{"id":454,"date":"2022-01-09T16:14:00","date_gmt":"2022-01-09T07:14:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.essayreview.co.kr\/?p=454"},"modified":"2024-04-24T13:58:29","modified_gmt":"2024-04-24T04:58:29","slug":"college-admissions-essay-why-there","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/college-admissions-essay-why-there\/","title":{"rendered":"\ubbf8\uad6d \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131\ud301"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>\ub9e4\ub144 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0\ub294 \ubbf8\uad6d\ub300\ud559 \uc9c4\ud559\uc744 \uc704\ud55c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ucca8\uc0ad \ubc0f \ubc88\uc5ed \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4\ub97c \uc81c\uacf5\ud558\uace0 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc791\ub144\uc5d0 \uc774\uc5b4 \uc62c\ud574\ub3c4 <a href=\"\/ko\/blog\/admission\/common-app-admissions-essay-prompt-7\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\ucee4\uba3c\uc571 (Common Application)<\/a>\uc744 \ud3ec\ud568\ud55c 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class=\"aligncenter size-full\"><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" width=\"640\" height=\"640\" src=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/12\/23090913\/college-admissions-essays-be-specific.jpg\" alt=\"\uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc73c\ub85c\" class=\"wp-image-456\" srcset=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/12\/23090913\/college-admissions-essays-be-specific.jpg 640w, https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/12\/23090913\/college-admissions-essays-be-specific-300x300.jpg 300w, https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/12\/23090913\/college-admissions-essays-be-specific-150x150.jpg 150w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 640px) 100vw, 640px\" \/><\/figure><\/div>\n\n\n<p>\ud558\ub098\uc758 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \uad6c\uc131\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \ud2b9\ubcc4\ud55c \uc21c\uac04\uc744 \ub5a0\uc62c\ub824 \ubcf4\uc138\uc694. \ud2b9\ubcc4\ud55c \uc21c\uac04\uc774\ub780 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 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\uacfc\ubaa9, SAT TOEFL \uc810\uc218 \ud639\uc740 \ub300\uc678 \ud65c\ub3d9\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \ub098\uc5f4\ud558\uc5ec\uc11c\ub294 \uc548\ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8 \ubcf4\ub2e4\ub294, \ud558\ub098\uc758 \uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc778 \uc0ac\uac74\uc774\ub098 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uad00\uc2ec \ubd84\uc57c\uc5d0 \uc911\uc810\uc744 \ub450\uc5b4 \uc791\uc131\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ubaa9\ud45c\ub97c \uacb0\uc815\ud55c \uc21c\uac04\ubd80\ud130 \ubaa9\ud45c\ub97c \uc774\ub8e8\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \ub300\ud559\uad50\uc5d0\uc11c\uc758 \uc2dc\uac04\uc744 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ud65c\uc6a9\ud560 \uac83\uc778\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c&nbsp;<strong>\ud558\ub098\uc758 \uc2a4\ud1a0\ub9ac\ub97c \uad6c\uc131\ud558\uace0 \uc774\ub97c \uc11c\uc220\ud558\ub294\ub370 \uc911\uc810\uc744 \ub461\ub2c8\ub2e4<\/strong>.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc774 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uba74\uc744 \ubd10\uc8fc\uae38 \uc6d0\ud558\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uacf0\uacf0\uc774 \uc0dd\uac01\ud574\ubcf4\uc138\uc694.&nbsp;<strong>\uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc5d0\uac8c \ud559\uc810\uacfc \uc2dc\ud5d8 \uc810\uc218\uc5d0 \ub4dc\ub7ec\ub098\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc9c0\ub9cc \uc5b4\ud544\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ud2b9\uc9d5\uc740 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc77c\uae4c\uc694?&nbsp;<\/strong>\ub2e4\uc74c \uc9c8\ubb38\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \ub2f5\ubcc0\uc774 \ubc14\ub85c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc774 \ub420 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc758\uc695\uc801\uc778 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc778\uac00\uc694? \uc790\uc6d0\ubd09\uc0ac\ub098 \uc2a4\ud3ec\uce20\uc640 \uac19\uc740 \uacfc\uc678\ud65c\ub3d9\uc5d0 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc2dc\uac04\uc744 \ud22c\uc790\ud558\uc5ec \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc6d0\ud558\ub294 \ub9cc\ud07c \ud559\uc810\uc774\ub098 \uc2dc\ud5d8 \uc810\uc218\ub97c \ubc1b\uc9c0 \ubabb\ud588\ub098\uc694? \uc774\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \ub300\ub2f5\uc5d0 \u201c\uc608\u201d\ub77c\uba74, \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uac16\uace0 \uc788\ub294 \uc5f4\uc815\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc124\uba85\ud558\uace0 \uacfc\uc678 \ud65c\ub3d9\ub4e4\uc774 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ubbf8\ub798 \uacc4\ud68d\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub420 \uc218 \uc788\uc744\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc11c\uc220\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4, Johns Hopkins University\uc5d0\uc11c \ubc1c\uac04\ud55c \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774&nbsp;\uc911 \ud558\ub098\uc778 &nbsp;\u201cBuilding a Twenty Story Apartment Building\u2014Kyle\u201d\uc5d0\uc11c,&nbsp;Kyle\uc740 \uadf8\uc758 \uac74\uc124 \ud68c\uc0ac \uc778\ud134\uc2ed \uacbd\ud5d8\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \ub9d0\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub294 \uc774 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc744 \ud1b5\ud574 \ud1a0\ubaa9 \uacf5\ud559\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uad00\uc2ec\uc744 \ub098\ud0c0\ub0c5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub610\ud55c, Johns Hokpins\ub9cc\uc774 \uc81c\uacf5\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ud2b8\ub808\uc774\ub2dd\uacfc \uad50\uc721 \uacfc\uc815\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc5b8\uae09\ud55c \ud6c4\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc774\ub97c \ubbf8\ub798\uc5d0 \ud65c\uc6a9\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc744\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc11c\uc220\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h2>\ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc870\uc0ac\ud558\ub77c<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud0c0\uac9f \ud559\uad50\uc758 \ud559\ubb38\uc801 \ud504\ub85c\uadf8\ub7a8\uacfc \ub300\uc678\ud65c\ub3d9 \ud504\ub85c\uadf8\ub7a8\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc870\uc0ac\ud558\uc138\uc694. \ud559\uad50\uc758 \ubbf8\uc158 (mission statement)\uacfc \ud559\uad50\uac00 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c \uc81c\uacf5\ud558\ub294 \ud2b9\ubcc4\ud55c \ud504\ub85c\uadf8\ub7a8\uc5d0 \uc8fc\ubaa9\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc120\ud0dd\ud55c \uc804\uacf5\uc774 \uc18d\ud574 \uc788\ub294 \ud559\uacfc\uc5d0\uc11c \uc81c\uacf5\ud558\ub294 \uc218\uc5c5 \uc911 2-3\uac1c\ub97c \uc120\ud0dd\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc65c \uadf8 \uc218\uc5c5\ub4e4\uc744 \ub4e3\uace0 \uc2f6\uc740 \uc9c0\uc640 \uadf8 \uc218\uc5c5\uc73c\ub85c\ubd80\ud130 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \uc5bb\uae30\ub97c \ubc14\ub77c\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc124\uba85\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub610\ud55c, \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ucc38\uc5ec\ud558\uae38 \uc6d0\ud558\ub294 2-3\uac1c\uc758 \ub300\uc678\ud65c\ub3d9\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc5b8\uae09\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\uc5d0 \uc801\ud78c \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc744 \ub2e4\uc2dc \ud55c\ubc88 \ud655\uc778\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5d4\uc9c0\ub2c8\uc5b4\ub9c1 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0\uc11c \ubc1c\ub808\ub97c \uc804\uacf5\ud558\uace0 \uc2f6\ub2e4\uace0 \ub9d0\ud574\uc11c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\uac00 \ubc84\ub824\uc9c0\ub294 \uc77c\uc740 \uc5c6\uc5b4\uc57c\uaca0\uc8e0?<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\ud559\uad50\uac00 \uc81c\uacf5\ud558\ub294 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \ud61c\ud0dd\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \ub098\uc5f4\ud558\uae30 \ubcf4\ub2e4\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ubaa9\ud45c\uc640 \ud559\uad50\uc758 \ubbf8\uc158(\ud559\uad50\uac00 \uc131\ucde8\ud558\uace0\uc790 \ud558\ub294 \ubc14)\uc774 \uc77c\uce58\ud55c\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc918\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc989, \uc790\uc2e0\uacfc \ud559\uad50\uac00 \uac19\uc740 \uc120\uc0c1\uc5d0 \uc788\uace0&nbsp;<strong>\uadf8 \ud559\uad50\ub9cc<\/strong>\uc774 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc131\uacf5\ud558\ub294\ub370 \ud544\uc694\ud55c \uac83\uc744 \uc81c\uacf5\ud574 \uc904 \uc218 \uc788\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ud1b5\ud574 \ud45c\ud604\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\ud559\uad50\ub97c \uc870\uc0ac\ud558\ub294\ub370 \uc2dc\uac04\uc744 \ud22c\uc790\ud568\uc73c\ub85c\uc368, \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5f4\uc815\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\uace0 \ub300\ud559\uad50\uc5d0\uac8c \uae4a\uc740 \uc778\uc0c1\uc744 \uc2ec\uc5b4 \uc904 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub610\ud55c, \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc9c4\uc2ec\uc73c\ub85c \uadf8 \ub300\ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \uc9c4\ud559\ud558\uae38 \uc6d0\ud55c\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc904 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4!<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4, Johns Hopkins\uac00 \ud3ec\uc2a4\ud305\ud55c &nbsp;\u201cDissonance\u2014Leila\u201d\uc5d0\uc11c,&nbsp;Leila\ub294 Hopkins\uac00 \ubc14\ub85c \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ubc1c\uc804\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ud658\uacbd\uc774\ub77c\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ub098\ud0c0\ub0c5\ub2c8\ub2e4. Leila\ub294 \ud55c\ubc88\uc5d0 \ub9ce\uc740 \ubd84\uc57c\ub97c \ubc30\uc6b0\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uc88b\uc544\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0, Hopkins\uc758 \ud55c \ubd84\uc57c\uc5d0 \uc911\uc810\uc744 \ub450\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc740 \uad50\uc721 \uacfc\uc815\uc740 Leila\uc640 \uc798 \ub9de\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. Johns Hopkins\uc758 \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc740 \uadf8\ub140\uac00 Johns Hopkins\uc758 \uad50\uc721 \uacfc\uc815\uc5d0 \uc798 \uc801\uc751\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc744 \uac83\uc774\ub77c\uace0 \uc0dd\uac01\ud558\uc600\uc744 \uac81\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h2>\uc5f0\uacb0 \uc9c0\uc5b4 \uc791\uc131\ud558\ub77c<\/h2>\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">\n<figure class=\"aligncenter size-full\"><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" width=\"640\" height=\"426\" src=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/12\/23090740\/college-admissions-essays-be-consistent.jpg\" alt=\"\uc5f0\uacb0\uc9c0\uc5b4\ub77c\" class=\"wp-image-455\" srcset=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/12\/23090740\/college-admissions-essays-be-consistent.jpg 640w, https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/12\/23090740\/college-admissions-essays-be-consistent-300x200.jpg 300w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 640px) 100vw, 640px\" \/><\/figure><\/div>\n\n\n<p>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ud1b5\ud574 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ub0b4\ub9b0 \uacb0\uc815\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc9c4\uc2ec\uc744 \uc804\ub2ec\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ubaa9\ud45c\uc640 \uadf8 \ubaa9\ud45c\ub97c \uc131\ucde8\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \ud560\uc9c0\uc5d0 \uad00\ud55c \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc774\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \uac04\ub7b5\ud55c \uc544\uc6c3\ub77c\uc778\uc740 \ub2e4\uc74c\uacfc \uac19\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>Part 1:&nbsp;\uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ubaa9\ud45c\uac00 \uc0dd\uae34 \uc21c\uac04\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub85c \uae00\uc744 \uc2dc\uc791\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Part 2:&nbsp;\ubaa9\ud45c\ub97c \uc124\uc815\ud55c \ud6c4\uc5d0 \ucde8\ud55c \ud589\ub3d9\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub2e4\uc74c\uc758 \uc9c8\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc744 \uc791\uc131\ud560\uc9c0 \uc0dd\uac01\ud574 \ubd05\uc2dc\ub2e4. \ubaa9\ud45c\ub97c \uc774\ub8e8\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uc0c8\ub85c\uc6b4 \ud65c\ub3d9\uc744 \uc2dc\uc791\ud558\uc600\ub098\uc694 \uc544\ub2c8\uba74 \ud2b9\uc815 \ud65c\ub3d9\uc5d0 \ub354 \ubab0\ub450\ud558\uc600\ub098\uc694?<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Part 3:&nbsp;\uc9c0\uc6d0\ud55c \ud559\uad50\uac00 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ubaa9\ud45c\ub97c \uc774\ub8e8\ub294\ub370 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc744 \uc904 \uc218 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc5b8\uae09\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud559\uad50\uc758 \uad50\uacfc\uacfc\uc815, \ubbf8\uc158\/\ube44\uc804, \ud2b9\ubcc4\ud55c \ud504\ub85c\uadf8\ub7a8 \ub4f1\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc870\uc0ac\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub7f0 \ub2e4\uc74c \ud559\uad50\uac00 \uc81c\uacf5\ud558\ub294 \ud61c\ud0dd\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0\uac8c \uc720\uc6a9\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uc9c0\uc640 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ub418\uace0\uc790 \ud558\ub294 \uc778\ubb3c\ub85c \uc131\uc7a5\ud558\ub294\ub370 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc744 \uc904 \uc218 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc124\uba85\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub610\ud55c \uc790\uc2e0\uacfc \ud574\ub2f9 \ub300\ud559\uad50\uac00 \uc11c\ub85c \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc2dc\ub108\uc9c0 \ud6a8\uacfc\ub97c \uc5bb\uc744 \uc218 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0\ub97c \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc90d\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Part 4:&nbsp;\uae00\uc744 \uac04\ub7b5\ud558\uac8c \ub9c8\ubb34\ub9ac\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ubaa9\ud45c\ub97c \uc694\uc57d\ud558\uace0 \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud55c \ub300\ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \ud569\uaca9\ud560 \uacbd\uc6b0 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ub300\ud559\uc0dd\ud65c\uc744 \ubcf4\ub0bc \uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc124\uba85\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc9c0\uae08\uae4c\uc9c0 \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf8 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc744 \uac04\ub7b5\ud558\uac8c \uc694\uc57d\ud558\uc790\uba74, &#8220;Why Us&#8221; \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud558\ub294 \ub370 \uc788\uc5b4 \uae30\uc5b5\ud574\uc57c \ud560 \uc810\uc740 \ub2e4\uc74c\uacfc \uac19\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ol>\n<li>\uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc791\uc131\ud558\ub77c<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc870\uc0ac\ud558\ub77c<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc5f0\uacb0 \uc9c0\uc5b4 \uc791\uc131\ud558\ub77c<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc704\uc5d0 \uc5b8\uae09\ud55c \ud301\ub4e4\uc774 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \ubbf8\uad6d \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud558\ub294\ub370 \ud070 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub418\uae38 \ubc14\ub78d\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.com\/college-admissions-essay-why-there\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">English<\/a>,\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.cn\/college-admissions-essay-why-there\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u7b80\u4f53\u4e2d\u6587<\/a>,\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.com.tw\/college-admissions-essay-why-there\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u7e41\u9ad4\u4e2d\u6587<\/a>\u00a0\ubc84\uc83c\ub3c4 \uc774\uc6a9 \uac00\ub2a5\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u25b6&nbsp;\uae00 \uc791\uc131 \ud6c4&nbsp;<strong>\uc804\ubb38\uac00\uc758 \uac80\ud1a0<\/strong>\uac00 \ud544\uc694\ud558\uc2dc\ub2e4\uba74, \uc5b8\uc81c\ub4e0\uc9c0 \uc800\ud76c&nbsp;<a href=\"\/ko?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc601\ubb38\uad50\uc815<\/a>&nbsp;\uc11c\ube44\uc2a4\ub97c \uc774\uc6a9\ud574\ubcf4\uc138\uc694!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><a href=\"\/ko\/services\/admissions-editing\/english-essay?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc720\ud559\uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c \uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4<\/a>\u2502<a href=\"\/ko\/services\/admissions-editing\/english-essay?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4<\/a>\u2502<a href=\"\/ko\/services\/admissions-editing\/sop?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">SOP \uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4<\/a>\u2502<a href=\"\/ko\/services\/admissions-editing\/cv-resume?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">CV\/\uc774\ub825\uc11c \uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4<\/a>&nbsp;\u2502<a href=\"\/ko\/services\/admissions-editing\/letter-of-recommendation?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\ucd94\ucc9c\uc11c \uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4<\/a>&nbsp;\u2502&nbsp;<a href=\"\/ko\/services\/admissions-editing\/cover-letter?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\ucee4\ubc84\ub808\ud130 \uc601\ubb38\uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>\ub9e4\ub144 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0\ub294 \ubbf8\uad6d\ub300\ud559 \uc9c4\ud559\uc744 \uc704\ud55c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ucca8\uc0ad \ubc0f \ubc88\uc5ed \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4\ub97c \uc81c\uacf5\ud558\uace0 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc791\ub144\uc5d0 \uc774\uc5b4 \uc62c\ud574\ub3c4 \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 (Common Application)\uc744 \ud3ec\ud568\ud55c \ubbf8\uad6d\ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc640 \ucd94\ucc9c\uc11c \uad50\uc815 \ubc0f \ubc88\uc5ed \ubb38\uc758\ub85c \uc778\ud574 \uc815\uc2e0\uc5c6\ub294 \ud55c \ud574\ub97c \ubcf4\ub0c8\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\ubc88 \ud3ec\uc2a4\ud305\uc5d0\uc11c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uaed8 \uc81c\uacf5\ud574 \ub4dc\ub9b4 \uc815\ubcf4\ub294 \ubc14\ub85c \uceec\ub9ac\uc9c0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131\ubc95\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5ec\ub7ec \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 prompt \uc911 \uac00\uc7a5 \uae4c\ub2e4\ub85c\uc6b4 \u201cwhy us\u201d \uc9c8\ubb38\uc5d0 \ub300\ub2f5\ud558\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc54c\uc544\ubcf4\uaca0\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. 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