aspect of the group project\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n\ub2f9\uc2e0\uc774 \ud55c \ud300\uc73c\ub85c \uc77c\ud55c \uc801\uc774 \uc788\uac70\ub098 \uc131\uc801\uc744 \uc5b8\uae09\ud560 \ud544\uc694\ub294 \uc5c6\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uac8c\ub2e4\uac00, \uc774\ub7ec\ud55c \uc804\uce58\uc0ac \uad6c\uc808\ub4e4\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub97c \ub9de\ucd94\ub294 \ub370 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub418\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc744 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n
\n![\"\uc601\uc5b4](\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/12150606\/6.jpg\")
<\/figure><\/div>\n\n\n\uac04\uacb0\ud558\uac8c \uc4f0\uc2dc\uace0, \ub2e8\uc5b4\uc218\ub97c \uc904\uc5ec\uc8fc\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uae00\uc744 \uc9c1\uc811\uc801\uc774\uace0 \uac04\uacb0\ud558\uac8c \uc791\uc131\ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
\ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc740 \uc544\uc774\ub514\uc5b4\ub97c \uc9c0\ub098\uce58\uac8c \uc77c\ubc18\ud654\uc2dc\ud0a4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ud53c\ud558\uba74\uc11c\ub3c4 \uc601\uc5b4\ub97c \uc815\ud655\ud558\uac8c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud574\uc57c\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub807\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc73c\uba74 \uae00\uc4f4\uc774\uac00 \uac1c\ub150\uc744 \uc815\ud655\ud558\uac8c \ud30c\uc545\ud558\uc9c0 \ubabb\ud558\uace0 \ud655\uc2e0\uc774 \uc5c6\uac70\ub098 \uc57d\ud55c \uac83\uc73c\ub85c \ud310\ub2e8\ub418\ub294 \uacb0\uacfc\ub97c \ucd08\ub798\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\ud615\uc6a9\uc0ac\ub098 \ubd80\uc0ac\uc640 \uac19\uc740 \uc218\uc2dd\uc5b4\uc5d0 \uc9c0\ub098\uce58\uac8c \uc758\uc874\ud55c\ub2e4\uba74 \uadf8\ub807\uac8c \ub420 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. <\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc608\uc2dc<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n\ub108\ubb34 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc218\uc2dd\uc5b4 \uc0ac\uc6a9: \u201cAlthough my high school grades were sometimes<\/em> slightly less than average, I was able to outperform many of my classmates, who often struggled to improve.\u201d<\/em>
\uac15\ud55c \ub2e8\uc5b4\uc640 \ubd80\uc0ac \uc0ac\uc6a9: \u201cAlthough my high school grades were inconsistent, I later outperformed my classmates, who struggled to improve.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n\ubc14\ub010 \ubc84\uc804\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ub354 \uc0ac\uc2e4\uc801\uc774\uace0 \uc77c\uad00\uc801\uc774\uba70 \ub0ae\uc740 \uc810\uc218\ub97c \uc778\uc815\ud558\uba74\uc11c\ub3c4 \uc2ec\uc9c0\uc5b4 \uc790\uc2e0\uac10\ub3c4 \uc788\uc5b4 \ubcf4\uc774\ub294\uc9c0 \uc54c \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc11c\uc220\uc790\uac00 \ub418\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc138\uc694.<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
\ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub97c \ub2e4\uc2dc \uc5b8\uae09\ud55c\ub2e4\uac70\ub098 \ub2e4\uc74c\uc5d0 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud560 \uac74\uc9c0 \uc694\uc57d\ud558\ub294\ub370 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub97c \ub0ad\ube44\ud558\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc2ed\uc2dc\uc624. \uc774\uac83\uc740 \uc720\uc6a9\ud55c \uae30\uc0ac(\uc9c0\uae08 \uc77d\uace0 \uc788\ub294 \uc774 \uae30\uc0ac\ucc98\ub7fc)\uc5d0\ub294 \uad1c\ucc2e\uc9c0\ub9cc, \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\ub294 \uc88b\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\ub7ec\ud55c \uc911\uac04 \uc548\ub0b4\ub97c \uc81c\uac70\ud558\uba74 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub97c \ud06c\uac8c \uc904\uc77c \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc608\uc2dc<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n\ub108\ubb34 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc11c\uc220: \u201cI will start by discussing my leadership experiences\u2026\u201d \ud639\uc740 \u201cThe next important part of my academic background was my\u2026.\u201d
\uac04\uacb0\ud55c \uc11c\uc220: \u201cI gained leadership experience when\u2026\u201d \ud639\uc740 \u201cOne of my academic achievements was\u2026\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n
<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc785\uc2dc \uc804\ubb38 \uc6d0\uc5b4\ubbfc \uc5d0\ub514\ud130\uc758 \uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4\ub97c \uc774\uc6a9\ud574 \ubcf4\uc138\uc694.<\/h2>\n\n\n\n
\ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \ubc0f \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ud1b5\ud55c \uc785\uc2dc\ub294 \ub9e4\uc6b0 \uacbd\uc7c1\uc801\uc774\uace0, \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc774 \ub2e4\ub978 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uacfc\ub294 \ucc28\ubcc4\ud654\ub41c \ud6cc\ub96d\ud55c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ucd94\uad6c\ud558\ub3c4\ub85d \uc774\ub04c\uc5c8\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc785\uc2dc \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc601\uc5b4 \uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4\uac00 \uc778\uae30\ub97c \ub048 \uc774\uc720 \uc911 \ud558\ub098\ub294 \uc18d\ub3c4\uc640 \ud488\uc9c8 \ub54c\ubb38\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub4e4\uc740 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc774 \ub354 \ub9ce\uc740 \ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\ub97c \uc900\ube44\ud558\uace0 \ubb38\ubc95\uc774\ub098 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc81c\ud55c\uacfc \uac19\uc740 \uac83\ub4e4\uc5d0 \uc2dc\uac04\uc744 \ud5c8\ube44\ud558\ub294 \ub300\uc2e0\uc5d0 \uadf8\ub4e4\uc774 \uc4f8 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc5d0 \uc9d1\uc911\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub3c4\ub85d \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. <\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\ub4e4\uc774 \uac00\uc7a5 \ud6a8\uc728\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ub300\ud559\uc5d0 \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud558\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95 \uc911 \ud558\ub098\ub294 \ubb38\ubc95\uc774\ub098 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc804\ud600 \uac71\uc815\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uace0 \uac00\ub2a5\ud55c \ud55c \ub9ce\uc740 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc4f0\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c \ubc94\uc8fc(\uc608: “\uc65c X\ub300\ud559\uc778\uac00?” \ub610\ub294 “\ub2f9\uc2e0\uc774 \uadf9\ubcf5\ud55c \uc7a5\uc560\ubb3c\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \ub9d0\ud574\ub2ec\ub77c”)\ubcc4\ub85c \uc815\ub9ac\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uadf8\ub7f0 \ub2e4\uc74c, \uac01 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \ud55c \uac00\uc9c0 \uc720\ud615\uc744 \ubbff\uc744 \ub9cc\ud55c \ub300\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc601\uc5b4 \uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4\ub85c \ubcf4\ub0b4\uc138\uc694. \uc5d0\ub514\ud130\uac00 \uc218\uc815\ud55c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ub2e4\uc2dc \ubc1b\uc73c\uba74 \ud574\ub2f9 \ubc94\uc8fc\uc758 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0 \uc801\uc6a9\ud558\uc2ed\uc2dc\uc624. \uc774\ub807\uac8c \ud558\uba74 \ucd5c\uc18c\ud55c\uc758 \ube44\uc6a9\uc73c\ub85c \uc5c4\uccad\ub09c \ud6a8\uacfc\ub97c \uc5bb\uc744 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
FAQ: \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ub2e8\uc5b4\ub97c \uc904\uc774\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95\uc740 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc778\uac00\uc694?<\/h2>\n\n\n\n
\uc5d0\ub514\ud130\uc758 \uc804\ubb38\uc801\uc778 \ub2f5\ubcc0\uc744 \ub4e4\uc744 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. <\/p>\n\n\n\n
Q: \ub300\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 650\ub2e8\uc5b4 \ubcf4\ub2e4 \uae38 \uc218 \uc788\ub098\uc694?<\/h4>\n\n\n\n
A: Common \uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \ud45c\uc900 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub294 650\ub2e8\uc5b4\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uaddc\uce59 1) \uba85\uc2dc\ub41c \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc81c\ud55c \uc9c0\uce68\uc744 \ub530\ub985\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uaddc\uce59 2) \ud56d\uc0c1 \uc81c\ud55c \ub2e8\uc5b4 \ub300\uc2e0 \uc81c\ud55c \ub2e8\uc5b4\ubcf4\ub2e4 \uc801\uac8c \uc501\ub2c8\ub2e4<\/p>\n\n\n\n
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\uc608\uc2dc<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\nFiller \ub2e8\uc5b4 \ud3ec\ud568: \u201cI found myself actually surprised about how much I learned\u201d<\/em>
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\ub108\ubb34 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc804\uce58\uc0ac\ub294 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc138\uc694.<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
\uc804\uce58\uc0ac\ub294 as of, to, for, by, from, in, and on \uac19\uc740 \ud754\ud788 \uc4f0\uc774\ub294 \uc5f0\uacb0 \ub2e8\uc5b4\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\uac83\ub4e4\uc740 \ud2b9\ud788 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uacfc\uac70\ub97c \uc11c\uc220\ud560 \ub54c, \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \uc9c4\uc220\uc758 \ub9e5\ub77d\uc5d0 \ub530\ub77c \ud544\uc694\ud558\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc8fc\uc758 \uae4a\uac8c \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf4\uace0 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \ub2e4\uc2dc \uc4f0\ub3c4\ub85d \ubc14\uafb8\uace0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub97c \uc904\uc774\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc608\uc2dc<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\nToo many prepositional phrases: \u201cI struggled to work in a team in order to get a good grade in the group project\u201d<\/em>
Fewer prepositional phrases: \u201cI struggled with the team aspect of the group project\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n\ub2f9\uc2e0\uc774 \ud55c \ud300\uc73c\ub85c \uc77c\ud55c \uc801\uc774 \uc788\uac70\ub098 \uc131\uc801\uc744 \uc5b8\uae09\ud560 \ud544\uc694\ub294 \uc5c6\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uac8c\ub2e4\uac00, \uc774\ub7ec\ud55c \uc804\uce58\uc0ac \uad6c\uc808\ub4e4\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub97c \ub9de\ucd94\ub294 \ub370 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub418\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc744 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n
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\uae00\uc744 \uc9c1\uc811\uc801\uc774\uace0 \uac04\uacb0\ud558\uac8c \uc791\uc131\ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
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\ud615\uc6a9\uc0ac\ub098 \ubd80\uc0ac\uc640 \uac19\uc740 \uc218\uc2dd\uc5b4\uc5d0 \uc9c0\ub098\uce58\uac8c \uc758\uc874\ud55c\ub2e4\uba74 \uadf8\ub807\uac8c \ub420 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. <\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc608\uc2dc<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n\ub108\ubb34 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc218\uc2dd\uc5b4 \uc0ac\uc6a9: \u201cAlthough my high school grades were sometimes<\/em> slightly less than average, I was able to outperform many of my classmates, who often struggled to improve.\u201d<\/em>
\uac15\ud55c \ub2e8\uc5b4\uc640 \ubd80\uc0ac \uc0ac\uc6a9: \u201cAlthough my high school grades were inconsistent, I later outperformed my classmates, who struggled to improve.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n\ubc14\ub010 \ubc84\uc804\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ub354 \uc0ac\uc2e4\uc801\uc774\uace0 \uc77c\uad00\uc801\uc774\uba70 \ub0ae\uc740 \uc810\uc218\ub97c \uc778\uc815\ud558\uba74\uc11c\ub3c4 \uc2ec\uc9c0\uc5b4 \uc790\uc2e0\uac10\ub3c4 \uc788\uc5b4 \ubcf4\uc774\ub294\uc9c0 \uc54c \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc11c\uc220\uc790\uac00 \ub418\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc138\uc694.<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
\ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub97c \ub2e4\uc2dc \uc5b8\uae09\ud55c\ub2e4\uac70\ub098 \ub2e4\uc74c\uc5d0 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud560 \uac74\uc9c0 \uc694\uc57d\ud558\ub294\ub370 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub97c \ub0ad\ube44\ud558\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc2ed\uc2dc\uc624. \uc774\uac83\uc740 \uc720\uc6a9\ud55c \uae30\uc0ac(\uc9c0\uae08 \uc77d\uace0 \uc788\ub294 \uc774 \uae30\uc0ac\ucc98\ub7fc)\uc5d0\ub294 \uad1c\ucc2e\uc9c0\ub9cc, \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\ub294 \uc88b\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\ub7ec\ud55c \uc911\uac04 \uc548\ub0b4\ub97c \uc81c\uac70\ud558\uba74 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub97c \ud06c\uac8c \uc904\uc77c \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc608\uc2dc<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n\ub108\ubb34 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc11c\uc220: \u201cI will start by discussing my leadership experiences\u2026\u201d \ud639\uc740 \u201cThe next important part of my academic background was my\u2026.\u201d
\uac04\uacb0\ud55c \uc11c\uc220: \u201cI gained leadership experience when\u2026\u201d \ud639\uc740 \u201cOne of my academic achievements was\u2026\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n
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\uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\ub4e4\uc774 \uac00\uc7a5 \ud6a8\uc728\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ub300\ud559\uc5d0 \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud558\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95 \uc911 \ud558\ub098\ub294 \ubb38\ubc95\uc774\ub098 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc804\ud600 \uac71\uc815\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uace0 \uac00\ub2a5\ud55c \ud55c \ub9ce\uc740 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc4f0\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c \ubc94\uc8fc(\uc608: “\uc65c X\ub300\ud559\uc778\uac00?” \ub610\ub294 “\ub2f9\uc2e0\uc774 \uadf9\ubcf5\ud55c \uc7a5\uc560\ubb3c\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \ub9d0\ud574\ub2ec\ub77c”)\ubcc4\ub85c \uc815\ub9ac\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uadf8\ub7f0 \ub2e4\uc74c, \uac01 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \ud55c \uac00\uc9c0 \uc720\ud615\uc744 \ubbff\uc744 \ub9cc\ud55c \ub300\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc601\uc5b4 \uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4\ub85c \ubcf4\ub0b4\uc138\uc694. \uc5d0\ub514\ud130\uac00 \uc218\uc815\ud55c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ub2e4\uc2dc \ubc1b\uc73c\uba74 \ud574\ub2f9 \ubc94\uc8fc\uc758 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0 \uc801\uc6a9\ud558\uc2ed\uc2dc\uc624. \uc774\ub807\uac8c \ud558\uba74 \ucd5c\uc18c\ud55c\uc758 \ube44\uc6a9\uc73c\ub85c \uc5c4\uccad\ub09c \ud6a8\uacfc\ub97c \uc5bb\uc744 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
FAQ: \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ub2e8\uc5b4\ub97c \uc904\uc774\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95\uc740 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc778\uac00\uc694?<\/h2>\n\n\n\n
\uc5d0\ub514\ud130\uc758 \uc804\ubb38\uc801\uc778 \ub2f5\ubcc0\uc744 \ub4e4\uc744 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. <\/p>\n\n\n\n
Q: \ub300\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 650\ub2e8\uc5b4 \ubcf4\ub2e4 \uae38 \uc218 \uc788\ub098\uc694?<\/h4>\n\n\n\n
A: Common \uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \ud45c\uc900 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub294 650\ub2e8\uc5b4\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uaddc\uce59 1) \uba85\uc2dc\ub41c \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc81c\ud55c \uc9c0\uce68\uc744 \ub530\ub985\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uaddc\uce59 2) \ud56d\uc0c1 \uc81c\ud55c \ub2e8\uc5b4 \ub300\uc2e0 \uc81c\ud55c \ub2e8\uc5b4\ubcf4\ub2e4 \uc801\uac8c \uc501\ub2c8\ub2e4<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Q: \ub300\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \uc218\ucd95\uacfc \uc57d\uc5b4\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\uae4c?<\/h4>\n\n\n\n
A:\ub124. \ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uc218\ucd95\uacfc \uc57d\uc5b4\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uc138\uc694. <\/p>\n\n\n\n
Q: \uc778\uc6a9\ubb38\uc774 \ub300\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \ud55c\ub3c4\uc5d0 \ubc18\uc601\ub418\ub098\uc694?<\/h4>\n\n\n\n
A: \ud14d\uc2a4\ud2b8 \ud544\ub4dc \ub610\ub294 \ud398\uc774\uc9c0\uc758 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \ub2e8\uc5b4\ub294 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc81c\ud55c\uc5d0 \uc801\uc6a9\ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub300\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \ud559\uc220\uc9c0\uac00 \uc544\ub2c8\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc778\uc6a9\uc744 \ud53c\ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Q: \uc81c\ubaa9\uc774 \ub300\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \ud55c\ub3c4\uc5d0 \ud3ec\ud568\ub418\ub098\uc694?<\/h4>\n\n\n\n
A: \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub97c \ub2e4\uc2dc \uc4f0\uac70\ub098 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0 \uc81c\ubaa9\uc744 \ucd94\uac00\ud558\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc2ed\uc2dc\uc624. \ubcc4\ub3c4\uc758 MS Word \ubb38\uc11c\ub97c \uc81c\ucd9c\ud560 \uacbd\uc6b0 \uc81c\ubaa9 \ub610\ub294 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ud504\ub86c\ud504\ud2b8(\uc774\ub984\uacfc \ud568\uaed8)\ub97c .doc \ud30c\uc77c\uba85\uc73c\ub85c \ucd94\uac00\ud558\uc2ed\uc2dc\uc624. <\/p>\n\n\n\n
Q: 650\ub2e8\uc5b4\ub294 \uba87 \ud398\uc774\uc9c0\uc785\ub2c8\uae4c?<\/h4>\n\n\n\n
A: 650\ub2e8\uc5b4\uc9dc\ub9ac \ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 1\ud398\uc774\uc9c0 \ubbf8\ub9cc\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Q: \uae34 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc904\uc785\ub2c8\uae4c?<\/h4>\n\n\n\n
A: 1) \ub3c4\uc6b0\ubbf8 \ub3d9\uc0ac\uc640 \ubd80\uc0ac \uc81c\uac70, 2) \uc911\ubcf5 \uc81c\uac70, 3) “very”\uc640 “actually”\uc640 \uac19\uc740 \ub2e8\uc5b4\uc218\ub9cc \ucc44\uc6b0\ub294 \ud45c\ud604 \uc81c\uac70, \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 4) \ubaa8\ub4e0 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc774 \ubb38\ub2e8\uc758 \uc804\uccb4\uc801\uc778 \uc694\uc810\uc744 \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud558\ub294\uc9c0 \ud655\uc778\ud558\uc2ed\uc2dc\uc624.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Q: 650\ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uba87 \ub2e8\ub77d\uc785\ub2c8\uae4c?<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
A: 500\ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 3~4\ub2e8\uc5b4\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. 650\ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 4-5\ub2e8\uc5b4\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 1\ud398\uc774\uc9c0 \ubbf8\ub9cc\uc774\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
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\uc608\uc2dc<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\nFiller \ub2e8\uc5b4 \ud3ec\ud568: \u201cI found myself actually surprised about how much I learned\u201d<\/em>
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\uc608\uc2dc<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n\ub108\ubb34 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc11c\uc220: \u201cI will start by discussing my leadership experiences\u2026\u201d \ud639\uc740 \u201cThe next important part of my academic background was my\u2026.\u201d
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\uc608\uc2dc<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\nToo many prepositional phrases: \u201cI struggled to work in a team in order to get a good grade in the group project\u201d<\/em>
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\uc608\uc2dc<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n\ub108\ubb34 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc218\uc2dd\uc5b4 \uc0ac\uc6a9: \u201cAlthough my high school grades were sometimes<\/em> slightly less than average, I was able to outperform many of my classmates, who often struggled to improve.\u201d<\/em>
\uac15\ud55c \ub2e8\uc5b4\uc640 \ubd80\uc0ac \uc0ac\uc6a9: \u201cAlthough my high school grades were inconsistent, I later outperformed my classmates, who struggled to improve.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n\ubc14\ub010 \ubc84\uc804\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ub354 \uc0ac\uc2e4\uc801\uc774\uace0 \uc77c\uad00\uc801\uc774\uba70 \ub0ae\uc740 \uc810\uc218\ub97c \uc778\uc815\ud558\uba74\uc11c\ub3c4 \uc2ec\uc9c0\uc5b4 \uc790\uc2e0\uac10\ub3c4 \uc788\uc5b4 \ubcf4\uc774\ub294\uc9c0 \uc54c \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc11c\uc220\uc790\uac00 \ub418\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc138\uc694.<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
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\uc608\uc2dc<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n\ub108\ubb34 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc11c\uc220: \u201cI will start by discussing my leadership experiences\u2026\u201d \ud639\uc740 \u201cThe next important part of my academic background was my\u2026.\u201d
\uac04\uacb0\ud55c \uc11c\uc220: \u201cI gained leadership experience when\u2026\u201d \ud639\uc740 \u201cOne of my academic achievements was\u2026\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n
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Q: \ub300\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 650\ub2e8\uc5b4 \ubcf4\ub2e4 \uae38 \uc218 \uc788\ub098\uc694?<\/h4>\n\n\n\n
A: Common \uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \ud45c\uc900 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub294 650\ub2e8\uc5b4\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uaddc\uce59 1) \uba85\uc2dc\ub41c \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc81c\ud55c \uc9c0\uce68\uc744 \ub530\ub985\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uaddc\uce59 2) \ud56d\uc0c1 \uc81c\ud55c \ub2e8\uc5b4 \ub300\uc2e0 \uc81c\ud55c \ub2e8\uc5b4\ubcf4\ub2e4 \uc801\uac8c \uc501\ub2c8\ub2e4<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Q: \ub300\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \uc218\ucd95\uacfc \uc57d\uc5b4\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\uae4c?<\/h4>\n\n\n\n
A:\ub124. \ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uc218\ucd95\uacfc \uc57d\uc5b4\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uc138\uc694. <\/p>\n\n\n\n
Q: \uc778\uc6a9\ubb38\uc774 \ub300\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \ud55c\ub3c4\uc5d0 \ubc18\uc601\ub418\ub098\uc694?<\/h4>\n\n\n\n
A: \ud14d\uc2a4\ud2b8 \ud544\ub4dc \ub610\ub294 \ud398\uc774\uc9c0\uc758 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \ub2e8\uc5b4\ub294 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc81c\ud55c\uc5d0 \uc801\uc6a9\ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub300\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \ud559\uc220\uc9c0\uac00 \uc544\ub2c8\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc778\uc6a9\uc744 \ud53c\ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Q: \uc81c\ubaa9\uc774 \ub300\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \ud55c\ub3c4\uc5d0 \ud3ec\ud568\ub418\ub098\uc694?<\/h4>\n\n\n\n
A: \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub97c \ub2e4\uc2dc \uc4f0\uac70\ub098 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0 \uc81c\ubaa9\uc744 \ucd94\uac00\ud558\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc2ed\uc2dc\uc624. \ubcc4\ub3c4\uc758 MS Word \ubb38\uc11c\ub97c \uc81c\ucd9c\ud560 \uacbd\uc6b0 \uc81c\ubaa9 \ub610\ub294 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ud504\ub86c\ud504\ud2b8(\uc774\ub984\uacfc \ud568\uaed8)\ub97c .doc \ud30c\uc77c\uba85\uc73c\ub85c \ucd94\uac00\ud558\uc2ed\uc2dc\uc624. <\/p>\n\n\n\n
Q: 650\ub2e8\uc5b4\ub294 \uba87 \ud398\uc774\uc9c0\uc785\ub2c8\uae4c?<\/h4>\n\n\n\n
A: 650\ub2e8\uc5b4\uc9dc\ub9ac \ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 1\ud398\uc774\uc9c0 \ubbf8\ub9cc\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Q: \uae34 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc904\uc785\ub2c8\uae4c?<\/h4>\n\n\n\n
A: 1) \ub3c4\uc6b0\ubbf8 \ub3d9\uc0ac\uc640 \ubd80\uc0ac \uc81c\uac70, 2) \uc911\ubcf5 \uc81c\uac70, 3) “very”\uc640 “actually”\uc640 \uac19\uc740 \ub2e8\uc5b4\uc218\ub9cc \ucc44\uc6b0\ub294 \ud45c\ud604 \uc81c\uac70, \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 4) \ubaa8\ub4e0 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc774 \ubb38\ub2e8\uc758 \uc804\uccb4\uc801\uc778 \uc694\uc810\uc744 \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud558\ub294\uc9c0 \ud655\uc778\ud558\uc2ed\uc2dc\uc624.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Q: 650\ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uba87 \ub2e8\ub77d\uc785\ub2c8\uae4c?<\/h3>\n\n\n\n
A: 500\ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 3~4\ub2e8\uc5b4\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. 650\ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 4-5\ub2e8\uc5b4\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 1\ud398\uc774\uc9c0 \ubbf8\ub9cc\uc774\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
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