{"id":646,"date":"2022-06-21T17:49:00","date_gmt":"2022-06-21T08:49:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.essayreview.co.kr\/?p=646"},"modified":"2023-10-19T16:38:44","modified_gmt":"2023-10-19T07:38:44","slug":"2022-2023-changes-in-the-common-app-essay","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/2022-2023-changes-in-the-common-app-essay\/","title":{"rendered":"2022-2023 \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ubcc0\uacbd \ub0b4\uc6a9: \ud655\uc778\ud560 \uc0ac\ud56d"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>\uc9c0\ub09c \uba87 \ub144 \ub3d9\uc548 \uc811\uadfc\uc131\uacfc \ub2e4\uc591\uc131\uc744 \ub192\uc774\ub824\ub294 \ubbf8\uad6d \uace0\ub4f1 \uad50\uc721\uc758 \ubc29\uc2dd\uc5d0 \ud070 \ubcc0\ud654\uac00 \uc788\uc5c8\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. College Board\ub294 SAT\ub97c \uac1c\uc815\ud558\uc5ec 2016\ub144 3\uc6d4\uc5d0 \uc0c8\ub85c \ubcc0\uacbd\ub41c SAT\ub97c \uc120\ubcf4\uc600\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub610\ud55c&nbsp;<a href=\"http:\/\/www.commonapp.org\/whats-appening\/application-updates\/common-application-announces-2017-2018-essay-prompts\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">\ucee4\uba3c \uc5b4\ud50c\ub9ac\ucf00\uc774\uc158(Common Application, \ucee4\uba3c\uc571)\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\uc758 \ubc94\uc704\ub97c \ub354\uc6b1 \ub113\ud614\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4<\/a>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>2022\u20132023\ub144 \uc5b4\ub4dc\ubbf8\uc158 \uc2dc\uc98c\uc5d0 \ubbf8\uad6d \ub300\ud559\uc5d0 \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud558\uc2e0\ub2e4\uba74, \ucee4\uba3c\uc571(Common App) \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \ucd5c\uc2e0 \ubcc0\uacbd \uc0ac\ud56d\uc744 \uc774\ubc88 \ud3ec\uc2a4\ud305\uc744 \ud1b5\ud574 \ud655\uc778\ud558\uc2e4 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5ec\uc804\ud788 650 \ub2e8\uc5b4\ub85c \uc81c\ud55c\ub418\uc5b4 \uc788\uc9c0\ub9cc,&nbsp;<strong>7\uac00\uc9c0&nbsp;<\/strong>\ucee4\uba3c\uc571(Common App) \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c \uc911 \uc120\ud0dd\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774 \uc911 \ub300\ubd80\ubd84\uc740 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc744 \ud1b5\ud55c \uac1c\uc778\uc758 \ubc1c\uc804\uc5d0 \uc911\uc810\uc744 \ub450\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uc0c8\ub85c\uc6b4 \uc8fc\uc81c \uc911 \ud558\ub098(\uc5c4\ubc00\ud788 \ub530\uc9c0\uba74 2013\ub144\uc5d0 Common App\uc744 \ubcc0\uacbd\ud55c \uc774\ud6c4\ub85c \uc7ac\ub4f1\uc7a5\ud55c \uc8fc\uc81c)\ub294 \uc790\uc720\ub86d\uac8c \uc791\uc131\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub97c \uc120\ud0dd\ud55c\ub2e4\uba74 \ub2e4\ub978 \ubaa9\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc791\uc131\ud55c \uae00\uc744 \uadf8\ub300\ub85c \ud65c\uc6a9\ud560 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub2e4\uc74c\uc740 \ucee4\uba3c\uc5b4\ud50c\ub9ac\ucf00\uc774\uc158(Common Application)\uc5d0 \uc788\ub294 2022-2023 \uc5b4\ub4dc\ubbf8\uc158 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c \ubaa9\ub85d\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uac1c\uc815\ub41c \uc139\uc158\uc758 \ubcc0\uacbd \uc0ac\ud56d\uc744 \ud30c\ub780\uc0c9\uc73c\ub85c \ud558\uc774\ub77c\uc774\ud2b8\ud558\uace0 \uc774\uc5d0 \ub2f5\ubcc0\ud558\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc870\uc5b8\uc744 \uc81c\uacf5\ud558\uaca0\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2>2022\u20132023 \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 (Common Application) \uc8fc\uc81c<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<h4>\ubcc0\uacbd \uc0ac\ud56d \uc5c6\uc74c<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>#1. Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story. [\ubcc0\uacbd \uc5c6\uc74c]<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\ub2f5\ubcc0\ud558\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95: \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5f4\uc815\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc5b8\uae09\ud558\uba74\uc11c, \uc5f4\uc815\uc744 \ucd94\uad6c\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \ub300\ud559 \uc0dd\ud65c\uc5d0 \uc798 \uc801\uc751\ud558\uace0 \ub300\ud559\uc5d0 \uacf5\ud5cc\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc774 \ub418\ub294\ub370 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub418\ub294\uc9c0 \uc124\uba85\ud558\uc138\uc694. \ubc30\uacbd\uc774\ub098 \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc124\uba85\ud558\ub294 \uacbd\uc6b0, \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uac16\ucd98 \uc790\uc9c8\ub4e4\uc774 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc0dd\uac01\ud558\uace0 \ud589\ub3d9 \ud558\ub294\uc9c0\ub97c \ud615\uc131\ud588\ub294\uc9c0\ub97c \uc0dd\uac01\ud574 \ubcf4\uc138\uc694. (\ucd94\uac00 \uc815\ubcf4\ub294\u00a0<a href=\"\/ko\/blog\/admission\/common-app-essay-prompt-1\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc778\ud3ec\uadf8\ub798\ud53d\uc744 \ud655\uc778\ud558\uc138\uc694<\/a>!)<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p>#4. &nbsp;Describe a problem you\u2019ve solved or a problem you\u2019d like to solve. It can be an intellectual challenge, a research query, an ethical dilemma\u2014anything that is of personal importance, no matter the scale. Explain its significance to you and what steps you took or could be taken to identify a solution. [\ubcc0\uacbd \uc5c6\uc74c]<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\ub2f5\ubcc0\ud558\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95: \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub294 \uac08\ub4f1\uacfc \ud574\uacb0\uc758 \uad6c\uc870\ub85c \uad6c\uc131\ub418\uc5b4 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub7ec\ub098 \uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub294 \ubb38\uc81c \uc790\uccb4\uc5d0 \uad00\ud55c \uac83\uc774 \uc544\ub2c8\ub77c\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uae30\uc5b5\ud558\uc138\uc694. \uc624\ud788\ub824 \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc740 \uc65c \ud574\ub2f9 \ubb38\uc81c\uac00 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc5d0\uac8c \uc911\uc694\ud558\uc600\ub294\uc9c0\ub97c \uc54c\uae38 \uc6d0\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc778\uc0dd\uc5d0\uc11c \ub9c8\uc8fc\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ub09c\uad00\uc744 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ubc14\ub77c\ubcf4\uace0 \uc774\ub97c \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ud574\uacb0\ud558\ub294\uc9c0\ub97c \ubcf4\uae38 \uc6d0\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc \ud574\ub2f9 \ubb38\uc81c\ub97c \uc131\uacf5\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ud574\uacb0\ud588\uc74c\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc904 \ud544\uc694\ub294 \uc5c6\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub54c\ub85c\ub294 \uc778\uc0dd\uc5d0\uc11c \uac00\uc7a5 \uc911\ub300\ud55c \uad50\ud6c8\uc740 \uc2e4\ud328\ub97c \ud1b5\ud574 \uc5bb\ub294 \ubc95\uc774\ub2c8\uae4c\uc694 (\uc544\ub798 \uac1c\uc815\ub41c \uc8fc\uc81c 2 \ucc38\uc870).<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\uc8fc\uc758 \uc0ac\ud56d:&nbsp;<\/strong>\uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ud558\ub294 \uc2e4\uc218\ub294 \ucd94\uc0c1\uc801\uc778 \ubb38\uc81c\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud558\uace0 \ud574\ub2f9 \uc8fc\uc81c\uac00 \uc65c \uc911\uc694\ud55c\uc9c0 \uc124\uba85\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc740 \uc9c0\uad6c \uc628\ub09c\ud654 \ubb38\uc81c\ub97c \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ud574\uacb0\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc124\uba85\uc744 \ub4e3\uae38 \uc6d0\ud558\ub294\uac8c \uc544\ub2d9\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc624\ud788\ub824, \uc65c \ud574\ub2f9 \ubb38\uc81c\uc5d0 \uadf8\ud1a0\ub85d \ub9ce\uc740 \uad00\uc2ec\uc744 \uac16\ub294\uc9c0 (\ub3d9\uae30)\uc640 \uac1c\uc778\uc801 \uacbd\ud5d8\uacfc \uc9c0\uc2dd\uc5d0 \uadfc\uac70\ud558\uc5ec \uadf8 \ubb38\uc81c\ub97c \uc5b8\uae09\ud560 \uac00\uce58\uac00 \uc788\ub2e4\uace0 \uc0dd\uac01\ud558\ub294 \uc774\uc720\ub97c \uc54c\uace0 \uc2f6\uc5b4 \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uacb0\ub860\uc801\uc73c\ub85c, \ubaa8\ub4e0 \ucee4\uba3c\uc571(Common App) \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc640 \ub9c8\ucc2c\uac00\uc9c0\ub85c \uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \ub2f5\ubcc0\uc740 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc9c0\uc801, \uc815\uc11c\uc801 \uc131\uc7a5\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\ub294 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \ud3ec\ud568\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3>\uc218\uc815\ub41c \uc8fc\uc81c<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>#2.&nbsp; The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">a challenge, setback, or failure<\/span>. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience? [\uc218\uc815\ub428]<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\ub2f5\ubcc0\ud558\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95: \ud68c\ubcf5\ub825\uacfc \uc778\ub0b4\uc2ec\uc740 \uc131\uacf5\ud558\ub294 \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc774 \uac16\ucd98 \ud2b9\uc9d5\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc131\uacf5\uc758 \uc7a0\uc7ac\ub825\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc904 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uac00\uc7a5 \uc88b\uc740 \ubc29\ubc95\uc740 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc6d0\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ucd94\uad6c\ud558\ub294 \ub3d9\uc548 \uc9c1\uba74\ud55c \ubb38\uc81c\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8 \ubb38\uc81c\uac00 \uc65c \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0\uac8c \uc911\uc694\ud55c\uc9c0 \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uadf8 \ubb38\uc81c\ub97c \ud574\uacb0\ud558\uac8c \ub9cc\ub4e0 \ub3d9\uae30\uac00 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc778\uc9c0 \uc124\uba85\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8 \ubb38\uc81c\ub97c \uc131\uacf5\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ud574\uacb0\ud588\uc74c\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc904 \ud544\uc694\ub294 \uc5c6\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ubcf4\ub2e4\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc5d0\uc11c \uc5bb\uc740 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \u201c\uc778\uc0dd\uc758 \uad50\ud6c8\u201d\uc5d0 \uc911\uc810\uc744 \ub450\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\ub294 \uacbd\uc6b0\uc5d0 \ub530\ub77c\uc11c\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ud3b8\uacac\uc774\ub098 \ub2e8\uc810\uc744 \uae68\ub2eb\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uc758\ubbf8\ud560 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc989 \ub354 \ud070 \uadf8\ub9bc\uc73c\ub85c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ud574\ub2f9 \ubb38\uc81c\uc640 \uc0b6\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uad00\uc810\uc744 \ubc14\uafe8\ub294\uc9c0\ub97c \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc774 \uc138\uc0c1\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uad00\uc810\uc744 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ud655\uc7a5\uc2dc\ucf30\ub098\uc694? \uc774 \u201c\uc88c\uc808\u201c\uc758 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc790\uc2e0\uc744 \uc6d0\ub9cc\ud55c \uc0ac\ub78c\uc774 \ub420 \uc218 \uc788\ub3c4\ub85d \ud558\uc600\ub098\uc694? \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uae68\ub2ec\uc740 \uac83\uc774 \ub2e4\uc591\ud55c \ubc30\uacbd\uacfc \uad00\uc810\uc758 \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc744 \ub9cc\ub0a0 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ub300\ud559 \uc0dd\ud65c\uc5d0 \uc798 \uc801\uc751\ud558\ub294\ub370 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub420 \uc218 \uc788\uc744\uae4c\uc694?<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p>#3.&nbsp; Reflect on a time when you&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">questioned&nbsp;<\/span>or challenged a belief or idea. What prompted your&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">thinking<\/span>? What was the&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">outcome<\/span>? [\uc218\uc815\ub428]<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\uc774 \uc9c8\ubb38\uc740 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \ud589\ub3d9\uc744 \ucde8\ud558\uc9c0\ub294 \uc54a\uc558\uc9c0\ub9cc \ubb38\uc81c\uc5d0 \uc9c1\uba74\ud55c \uc0c1\ud669\uc744 \uace0\ub824\ud558\uc5ec \uac1c\uc815\ub418\uc5c8\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\ub807\ub4ef \uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub294 \uc65c \uadf8\ub7f0 \ud589\ub3d9\uc744 \ud588\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc9c8\ubb38\uc5d0\uc11c \ud574\ub2f9 \ub51c\ub808\ub9c8\uac00 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ubc1c\uc0dd\ud588\ub294\uc9c0\ub97c \ubd84\uc11d\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc73c\ub85c \uc218\uc815\ub418\uc5c8\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc989, \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc740 \ud2b9\uc815 \uc2e0\ub150\uc774\ub098 \uc544\uc774\ub514\uc5b4\uac00 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ube44\ud310\uc801\uc778 \uc0ac\uace0\ub098 \uacac\ud574\ub97c \ud615\uc131\ud558\uc600\ub294\uc9c0\ub97c \ub4e3\uace0 \uc2f6\uc5b4\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc678\ubd80\uc801\uc778 \uc694\uc778\uc774 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uad81\uae08\uc99d\uc744 \uc57c\uae30\ud588\uc744 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uc9c0\ub9cc, \ud574\ub2f9 \ubb38\uc81c\ubcf4\ub2e4\ub294 \uadf8 \ubb38\uc81c\uac00 \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0\uac8c \ub07c\uce5c \uc601\ud5a5\uc5d0 \uc911\uc810\uc744 \ub450\uc5b4\uc57c \ud55c\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uba85\uc2ec\ud558\uc138\uc694. \uc989, \uc801\uc808\ud55c \ub2f5\ubcc0\uc740 (1) \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uac00\uce58\uad00\uacfc \uad00\uc810, (2) \uc0c1\ubc18\ub418\ub294 \uc2e0\ub150\uacfc \uc9c1\uba74\ud55c \uc0ac\uac74 (\uc774\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uac00\uce58\uad00\uc758 \ud55c\uacc4\ub97c \uae68\ub2ec\uc558\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uc758\ubbf8\ud560 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4) \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 (3) \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uad00\uc810\uc774 \uadf8 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc601\ud5a5\uc744 \ubc1b\uc558\ub294\uc9c0\ub97c \uc124\uba85\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\uc8fc\uc758 \uc0ac\ud56d:&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/strong>\uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc758 \uae30\ubd84\uc744 \uc0c1\ud558\uac8c \ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uc885\uad50\ub098 \uc815\uce58\uc801\uc778 \uc8fc\uc81c\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc791\uc131\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub798\ub3c4 \uadf8 \uc911 \ud558\ub098\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud574\uc57c \ud55c\ub2e4\uace0 \uc0dd\uac01\ud55c\ub2e4\uba74 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \ubc1c\uc804\uc5d0 \uc911\uc810\uc744 \ub450\uace0 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc758 \uc2e0\ub150\uc744 \ubaa8\uc9c8\uac8c \ube44\ub09c\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\ub3c4\ub85d \ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p>#5.&nbsp; Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others<\/span>. [\uc218\uc815\ub428]<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\uc704\uc5d0 \ub098\uc5f4\ud55c \ub2e4\ub978 \uc9c8\ubb38\uc758 \uc218\uc815\uc0ac\ud56d\uacfc \ub9c8\ucc2c\uac00\uc9c0\ub85c, \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc774 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc815\uc11c\uc801\uc774\uace0 \uc9c0\uc801\uc778 \uc131\uc7a5\uc5d0 \uc911\uc810\uc744 \ub450\uae38 \uc6d0\ud558\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc8fc\uc81c 5\ub97c \ubcc0\uacbd\ud558\uc600\ub2e4\uace0 \uc0dd\uac01\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub2e4\uc2dc \ub9d0\ud558\uba74, (1) \ubb38\uc81c\uc758 \uc0c1\ud669\uc744 \uac04\ub7b5\ud558\uac8c \uc5b8\uae09\ud558\uace0, (2) \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ubcc0\ud654\ud558\ub3c4\ub85d \ud55c \uc0ac\uac74\uc774\ub098 \uae68\ub2ec\uc74c\uc744 \uae30\uc220\ud558\uace0, (3) \uc774 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uac1c\uc778\uc801 \ubc1c\uc804\uc744 \ud615\uc131\ud588\ub294\uc9c0 \uc124\uba85\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3>\uc0c8\ub85c\uc6b4 \uc8fc\uc81c<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>#6.&nbsp;&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging that it makes you lose all track of time. Why does it captivate you? What or who do you turn to when you want to learn more?<\/span>&nbsp;[\uc0c8\ub85c\uc6b4 \uc8fc\uc81c]<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\ucee4\uba3c\uc571(Common App) \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0 \uc0c8\ub86d\uac8c \ucd94\uac00\ub41c \uc8fc\uc81c\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774 \uc9c8\ubb38\uc744 \ud1b5\ud574 \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc744 \uc0ac\ub85c\uc7a1\uc740 \uac83\uc774 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc778\uc9c0\ub97c \ubcf4\uae38 \uc6d0\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc989, \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uac00\uc7a5 \uc88b\uc544\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uc124\uba85\ud568\uc73c\ub85c\uc368, \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ub204\uad6c\uc778\uc9c0, \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uad81\uae08\ud574\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc778\uc9c0 \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ud0d0\uad6c\uc2ec \ub9ce\uc740 \uc131\uaca9\uc744 \ucda9\uc871\uc2dc\ud0a4\ub294 \ubc95\uc744 \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc5d0\uac8c \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc904 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5f4\uc815\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \ud3ec\uad04\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc124\uba85\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud56d\uc0c1 \uc7a5\ubc0b\ube5b \ubbf8\ub798\uac00 \ud3bc\uccd0\uc9c0\ub294 \uac74 \uc544\ub2c8\ub2c8\uae4c\uc694. \uace0\ub824\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc740 \ub2e4\uc74c\uacfc \uac19\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4:\n<ul>\n<li>\ud574\ub2f9 \uc8fc\uc81c\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \ub192\uc740 \ud638\uae30\uc2ec\uc774 \uc57c\uae30\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ub2e8\uc810\uc774 \uc788\ub098\uc694?<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\ud574\ub2f9 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub97c \ucd94\uad6c\ud558\ub294 \ub3d9\uc548 \ub09c\uad00\uc5d0 \ubd80\ub52a\ud78c \uc801\uc774 \uc788\ub098\uc694? \uadf8\ub807\ub2e4\uba74, \uc774\ub97c \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ud574\uacb0\ud588\ub098\uc694?<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\ud574\ub2f9 \uc8fc\uc81c\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \ub108\ubb34 \uae4a\uc774 \ube60\uc838\ub4e4\uc5b4 \uc2dc\uac04 \uac10\uac01\uc744 \uc783\uace0 \uc678\ubd80 \uc138\uacc4\uc640 \ub2e8\uc808\ub418\uc5c8\ub2e4\uace0 \uc0dd\uac01\ub420 \ub54c \uc790\uae30 \uc2a4\uc2a4\ub85c\ub97c \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc5b5\uc81c\ud558\ub098\uc694? \uc544\ub2c8\uba74 \uadf8\ub798\ub3c4 \uc0c1\uad00\uc774 \uc5c6\ub098\uc694?<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uadf8 \uc8fc\uc81c\uc5d0 \ub108\ubb34 \uc0ac\ub85c\uc7a1\ud600 \uc788\ub2e4\uba74, \uc774\ub97c \ucd94\uad6c\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc77c\uae4c\uc9c0 \uac10\ud589\ud558\uc600\ub098\uc694? \uc774\ub97c \uc704\ud574 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \ud76c\uc0dd\ub3c4 \uac10\ub0b4\ud574\uc57c \ud588\ub098\uc694? \uc774\ub7ec\ud55c \uc0c1\ud669\ub4e4\uc774 \uc790\uc2e0\uc744 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ubcc0\ud654\uc2dc\ucf30\ub098\uc694?<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p>#7.&nbsp;<span style=\"color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">Share an essay on any topic of your choice. It can be one you\u2019ve already written, one that responds to a different prompt, or one of your own design.<\/span>&nbsp;[\uc0c8\ub85c\uc6b4 \uc8fc\uc81c]<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c 7 (\u201c\uc790\uc720 \uc8fc\uc81c\u201d)\uc740 \uc2e4\uc81c\ub85c \uc0c8\ub85c\uc6b4 \uac83\uc774 \uc544\ub2d9\ub2c8\ub2e4. 2013\ub144\uc5d0 \uc0ad\uc81c\ub420 \ub54c\uae4c\uc9c0\ub294 \uc6d0\ub798 \uc788\ub358 \uc9c8\ubb38\uc774\uc5c8\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\uac00 \uc88b\uac8c \ubcf4\uc77c \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uba87 \uac00\uc9c0 \uc8fc\uc758\ud560 \uc0ac\ud56d\uc774 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc544\ub9c8 \uc61b\ub0a0\uc5d0 \uc791\uc131\ud55c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uadf8\ub300\ub85c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc74c\uc5d0 \uae30\uc058\uc2e4 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub7ec\ub098, \uc5b4\ub4dc\ubbf8\uc158 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \ubaa9\uc801\uc740 \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc5d0\uac8c \uc790\uc2e0\uc744 \uc18c\uac1c\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc784\uc744 \uba85\uc2ec\ud558\uc138\uc694. \ub530\ub77c\uc11c, \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc120\ud0dd\ud55c \uc8fc\uc81c\uac00 \ub2e4\uc74c \ub0b4\uc6a9 \uc911 \ud558\ub098\ub97c \ud3ec\ud568\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4:\n<ul>\n<li>\ubd84\uc11d \ub2a5\ub825\uacfc \uc9c0\uc801 \ud638\uae30\uc2ec. \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ub204\uad6c\uc774\uba70 \uc65c \uadf8 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud558\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \ubb3b\ub294 supplemental essay\uac00 \uc788\ub294 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud558\ub294 \uacbd\uc6b0, \uc21c\uc218\ud558\uac8c \ud559\ubb38\uc801\uc778 \ucee4\uba3c \uc5b4\ud50c\ub9ac\ucf00\uc774\uc158(Common Application)\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud574\ub3c4 \uad1c\ucc2e\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub7ec\ub098 \ud0c0\uac9f \ud559\uad50\uac00 \ucee4\uba3c\uc571(Common App) \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9cc \uc694\uad6c\ud558\uba74 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub97c \uc120\ud0dd\ud558\uc5ec \uc790\uae30 \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud558\ub294 \uae30\ud68c\ub97c \uac16\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4!<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc8fc\uc81c 1\u20136\uc5d0\uc11c \ub2e4\ub8e8\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc740 \uac1c\uc778\uc801 \uc131\uc7a5. \uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4 \uac00\uc0c1\uc758 \uc0c1\ud669\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\uc8fc\uc758 \uc0ac\ud56d:&nbsp;<\/strong>\uc131\uc801, \uc2dc\ud5d8 \uc810\uc218 \ub610\ub294 \uc774\ubbf8 \uc785\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\uc5d0 \uc788\ub294 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc5d0 \uad00\ud574\uc11c \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud558\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc138\uc694. \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uc885\uc774\uc5d0 \uae30\uc7ac\ub41c \uc22b\uc790\ub4e4\ub85c \ud3c9\uac00\ud558\uae30 \uc5b4\ub824\uc6b4 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uba74\ubaa9\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc904 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uae30\ud68c\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub9c8\ucc2c\uac00\uc9c0\ub85c \uc774\uc804\uc5d0 \ub2e4\ub978 \ubaa9\uc801\uc744 \uc704\ud574 \uc791\uc131\ud55c \uae00\uc744 \uc7ac\ud65c\uc6a9\ud558\ub294 \uacbd\uc6b0 \uadf8 \uae00\uc744 \uac1c\uc120\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uc774\ub97c \uc218\uc815\ud558\uace0 \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc5d0\uac8c \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ube44\ud310\uc801 \uc0ac\uace0 \uae30\uc220\uc744 \uac16\uace0 \uc788\uc74c\uc744 \uc99d\uba85\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc744 \ucd94\uac00\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\ucd94\ucc9c \uc8fc\uc81c: \ud559\uad50\uc5d0\uc11c \uc694\uad6c\ud558\ub294 supplemental essay\ub97c \uc870\uc0ac\ud568\uc73c\ub85c\uc368 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud574\uc57c \ud558\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc601\uac10\uc744 \uc5bb\uc73c\uc2e4 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4, \uc77c\ubd80 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub294 \ub2e4\uc74c\uacfc \uac19\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4:\n<ul>\n<li>What\u2019s your favorite book, poem, author, movie, musician, etc.?<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Who do you admire?<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Imagine it\u2019s 50 years from now. What would you be doing?<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>If you could speak with someone from the past, who would it be and what would you say?<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Stanford: Virtually all of Stanford\u2019s undergraduates live on campus. Write a note to your future roommate that reveals something about you or that will help your roommate\u2014and us\u2014know you better.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>University of Chicago: Alice falls down the rabbit hole. Milo drives through the tollbooth. Dorothy is swept up in the tornado. Neo takes the red pill. Don\u2019t tell us about another world you\u2019ve imagined, heard about, or created. Rather, tell us about its portal. Sure, some people think of the University of Chicago as a portal to their future, but please choose another portal to write about. 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