{"id":47,"date":"2022-03-23T18:56:00","date_gmt":"2022-03-23T09:56:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.essayreview.co.kr\/?p=47"},"modified":"2023-10-18T13:22:58","modified_gmt":"2023-10-18T04:22:58","slug":"tips-for-essay-writing-from-harvard-admitted-students","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/tips-for-essay-writing-from-harvard-admitted-students\/","title":{"rendered":"\ud558\ubc84\ub4dc \ud569\uaca9\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131 \ub178\ud558\uc6b0"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>\ub300\uc785 <a href=\"\/ko\/services\/translation\/essay\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc5d0\uc138\uc774<\/a>\ub294 \ub54c\uc5d0 \ub530\ub77c \ud569\uaca9\uc5ec\ubd80\ub97c \uc88c\uc6b0\ud558\ub294 \uacb0\uc815\uc801\uc778 \uc694\uc778\uc774 \ub418\uae30\ub3c4 \ud55c\ub2e4. \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790 \uc790\uc2e0\uc744 \uac00\uc7a5 \uc798 \ud45c\ud604\ud574\uc57c \ud558\uba74\uc11c\ub3c4 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\uc5d0 \uc801\ud78c \ub0b4\uc6a9\ub4e4\uc744 \ub2e4\uc2dc \ubc18\ubcf5\ud574 \ub098\uc5f4\ud574\uc11c\ub294 \uc808\ub300 \uc548\ub418\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc8fc\uc758\ud560 \uc810. \uc544\uc6b8\ub7ec \ub2e8 \uc2dc\uac04\uc5d0 \uc218\ub9ce\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc77d\uc5b4\ub0b4\uc57c \ud558\ub294 \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\ub4e4\uc758 \ub208\uc5d0 \ub744\ub824\uba74 \u2018\uac15\ub82c\ud55c \uc778\uc0c1\uc744 \ub0a8\uae30\ub294\u2019 \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \u2018\uc7ac\ubbf8\uc788\ub294 \u2019\uc8fc\uc81c\ub97c \uac00\uc9c0\uace0 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \ud480\uc5b4\ub0b4\uc57c \ud55c\ub2e4. \uacfc\uc5f0 \ud558\ubc84\ub4dc \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\ub4e4\uc744 \uac10\ub3d9\uc2dc\ud0a8 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub4e4\uc740 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uac83\uc774\uc5c8\uc744\uae4c?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u2018\ud558\ubc84\ub4dc \ud569\uaca9\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc758 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\u2019\ub77c\ub294 \ucc45\uc744 \ud1b5\ud574 \uc18c\uac1c\ub41c \uadf8\ub124\ub4e4\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc900\ube44\uacfc\uc815\uc744 \uc815\ub9ac\ud588\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3><a href=\"#-\"><\/a>&#8211; \ub77c\ucf08 \ube0c\ub799\ud070<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>GPA: 3.8<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>SAT: 760 Math 740 Verbal<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774: \ub77c\ucf08\uc740 \uac00\uc871\uc744 \ud5a5\ud55c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ud5cc\uc2e0\uc744 \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c \uc804\ud558\uace0 \uc2f6\uc5c8\ub2e4 \ud55c\ub2e4. \u2018Supplementary Essay\u2019\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uac15\uc810\uc778 \ub514\ubca0\uc774\ud2b8 \ud65c\ub3d9\ub4e4\uc744 \ud1b5\ud574 \ub2ec\uc131\ud55c \uae30\ub85d\ub4e4\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc37c\uc9c0\ub9cc \u2018Primary Essay\u2019\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc544\ubc84\uc9c0\uc5d0 \uad00\ud574 \uc37c\ub2e4\uace0 \ud55c\ub2e4. \ub85c\uceec \ub808\uc2a4\ud1a0\ub791 \ub4dc\ub77c\uc774\ube0c-\uc2a4\ub8e8(drive-through) \uc9c1\uc6d0\uc778 \uc544\ubc84\uc9c0\uc758 \ubc14\ubcf4 \uac19\uc740 \ub18d\ub2f4\ub4e4\uc744 \uc801\ub2f9\ud788 \uc11e\uc5b4\uac00\uba70 \ucc98\uc74c\uc5d0\ub294 \ubd80\ub044\ub7fd\uac8c \uc5ec\uae34 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc544\ubc84\uc9c0\ub97c \uc5b4\ub290\uc0c8 \uc790\uc2e0\ub3c4 \ub2ee\uc544\uac00\uace0 \ub530\ub77c\uac00\uace0 \uc788\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc37c\ub2e4.<a href=\"#-\"><\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3 id=\"-\">&#8211; \uc904\ub9ac\uc544 \uce90\ub9ac<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>GPA: No GPAs or rankings used by Julia\u2019s school<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>SAT: 800 Math 730 Verbal<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774: \uc904\ub9ac\uc544\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uad00\uc2ec\uc0ac\uc778 \uc74c\uc545\uc744 \uc911\uc2ec\uc73c\ub85c \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c \uc791\uc131\ud588\ub2e4\uace0 \ud55c\ub2e4. \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\ub97c \ud5a5\uc0c1\uc2dc\ud0a4\uae30 \uc704\ud558\uc5ec CD \ud615\ud0dc\ub85c \ub9cc\ub4e0 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc74c\uc545 \uc791\ud488\ub4e4\uacfc \uc791\uace1 \uc810\uc218\ub4e4\uc744 \ubcf4\ucda9 \uc790\ub8cc\ub85c \uc81c\ucd9c\ud588\ub2e4. \uc904\ub9ac\uc544\ub294 \uace0\ub4f1\ud559\uc0dd \ub54c \u2018New England Conservatory of Music\u2019\uacfc \uc5f0\uad00\ub418\uc5b4 \uc788\ub294 \u2018Conservatory Lab Charter School\u2019\uc5d0\uc11c \uc790\uc6d0 \ubd09\uc0ac\uc6d0\uc73c\ub85c 3\ub144\uc744 \uc77c\ud588\ub2e4. \uc774 \ud559\uad50\ub294 \ubd88\uc6b0\ud55c \uc5b4\ub9b0\uc774\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c \uc74c\uc545\uc744 \ubc30\uc6b8 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uae30\ud68c\ub97c \uc81c\uacf5\ud574\uc8fc\uace0 \uc788\ub2e4. \uc904\ub9ac\uc544\ub294 \uc774 \ud559\uad50 \uc74c\uc545\uad50\uc2e4\uc5d0\uc11c \uc544\uc774\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c \uc74c\uc545\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc598\uae30\ud574\uc8fc\uace0 \ub450\uace1\uc744 \uc791\uace1\ud558\uc5ec \ud559\uad50 \uc804\uccb4\uac00 \uacf5\uc5f0\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uac8c \ud558\uc600\ub2e4. \uc2dc\uc778 \ud55c \ubd84\uacfc \ud611\ub825\ud558\uc5ec \uac00\uc0ac \uc791\uc0ac\ud558\uace0 \uc544\uc774\ub4e4\uc774 \ubc14\uc774\uc62c\ub9b0\uc774\ub098 \ub9ac\ucf54\ub354\ub85c \uc5f0\uc8fc\ud558\uace0 \ub178\ub798\ub97c \ubd80\ub97c \uc218 \uc788\ub3c4\ub85d \ud558\uc600\ub2e4. \uc904\ub9ac\uc544\ub294 \uc774 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc37c\ub2e4\uace0 \ud55c\ub2e4. \u201c\uc800\ub294 \ub0b4\uac00 \uc774 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc744 \ud1b5\ud574 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \ubc30\uc6e0\uace0 \ub610\ud55c \uc544\uc774\ub4e4\uc758 \ud765\ubd84\uacfc \ud589\ubcf5\uc744 \ubcf4\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc5bc\ub9c8\ub098 \uc800\ub97c \uae30\ubd84\uc88b\uac8c \ud588\ub294\uc9c0 \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc5b4\ub838\uc744 \ub54c\ubd80\ud130 \uc74c\uc545\uc744 \ubc30\uc6b0\uace0 \ub808\uc2a8\uc744 \ubc1b\uc740 \uc81c\uac00 \uc5bc\ub9c8\ub098 \ud589\ubcf5\ud55c \uc544\uc774\uc778\uc9c0\uc5d0 \uad00\ud574 \uc37c\uc5b4\uc694. \uc74c\uc545\uc744 \uac19\uc774 \ub9cc\ub4e4\uace0 \uc5f0\uc8fc\ud560 \ub54c \uc544\uc774\ub4e4\uc774 \uc5bc\ub9c8\ub098 \ud589\ubcf5\ud574\ud588\ub294\uc9c0 \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc74c\uc545\uc774 \uc544\uc774\ub4e4\uc774 \uc790\ub77c\ub294 \ud658\uacbd\uc5d0 \uc5bc\ub9c8\ub098 \uc911\uc694\ud55c\uac00\ub97c \uae68\ub2ec\uc558\uc8e0.\u201d \uc904\ub9ac\uc544\ub294 \u2018Supplementary Essay\u2019\ub3c4 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc74c\uc545 \uacbd\ub825\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc37c\ub2e4\uace0 \ud55c\ub2e4.<a href=\"#-\"><\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3 id=\"-\"> &#8211; \uc544\ub78c \ub370\ubbf8\ub9ac\uc9c0\uc548<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>GPA: 3.7 unweighted<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>SAT: 720 Math 720 Verbal<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774:\u201d\uc800\ub294 \uc800\uc758 \uac15\uc810\uc774 \uc74c\uc545\uc774\uba70 \ud558\ubc84\ub4dc\uc758 \ub2e4\uc591\ud55c \uc74c\uc545 \uadf8\ub8f9\uc5d0 \ud070 \uc790\uc0b0\uc774 \ub420 \uc218 \uc788\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec \uc8fc\uace0 \uc2f6\uc5c8\uc5b4\uc694.\u201d \uc544\ub78c\uc740 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uccbc\ub85c \uc5f0\uc8fc\ub97c \ub179\uc74c\ud55c \uc624\ub514\uc624\uc640 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc74c\uc545\uc801 \uc131\ucde8 \ubc0f \uc218\uc0c1\ub4e4\uc744 \uc124\uba85\ud55c \uc774\ub825\uc11c\ub97c \uc81c\ucd9c\ud558\uc600\ub2e4. \uac1c\uc778\uc801 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uc74c\uc545\uc5d0 \uad00\ud574\uc11c\uac00 \uc544\ub2c8\ub77c \uc790\uae30\uac00 \uc5b4\ub838\uc744 \ub54c \ud2c8\ud2c8\uc774 \ubd24\ub358 \ud154\ub808\ube44\uc804 \ucf00\ub9ad\ud130 Mr. Rogers\uc758 \uc1fc\uac00 \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0\uac8c \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc601\ud5a5\uc744 \ub07c\ucce4\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \uad00\ud574 \uc37c\ub2e4. \uc544\ub78c\uc740 \uc774 \uc544\uc774\ub514\uc5b4\uac00 \ube0c\ub808\uc778 \uc2a4\ud1a0\ubc0d \uc138\uc158\uc5d0 \uc788\uc5c8\uc744 \ub54c \ub5a0\uc62c\ub790\ub2e4\uace0 \ud55c\ub2e4. \uace7 \uc774\uc5b4 \uc544\ub78c\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc37c\uace0 \uba87 \uc8fc\uac04\uc744 \uac78\ub824 \uace0\uce58\uace0 \ub610 \uace0\uce5c \ub05d\uc5d0 \uc644\uc131\ud588\ub2e4\uace0 \ud55c\ub2e4.<a href=\"#-\"><\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3 id=\"-\">&#8211; \uc81c\ub808\ub4dc \ub3c4\ub7f0<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>GPA: \uc0c1\uc704 10%<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>SAT: 690 Math 630 Verbal<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774: \uc81c\ub808\ub4dc\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ub9ac\ub354\uc2ed\uacfc \ub3d9\uae30\ubd80\uc5ec\uc5d0 \ucd08\uc810\uc744 \ub450\uc5c8\ub2e4. \ubb34\uc5c7\ubcf4\ub2e4 \ud14c\ub2c8\uc2a4\uac00 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ub9ac\ub354\uc2ed \uac1c\ubc1c\uacfc \uc9c0\ub3c4\ub825\uc744 \ud0a4\uc6b0\ub294 \ub370 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc744 \uc8fc\uc5c8\ub294 \uc9c0\ub97c \uac15\uc870\ud588\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc0c1\uc0c1\ub825\uc744 \ub3d9\uc6d0\ud574 \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\ub97c \ub354 \uc7ac\ubbf8\uc788\uac8c \uc77d\uc5b4\uc9c0\ub3c4\ub85d \ub9cc\ub4e4\uc5c8\ub2e4. \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub97c \uad6d\uc81c \uc0ac\ud68c\ub85c \uc120\ud0dd\ud558\uace0 \ub2c8\uc2a4 \uc870\uc57d\uc5d0 \uad00\ud574 \uc37c\ub2e4. \uadf8\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uc544\uc77c\ub79c\ub4dc \ubbf8\ub514\uc5b4\uac00 \uc720\ub7fd \uc5f0\ud569 \uc2e0\uc0dd\uad6d\uac00\ub4e4\uc744 \ub108\ubb34 \ubd80\uc815\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ub17c\uc758\ud55c\ub2e4\ub294 \uc0ac\uc2e4\uc774 \uc720\ub7fd \uc5f0\ud569\uc758 \uc77c\uc6d0\uc774 \ub418\uba74\uc11c \uacbd\uc81c\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ub9ce\uc740 \ud61c\ud0dd\uc744 \uc5bb\uc740 \uc544\uc77c\ub79c\ub4dc\ub85c\uc368\ub294 \ub9e4\uc6b0 \uc704\uc120\uc801\uc774\ub77c\uace0 \ub9d0\ud558\uc600\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub294 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc815\uce58\uc801 \ub2e8\uccb4\ub4e4\uc774 \uc790\uae30\ub4e4\uc758 \uc815\uce58\uc801 \ubaa9\uc801\uc5d0 \ub9de\uac8c \uc870\uc57d \ud22c\ud45c\uc5d0 \uc601\ud5a5\uc744 \ub07c\uce58\ub824\ub294 \uc810\uc5d0 \uad00\ud574 \ub17c\ud588\ub2e4.<a href=\"#-\"><\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3 id=\"-\">&#8211; \uc7ad \ud30c\ub780<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>GPA: 2.75<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>SAT: 630 Math 630 Verbal<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774:\u201d\uc800\ub294 \uc81c\uac00 \ud55c \uc0ac\ub78c\uc73c\ub85c\uc368 \ub204\uad6c\uc778\uc9c0 \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc81c\uac00 \ud558\ubc14\ub4dc\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc131\uaca9\uacfc \uac1c\uc131\uc744 \uac00\uc838\ub2e4\uc904 \uc218 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0\ub97c \uac15\uc870\ud558\uace0 \uc2f6\uc5c8\uc5b4\uc694. \uc800\ub294 \uadf8\ub0e5 \uc81c\uac00 \ud558\ubc14\ub4dc\uc5d0 \uc798 \ub9de\ub294 \uc774\uc720\ub97c \uc815\uc9c1\ud558\uac8c \uc37c\uc5b4\uc694.\u201d \uc7ad\uc740 \ud559\uad50 \uce74\uc6b4\uc2ac\ub7ec\uc640 \uc624\ub79c \uc0c1\ub2f4 \ub05d\uc5d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc57c\uad6c\uc5d0 \uad00\ud574 \uc4f0\uae30\ub85c \ud588\ub2e4.\u201d\uc800\ub294 \uc81c \uc778\uc0dd\uc5d0\uc11c \uc911\uc694\ud558\uace0 \uc758\ubbf8 \uc788\ub294 \uac83\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc4f0\uace0 \uc2f6\uc5c8\uc5b4\uc694.\u201d \uc7ad\uc740 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ucc45\uc0c1\uc5d0 \uc549\uc544 \uba87 \uc2dc\uac04 \ub3d9\uc548 \uc791\uc5c5\ud55c\ud6c4 \uccab\ubc88\uc9f8 \ucd08\uc548(draft)\uc744 \uc644\uc131\ud588\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub294 \uc774 \ucd08\uc548\uc744 \u201c\uae30\uacc4\uc801\u201d\uc774\ub77c\uace0 \ub9d0\ud588\uace0 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc0dd\uac01\ub4e4\uc744 \uc804\ub2ec\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \ub9ce\uc774 \uc5b4\ub824\uc6e0\ub2e4\uace0 \ud588\ub2e4. \ud559\uad50 \uce74\uc6b4\uc2ac\ub7ec\uc758 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc73c\ub85c \uc7ad\uc740 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc0dd\uac01\ub4e4\uc744 \uc9d1\uc911\uc2dc\ud0a4\uace0 \uc57c\uad6c\uac00 \uc790\uae30 \uc778\uc0dd\uc5d0 \uc5bc\ub9c8\ub098 \uc0c1\ub2f9\ud55c \uc77c\ubd80\uc600\ub294\uc9c0\ub97c \uc804\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc5c8\ub2e4 \ud55c\ub2e4. \u201c\uc800\uc5d0\uac8c \uc57c\uad6c\ub294 \uac8c\uc784\ub9cc\uc774 \uc544\ub2cc \ud559\ubb38\uc801 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc774\uc5c8\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc800\ub294 \uc57c\uad6c\ub97c \uc545\uae30 \uc5f0\uc8fc \ub610\ub294 \ubc29\uc815\uc2dd \ud478\ub294 \uac83\uc5d0 \ube44\uc720\ud588\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.\u201d<a href=\"#-\"><\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3 id=\"-\">&#8211; \uace0\ubd09\uc778<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>GPA: 3.8<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>SAT: 720 Math, 710 Verbal<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774: \ubd09\uc778\uad70\uc740 \ubb34\uc5c7\ubcf4\ub2e4 \uc608\uc220\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ud5cc\uc2e0\uc744 \uac15\uc870\ud588\ub2e4. \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc218\uc0c1\uacbd\ub825 \ubc0f \ucf58\uc11c\ud2b8 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc744 \uc124\uba85\ud55c \ubba4\uc9c0\uceec \uc774\ub825\uc11c\ub97c \ubcf4\ucda9\uc73c\ub85c \ud3ec\ud568\ud558\uc600\ub2e4. \ub610\ud55c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uccbc\ub85c \uc5f0\uc8fc\ub97c \ub179\uc74c\ud55c \ud14c\uc774\ud504\ub97c \uc81c\ucd9c\ud558\uc600\uace0 \uc54c\uace0 \uc788\ub294 \uba87 \uc720\uba85 \ubc14\uc774\uc62c\ub9ac\ub2c8\uc2a4\ud2b8\uc640 \uccbc\ub9ac\uc2a4\ud2b8\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c\uc11c \ucd94\ucc9c\uc11c\ub97c \ubc1b\uc558\ub2e4. \uc8fc\uc694 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub85c\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ud559\ubb38\uc801 \uacf5\ubd80\uc640 \uc74c\uc545 \uacbd\ub825\uc758 \uade0\ud615\uc744 \ub9de\ucd94\ub294\ub370 \uc9c1\uba74\ud55c \ub51c\ub808\ub9c8\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc4f0\uae30\ub85c \uc120\ud0dd\ud588\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub294 12\ud559\ub144 \ub54c \uc774\ud2c0\uc744 \uac78\uccd0 \ud560 \ub450 \uac74\uc758 \uccbc\ub85c \ucf58\uc11c\ud2b8\ub97c \ubd88\uacfc \uba87 \uc77c \uc55e\ub450\uace0 SAT \uc2dc\ud5d8\uc744 \ubcf4\uac8c \ub418\uc5c8\ub2e4\uace0 \ud55c\ub2e4.\u201c\uc81c\uac8c\ub294 \uc815\ub9d0 \uc81c\uac00 \ubd84\uc790 \uc0dd\ubb3c\ud559\uc790\ub85c\uc368\uc640 \ucf58\uc11c\ud2b8 \uccbc\ub9ac\uc2a4\ud2b8\ub85c\uc368\uc758 \ub450 \uac00\uc9c0 \uafc8\uc744 \uacfc\uc5f0 \ucd94\uad6c\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc744\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc2dc\ud5d8\uc774\uc5c8\uc5b4\uc694.\u201d \ubd09\uc778\uc774\ub294 \uc774 \uc21c\uac04 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc74c\uc545\uacfc \ud559\uacc4\uc758 \uc0b6\uc744 \uc0b4\uace0 \uc2f6\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uae68\ub2ec\uc558\uace0 \uc774\ub97c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0 \uc37c\ub2e4\uace0 \ud55c\ub2e4. \ub450\ubc88\uc9f8 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub85c\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uccbc\ub9ac\uc2a4\ud2b8\ub85c\uc368 \uacbd\ud5d8\ud55c \uac83\uacfc \uc774 \uc545\uae30\uac00 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc131\uaca9\uacfc \uac1c\uc131\uc5d0 \uc601\ud5a5\uc744 \ub07c\ucce4\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc37c\ub2e4.<a href=\"#-\"><\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3 id=\"-\">&#8211; \uc5d0\ubc00\ub9ac \ub8e8\uce74\uc2a4<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>GPA: 4.3<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>SAT: 710 Math, 800 Verbal<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774: \uc5d0\ubc00\ub9ac\ub294 \ub77c\ud06c\ub85c\uc2a4 (lacrosse) \uc120\uc218\ub85c\uc368\uc758 \uc6b4\ub3d9\ub825\uc744 \uac15\uc870\ud588\ub2e4\uace0 \ud55c\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub140\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\uac00 \ub9e4\uc6b0 \u201c\uc804\ubb38\uc801\u201d\uc774\uc5c8\ub2e4\uace0 \ud558\uba70 \uc5ec\ub7ec \ud398\uc774\uc9c0\uac00 \ub418\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uad11\ubc94\uc704\ud55c \uc6b4\ub3d9 \ud65c\ub3d9 \uc774\ub825\uc11c\ub4e4, \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uac01 \ud65c\ub3d9\uc5d0\uc11c\uc758 \uacf5\ud5cc\ub4e4\uc744 \uc124\uba85\ud558\ub294 \ubd80\ubd84\uc744 \ud568\uaed8 \uc81c\ucd9c\ud588\ub2e4. \uc5d0\ubc00\ub9ac\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \u201c\uc644\ubcbd\uc778\u201d(perfectionist)\uc73c\ub85c \uc0ac\ub294 \uc0b6\uc744 \uc911\ub2e8\ud588\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc37c\ub2e4. \u201c\uc81c \uacb0\uc810\ub4e4\uc744 \uc0ac\ub791\ud558\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95\uc744 \ud130\ub4dd\ud588\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uac00\uc7a5 \uc911\uc694\ud588\uc5b4\uc694.\u201d<a href=\"#-\"><\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3 id=\"-\">&#8211; \uc54c\ub9ac\uc544 \ub818\ud2f8\ub77c<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>GPA: 4.0<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>SAT: 710 Math, 700 Verbal<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774: \uc54c\ub9ac\uc544\uc758 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\uc5d0\ub294 \ud544\ub4dc \ud558\ud0a4\uc640 \uc601\ud654\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc5f4\uc815\ub4e4\uc744 \uc870\ud569\uc2dc\ucf30\ub2e4. \uc54c\ub9ac\uc544\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc6b4\ub3d9\uc801 \uce21\uba74\uacfc \uc608\uc220\uc801 \uce21\uba74\uc744 \ub458 \ub2e4 \uac15\uc870\ud558\uae30\ub97c \uc6d0\ud588\uace0 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uad50\uc2e4 \uc548\uacfc \ubc16\uc73c\ub85c \uae30\uc5ec\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub2e4\ub294 \uc810\uc744 \ubcf4\uc774\uace0 \uc2f6\uc5c8\ub2e4. \uc54c\ub9ac\uc544\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ud544\ub4dc \ud558\ud0a4 \uacbd\uae30 \ube44\ub514\uc624\ubfd0\ub9cc \uc544\ub2c8\ub77c \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ub9cc\ub4e0 \ubaa8\uad50 \uad11\uace0 \ud544\ub984\uc744 \ubcf4\ub0c8\ub2e4. \ub610\ud55c \uc54c\ub9ac\uc544\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ub178\ub825\uacfc \uc758\uc9c0\ub97c \uac15\uc870\ud558\uc600\ub2e4. \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uba38\ub9ac \ube57\uc9c8\uc744 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \ubb38\uc81c\ub4e4\uc744 \ube57\uc9c8\ud558\ub294 \ub370\uc5d0 \ube44\uc720\ud55c \ud655\uc7a5\ub41c \uc740\uc720\uc600\ub2e4. \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc740 \uba38\ub9ac\uc5d0 \uc5bd\ud78c \uac83\uc744 \ube57\uc9c8\ub85c \uc7a0\uc2dc \ube7c\ub0bc \uc218 \uc788\uc9c0\ub9cc \uacb0\ucf54 \uc5bd\ud788\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ubaa8\ub450 \uc81c\uac70\ud558\uc9c0\ub294 \ubabb\ud55c\ub2e4\uace0 \ube44\uc720\ud588\ub2e4. \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ub2e4\ub2cc \uc5ec\ud559\uad50\uac00 \ud310\ub2e8\uc801\uc774\uace0 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc5ec\ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc774 \uc644\ubcbd\ud558\uac8c \ubcf4\uc774\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uc790\uc2e0\ub4e4\uc758 \uacb0\uc810\ub4e4\uc744 \uc778\uc2dd\ud558\uace0 \u2018\ube57\uc9c8\u2019\ud55c\ub2e4\ub294 \uc810\uc5d0 \uad00\ud574 \uc37c\ub2e4. \ub610\ud55c \uc774 \uc810\uc744 \uc77c\uc5d0 \uc5f0\uacb0\uc2dc\ucf30\uace0, \uc5b8\uc81c\ub4e0\uc9c0 \ud56d\uc0c1 \ubb38\uc81c\ub294 \ubc1c\uc0dd\ud558\uae30 \ub9c8\ub828\uc774\uba70 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc6d0\ud558\ub294 \ubb34\uc5b8\uac00\ub97c \uc5bb\uae30 \uc704\ud574\uc11c\ub294 \ub354 \ub9ce\uc740 \ub178\ub825\uc744 \uae30\uc6b8\uc5ec\uc57c \ud55c\ub2e4\ub294 \uc810\uc744 \uc598\uae30\ud588\ub2e4.<a href=\"#-\"><\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3 id=\"-\">&#8211; \uba54\ub9ac \uc138\ub974\ub2e4\ucf54\uc2a4\ud0a4<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>GPA: 3.77<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>SAT: 720 Math, 520 Verbal<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774: \ub9c8\ub9ac\uc544\ub294 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\uc5d0 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ub6f0\uc5b4\ub09c \uc2a4\ud3ec\uce20 \ub2a5\ub825\uc744 \uac15\uc870\ud558\uc600\uace0 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ub610\ud55c \uacf5\ud559\uc804\uacf5\uc5d0 \ub73b\uc744 \ub450\uace0 \uc788\ub2e4\ub294 \uc0ac\uc2e4\uc744 \uc2e0\uc911\ud788 \uc5b8\uae09\ud558\uc600\ub2e4. \ub9c8\ub9ac\uc544\ub294 \uc774 \uc810\uc774 \uc77c\ubd80 \ud559\uad50\ub4e4\uc774 \uc5b4\ub824\uc6b4 \uacfc\ud559 \uc5f0\uad6c\uc5d0 \ub73b\uc744 \ub454 \uc5ec\uc131\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c \ub354 \ub9ce\uc740 \uad00\uc2ec\uc744 \uac00\uc9c0\uace0 \uc788\ub294 \ub9cc\ud07c \uc790\uc2e0 \uc785\ud559\ud5c8\uac00\uc5d0 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub41c \uac83\uc73c\ub85c \uc0dd\uac01\ud55c\ub2e4\uace0 \ud558\uc600\ub2e4.\ube44\ub85d \ub9c8\ub9ac\uc544\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc6b4\ub3d9\uc120\uc218 \uc774\uc0c1\uc774\ub77c\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\uae30 \uc704\ud574 9\ud559\ub144 \uc2e4\ub0b4 \ud2b8\ub799 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc5d0 \uad00\ud574\uc11c \uc4f0\uac8c \ub418\uc5c8\ub2e4. \uadf8 \ud574, \ud559\uad50\uc5d0\uc11c\ub294 \ud2b8\ub799 \ud300\uc5d0\uac8c \uc790\uae08\uc744 \uc81c\uacf5\ud574\uc8fc\uc9c0 \ubabb\ud574, \ub9c8\ub9ac\uc544\ub294 \ud63c\uc790 \ud6c8\ub828\ud558\uace0 \uacbd\uae30\uc5d0 \ub098\uac14\uc5b4\uc57c \ud588\ub2e4. \uc774 \uc810\uc744 \uc124\uba85\ud558\uba74\uc11c \ub9c8\ub9ac\uc544\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ucd94\uc9c4\ub825\uacfc \ub048\uae30\ub97c \uac15\uc870\ud558\uc600\ub2e4.<a href=\"#-\"><\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3 id=\"-\">&#8211; \ubaa8\ub974\uac90 \uc5d0\ub808\uc2a8<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>GPA: 3.9<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>SAT: 790 Math, 750 Verbal<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774: \ubaa8\ub974\uac90\uc740 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uad00\uc2ec\uc0ac\uc778 \ubc1c\ub808\uc5d0 \uac15\uc810\uc744 \ub450\uc5c8\ub2e4. \ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc \ucda4 \uc790\uccb4\uc5d0 \uad00\ud574\uc11c \uc4f0\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc544\ub2c8\ub77c \uc624\ud788\ub824 \ubc1c\ub808\ub97c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5f4\uc815 \ubc0f \uc804\ubb38\uc131\uc758 \uc608\ub85c\uc368 \uc124\uba85\ud558\uc600\ub2e4. \u201c\ube44\ub85d \uc791\uc740 \uac15\uc810\uc774\uc9c0\ub9cc \uc800\uc758 \ubc1c\ub808 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc740 \ubb34\uc2a8 \uc77c\uc774\ub4e0 \uc5f4\uc2ec\ud788 \ud558\ub294 \uc131\uaca9\uacfc \uc774\ub97c \ub4b7\ubc1b\uce68\ud558\ub294 \ucd94\uc9c4\ub825\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\uc5c8\uc5b4\uc694.\u201d \ubaa8\ub974\uac90\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \ubc1c\ub808\ub97c \ud1b5\ud574 \ubc30\uc6b4 \uae30\uc220\ub4e4\uc774 \ub354 \ub098\uc544\uac00 \ub2e4\ub978 \ubd84\uc57c\uc5d0\uc11c\ub3c4 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ub418\uc5c8\ub2e4\ub294 \uc810, \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \ubaa8\ub974\uac90\uc774 \uc9c0\uc801\uc778 \ub9ce\uc740 \uac83\uc5d0 \ud765\ubbf8\ub97c \ub454 \ud559\uc0dd\uc774\ub77c\ub294 \uc810\uc744 \uac15\uc870\ud558\uc600\ub2e4.<a href=\"#-\"><\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3 id=\"-\">&#8211; \ub85c\ub80c \ube0c\ub808\uc774<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>GPA: 4.7<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>SAT: 760 Math, 800 Verbal<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774: \ub77c\uc6b0\ub80c\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub85c \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc5b4\ub838\uc744 \uc801 \uac78\uc2a4\uce74\uc6b0\ud2b8 \ubc15\ub78c\ud68c\uc5d0\uc11c \uc5b4\ub290 \uacfc\ud559\uc790\uac00 \ub538\uae30\uc5d0\uc11c DNA\ub97c \uc801\ucd9c\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ubcf8 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc37c\ub2e4. \u201c\uc774 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc740 \uc800\ub97c \uacfc\ud559\uc5d0 \ud638\uae30\uc2ec\uc744 \uac16\uac8c \ub9cc\ub4e4\uc5c8\uace0 \uacfc\ud559\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc81c \uc5f4\uc815\uc744 \uc804\ud558\uae30\uc5d0 \ucc38 \uc88b\uc740 \uc2a4\ud1a0\ub9ac\ub77c \uc0dd\uac01\ud588\uc5b4\uc694.\u201d \ub77c\uc6b0\ub80c\uc740 11\ud559\ub144 \ud6c4 \uc5ec\ub984 \ub0b4\ub0b4 UC Davis\uc5d0\uc11c \uba74\uc5ed\ud559\uacfc \uac04\uc744 \ub3c5\ub9bd\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc5f0\uad6c\ud558\uc600\ub2e4. \ub77c\uc6b0\ub80c\uc740 \uc5b4\ub838\uc744 \uc801 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc744 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc0c8\ub85c \ubc1c\uacac\ud55c \uacfc\ud559 \uad00\uc2ec\uc0ac\uc5d0, \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc55e\uc73c\ub85c\uc758 \uacc4\ud68d\ub4e4\uc5d0 \uad00\ub828\uc744 \uc2dc\ucf30\ub2e4. \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ud1b5\ud574 \uc0dd\ubb3c\ud559\uc740 \ud559\ubb38\uc744 \ub6f0\uc5b4\ub118\uc5b4 \uc790\uc2e0\uc744 \uc990\uac81\uac8c \ud558\ub290 \ub180\uc774\ud130\uc784\uc744 \uac15\uc870\ud588\ub2e4.<a href=\"#-\"><\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3 id=\"-\">&#8211; \uc2dc\uc624\ubc18 \ucf54\ub110\ub9ac<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>GPA: 3.4 (estimated)<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>SAT: 720 Math, 760 Verbal<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774: \uc2dc\uc624\ubc18\uc740 \uacbd\uc7c1\uc801\uc778 \ud0dc\ub3c4\ub85c \ub300\ud559\uc9c0\uc6d0\uacfc\uc815\uc744 \uc811\uadfc\ud588\ub2e4\uace0 \ud55c\ub2e4. \uc2dc\uc624\ubc18\uc740 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc2dc\uac04\uc744 \uc798 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uace0 \ub3d9\uc2dc\uc5d0 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \ubd84\uc57c\uc5d0\uc11c \ub2a5\uac00\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub2e4\ub294 \uc810\uc744 \uc804\ud558\uae30\uc5d0\ub294 \uacfc\uc678 \ud65c\ub3d9 \uc774\ub825\uc11c\uac00 \uac00\uc7a5 \uc911\uc694\ud558\ub2e4\uace0 \uc0dd\uac01\ud588\ub2e4. \uc2dc\uc624\ubc18\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uac00\uc871\uc5d0 \ub300\ud558\uc5ec \uc37c\ub2e4. \u201c\uc800\ub294 \uc81c \uac00\uc871\uc774 \uc800\uc758 \uc778\uc0dd \ubaa8\ub4e0 \ubd80\ubd84\ub4e4\uc744 \u2013 \uc800\uc758 \ubaa9\ud45c, \uc800\uc758 \uac1c\uc131 \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc800\uc758 \uc77c\ubc18\uc801 \uc804\ub9dd \u2013 \ud615\uc131\ud588\ub2e4\uace0 \ub290\uaf08\uace0 \uc9c0\uae08\ub3c4 \ub290\ub07c\uace0 \uc788\uc5b4\uc694. \uc800\ub294 \uc81c\uac00 8\uc778 \uac00\uc871\uc758 \ub9cf\ub538\ub85c\uc368\uc758 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc774 \ud2b9\ubcc4\ud558\ub2e4 \uc0dd\uac01\ud588\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.\u201d<a href=\"#-\"><\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3 id=\"-\">&#8211; \ub2c8\ucf5c \uc5d0\ud504\ub860<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>GPA: 4.0<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>SAT: 800 Math, 760 Verbal<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774: \u201c\uc800\ub294 \uc81c \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\uc758 \ubaa9\ud45c\ub97c \uade0\ud615\uc774\ub77c\uace0 \uc0dd\uac01\ud588\uc5b4\uc694.\u201d 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