{"id":565,"date":"2017-04-28T17:06:00","date_gmt":"2017-04-28T08:06:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.essayreview.co.kr\/?p=565"},"modified":"2025-04-08T10:53:13","modified_gmt":"2025-04-08T01:53:13","slug":"stronger-writing-style","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/academic\/stronger-writing-style\/","title":{"rendered":"\uc804\ub2ec\ub825 \uc788\ub294 \uc601\uc5b4 \uae00\uc4f0\uae30\ub97c \uc704\ud55c \ubb38\uccb4 \uac1c\uc120 \ubc29\ubc95"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0\uac00 \uc774\uc804\uc5d0 \ud3ec\uc2a4\ud305\ud55c \u201c<a href=\"\/ko\/blog\/academic\/2016-report-common-english-writing-errors\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0\uac00 \uac00\uc7a5 \ub9ce\uc774 \uad50\uc815\ud55c Error \ubaa8\uc74c<\/a>\u201d\uc744 \uc77d\uc73c\uc168\ub2e4\uba74,&nbsp;<strong>\uc601\uc791 \uc624\ub958 \uc911 32%\uac00 \ubb38\uccb4\uc640 \uad00\ub828 \uc788\ub2e4<\/strong>\ub294 \uc0ac\uc2e4\uc744 \uc54c\uc544\ucc28\ub9ac\uc168\uc744 \uac81\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\ubc88 \ud3ec\uc2a4\ud305\uc5d0\uc11c\ub294 \ubb38\uccb4 \uc624\ub958\uc640 \uc774\ub97c \uad50\uc815\ud558\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95\uc5d0 \uad00\ud574 \uc54c\uc544\ubcf4\uaca0\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3>\ubb38\uccb4 \uc624\ub958\ub780?<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0\uac00 \ubc1c\uacac\ud55c \ubb38\uccb4 \uc624\ub958\ub294 \uc544\ub798\uc640 \uac19\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li><strong>\uc218\ub3d9\ud0dc<\/strong>: \uc8fc\uc5b4\uac00 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \ub3d9\uc791\uc758 \ub300\uc0c1\uc774 \ub418\uc5b4 \uadf8 \uc791\uc6a9\uc744 \ubc1b\ub294 \u201cto be + \uacfc\uac70 \ubd84\uc0ac\u201d\uc758 \ubb38\ubc95 \uad6c\uc870.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\uc7a5\ud669\ud55c \ud45c\ud604(wordiness)<\/strong>: (20-30 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc774\uc0c1\uc758) \ub9e4\uc6b0 \uae34 \ubb38\uc7a5 \ud639\uc740 \ub354 \uc801\uc740 \ub2e8\uc5b4\ub85c \ub300\uccb4\ub420 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ubd88\ud544\uc694\ud558\uac8c \uae34 \ubb38\uad6c.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\ubd88\uba85\ud655\ud55c \uc9c0\uce6d \ub300\uc0c1<\/strong>: \ub300\uba85\uc0ac \ud639\uc740 \ud55c\uc815\uc0ac(\uc608:\u201cthis\u201d \ubc0f \u201cthat\u201d )\uac00 \uc9c0\uce6d\ud558\ub294 \ub300\uc0c1\uc774 \ubd88\ubd84\uba85\ud55c \uacbd\uc6b0. \uc608:\u201cJoe gave Mark his book.\u201d \uc774 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc5d0\uc11c \u201chis\u201d\ub294 Joe\ub97c \uc9c0\uce6d\ud560\uc218\ub3c4 Mark\ub97c \uc9c0\uce6d\ud560 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\ucc28\ubcc4\uc801\uc778 \ud639\uc740 \uacf5\uaca9\uc801\uc778 \uc5b8\uc5b4<\/strong>: \uc131\ubcc4\uc5d0 \uad6d\ud55c\ub41c \ub2e8\uc5b4 \ud639\uc740 \uc77c\ubd80 \ubb38\ud654\uad8c\uc5d0\uc11c \ubaa8\uc695\uc801\uc77c \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uc778\uc885, \uc885\uad50, \uc131\ubcc4 \ubc0f \uc131 \uc815\uccb4\uc131\uacfc \uad00\ub828\ub41c \ub2e8\uc5b4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\ubd80\uc801\uc808\ud55c \uad6c\uc5b4\uc801 \ud45c\ud604<\/strong>: \uaca9\uc2dd\uc801\/\ud559\uc220\uc801\uc778 \ubb38\uc11c\uc5d0 \uc801\ud569\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc740 \uc77c\uc0c1\uc801\uc778 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \ud639\uc740 \uad6c\uc808.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc704\uc758 5\uac00\uc9c0 \ud56d\ubaa9\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0 \uace0\uac1d\ubd84\ub4e4\uc758 \uc624\ub958 \ud37c\uc13c\ud2b8\ub294 \uc544\ub798 \uadf8\ub798\ud504\uc640 \uac19\uc774 \ub098\ud0c0\ub0ac\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4:<\/p>\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">\n<figure class=\"aligncenter size-full\"><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" width=\"800\" height=\"545\" src=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/12\/24160238\/Picture11.jpg\" alt=\"\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0\uac00 \ubc1c\uacac\ud55c \ubb38\uccb4 \uc624\ub958\" class=\"wp-image-567\" srcset=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/12\/24160238\/Picture11.jpg 800w, https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/12\/24160238\/Picture11-300x204.jpg 300w, https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/12\/24160238\/Picture11-768x523.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 800px) 100vw, 800px\" \/><\/figure><\/div>\n\n\n<p>\uc704\uc758 \ucc28\ud2b8\uc5d0\uc11c \uc54c \uc218 \uc788\ub4ef\uc774, \uc218\ub3d9\ud0dc\uc640 \uad00\ub828\ub41c \uc624\ub958\uac00 \ubb38\uccb4 \uad00\ub828 \uc624\ub958 \uc911 \ubb34\ub824 67%\ub97c \ucc28\uc9c0\ud558\uc600\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774 \uadf8\ub798\ud504\ub97c \ub354 \ubd84\uc11d\ud55c \uacb0\uacfc \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc5f0\uad6c \ub17c\ubb38 \uc911 29.5%,&nbsp;<strong>\uc5b4\ub4dc\ubbf8\uc158 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc911 56.4%\uac00 \uc218\ub3d9\ud0dc \ubb38\uc7a5 \uad6c\uc870\ub97c \ub0a8\uc6a9\ud558\uc600\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ubc1c\uacac\ud558\uc600\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4<\/strong>!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4><strong>\uc5f0\uad6c \ub17c\ubb38\uc758 \uacbd\uc6b0 \uc218\ub3d9\ud0dc\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud574\uc57c \ub418\uc9c0 \uc54a\ub098\uc694?<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub17c\ubb38\uacfc \uc544\uce74\ub370\ubbf9 \ud398\uc774\ud37c\uc5d0\uc11c \ub54c\ub85c\ub294 \uc218\ub3d9\ud0dc\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud560 \uac83\uc744 \uc694\uad6c\ud558\uae30\ub3c4 \ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc, \ub2a5\ub3d9\ud0dc\uc758 \ubb38\uc7a5 \uad6c\uc870\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud568\uc73c\ub85c\uc368 \ub354 \uba85\ud655\ud558\uace0 \uc804\ub2ec\ub825 \uc788\ub294 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \ub9cc\ub4e4 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub2a5\ub3d9\ud0dc\uc758 \uad6c\uc870\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uba74, \ub3d9\uc0ac\uc758 \ud589\uc704\ub97c \ud558\ub294 \uc8fc\uc5b4\ub97c \uc54c \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ub9ac\uc11c\uce58 \ud398\uc774\ud37c\uc5d0\uc11c\ub294 \ubcf5\uc7a1\ud55c \uc804\ubb38 \uc6a9\uc5b4\ub97c \ud3ec\ud568\ud55c \uae34 \ubb38\uc7a5\ub4e4\uc774 \uc8fc\ub85c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ub418\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0, \ubb38\uc7a5\uc758 \uc9c4\uc9dc \uc8fc\uc5b4\ub97c \ubaa8\ud638\ud558\uac8c \ud558\uc5ec \ub3c5\uc790\uac00 \uae00\uc744 \uc774\ud574\ud558\uae30 \ub354 \uc5b4\ub835\uac8c \ub9cc\ub4e4\uc5b4\uc11c\ub294 \uc548\ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub610\ud55c,&nbsp;<strong>\uc218\ub3d9\ud0dc \ubb38\uc7a5\uc740 \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ub610 \ub2e4\ub978 \ubb38\uccb4 \uc624\ub958\ub97c \uc218\ubc18\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4: \uc7a5\ud669\ud55c \ud45c\ud604(wordiness)<\/strong>. \ub530\ub77c\uc11c \uc218\ub3d9\ud0dc \ubb38\uc7a5 \uad6c\uc870\ub97c \ub35c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud568\uc73c\ub85c\uc368 wordiness\uc640 \uc804\uccb4 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub97c \ub208\uc5d0 \ub744\uac8c \uc904\uc77c \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4><strong>\uc5b4\ub4dc\ubbf8\uc158 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \uc218\ub3d9\ud0dc\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc798\ubabb\ub41c \uc774\uc720\ub294 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc778\uac00\uc694?<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc5b4\ub4dc\ubbf8\uc158 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \uacbd\uc6b0, \uc218\ub3d9\ud0dc \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \ubb34\uc2a8 \uc77c\uc774 \uc788\ub354\ub77c\ub3c4 \ud53c\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc65c\ub0d0\uad6c\uc694? \ub300\ub2f5\uc740 \uac04\ub2e8\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4: \ud559\uc5c5\uacc4\ud68d\uc11c (statement of purpose, SOP)\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ub204\uad6c\uc774\uace0 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \ud560 \uacc4\ud68d\uc778\uc9c0\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub530\ub77c\uc11c, \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc5d0\uc11c \uc8fc\uc5b4\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc758\uc0ac \uacb0\uc815 \ub2a5\ub825\uacfc \ub2e4\uc591\ud55c \uc0c1\ud669\uc5d0\uc11c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ud589\ub3d9 \ubc29\uc2dd\uc744 \uac15\uc870\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \ubc14\ub78c\uc9c1\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc218\ub3d9\ud0dc \ubb38\uc7a5 \uad6c\uc870\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub294 \uacbd\uc6b0, \uc790\uc2e0\uc740 \ud589\uc704\ub97c \ubc1b\ub294 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc774\ub77c\ub294 \uc774\ubbf8\uc9c0\ub9cc \uc2ec\uc5b4\uc904 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc0ac\uc2e4\uc744 \uc9c1\uc2dc\ud574\ubd05\uc2dc\ub2e4. \uc5b4\ub290 \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc774 \ub3d9\uae30 \ubd80\uc5ec\uac00 \ub418\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc544 \ubcf4\uc774\uac70\ub098 \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0\uac8c \ub2e5\uce60 \uc0c1\ud669\ub9cc \uae30\ub2e4\ub9ac\ub294 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc5d0\uac8c \uc785\ud559 \ud5c8\uac00\ub97c \uc8fc\uae38 \uc6d0\ud560\uae4c\uc694?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3>\uc791\ubb38 \uc2a4\ud0c0\uc77c \uac1c\uc120 \ubc29\ubc95\uc740?<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<h4>1.\uc218\ub3d9\ud0dc<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li><strong>\uc218\ub3d9\ud0dc \uad6c\uc870\ub97c \uc218\uc815\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud574\uc11c\ub294<\/strong>, \uc8fc\uc5b4\ub97c \ud655\uc778\ud558\uace0 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc758 \uc21c\uc11c\ub97c \ubc14\uafb8\uc5b4 \uc544\ub798 \uc608\uc2dc\uc640 \uac19\uc774 \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \u201c\uc8fc\uc5b4 + \ub3d9\uc0ac + \ubaa9\uc801\uc5b4\u201d\ub85c \uc774\ub8e8\uc5b4\uc9c4 \ub2a5\ub3d9\ud0dc \ubb38\uc7a5\uc73c\ub85c \ub9cc\ub4dc\uc138\uc694.\n<ul>\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0The speech was given by\u00a0the mayor. \u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark> The mayor gave the speech.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0 \uba85\uc0ac 2+ \u201cbe\u201d + \ub3d9\uc0ac\uc758 \uacfc\uac70 \ubd84\uc0ac + by + \uba85\uc0ac 1\u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark> \uba85\uc0ac 1 + \ub3d9\uc0ac+ \uba85\uc0ac 2<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\ub354 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc790\ub8cc\ub97c \uc6d0\ud558\uc2e0\ub2e4\uba74, \uc544\ub798 \ub9c1\ud06c\ub97c \ud074\ub9ad\ud574 \uc8fc\uc138\uc694:\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/owl.english.purdue.edu\/owl\/resource\/539\/05\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Purdue Online Writing Lab (OWL)<\/a><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"http:\/\/www.dailywritingtips.com\/7-examples-of-passive-voice\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Daily Writing Tips<\/a><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"http:\/\/www.quickanddirtytips.com\/education\/grammar\/active-voice-versus-passive-voice\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Grammar Girl<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h4>2. \uc7a5\ud669\ud55c \ud45c\ud604 (Wordiness)<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\uacfc\ub3c4\ud55c \uc804\uce58\uc0ac \uc0ac\uc6a9, filler \ub2e8\uc5b4\uc640 \uba85\uc0ac\ud654\ub97c \ud3ec\ud568\ud558\uc5ec \ub9ce\uc740 \uc7a5\ud669\ud55c \ud45c\ud604\ub4e4\uc774 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\ub97c \ud574\uacb0\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud55c \uba87 \uac00\uc9c0 \ubc29\uc548\uc744 \uc54c\ub824\ub4dc\ub9ac\uaca0\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4:\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"\/ko\/blog\/academic\/improve-writing-eliminate-prepositions\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc804\uce58\uc0ac\uad6c \uad50\uc815\ud558\uae30<\/a>\n<ul>\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0in addition to \u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0also<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0take into consideration \u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0consider<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"\/ko\/blog\/academic\/avoid-fillers-powerful-writing\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">Filler \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc0ad\uc81c\ud558\uae30<\/a>\n<ul>\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0This is actually good \u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0This is good.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0I just want to say I like this song. \u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0I like this song.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"\/ko\/blog\/academic\/improve-writing-edit-nominalizations\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uba85\uc0ac\ud654 \ud53c\ud558\uae30<\/a>\n<ul>\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0He must make a decision about his future. \u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0He must decide his future.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0This study takes many factors into consideration.\u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0This study considers many factors. \ud639\uc740 This study contemplates many factors.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Wordiness\uc758 \uad6c\uc131 \uc694\uc18c \uc911 \ud558\ub098\uc778,&nbsp;<strong>\ubc18\ubcf5\uc801\uc778 \ud45c\ud604<\/strong>\uc740 \uc131\uacf5\uc801\uc778 \uc601\uc791\uc744 \ubc29\ud574\ud558\ub294 &nbsp;\uc6d0\uc778 \uc911 \ud558\ub098\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.\n<ul>\n<li>\uaddc\uc815\ub41c \uc6a9\uc5b4\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\ub294 \uc774\uc0c1, \uba87 \uc904 \uc774\ub0b4\ub85c \uac19\uc740 \ub2e8\uc5b4\ub098 \uad6c\uc808\uc744 \ubc18\ubcf5\ud574\uc11c\ub294 \uc548\ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\ub3d9\uc758\uc5b4(synonym)\ub97c \uc120\ud0dd\ud558\uac70\ub098&nbsp;<\/strong>\uc911\ubb38\uacfc \uac19\uc740 \ub2e4\uc591\ud55c \ubb38\uc7a5 \uad6c\uc870\ub97c \uace0\ub824\ud574\ubcf4\uc138\uc694.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\uae00\uc758 \ub17c\uc870\ub098 \ubb38\ub9e5\uc5d0 \ub9de\ub294 \ub300\uc6a9\uc5b4(substitute word)\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub3c4\ub85d \uc720\uc758\ud558\uc138\uc694<\/strong>. \uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4, \uc704\uc758 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc5d0\uc11c \u201c\ub3d9\uc758\uc5b4(synonym)\u201d\ub300\uc2e0 <span style=\"color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/span>\u201c\ub300\uc6a9\uc5b4(substitute word)\u201d\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uba74 \uc704\uc758 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc740 \uc798\ubabb\ub41c \ubb38\uc7a5\uc774 \ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4!\n<ul>\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0I like the house. The house is on a hill.\u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0I like the house on the hill.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\ub354 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc790\ub8cc\ub97c \uc6d0\ud558\uc2e0\ub2e4\uba74, \uc544\ub798 \ub9c1\ud06c\ub97c \ud655\uc778\ud574 \ubcf4\uc138\uc694:\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/owl.english.purdue.edu\/owl\/resource\/572\/01\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Purdue Online Writing Lab (OWL)<\/a><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"http:\/\/www.dailywritingtips.com\/50-plain-language-substitutions-for-wordy-phrases\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Daily Writing Tips<\/a><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.grammarly.com\/blog\/category\/handbook\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Grammarly<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h4>3. \ubd88\uba85\ud655\ud55c \uc9c0\uce6d \ub300\uc0c1<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\u201cthis\u201d\uc640\u201cthat\u201d\uacfc \uac19\uc740 \ub300\uba85\uc0ac\ub098 \ud55c\uc815\uc0ac\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud560 \uacbd\uc6b0, \ud574\ub2f9 \uba85\uc0ac\ub97c \uadf8 \uba85\uc0ac\uac00 \uc9c0\uce6d\ud558\ub294 \ub300\uc0c1\uacfc \uac00\uae4c\uc774 \uc704\uce58\uc2dc\ud0a4\uc138\uc694!<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc73c\ub85c, \ub300\uba85\uc0ac\ub97c \uc774\uc758 \uc9c0\uce6d \ub300\uc0c1\uacfc \ubd84\ub9ac\uc2dc\ucf1c\ubc84\ub9ac\uba74 \ud63c\ub780\uc774 \uc0dd\uae38 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud55c \uc30d\uc758 \ub2e8\uc5b4\uac00 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc720\uc0ac\ud55c \uba85\uc0ac\uc5d0 \uc758\ud574 \ubd84\ub9ac\ub418\uc5b4 \uc788\ub294 \uacbd\uc6b0\uc5d0 \ud2b9\ud788 \uadf8\ub807\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4, \u201cJoe gave Mark his book\u201d \ubb38\uc7a5\uc5d0\uc11c \u201chis\u201d\uac00 \ub204\uad6c\uc778\uc9c0 \ubd88\uba85\ud655\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. Joe\uac00 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ucc45\uc744 \uc900 \uac83\uc77c\uae4c\uc694 \uc544\ub2c8\uba74 Mark\uc758 \ucc45\uc744 \uc900 \uac83\uc77c\uae4c\uc694? \uc774\ub7f0 \uc720\ud615\uc758 \uc2e4\uc218\ub97c \ud53c\ud558\ub824\uba74, (1) \ub300\uba85\uc0ac\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub294 \ub300\uc2e0\uc5d0 \uba85\uc0ac\ub97c \ubc18\ubcf5\ud558\uac70\ub098 (\uc774 \uc635\uc158\uc740 \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc5b4\uc0c9\ud55c \ubb38\uc7a5\uacfc \ubc18\ubcf5\ub418\ub294 \ud45c\ud604\uc744 \uc218\ubc18\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4) (2) \uc544\ub798 \uc608\uc2dc\uc640 \uac19\uc774 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc758 \uad6c\uc870\ub97c \ubcc0\uacbd\ud558\uba74 \ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4.\n<ul>\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0Joe gave Mark his book.\u00a0\u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0Joe gave Mark Joe\u2019s book (\uc5b4\uc0c9\ud55c \ubc18\ubcf5\uc801\uc778 \ud45c\ud604!)\u00a0\u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0\u201cJoe gave his book to Mark.\u201d \ub610\ub294 \u201cJoe returned Mark\u2019s book to him.\u201d [\uc774 \uacbd\uc6b0\uc5d0\uc11c \uccab \ubc88\uc9f8\ub294 \ucc45\uc774 Joe\uc758 \uac83\uc774 \uacbd\uc6b0\uc774\uace0, \ub450 \ubc88\uc9f8 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc740 Mark \uc18c\uc720\uc758 \ucc45\uc744 \ub098\ud0c0\ub0c5\ub2c8\ub2e4.]<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\ub354 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc790\ub8cc\ub97c \uc6d0\ud558\uc2e0\ub2e4\uba74, \ub2e4\uc74c \ub9c1\ud06c\ub97c \ud074\ub9ad\ud558\uc138\uc694:\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.emory.edu\/home\/index.html\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Emory College of Arts and Sciences<\/a><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.yorku.ca\/colleges\/bethune\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Bethune College, York University<\/a><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.chompchomp.com\/terms\/pronounreference.htm\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Grammar Bytes<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h4>4. \ucc28\ubcc4\uc801\uc778 \ud639\uc740 \uacf5\uaca9\uc801\uc778 \uc5b8\uc5b4<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\uc774 \uc720\ud615\uc758 \uc624\ub958\ub294 \uac70\uc758 \ubc1c\uacac\ub418\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc558\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub294 \ub2e4\ub8f0 \uac00\uce58\uac00 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\ub2e4\ub978 \uc0b6\uc758 \ubc29\uc2dd\uc744 \uc0b4\uc544\uac00\ub294 \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc774 \uc810\uc810 \ub354 \ub9ce\uc774 \uc11c\ub85c \uad50\ub958\ud558\ub294 \uc2dc\ub300\uc5d0, \uc6b0\ub9ac \ubaa8\ub450 \uc6b0\ub9ac\uc758 \ub9d0\uc774 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc601\ud5a5\uc744 \ubbf8\uce60\uc9c0\ub97c \uc790\uac01\ud558\uace0 \uc788\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud2b9\ud788, \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c \ubd88\ucf8c\uac10\uc744 \uc904 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uc0dd\uac01\uc744 \ud45c\ud604\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\ub3c4\ub85d \uc8fc\uc758\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub7f0 \uc810\uc5d0\uc11c \uc5f0\uad6c\uc6d0\ub4e4\uc740 \uc885\uc885 \ub2e4\uc591\ud55c \uc9d1\ub2e8\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc5f0\uad6c\ub97c \uc218\ud589\ud558\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \ub9ac\uc11c\uce58 \ud398\uc774\ud37c\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud558\ub294\ub370 \uc788\uc5b4\uc11c \ud2b9\ubcc4\ud55c \ubb38\uc81c\uc5d0 \uc9c1\uba74\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc784\uc0c1 \uc2dc\ud5d8 \ucc38\uac00\uc790\ub098 \uc0ac\ud68c \uad6c\uc131\uc6d0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \ubb18\uc0ac\ud560 \ub54c, \ud2b9\uc815 \uc9d1\ub2e8\uc744 \uc804\uccb4 \ubcf4\ub2e4 \uc5f4\ub4f1\ud558\uac70\ub098 \uacb0\ud568\uc774 \uc788\ub294 \uac83\ucc98\ub7fc \ucde8\uae09\ud558\ub294 \uc77c\uba85 sterile language\uc5d0 \uc720\uc758\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc9d1\ub2e8\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc774\uc57c\uae30 \ud560 \ub54c, \uc131\ubcc4, \uc778\uc885, \uc7a5\uc560 \ub4f1\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \ud3ec\uad04\uc801\uc778 \uc5b8\uc5b4\uc640 \uc120\uc785\uacac \uc5c6\ub294 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub3c4\ub85d \ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ubb3c\ub860, 100% \ucc28\ubcc4\uc801\uc778 \uc5b8\uc5b4 \uc0ac\uc6a9\uc744 \ud53c\ud558\ub77c\uace0 \uac15\uc870\ud560 \uc218\ub294 \uc5c6\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub807\uc9c0\ub9cc \uc544\ub798 \uc608\uc2dc\ub97c \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcfc \ud544\uc694\ub294 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4:\n<ul>\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0Each man must fend for himself.\u00a0\u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0People should fend for themselves. [\uc774 \uad50\uc815\uc740 \uc131\ubcc4 \ud3b8\ud5a5\uc801\uc778 \ud45c\ud604\uc744 \uc0ad\uc81c\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub0a8\uc131\ub9cc\uc744 \uc758\ubbf8\ud558\ub294 \uacbd\uc6b0\uc5d0\ub9cc \uccab \ubc88\uc9f8 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uc138\uc694.]<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#ff0000\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2717<\/mark>\u00a0The trauma victim\u2026 \u2192\u00a0<mark style=\"background-color:rgba(0, 0, 0, 0);color:#339966\" class=\"has-inline-color\">\u2713<\/mark>\u00a0The person who experienced trauma\u2026 [\uc774\uc640 \uac19\uc774 \uc218\uc815\ud568\uc73c\ub85c\uc368 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \u201cvictim\u201d\uc758 \ubd80\uc815\uc801\uc778 \uc5b4\uc870\ub97c \uc644\ud654\uc2dc\ud0ac \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.\u00a0&#8220;Suffered trauma&#8221;\uc640 \uac19\uc740 \ub2e8\uc5b4\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc740 &#8220;trauma victim&#8221;\uc640 \uac19\uc740 \uc774\uc720\ub85c \ubd80\uc801\uc808\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774 \ub450 \uad6c\uc808 \ubaa8\ub450 \ubd80\uc815\uc801\uc778 \uc774\ubbf8\uc9c0\ub97c \ud22c\uc601\ud558\uace0 \uc815\uc2e0\uc801 \uc678\uc0c1\uc744 \uacaa\uc740 \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc758 \uae30\ubd84\uc744 \uc0c1\ud558\uac8c \ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ud76c\uc0dd\uc790\uc758 \uc774\ubbf8\uc9c0\ub97c \uac15\uc870\ud558\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.]<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\ub354 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc790\ub8cc\ub97c \uc6d0\ud558\uc2e0\ub2e4\uba74, \ub2e4\uc74c \ub9c1\ud06c\ub97c \ud074\ub9ad\ud558\uc138\uc694:\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.gov.uk\/government\/publications\/inclusive-communication\/inclusive-language-words-to-use-and-avoid-when-writing-about-disability\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">UK Government guide on inclusive language<\/a><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/shop.economist.com\/collections\/books\/products\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\"><em>The Economist<\/em>&nbsp;on political correctness<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h4>5. \ubd80\uc801\uc808\ud55c \uad6c\uc5b4\uccb4<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\uad6c\uc5b4\uccb4\ub294 \uc77c\uc0c1 \uc5b8\uc5b4\uc5d0\uc11c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ub418\ub294 \ube44\uaca9\uc2dd\uc801\uc778 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \ud639\uc740 \ubb38\uad6c\ub97c \ub73b\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uae00\uc758 \ubb38\ub9e5\uacfc \ub3c5\uc790\ub97c \uace0\ub824\ud558\uc5ec \uc801\uc808\ud55c \uc5b8\uc5b4\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud574\uc57c \ub41c\ub2e4\ub294 \uc0ac\uc2e4\uc744 \uae30\uc5b5\ud558\uc138\uc694. \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc73c\ub85c, \uc544\uce74\ub370\ubbf9, \ube44\uc988\ub2c8\uc2a4\uc640 \uc5b4\ub4dc\ubbf8\uc158 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uaca9\uc2dd\uc801\uc778 \uc5b8\uc5b4\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uc694\uad6c\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc989, \ucd95\uc57d\ud615(\uc608: don\u2019t, can\u2019t, won\u2019t \ub4f1)\uc744 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud574\uc11c\ub294 \uc548\ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub300\ubd80\ubd84\uc758 \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \uad00\uc6a9\uc801 \ud45c\ud604\uc740 \uad6c\uc5b4\uccb4\uc5d0 \ud574\ub2f9\ud558\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \ud655\uc2e0\uc774 \uc548\ub4e4 \ub54c\ub294&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/www.collinsdictionary.com\/dictionary\/english\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Collin\u2019s English Dictionary<\/a>\uc640 \uac19\uc740 \uc0ac\uc804\uc744 \ud655\uc778\ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\ub354 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc790\ub8cc\ub97c \uc6d0\ud558\uc2e0\ub2e4\uba74, \ub2e4\uc74c \ub9c1\ud06c\ub97c \ud074\ub9ad\ud558\uc138\uc694:\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/owl.english.purdue.edu\/owl\/owlprint\/608\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Purdue Online Writing Lab (OWL)<\/a><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"http:\/\/academicguides.waldenu.edu\/writingcenter\/scholarlyvoice\/academicdiction\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Walden University<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0\uac00 \uc81c\uacf5\ud55c \uc815\ubcf4\ub97c 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