{"id":438,"date":"2017-01-09T14:47:00","date_gmt":"2017-01-09T05:47:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.essayreview.co.kr\/?p=438"},"modified":"2025-04-07T14:27:09","modified_gmt":"2025-04-07T05:27:09","slug":"research-writing-tips-editing-manuscript-discussion","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/academic\/research-writing-tips-editing-manuscript-discussion\/","title":{"rendered":"\ub17c\ubb38 \uc791\uc131 \ud301: \ud6a8\uacfc\uc801\uc778 Discussion(\uace0\ucc30) \uc791\uc131\ud558\uae30"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>\uc774\uc804 \ud3ec\uc2a4\ud305\uc5d0\uc11c \uc800\uc790\uac00 \uace0\ub824\ud574\uc57c \ub17c\ubb38 \uc791\uc131\ubc95\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud558\uc600\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud2b9\ud788,&nbsp;<a href=\"\/ko\/blog\/academic\/how-to-write-effective-figure-titles-and-legends\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">Figures and Legends(\uadf8\ub9bc\uacfc \ubc94\ub840)<\/a>,&nbsp;<a href=\"\/ko\/blog\/academic\/research-writing-tips-methods\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">Methods(\ubc29\ubc95)<\/a>, and&nbsp;<a href=\"\/ko\/blog\/academic\/writing-results-section-tips-common-mistakes\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">Results(\uacb0\uacfc)<\/a>\uc5d0&nbsp;\ub300\ud574 \uc790\uc138\ud788 \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf4\uc558\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\ubc88 \ud3ec\uc2a4\ud305\uc5d0\uc11c\ub294 \ub17c\ubb38\uc5d0\uc11c \uc5f0\uad6c\uc758 \uc911\uc694\uc131\uc744 \uac00\uc7a5 \uc798 \ub098\ud0c0\ub0bc \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ud6a8\uacfc\uc801\uc778 Discussion(\uace0\ucc30) \uc139\uc158 \uc791\uc131\ubc95\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \ud301\uc744 \uba87 \uac00\uc9c0 \uc18c\uac1c\ud574 \ub4dc\ub9ac\uaca0\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2>\ub17c\ubb38 Discussion\uc758 \ubaa9\uc801\uc740?<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\uac04\ub2e8\ud788 \ub9d0\ud558\uc790\uba74,&nbsp;<strong>Discussion\uc740 \uc11c\ub860(Introduction)\uc5d0\uc11c \uc81c\uc2dc\ud55c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5f0\uad6c \uc8fc\uc81c\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc124\uba85\ud558\ub294 \ubd80\ubd84\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.&nbsp;<\/strong>\uc989, \ub17c\ubb38\uc758 \uc11c\ub860\uc5d0\uc11c \uc800\uc790\ub294 \ub3c5\uc790\uac00 \uc65c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5f0\uad6c\uc5d0 \uad00\uc2ec\uc744 \uac00\uc838\uc57c \ub418\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc11c\uc220\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub7f0 \ub2e4\uc74c \uc800\uc790\ub294 Results \uc139\uc158\uc5d0\uc11c \uc5f0\uad6c \uacfc\uc815\uc5d0\uc11c \uc218\uc9d1\ud55c \ub370\uc774\ud130\ub97c \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\ub294 \uc774\ubbf8\uc9c0\uc640 \uadf8\ub798\ud504\ub97c \uc81c\uc2dc\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. Results\uc5d0\uc11c \uc544\ubb34\ub9ac \uc720\uc758\ubbf8\ud55c \uc5f0\uad6c \uacb0\uacfc\ub97c \uc81c\uc2dc\ud560\uc9c0\ub77c\ub3c4, Discussion \uc139\uc158\uc5d0\uc11c \uc911\uc694\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uac70\ub098 \uad00\ub828 \uc5c6\ub294 \uacb0\ub860\uc744 \uc81c\uc2dc\ud55c\ub2e4\uba74 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5f0\uad6c\ub294 \uacb0\uad6d \uc778\uc815\ubc1b\uc9c0 \ubabb\ud560 \uac83 \uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub17c\ubb38\uc744 \uc791\uc131\ud560 \ub54c \uac70\uc758 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc5f0\uad6c\uc6d0\ub4e4\uc740 Discussion \ubd80\ubd84\uc744 \uc5ec\ub7ec \ubc88 \uc218\uc815\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uacb0\uad6d, (\uc800\uba85\ud55c \uc800\ub110 Nature\uc758 \uc81c\uc548\uc5d0 \ub530\ub974\uba74) Discussion\uc740 1~2\ubb38\ub2e8\uc73c\ub85c \ub3c5\uc790\ub4e4\uc774 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 Introduction\uc5d0\uc11c \uc81c\uae30\ud55c \uc774\uc288\uc640 \uc5f0\uad6c\uacb0\uacfc\uc5d0 \ud574\uc11d\uc744 \uc774\ud574\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub3c4\ub85d \uc791\uc131\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub610\ud55c, \ud574\ub2f9 \ubd84\uc57c\uc5d0\uc11c \uc5f0\uad6c\ub97c \ub354 \ubc1c\uc804\uc2dc\ud0a4\uae30 \uc704\ud55c \ubc29\ud5a5\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ub3c4\ub2ec\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574\uc11c\ub3c4 \uc81c\uc2dc\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub450 \ubb38\ub2e8\uc73c\ub85c \uc791\uc131\ud558\uae30\uc5d0\ub294 \ub108\ubb34 \ubc84\uac81\uc8e0?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uadf8\ub807\ub2e4\uba74 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ud574\uc57c \ud560\uae4c\uc694? \ud568\uaed8 \uc790\uc138\ud788 \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf4\ub3c4\ub85d \ud569\uc2dc\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2>Discussion\uc5d0 \ud3ec\ud568\ud574\uc57c \ud558\ub294 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc740?<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc704\uc5d0\uc11c \uc5b8\uae09\ud55c \ubc14\uc640 \uac19\uc774,&nbsp;<strong>Discussion\uc758 \ubaa9\uc801\uc740 \uc5f0\uad6c \uacb0\uacfc\ub97c \ud65c\uc6a9\ud558\uc5ec Introduction\uc5d0\uc11c \uc81c\uc2dc\ud55c \uc8fc\uc81c\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc124\uba85\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.&nbsp;<\/strong>Discussion\uc5d0\uc11c\ub294 \ub2e4\uc74c \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc774 \ud3ec\ud568\ub418\uc5b4 \uc788\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ol>\n<li>\ub3c5\uc790\uac00 \uc65c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5f0\uad6c\uc5d0 \uad00\uc2ec\uc744 \uac00\uc838\uc57c \ud558\ub294\uc9c0\ub97c \uc54c\ub824\uc918\uc57c\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.\n<ul>\n<li>\uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5f0\uad6c \uacb0\uacfc\ub97c \ud65c\uc6a9\ud558\uc5ec \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ucc44\uc6b0\uace0\uc790 \ud558\ub294 \uc9c0\uc2dd\uc758 \uacf5\ubc31(knowledge gap)\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc124\uba85\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Introduction\uc5d0&nbsp;\uc774\ubbf8 \ud3ec\ud568\ub41c \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc744 \ubc18\ubcf5\ud574\uc11c \uc11c\uc220\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc544\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub300\uc2e0\uc5d0, \uacfc\ud559\uc801 \uc9c0\uc2dd\uc774 \uac00\uc9c4 \uacf5\ubc31(knowledge gap)\uc744 \uba54\uc6b0\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uc65c \uc774 \ud2b9\uc815 \uc5f0\uad6c\uac00 \ud544\uc694 \ud55c \uac83\uc778\uc9c0, \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc560\ucd08\uc5d0 \uadf8 \uacf5\ubc31\uc744 \uba54\uc6b0\ub294 \uc77c\uc774 \uc65c \uc911\uc694\ud55c\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc911\uc810\uc744 \ub450\uc5b4 \uc124\uba85\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc790\uc2e0\uc758&nbsp;\uc5f0\uad6c\uac00 \ub3c5\uc790\ub4e4\uc758 \uc9c0\uc2dd\uc744 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ubc1c\uc804\uc2dc\ud0ac \uc218 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc124\uba85\ud558\uace0 &nbsp;\ud574\ub2f9 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub97c \ucd94\ud6c4\uc5d0\ub3c4 \uc5f0\uad6c\ud558\ub3c4\ub85d \ub2e4\ub978 \uc5f0\uad6c\uc6d0\ub4e4\uc744 \uace0\ubb34\uc2dc\ucf1c\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc5f0\uad6c\ub97c&nbsp;\ud1b5\ud574 \uc5bb\uc744 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uc9c0\uc2dd\uc774 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc778\uc9c0 \uba85\ud655\ud788 \uc124\uba85\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.\n<ul>\n<li>Introduction\uc5d0\uc11c&nbsp;\uc81c\uc2dc\ud55c \uc5f0\uad6c \uc8fc\uc81c\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc124\uba85\ud558\uace0 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5f0\uad6c \uacb0\uacfc\uac00 \ub17c\ubb38\uc758 \uacb0\ub860\uc744 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ub4b7\ubc1b\uce68\ud558\ub294\uc9c0\ub97c \uc124\uba85\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc5f0\uad6c&nbsp;\uacb0\uacfc\uac00&nbsp;\ud1b5\uacc4\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc720\uc758\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\ub354\ub77c\ub3c4 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc5f0\uad6c \uacb0\uacfc\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uace0\ucc30\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uac00\uc7a5 \uc8fc\ubaa9\ud560&nbsp;\ub9cc\ud55c \uc5f0\uad6c \uacb0\uacfc\uc758 \uc911\uc694\uc131\uc5d0 \uc911\uc810\uc744 \ub450\uace0 Discussion\uc744 \uc791\uc131\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc790\uc2e0\uc758&nbsp;\uc5f0\uad6c \uacb0\uacfc\uc640 \uc0c1\ucda9\ud558\ub294 \uacb0\ub860\uc774 \ub3c4\ucd9c\ub41c \uacbd\uc6b0\uc5d0\ub294, \uc0c1\uae30 \uacb0\ub860\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc124\uba85\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Results\uc5d0\uc11c&nbsp;\ud3ec\ud568\ud55c \uac83\uc744 \ubc18\ubcf5\ud558\uc5ec \uc124\uba85\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub300\uc2e0\uc5d0, \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5f0\uad6c \uac00\uc124\uc744 \ub2f5\ubcc0\ud558\uba74\uc11c \ud574\ub2f9 \uc5f0\uad6c\uacb0\uacfc\ub97c \ub17c\uc758\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \u201c[The first result] was this\u2026\u201d\ub77c\uace0 \uae30\uc7ac\ud558\ub294 \ub300\uc2e0 \u201c[The first result] suggests [conclusion]\u201d \ub77c\uace0 \uc791\uc131\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc790\uc2e0\uc774&nbsp;\ub0b4\ub9b0 \uacb0\ub860\uc774 \uae30\uc874 \ubb38\ud5cc\uc758 \uacb0\uacfc\uc640 \ubd80\ud569\ud558\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc124\uba85\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.\n<ul>\n<li>\uc790\uc2e0\uc758&nbsp;\uc5f0\uad6c \uacb0\uacfc\uac00 \ud604\uc7ac \uc54c\ub824\uc9c4 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uacfc \uc608\uc0c1 \uacb0\uacfc\uc640 \ubd80\ud569\ud558\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uace0\ucc30\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc790\uc2e0\uc758&nbsp;\uc5f0\uad6c \uacb0\uacfc\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc8fc\uc7a5\uc758 \uac15\uc810\uc744 \uc124\uba85\ud558\uace0 \uc0c1\ubc18\ub41c \uc758\uacac\uc758 \ucde8\uc57d\uc810\uc744 \uac15\uc870\ud558\uc5ec \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ub0b4\ub9b0 \uacb0\ub860\uc744 \ub3c5\uc790\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c \uc124\ub4dd\uc2dc\ud0ac \uc218 \uc788\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc608\uc0c1\ud558\uc9c0&nbsp;\ubabb\ud55c \uc5f0\uad6c \uacb0\uacfc\ub97c \uc5bb\uc5c8\ub2e4\uba74, \uadf8 \uc774\uc720\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc124\uba85\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub9cc\uc57d \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uacb0\ub860\uc774 \ud604\uc7ac \ubb38\ud5cc\uc758 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uacfc \ubd80\ud569\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\ub294\ub2e4\uba74, \uc774\ub97c \uc124\uba85\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc790\uc2e0\uc758&nbsp;\uc5f0\uad6c\uc758 \ud55c\uacc4\uc810\uc744 \uc81c\uc2dc\ud558\uace0, \uadf8 \ud55c\uacc4\uc810\uc774 \uc5f0\uad6c\uacb0\uacfc\ub97c \ud574\uc11d\ud558\uace0 \uc785\uc99d\ud558\ub294\ub370 \uc788\uc5b4 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc5f0\uad00\ub418\uc5b4 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0\ub97c \uc124\uba85\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.\n<ul>\n<li>\uc790\uc2e0\uc774&nbsp;\ub0b4\ub9b0 \uacb0\ub860\uc5d0 \ub4dc\ub7ec\ub09c \ucde8\uc57d\uc810\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc778\uc815\ud558\uace0 \uc774\ub97c \ubcf4\uc644\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud55c \ud6c4\uc18d \uc5f0\uad6c\uc758 \ubc29\ud5a5\uc131\uc744 \uc81c\uc548\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc790\uc2e0\uc758&nbsp;\uae30\uc874 \uc5f0\uad6c\uc5d0\uc11c \uc218\ud589\ub418\uc5c8\uc5b4\uc57c \ud560 \uc5f0\uad6c\ub97c \ud6c4\uc18d \uc5f0\uad6c\uc758 \ubc29\ud5a5\uc131\uc73c\ub85c\uc11c \uc81c\uc548\ud558\uba74 \uc548\ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\ub294 \uc624\ud788\ub824 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5f0\uad6c \ub514\uc790\uc778\uacfc \ud504\ub85c\ud1a0\ucf5c\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \ub3c5\uc790\ub4e4\uc758 \uc758\uad6c\uc2ec\uc744 \ud0a4\uc6b8 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\ube44\ud310\uc801\uc774\uba74\uc11c\ub3c4&nbsp;\uc790\uc2e0\uac10 \uc788\ub294 \ub17c\uc870\ub97c \uc720\uc9c0\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ucca0\ub450\ucca0\ubbf8\ud558\uac8c \uc5f0\uad6c \uacb0\uacfc\ub97c \uac80\ud1a0\ud558\uace0 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5f0\uad6c \uacb0\uacfc\uac00 \ub3c5\uc790\ub4e4\uc758 \uc9c0\uc2dd \uae30\ubc18\uc744 \ud655\uc7a5\uc2dc\ud0ac \uc218 \uc788\ub2e4\ub294 \uc778\uc2dd\uc744 \uc2ec\uc5b4\uc918\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\ud6c4\uc18d&nbsp;\uc5f0\uad6c \ub2e8\uacc4\ub97c \uc81c\uc548\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.\n<ul>\n<li>\uc790\uc2e0\uc774&nbsp;\uacf5\uc720\ud55c \uc9c0\uc2dd\uc744 \uae30\ubc18\uc73c\ub85c \ub2e4\ub978 \uc5f0\uad6c\uc6d0\ub4e4\uc774 \ud6c4\uc18d \uc5f0\uad6c\ub97c \uc218\ud589\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub3c4\ub85d \uc81c\uc548 \uc0ac\ud56d\uc744 Discussion\uc5d0 \ud3ec\ud568\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc&nbsp;\uc81c\uc548\uc0ac\ud56d\uc740 \uac04\uacb0\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4 (2\uac1c \uc774\ud558).<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<h2>Discussion \uc791\uc131 \ubc29\ubc95\uc740?<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub2e4\uc74c\uc740 \ub17c\ubb38\uc758 Discussion \uc791\uc131 \uc2dc \uc720\uc6a9\ud55c \ud301\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc815\ubcf4\ub97c \uc18c\uac1c\ud574 \ub4dc\ub9b4 \ucc28\ub840\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3>\uae30\uc220\uc801 \uc694\uc18c(Technical writing elements)<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ol>\n<li>\uc218\ub3d9\ud0dc(passive voice) \uc0ac\uc6a9 \uc2dc \ud45c\ud604\uc774 \uc5b4\uc0c9\ud574\uc9c0\uac70\ub098 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc774 \uae38\uc5b4\uc9c8 \uc218 \uc788\uc73c\ub2c8 (wordiness) \ub2a5\ub3d9\ud0dc(active voice)\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Introduction\uacfc&nbsp;\ub3d9\uc77c\ud558\uac8c \ud604\uc7ac \uc2dc\uc81c\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub3c4\ub85d \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\ud544\uc694\uc5d0&nbsp;\ub530\ub77c \uc77c\uc778\uce6d \ub300\uba85\uc0ac\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uc5f0\uad6c \uacb0\uacfc\uc5d0 \uc911\uc810\uc744 \ub450\uae38 \uc6d0\ud558\ub294 \uacbd\uc6b0 \uc774\ub97c \ubc30\uc81c\ud558\ub3c4\ub85d \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uac1d\uad00\uc801\uc774\uace0&nbsp;\ubd84\uc11d\uc801\uc778 \ub17c\uc870\ub97c \uc720\uc9c0\ud558\ub3c4\ub85d \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<h3>\uad6c\uc131(Organization)<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<ol>\n<li>Results, Methods \ubc0f Discussion&nbsp;\uc139\uc158\uacfc \uc77c\uad00\uc131\uc744 \uc720\uc9c0\ud574\uc57c\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.\n<ul>\n<li>\ub17c\ubb38\uc758&nbsp;\ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc139\uc158\uc5d0\uc11c \uc720\uc0ac\ud55c \ubb38\uc7a5 \uad6c\uc870\ub97c \uc720\uc9c0\ud568\uc73c\ub85c\uc368 \ub3c5\uc790\ub4e4\uc758 \uc774\ud574\ub825\uc744 \ud5a5\uc0c1\uc2dc\ud0ac \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc800\ub110 \ub17c\ubb38 \uc804\uccb4\uc5d0\uc11c \ub3d9\uc77c\ud55c \ubc29\uc2dd\uc73c\ub85c \uc815\ubcf4\ub97c \uae30\uc220\ud55c\ub2e4\uba74, \ub3c5\uc790\ub4e4\uc740 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5f0\uad6c\uacb0\uacfc\ub97c \ub354 \ube68\ub9ac \uc774\ud574\ud558\uace0 \uadf8 \uacb0\uacfc\ub97c \uc5bb\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ub418\ub294 \uc2e4\ud5d8 \ubc29\ubc95\uc744 \ub354\uc6b1 \uba85\ud655\ud558\uac8c \ud30c\uc545\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\ub3c5\uc790\ub4e4\uc774&nbsp;Results \uc758 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc5d0 \uae30\ucd08\ud558\uc5ec \ub17c\ubb38 \ub0b4 \uc8fc\uc694\ud55c \uc815\ubcf4\uc758 \ud750\ub984\uc744 \ud30c\uc545\ud558\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 Discussion \ubd80\ubd84\uc5d0\uc11c \uc774\uc640 \uc720\uc0ac\ud55c \ubb38\uc7a5 \uad6c\uc870\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \ub3c5\uc790\ub4e4\uc758 \uc774\ud574\ub825\uc744 \ub192\uc774\uace0, \uc911\ubcf5\ub418\ub294 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc744 \ud3ec\ud568\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc544\ub3c4 \ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4. Discussion \uc139\uc158\uc5d0\ub294 \ub450 \uc11c\ub108 \uac1c\uc758 \ubb38\ub2e8\ub9cc\uc774 \ud544\uc694\ud558\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0, wordiness\ub97c \uc904\uc774\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \ub9e4\uc6b0 \uc911\uc694\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>Discussion\uc758&nbsp;\uac01\uac01\uc758 \uc138\ubd80 \ud56d\ubaa9\uc5d0\uc11c\ub294 (A) \uacb0\ub860, (B) \uad00\ub828 \uacb0\uacfc \ubc0f \ud574\ub2f9 \uacb0\ub860\uacfc\uc758 \uad00\ub828\uc131, \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \ub9c8\uc9c0\ub9c9\uc73c\ub85c (C) \uad00\ub828 \ubb38\ud5cc \uc21c\uc11c\ub85c \uc11c\uc220\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.\n<ul>\n<li>\uc5f0\uad6c \uc8fc\uc81c\uc758\u00a0\ud070 \uadf8\ub9bc\uc744 \uc124\uba85\ud558\uba74\uc11c Discussion\uc744 \uac04\uacb0\ud558\uac8c \uc694\uc57d\ud558\uc5ec \ub9c8\ubb34\ub9ac \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. Discussion\uc758 \uccab \ubd80\ubd84\uc5d0\uc11c, \uc6b0\ub9ac\uc758 \uacfc\ud559\uc801 \uc9c0\uc2dd\uc774 \uac00\uc9c4 \uacf5\ubc31(knowledge gap)\uc744 \uba54\uc6b0\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \u201c\uc65c \uc774 \ud2b9\uc815 \uc5f0\uad6c\uac00 \ud544\uc694\ud55c \uac83\uc778\uc9c0, \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uadf8 \uacf5\ubc31\uc744 \uba54\uc6b0\ub294 \uc77c\uc774 \uc65c \uc911\uc694\ud55c\uc9c0\u201d\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uae30\uc220\ud558\uc600\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\uc81c, \u201c\uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5f0\uad6c\uac00 \ud574\ub2f9 \uacf5\ubc31\uc744 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uba54\uc6b8 \uc218 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0\u201d\u201d\ub85c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ub17c\ubb38\uc744 \ub9c8\ubb34\ub9ac\ud560 \ucc28\ub840\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<p>Discussion \uc139\uc158\uc744 \uc791\uc131\ud558\uc2e0 \ud6c4\uc5d0\ub294 <a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.ai\/ko\/tools\/paraphrasing\">AI \ud328\ub7ec\ud504\ub808\uc774\uc9d5 \ub3c4\uad6c<\/a>\ub97c \ud65c\uc6a9\ud558\uc5ec \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \ubcf4\ub2e4 \uba85\ud655\ud558\uace0 \uac04\uacb0\ud558\uac8c \ub2e4\ub4ec\uc5b4 \ubcf4\uc2dc\uae30 \ubc14\ub78d\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub610\ud55c, <a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.ai\/ko\/proofreading\">\uc601\uc5b4 \ubb38\ubc95 \uac80\uc0ac\uae30<\/a>\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uc5ec \ubb38\ubc95\uc801 \uc624\ub958\ub97c \uc810\uac80\ud558\uba74 \uae00\uc758 \uc815\ud655\uc131\uc744 \ub192\uc774\ub294 \ub370 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub17c\ubb38 \uc791\uc131 \uc2dc, \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0\uac00 \uc81c\uacf5\ud55c \uac00\uc774\ub4dc\ub77c\uc778\uc774 \ud6a8\uacfc\uc801\uc778 Discussion\uc744 \uc791\uc131\ud558\ub294\ub370 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub418\uae38 \ubc14\ub78d\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.com\/research-writing-tips-editing-manuscript-discussion\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">English<\/a>,&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.cn\/research-writing-tips-editing-manuscript-discussion\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u7b80\u4f53\u4e2d\u6587<\/a>, &nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.com.tw\/research-writing-tips-editing-manuscript-discussion\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\u7e41\u9ad4\u4e2d\u6587<\/a>,&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.com.tr\/arastirma-yazim-guclu-bir-tartisma-discussion-bolumu-nasil-hazirlanir\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">T\u00fcrk\u00e7e<\/a>&nbsp;\ubc84\uc83c\ub3c4 \uc774\uc6a9 \uac00\ub2a5\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u25b6&nbsp;\uae00 \uc791\uc131 \ud6c4&nbsp;<strong>\uc804\ubb38\uac00\uc758 \uac80\ud1a0<\/strong>\uac00 \ud544\uc694\ud558\uc2dc\ub2e4\uba74, \uc5b8\uc81c\ub4e0\uc9c0 \uc800\ud76c&nbsp;<a href=\"\/ko?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc601\ubb38\uad50\uc815<\/a>&nbsp;\uc11c\ube44\uc2a4\ub97c \uc774\uc6a9\ud574\ubcf4\uc138\uc694!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><a 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