{"id":2536,"date":"2023-02-09T14:56:27","date_gmt":"2023-02-09T05:56:27","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.essayreview.co.kr\/?p=2536"},"modified":"2025-04-07T15:34:06","modified_gmt":"2025-04-07T06:34:06","slug":"what-colleges-look-for-in-essays","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/what-colleges-look-for-in-essays\/","title":{"rendered":"\ubbf8\uad6d \ub300\ud559\uc774 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ud1b5\ud574 \uc54c\uace0 \uc2f6\uc5b4 \ud558\ub294 \uac83\ub4e4"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image size-full\"><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" width=\"955\" height=\"632\" src=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/02\/09135732\/%EC%BA%A1%EC%B2%98.jpg\" alt=\"\ubbf8\uad6d \ub300\ud559 \uacbd\uad00\uacfc \ud48d\uacbd\" class=\"wp-image-2617\" srcset=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/02\/09135732\/%EC%BA%A1%EC%B2%98.jpg 955w, https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/02\/09135732\/%EC%BA%A1%EC%B2%98-300x199.jpg 300w, https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/02\/09135732\/%EC%BA%A1%EC%B2%98-768x508.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 955px) 100vw, 955px\" \/><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<h2><strong>\ubbf8\uad6d \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559\uc744 \uc704\ud55c \u201c\ub300\ud559 <\/strong>\uc9c0\uc6d0<strong> \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 (college essay)\u201d\ub780 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc778\uac00?<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 <a href=\"\/ko\/services\/translation\/essay\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc5d0\uc138\uc774<\/a>\ub294 \ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uacfc\uc815\uc758 \ud544\uc218 \ub2e8\uacc4\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc774 \uc131\uc801\uacfc \uc810\uc218\uac00 \uc544\ub2cc&nbsp; \ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\ub97c&nbsp; \ud1b5\ud574 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc7a5\uc810\uc744 \ub4dc\ub7ec\ub0bc \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uae30\ud68c\ub97c \uc81c\uacf5\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub807\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uacfc\uc815\uc5d0\uc11c \uac00\uc7a5 \uc2e0\uacbd\uc774 \uc4f0\uc774\ub294 \ubd80\ubd84 \uc911 \ud558\ub098\uc77c \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc774 \uae30\uc0ac\ub97c \uc77d\uace0 \uc788\ub2e4\ub294 \uc0ac\uc2e4 \ub9cc\uc73c\ub85c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc740 \ub300\ud559\uc5d0 \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud558\ub294 \uc0ac\uc2e4\uacfc \uadf8 \uacfc\uc815\uc744 \uc9c4\uc9c0\ud558\uac8c \ubc1b\uc544\ub4e4\uc774\uace0 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \ub2e4\ub2c8\ub294 \ub300\ud559\uc758 \uc218\uc900\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc804 \uc0dd\uc560\uc5d0 \ud070 \uc601\ud5a5\uc744 \ubbf8\uce60 \uc218 \uc788\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0, \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\ub97c \uac00\ub2a5\ud55c \ud55c \ucd5c\uace0\ub85c \ub9cc\ub4dc\ub294 \ub370 \uba87 \uc2dc\uac04\uc744 \ud22c\uc790\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uac00\uc7a5 \uc218\uc775\uc131 \uc788\ub294 \uc2dc\uac04 \ud22c\uc790\uc77c \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2><strong>\ub300\ud559\uc740 \ub300\ud559 <\/strong>\uc9c0\uc6d0<strong> \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ud1b5\ud574 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uc758 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uba74\ubaa8\ub97c \uc54c\uace0 \uc2f6\uc5b4 \ud560\uae4c?<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\uadf8\ub807\ub2e4\uba74 \ub300\ud559\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \ub3c4\ub300\uccb4 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \ubcfc\uae4c\uc694? \ub300\ub2f5\uc740 \ub300\ud559\uc774 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uc5d0\uac8c\uc11c \ucc3e\uace0 \uc2f6\uc740 \uac83\uacfc \uc720\uc0ac\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uadf8\ub4e4\uc774 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ud1b5\ud574 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \ucc3e\uace0 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0 \uc81c\ub300\ub85c \ud30c\uc545\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud574\uc11c\ub294 \uc9c0\uc2dd\uc778\uc73c\ub85c\uc11c\uc758 \uc5ed\ud560, \ud6cc\ub96d\ud55c \uc9c1\uc5c5 \uc724\ub9ac \ubc0f \ud559\uad50\ub97c \ub300\ud45c\ud560 \ub9cc\ud55c \uc131\uaca9 \ub4f1\uc744 \uc911\uc2dc\ud558\ub294 \ub300\ud559\uc758 \uace0\uc720\ud55c \uad00\uc810\uacfc \uc774\ub97c \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\ub294 \ub300\ud559\uc758 \uc0ac\uba85 \ub4f1\uc744 \uace0\ub824\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub530\ub77c\uc11c \ubaa8\ub4e0 \ub300\ud559\uc758 \uc785\ud559 \ub2f4\ub2f9\uc790\uac00 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \ucc3e\uace0\uc790 \ud558\ub294 \ud575\uc2ec\uc801\uc778 \uce21\uba74\uc740 \ub2e4\uc74c\uacfc \uac19\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li><strong>\uc9c0\uc131<\/strong><strong><\/strong><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\ud6cc\ub96d\ud55c<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\ucee4\ubba4\ub2c8\ucf00\uc774\uc158<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\ub2a5\ub825<\/strong><strong><\/strong><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\ud3ec\ubd80\uc640<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\ubaa9\ud45c<\/strong><strong><\/strong><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\ucc3d\uc758\uc131<\/strong><strong><\/strong><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\uc9c4\ucde8\uc131\uacfc<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uc790\uae30\uc8fc\ub3c4\uc131<\/strong><strong><\/strong><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\uad50\uc721\uc5d0<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\ub300\ud55c<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uad00\uc2ec\uacfc<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uc790\uae30\uacc4\ubc1c<\/strong><strong><\/strong><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub300\ud559\uc774 \ud559\uc0dd\uc758 \ucd94\uc0c1\uc801\uc774\uba74\uc11c \ub3c4\ub355\uc801\uc778 \uc131\ud488\ub9cc\uc744 \uace0\ub824\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \uc544\ub2d9\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub300\ud559\uc740 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ud559\uad50\ub97c \ub354 \uac15\ud558\uac8c \ub9cc\ub4e4 \ud559\uc0dd\uc744 \uc6d0\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc131\uc801\uc740 \uc774\ub7ec\ud55c \ud575\uc2ec \uce21\uba74\uacfc \ub2a5\ub825 \uc911 \uc77c\ubd80\ub9cc\uc744 \ubc18\uc601\ud558\ubbc0\ub85c \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \uc774\uc5d0 \uad00\ub828\ub41c \ud2b9\uc131\ub4e4\uc758 \uc99d\uac70\ub97c \ucc3e\uc744 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc774\ub7ec\ud55c \uace0\ub824 \uc0ac\ud56d \uc678\uc5d0\ub3c4 \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00(\uc2e4\uc81c \uc778\uac04)\uc774 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc77d\uace0 \uc774\uc131\uc801\uc73c\ub85c\ub098 \uac10\uc815\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc751\ub2f5\ud560 \uac83\uc784\uc744 \uae30\uc5b5\ud558\uc138\uc694. \ub9ce\uc740 \uacbd\uc6b0\uc5d0 \uadf8 \uac10\uc815\uc740 \uc9c0\ub8e8\ud568\uc774 \ub420 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774 \ubd84\ub4e4\uc740 \uac01 \uc785\ud559 \uc2dc\uc98c\uc5d0 \uc218\ubc31 \uac1c\uc758 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc77d\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub7ec\ub098 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uac00 \uc131\uacf5\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uadf8\ub4e4\uc758 \ub9c8\uc74c\uc744 \uc0ac\ub85c\uc7a1\ub294\ub2e4\uba74, &#8220;\uc6b0\ub9ac\ub294 \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc758 \ud569\uaca9\uc744 \uc54c\ub9ac\uac8c \ub418\uc5b4 \uae30\uc069\ub2c8\ub2e4.&#8221;\ub85c \uc2dc\uc791\ud558\ub294 \ud3b8\uc9c0\ub97c \ubc1b\uac8c \ub420 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2><strong>\ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc744 \ud3ec\ud568\ud574\uc57c \ud560\uae4c?<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub300\ud559\uc5d0\uc11c \uc6d0\ud558\ub294 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc758 \uc131\uacfc\ub294 \ub300\ud559 \uc6d0\uc11c \ub0b4 \ucda9\ubd84\ud788 \ubc18\uc601\ub418\ubbc0\ub85c \uc544\ub798\uc758 \ubaa9\ub85d\uc5d0\uc11c\ub294 \uc81c\uc678\ub418\uc5c8\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\ub294 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc5f4\uc815\uacfc \ucd94\uc9c4\ub825\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\ub294 \uc131\uacfc\uc640 \ub0b4\ubd80 \ubc0f \uc678\ubd80 \ub3d9\uae30\ub97c \ud3ec\ud568\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3><strong>\uc27d\uc9c0<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uc54a\uc558\ub358<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uad50\uc678<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\ud65c\ub3d9<\/strong><strong><\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub300\ud559\uc740 \uad50\uc2e4 \uc548\uc5d0\uc11c \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\ub294 \uc5ed\ub7c9\uc744 \ub6f0\uc5b4\ub118\ub294 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc744 \ubcf4\uace0 \uc2f6\uc5b4\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc120\ud0dd\ud55c \ud65c\ub3d9\ub4e4\uc758 \uc885\ub958\ub294 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc131\uaca9 \ubc0f \ub3c4\ub355\uc131\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \ub9ce\uc740 \uac83\uc744 \ub9d0\ud574\uc90d\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ubcf8\uc778\uc774 \uc120\ud0dd\ud55c \ud65c\ub3d9\ub4e4\uc744 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc798 \ud574\ub0b4\uc5c8\ub294\uc9c0 \uc5ec\ubd80\ub294 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc55e\uc73c\ub85c \uc7a5\uae30\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc911\uc694\ud55c \ud504\ub85c\uc81d\ud2b8\uc5d0 \uc804\ub150\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ub2a5\ub825\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc90d\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3><strong>\ubd09\uc0ac\ud65c\ub3d9\uc774\ub098<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\ucde8\uc5c5<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uacbd\ud5d8<\/strong><strong><\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc9c4\uc815\ud55c \ud5cc\uc2e0, \ub9ac\ub354\uc2ed \uc790\uc9c8 \ubc0f \uc9c0\uc5ed \uc0ac\ud68c\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uad00\uc2ec\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\ub294 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc740 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc2dc \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \ucc38\uc5ec\ud55c \uc870\uc9c1 \ub610\ub294 \ud68c\uc0ac\uc640 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc5ed\ud560\uacfc \ucc45\uc784\uc744 \uc9c0\uc5c8\ub294\uc9c0 \ud3ec\ud568\ud558\uc138\uc694. \uc778\uc815\uc774\ub098 \ud2b9\ubcc4 \ud45c\ucc3d\uc744 \ubc1b\uc740 \uacbd\uc6b0\uc5d0\ub3c4 \ubc18\ub4dc\uc2dc \uc5b8\uae09\ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3><strong>\uc18c\uc9c8\uc774\ub098<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uc5f4\uc815<\/strong><strong><\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub354 \ub9ce\uc740 \ub300\ud559\uc774 \uac00\uc7a5 \ub9ce\uc740 \ud65c\ub3d9\uc744 \ud55c \ud559\uc0dd\uc744 \ucc3e\ub294 \uac83\uc5d0\uc11c \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc5f4\uc815\uc744 \uac16\uace0 \uc788\ub294 \ud2b9\uc815 \ubd84\uc57c\uc5d0 \uc5d0\ub108\uc9c0\ub97c \uc9d1\uc911\ud558\ub294 \ud559\uc0dd\uc744 \ucc3e\ub294 \ucabd\uc73c\ub85c \ubcc0\ubaa8\ud558\uace0 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud559\uad50\ub294 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc774 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc744 \ud2b9\ubcc4\ud558\uac8c \ub9cc\ub4e4\uace0, \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uad00\uc2ec \uc788\ub294 \ubd84\uc57c\uc5d0\uc11c \uc5bc\ub9c8\ub098 \uc5f4\uc2ec\ud788 \uc9d1\uc911\ud574\uc11c \ud574 \ub0bc \uc758\ud5a5\uc774 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0 \uc54c\uace0 \uc2f6\uc5b4\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3><strong>\ud559\uc0dd\uc774<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uadf9\ubcf5\ud588\ub358<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uace0\ub09c\uc774\ub098<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uc5ed\uacbd<\/strong><strong><\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud6cc\ub96d\ud55c \ub300\ud559\uc0dd\uc758 \uac00\uc7a5 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uc790\uc9c8 \uc911 \ud558\ub098\ub294 \uc131\uacf5\uc744 \ub2ec\uc131\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uc2e4\uc218\ub85c\ubd80\ud130 \ubc30\uc6b0\uace0 \ub3c4\uc804\uc744 \uadf9\ubcf5\ud558\ub294 \ub2a5\ub825\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. <a href=\"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.com\/writing-common-app-essay-prompts\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ud504\ub86c\ud504\ud2b8<\/a>\uc758 \uacbd\uc6b0 \ud2b9\ud788 \uadf8\ub7f0 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc744 \ubb3b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c\ub294 \uc815\ud655\ud788 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc5b4\ub824\uc6c0\uc774\ub098 \ub3c4\uc804\uc5d0 \uc9c1\uba74\ud588\uc5c8\ub294\uc9c0, \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uadf9\ubcf5\ud588\ub294\uc9c0, \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc774 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc744 \ud1b5\ud574 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \ubc30\uc6e0\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ucd08\uc810\uc744 \ub9de\ucd94\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uacb0\uad6d, \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\ub4e4\uc740 \ubcf8\uc778\uc758 \uc9c0\uc704\uc640 \uc9c0\ub2a5\uc73c\ub85c \ub355\uc744 \ubcf8 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c\ubcf4\ub2e4 \ubd88\ub9ac\ud55c \uc0c1\ud669\uc5d0\uc11c\ub3c4 \uc5ec\uc804\ud788 \uc131\uacf5\uc744 \uac70\ub454 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c \ub354 \ud070 \uac10\uba85\uc744 \ubc1b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2><strong>\uc798 \uc4f4 \ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub780 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc77c\uae4c?<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc798 \uc4f4 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c \uc2e0\uc120\ud55c \ubcc0\ud654\uc758 \uc2dc\uac01\uc744 \uc904 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc740 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uac00 \ub2e4\uc74c \uae30\uc900\uc744 \uba85\ud655\ud558\uac8c \ucda9\uc871\ud558\ub294\uc9c0 \ud655\uc778\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uac00 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc9c8\ubb38\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc9c1\uc811\uc801\uc778 \ub2f5\ubcc0\uc744 \uc81c\uacf5\ud569\ub2c8\uae4c?<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\ub3c5\uc790\uc758 \uad00\uc2ec\uc744 \ub044\ub294 \uac15\ub825\ud55c \uc11c\ub860\uc774 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\uae4c?<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc804\uccb4\ub97c \uad00\ud1b5\ud558\ub294 \ud3ec\uad04\uc801\uc778 \uc8fc\uc7a5\uc774\ub098 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\uac00 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\uae4c? \uc911\uc2ec \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc774 \uc788\uace0 \uadf8\uac83\uc744 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc804\ubc18\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uace0\uc218\ud569\ub2c8\uae4c?<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\ud559\uc0dd\uc5d0\uac8c \ud639\uc740 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub97c \ud45c\ud604\ud558\uae30\uc5d0 \ud3b8\uc548\ud558\uace0 \uc801\ud569\ud55c \uc790\uc5f0\uc2a4\ub7ec\uc6b4 \uc2a4\ud0c0\uc77c\ub85c \uc4f0\uc600\uc2b5\ub2c8\uae4c?<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\ud559\uc0dd\uc774 \ud6a8\uacfc\uc801\uc778 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc120\ud0dd, \uad6c\ubb38 \ubc0f \uad6c\uc870\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud588\uc2b5\ub2c8\uae4c?<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc62c\ubc14\ub978 \ubb38\ubc95, \uad6c\ub450\uc810 \ubc0f \ucca0\uc790\uac00 \ud3ec\ud568\ub418\uc5b4 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\uae4c?<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uac04\uacb0\ud569\ub2c8\uae4c? \ud559\uc0dd\uc774 \uad8c\uc7a5\ud558\ub294 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \uae38\uc774\ub97c \uc9c0\ucf30\uc2b5\ub2c8\uae4c?<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h2><strong>\ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0 \ubcf8\uc778\uc758 \uae0d\uc815\uc801\uc778 \uc131\uaca9\uc774\ub098 \uc790\uc9c8\uc774 \uc798 \ub4dc\ub7ec\ub098\uac8c \uc4f0\ub294 \ubc95<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc6b0\uc120 \uae30\ubcf8\uc801\uc778 \ubc95\uce59\uc740 \ud56d\uc0c1 &#8220;\uc124\uba85\ud558\uc9c0 \ub9d0\uace0 \ubb18\uc0ac\ud558\ub77c.&#8221; \uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud560 \ub54c \uc77c\ubc18\ud654\ub41c \uc815\ubcf4\ub294 \uac74\ub108\ub6f0\uc138\uc694. \ub300\uc2e0 \uc9c4\uc220\uc744 \ub4b7\ubc1b\uce68\ud558\ub294 \uc2e4\uc81c\uc801\uc774\uace0 \uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc778 \uc608\uc2dc\ub97c \uc81c\uacf5\ud558\uc138\uc694. \uc138\ubd80 \uc0ac\ud56d\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uad00\uc2ec\uc740 \uc218\ubc31, \uc544\ub2c8 \uc218\ucc9c \uac1c\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc77d\uc5b4\uc57c \ud558\ub294 \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc5d0\uac8c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc744 \ub354 \uae30\uc5b5\uc5d0 \ub0a8\ub3c4\ub85d \ub9cc\ub4dc\ub294 \ub370 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub420 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4, &#8220;\ub098\ub294 \ud558\uc774\ud0b9\uc744 \uc88b\uc544\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.&#8221; \ub300\uc2e0 &#8220;\ud0ac\ub9ac\ub9cc\uc790\ub85c \uc0b0 \uc815\uc0c1\uc5d0 \ub3c4\ub2ec\ud55c \ud6c4 \ub2e4\uc74c \ubaa8\ud5d8\uc740 \uc5d0\ubca0\ub808\uc2a4\ud2b8 \uc0b0\uc744 \uc624\ub974\uae30\ub85c \uacb0\uc815\ud588\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.&#8221;\ub77c\uace0 \ub9d0\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p> \uc774 \ub450 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc758 \ucc28\uc774\uc810\uc740 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc778\uac00\uc694? \uccab \ubc88\uc9f8 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \ubb34\uc5b8\uac00\ub97c \uc88b\uc544\ud55c\ub2e4\uace0 \uc124\uba85\ud558\ub294 \ubc18\uba74, \ub450 \ubc88\uc9f8 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc88b\uc544\ud55c\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc90d\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ubfd0\ub9cc \uc544\ub2c8\ub77c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \ud5cc\uc2e0\uacfc \ub3c4\uc804\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc5f4\ub9dd\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc90d\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub450 \uac1c\uc758 \uc608\ubb38 \uc911 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc774 \uc5b8\uc5b4\ub97c \ub354 \uadf9\ub300\ud654\ud558\uc5ec \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud588\uace0, \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc5d0\uac8c \ub354 \ud765\ubbf8\ub85c\uc6b8\uae4c\uc694?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3><strong>\ub098\uc05c<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uc608\uc2dc<\/strong><strong>: <\/strong><strong>\uc99d\uac70<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uc5c6\ub294<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uc8fc\uc7a5\uc744<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4<\/strong><strong>.<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>My teacher once told me that I was the most skilled and intelligent student she\u2019s ever taught, and I believed her. When I set a goal, there\u2019s no stopping me. I\u2019ll work at it until it\u2019s achieved\u2014even if it\u2019s to my own detriment.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3><strong>\uc88b\uc740<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uc608\uc2dc<\/strong><strong>: <\/strong><strong>\ud655\uc2e4\ud55c<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uadfc\uac70\ub97c<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\ubcf4\uc5ec<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uc90d\ub2c8\ub2e4<\/strong><strong>.<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>In sophomore year, I decided to set a goal to raise more money for Relay for Life than any other student involved. I asked my neighbors, family, teachers, and even my paster, who sat through my 20-minute prepared speech about why donating to this campaign would be the best use of his money. I spoke to community groups. I did three straight weekends of door-to-door fundraising. And in the end, my efforts paid off\u2014I succeeded in raising over $500 more than any other student.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3><strong>\uc9c4\ucde8\uc131\uacfc<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uc57c\ub9dd\uc744<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\uc138\uc694<\/strong><strong>.<\/strong><strong><\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc9c4\ucde8\uc131\uacfc \uc57c\ub9dd\uc740 \ub300\ud559\uc774 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uc5d0\uac8c\uc11c \uac00\uc7a5 \ucc3e\uace0\uc790 \ud558\ub294 \uc790\uc9c8\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\ub7ec\ud55c \ud2b9\uc131\uc744 \ubcf4\uc774\ub294 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc740 \ub300\ud559\uc5d0\uc11c \uae0d\uc815\uc801\uc774\uace0 \uc758\uc695\uc801\uc778 \ud0dc\ub3c4\ub97c \uac16\uac8c \ub420 \uac83\uc774\uba70, \uc774\ub294 \uadf8\ub4e4\uc774 \ucea0\ud37c\uc2a4\uc5d0 \uae30\uc5ec\ud558\uace0 \ud559\uc5c5\uc5d0 \uc131\uacf5\ud558\ub294 \ub370 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub418\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc0b4\uc544\uc654\ub294\uc9c0 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc218\ub3d9\uc801\uc778 \uac1c\uc778\uc73c\ub85c\uc11c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc5d0\uac8c \uc77c\uc5b4\ub09c \uc77c\ub9cc \ud3ec\ud568\ud574\uc11c\ub294 \uc548 \ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4, \ud615\uc774 \uc544\ud320\uc744 \ub54c \uac10\uc815\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc5bc\ub9c8\ub098 \ud798\ub4e4\uc5c8\ub294\uc9c0 \ub2e8\uc21c\ud788 \uc801\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc138\uc694. \ub300\uc2e0 \ubcf8\uc778\uc774 \uc774\ub97c \uadf9\ubcf5\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uac1c\ubc1c\ud55c \uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc778 \ub300\ucc98 \ubc29\ubc95\uc774\ub098 \uac00\uc871\uc744 \ub3d5\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uac00\uc815\uc5d0 \uae30\uc5ec\ud55c \ubc29\ubc95\uc744 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3><strong>\uc790\uae30\ubc18\uc131\uacfc<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uc131\uc7a5\uc744<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\uc138\uc694<\/strong><strong>.<\/strong><strong><\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \uc131\uc7a5\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \uac00\uc7a5 \uc778\uae30\uc788\ub294 \uc8fc\uc81c\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc65c\ub0d0\ud558\uba74, \uc774\ub97c \ud1b5\ud574 \ub300\ud559\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc131\uaca9\uacfc \ud488\uc131\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \ub354 \ub098\uc740 \ud1b5\ucc30\ub825\uc744 \uc5bb\uc744 \uc218 \uc788\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc77c\ubd80 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0\uc11c\ub294 &#8220;\uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc9c1\uba74\ud55c \uac00\uc7a5 \ub3c4\uc804\uc801\uc778 \uc0ac\uac74\uc740 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc774\uc5c8\uace0, \uadf8\uac83\uc744 \ud1b5\ud574 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc131\uc7a5\ud588\uc2b5\ub2c8\uae4c?&#8221;\uc640 \uac19\uc774 \uc815\ud655\ud55c \ubaa9\uc801\uc131\uc744 \uac00\uc9c4 \uc9c8\ubb38\uc744 \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \u2014 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub4e4\uc740 \ub2e4\uc74c\uacfc \uac19\uc740 \uc5f4\ub9b0 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub97c \uac00\uc9c0\uace0 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \u201c\ub2f9\uc2e0\uc5d0\uac8c \ud070 \uc758\ubbf8\uac00 \uc788\uc5c8\ub358 \uc0ac\uac74\uc744 \uc124\uba85\ud558\uc138\uc694. \uadf8 \uc774\uc720\uc640 \uadf8\uac83\uc774 \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc5d0\uac8c \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc601\ud5a5\uc744 \ubbf8\ucce4\ub294\uc9c0 \uc124\uba85\ud558\uc138\uc694.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc798 \uc4f0\uae30 \uc704\ud55c \uac00\uc7a5 \uc131\uacf5\uc801\uc778 \uc804\ub7b5 \uc911 \ud558\ub098\ub294 \uacfc\uac70\uc758 \uc0ac\uac74\uc744 \ubc14\ud0d5\uc73c\ub85c \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc131\uc7a5\ud558\uace0 \ubcc0\ud654\ud588\ub294\uc9c0 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ubcc0\ud654\ub97c \ud3c9\uac00\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub300\ubd80\ubd84\uc758 \uc544\uc774\ub4e4\uc774 \ud638\uae30\uc2ec\uc774 \ub9ce\uae34 \ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uacfc\uc5f0 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc740 \uc120\uc0dd\ub2d8\uaed8 \uacc4\uc808\uc774 \ubc14\ub00c\ub294 \uc6d0\uc778\uc744 \ubb3c\uc5b4\ubcf8 \ub4a4 \ud0dc\uc591\uacc4 \ubaa8\ud615\uc744 \ub9cc\ub4e4\uc5b4 \ubc18 \uce5c\uad6c\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c \uadf8 \uac1c\ub150\uc744 \uc124\uba85\ud55c \ud559\uc0dd\uc774\uc5c8\uc744\uae4c\uc694?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc8fc\uc81c\uac00 \ub300\ub2f4\ud558\uace0 \ub3c5\ud2b9\ud574\uc57c \ud55c\ub2e4\uace0 \uc0dd\uac01\ud560 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uc9c0\ub9cc, \ud6a8\uacfc\uc801\uc778 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud558\ub294 \ub370 \uaf2d \ud544\uc694\ud55c \uac83\uc740 \uc544\ub2d9\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub300\uc2e0\uc5d0 \uc131\uacf5\uc740 \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc815\ud655\ud558\uace0 \uc0dd\uc0dd\ud55c \uadf8\ub9bc\uc744 \uadf8\ub9ac\ub294 \ub370 \ub2ec\ub824 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc5d0\uac8c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774\uc57c\ub9d0\ub85c \ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \uc81c\uacf5\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \ub9ce\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3><strong>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uad6c\uc870\ub97c \ud655\uc2e4\ud55c \uc11c\ub860, \ubcf8\ub860, \uacb0\ub860\uc73c\ub85c \ub9cc\ub4dc\uc138\uc694.<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p><strong><br><\/strong>&#8220;\uc124\uc815, \uc11c\ub860, \uac08\ub4f1, \uac08\ub4f1\ud574\uc18c&#8221;\ub77c\ub294 \uae30\ubcf8 \uad6c\uc870\uc801\uc778 \uc694\uc18c\ub97c \ud3ec\ud568\ud558\uba74 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uac00 \ub354 \uc7ac\ubbf8\uc788\uc744 \ubfd0\ub9cc \uc544\ub2c8\ub77c \uc4f0\uae30\ub3c4 \ub354 \uc26c\uc6cc\uc9d1\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uae00\uc4f0\uae30\uac00 \ub354 \uc26c\uc6b8 \ub54c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc740 \ub354 \uc7ac\ubbf8\uc788\uac8c \uae00\uc744 \uc4f8 \uc218 \uc788\uace0, \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uae00\uc4f0\uae30\uc5d0 \ub354 \ub9ce\uc740 \uac83\uc744 \uc3df\uc544 \ubd80\uc744 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5f4\uc815\uacfc \uad00\uc2ec\uc740 \uce5c\uad6c\uc5d0\uac8c \ub4e4\ub824\uc8fc\ub294 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub098 \uc5b4\ub4dc\ubca4\ucc98 \uc18c\uc124\/\ub85c\ub9e8\uc2a4 \uc18c\uc124\uacfc \uac19\uc774 \uc88b\uc740 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\uc758 \ud2b9\uc9d5\uc774\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc774\ub807\uac8c \uc4f0\uc778 \uae00\ub4e4\uc774 \uc885\uc885 \ub354 \ub9e4\ub825\uc801\uc778 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub85c \ud574\uc11d\ub41c\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uc54c \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uae30\uc2b9\uc804\uacb0\uc744 \uad6c\uc131\ud560 \ub54c \uacbd\ud5d8\uc5d0\uc11c \ubc30\uc6b4 \uad50\ud6c8\uc744 \ud3ec\ud568\ud558\uc138\uc694. \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc774 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc744 \ud1b5\ud574 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ubcc0\ud588\uc2b5\ub2c8\uae4c? \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \ubc30\uc6e0\uc2b5\ub2c8\uae4c? \uc774\ub7ec\ud55c \uacbd\ud5d8\uc73c\ub85c \uc778\ud574 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \ub2e4\ub974\uac8c \ud560 \uacc4\ud68d\uc785\ub2c8\uae4c? \ub300\ud68c\uc5d0\uc11c 1\ub4f1\uc744 \ud55c \ubc29\ubc95\uc774\ub098 \uc720\ub7fd\uc5d0\uc11c \ud658\uc0c1\uc801\uc778 \ud734\uac00\ub97c \ubcf4\ub0b8 \ubc29\ubc95\uc740 \ub204\uad6c\ub098 \uc4f8 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uac83\uc740 \uc5ec\ud589 \uc77c\uc815\ud45c\uac00 \uc544\ub2c8\ub77c \uc77c\uae30\uc7a5 \uc548\uc5d0 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uacbd\ud5d8\uc5d0\uc11c \ubc30\uc6b4 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uacfc \uadf8\uac83\uc774 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc5d0\uac8c \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc601\ud5a5\uc744 \ubbf8\ucce4\ub294\uc9c0 \ub2f4\uc544 \ubcf4\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4><strong>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc11c\ub860 #1: \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc790\uc9c8\uc774\ub098 \uc131\ud488\uc5d0 \uc9d1\uc911\ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc2dc\uc791\ud560 \ub54c \ud55c \uac00\uc9c0 \uc88b\uc740 \uc811\uadfc \ubc29\uc2dd\uc740 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uac00\uc9c4 \uae0d\uc815\uc801\uc778 \ud2b9\uc131\uc744 \uc124\uba85\ud558\uace0 \uadf8\ub7ec\ud55c \ud2b9\uc131\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc900 \uc0ac\ub840\ub97c \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\ub294 \uac83\uc73c\ub85c \uc2dc\uc791\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4><strong>\uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc790\uc9c8\ub4e4\ub85c \uc2dc\uc791\ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud55c \ud559\uc0dd\uc740 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ub2e8\ud638\ud558\uba74\uc11c \ub048\uae30 \uc788\uc74c\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\uace0 \uc2f6\uc5b4\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub294 \uace0\ub4f1\ud559\uad50\uc5d0\uc11c \uc131\uacf5\ud558\ub294 \ub370 \ud544\uc694\ud588\ub358 \ub178\ub825 \uc774\uc0c1\uc73c\ub85c \ub098\uc544\uac14\ub358 \ub54c\ub97c \uc0dd\uac01\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub294 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0\uc11c \uc5ec\ub7ec \uc2a4\ud3ec\uce20 \ubc0f \uacfc\uc678 \ud65c\ub3d9\uc5d0 \ucc38\uc5ec\ud558\uba74\uc11c 3\uac1c \uc774\uc0c1\uc758 AP \uc218\uc5c5\uc5d0 \ucc38\uc5ec\ud558\ub294 \uc720\uc77c\ud55c \ud559\uc0dd\uc774 \ub418\uc5c8\ub358 \uacfc\uac70\ub97c \uc0dd\uac01\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub294 \ub610\ud55c \uc9c0\uc5ed \ub178\uc219\uc790 \uc27c\ud130\uc5d0\uc11c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uad50\ud68c\uc640 \ud568\uaed8 \uc790\uc6d0\ubd09\uc0ac \ud65c\ub3d9\uc744 \ud558\uba70, \uadf8\uacf3\uc5d0\uc11c \uc27c\ud130 \uc190\ub2d8 \ubc0f \uc9c0\uc5ed \uc0ac\ud68c\uc758 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uacfc \uce5c\uad6c\uac00 \ub418\uace0 \uad00\uacc4\ub97c \ub9fa\uc5c8\ub358 \ub54c\ub97c \ub5a0\uc62c\ub9bd\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\uac83\uc774 \uadf8\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \uc911\uc2ec\uc774 \ub418\ub294 \uadf8\uc758 \uc790\uc9c8\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4><strong>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uc11c\ub860<\/strong><strong> #2: <\/strong><strong>\ubcf8\uc778\uc758<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uc774\uc57c\uae30\uc5d0<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uc9d1\uc911\ud558\uc138\uc694<\/strong><strong>.<\/strong><strong><\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\uc5d0 \uc811\uadfc\ud558\ub294 \ub610 \ub2e4\ub978 \ubc29\ubc95\uc740 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \ud47c \ub2e4\uc74c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uae0d\uc815\uc801\uc778 \uc790\uc9c8\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\ub294 \uc608\uc2dc\ub97c \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4><strong>\uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub85c<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uc2dc\uc791\ud558\uc138\uc694<\/strong><strong>. <\/strong><strong><\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud55c \ud559\uc0dd\uc740 \uadf8\uc758 \ud615\uc81c\uac00 \uc9c0\ub09c 3\ub144 \ub3d9\uc548 \uc554\uacfc \ud22c\ubcd1\ud574 \uc654\ub358 \uc77c\uc774 \uc624\ub298\ub0a0 \uc790\uc2e0\uc744 \ud615\uc131\ud558\ub294 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uacbd\ud5d8\uc774\ub77c\uace0 \uc0dd\uac01\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub294 \uc774 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc5d0\uc11c \ube44\ub86f\ud55c \uc5b4\ub824\uc6c0\uc774 \uc790\uc2e0\uc744 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ubcc0\ud654\uc2dc\ucf30\ub294\uc9c0 \uc0dd\uac01\ud558\uba70 \uc790\uc2e0\uc744 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uc640 \ucc28\ubcc4\ud654\uc2dc\ud0ac \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc11c\ub860 \ubd80\ubd84\uc5d0\uc11c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \uc18c\uac1c\ud558\uba74\uc11c \uc774 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uae0d\uc815\uc801\uc778 \ud2b9\uc131\ub4e4\uc744 \ubcf8\uc778\uc758 \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\uc640 \uc5f0\uacb0\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u2022 \uadf8\ub294 \uc8fc\ubcc0\uc5d0\uc11c \uacaa\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc558\uc744&nbsp;\uc9c4\uc9c0\ud558\uace0 \uc9c0\uc18d\uc801\uc778 \ubc29\uc2dd\uc73c\ub85c \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc0ac\ub791\ud558\ub294 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc744 \ub3cc\ubcf4\ub294 \uc77c\uc744 \ud574\uc654\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \ub9e4\uc6b0 \ub3c5\ub9bd\uc801\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u2022 \uadf8\ub294 \uc815\uae30\uc801\uc778 \uc758\ub8cc \uc751\uae09 \uc0c1\ud669\uc5d0 \ub300\ucc98\ud558\ub354\ub77c\ub3c4 \uc5ec\uc804\ud788 \uc88b\uc740 \uc131\uc801\uc744 \ubc1b\uace0, \uc9c0\uc5ed \uc0ac\ud68c\uc758 \uc77c\uc6d0\uc73c\ub85c\uc11c \uc5ed\ud560\uc744 \ucda9\uc2e4\ud788 \ud574\ub0c8\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc9d1\uc911\ub825\uc774 \ub6f0\uc5b4\ub09c \uc0ac\ub78c\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u2022 \uadf8\ub294 \ud798\ub4e0 \uc2dc\uac04\uc774 \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc601\ud5a5\uc744 \ubbf8\uce60 \uc218 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0 \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc774\ud574\ud558\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc758 \uac10\uc815\uc744 \uc798 \uc774\ud574\ud558\ub294 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc120\ud0dd\ud55c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\uac00 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc774\ub4e0 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc5d0\uac8c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uadf8\ub4e4\uc758 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \uc774\uc0c1\uc801\uc778 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\ub77c\ub294 \uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc778 \uc99d\uac70\ub97c \uc81c\uacf5\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\ub294 \ub3c5\uc790\uc758 \uad00\uc2ec\uc744 \ub04c\uace0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \ub098\uba38\uc9c0 \ubd80\ubd84\uc744 \uc798 \uc774\ub04c \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uae30\uc5b5\uc5d0 \ub0a8\ub294 \uc11c\ub860\uc774 \ubc18\ub4dc\uc2dc \uc788\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4><strong>\ubcf8\uc778\uc758<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uc790\uc9c8\uc744<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\ub2e4\uc2dc<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\ud55c\ubc88<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uacb0\ub860\uc5d0\uc11c<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\ubc18\ubcf5\ud558\uc138\uc694<\/strong><strong>.<\/strong><strong><\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>\uba85\ud655\ud558\uace0 \uc784\ud329\ud2b8 \uc788\ub294 \uc11c\ub860\uc73c\ub85c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc2dc\uc791\ud558\ub294 \uac83\ub3c4 \uc911\uc694\ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ub05d\ub0b4\ub290\ub0d0\ub3c4 \ub3c5\uc790\uc758 \ub9c8\uc74c\uc5d0 \uae4a\uac8c \ub0a8\uc744 \ubd80\ubd84\uc774\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc911\uc694\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uac15\ub825\ud55c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uacb0\ub860\uc744 \uc791\uc131\ud558\ub294 \ud655\uc2e4\ud55c \ubc29\ubc95 \uc911 \ud558\ub098\ub294 \uc55e\uc5d0\uc11c \ub2e4\ub8ec \uc911\uc694\ud55c \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc744 \ubc18\ubcf5\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc138\ubd80 \uc0ac\ud56d\uc744 \ub2e4\uc2dc \uc5b8\uae09\ud558\uac70\ub098 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc2dc\uc791 \ubd80\ubd84\uc5d0\uc11c \uc18c\uac1c\ud55c \ubcf8\uc778\uc758 \uc790\uc9c8\uc744 \ub2e4\uc2dc \ubc18\ubcf5\ud558\uc138\uc694<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4>* \uc88b\uc740 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uacb0\ub860 \uc608\uc2dc (\ub300\ud559\uc774 \ucc3e\uace0 \uc788\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uc798 \ub2f4\uace0 \uc788\uc74c)<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>During my high school years, my qualities of leadership, initiative, and hard work have help shape me to become the strong student I am today. As the head of our school\u2019s volunteer group, I showed that even a teenager can make a big impact. As a student achieving high grades in all three of my AP courses, I demonstrated my dedication to education about all. Finally, as a daughter of working-class immigrant parents, I have used my value of hard work to achieve things my parents never thought possible. These values have contributed to making me the conscientious and successful student and person I am now, and they will surely continue to assist and guide me in my academic and professional career.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2><strong>\ud765\ubbf8\ub85c\uc6b4 \ub300\ud559 <\/strong>\uc9c0\uc6d0 <strong>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p><a href=\"\/ko\/blog\/admission\/tips-for-writing-strong-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131<\/a>\uc5d0 \uad00\ud55c \uc628\ub77c\uc778 \ub9ac\uc18c\uc2a4\ub294 \uc218\ubc31 \uac00\uc9c0\uac00 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4(<a href=\"\/ko\/blog\/admission\/writing-common-app-essay-prompts\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131 \ubc29\ubc95<\/a> \ud3ec\ud568). \uadf8 \uacf3\uc5d0\uc11c \uc218\uc2ed \uac1c\uc758 \ud765\ubbf8\ub86d\uace0 \uc720\uc775\ud55c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub97c \ucc3e\uc744 \uc218 \uc788\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uc5ec\uae30\uc5d0\ub294 \ub108\ubb34 \uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc774\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc73c\uba74\uc11c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uace0\uc720\ud55c \ud504\ub85c\ud544\uacfc \uac1c\uc778 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\uc5d0 \ub9de\ucd94\uc5b4 \uc4f8 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uba87 \uac00\uc9c0 \uc8fc\uc81c\uac00 \ub354 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>1. \ub3c5\ud2b9\ud55c \uacfc\uc678 \ud65c\ub3d9 \ub610\ub294 \uc5f4\uc815\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\ub294 \ud65c\ub3d9<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>2. \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \ud504\ub85c\ud544\uacfc \uc624\ud788\ub824 \ud06c\uac8c \ub300\uc870\ub418\ub294 \ud65c\ub3d9 \ub610\ub294 \uad00\uc2ec\uc0ac<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>3. \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc778\uc0dd\uc5d0\uc11c \ud070 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub97c \ub9d0\ud574\uc8fc\ub294 \uad49\uc7a5\ud788 \uc0ac\uc18c\ud574 \ubcf4\uc774\ub294 \uc21c\uac04<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>4. \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc0b6\uacfc \uc131\uaca9\uc744 \ud0d0\uad6c\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uc77c\uc0c1\uc758 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc774\ub098 \ubb3c\uac74\uc744 \uc740\uc720\ub85c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uae30<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>5. \uc778\uc0dd\uc758 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uc21c\uac04\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \ub4e4\ub824\uc8fc\ub294 \uc21c\uac04\uc744 \ubb18\uc0ac\ud558\ub294 \ub0b4\ub7ec\ud2f0\ube0c<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2><strong>\ub300\ud559\uc5d0\uc11c \uc88b\uc544\ud558\ub294 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc4f0\uae30 \uc704\ud55c \ucd94\uac00\uc801\uc778 \ud301<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<h3><strong>\uac15\ub825\ud55c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub97c \uc120\ud0dd\ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\uccab\uc9f8, \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uad6c\uc870\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub4e0 \uc778\uc0dd\uc5d0\uc11c <strong>\uc2e4\uc81c\ub85c \uc131\ucde8\ud558\uace0 \uc2f6\uc740 \uac83\uc774 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc778\uc9c0 \uc2a4\uc2a4\ub85c\uc5d0\uac8c \uc9c8\ubb38\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4<\/strong>(\ud2b9\ud788 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ucee4\ub9ac\uc5b4\uc801\uc778 \uce21\uba74\uc5d0\uc11c). \uc774\uac83\uc774\uc57c\ub9d0\ub85c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\ub9cc\uc758 \ubaa9\ud45c\ub97c \uc81c\uacf5\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc740 \uc774\ub7ec\ud55c \ubaa9\ud45c\ub97c \ub2ec\uc131\ud558\ub294 \ub370 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub418\ub294 \ud504\ub85c\uadf8\ub7a8(\uc804\uacf5)\uc744 \uc120\ud0dd\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub807\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc73c\uba74 \uc65c \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud574\uc57c \ud558\ub294\uc9c0 \ub2e4\uc2dc \ud55c \ubc88 \uc9c4\uc9c0\ud558\uac8c \uc7ac\uace0\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3><strong>\ub9cc\uc57d\uc5d0<\/strong><strong> \u2018<\/strong><strong>\uc774\uc57c\uae30<\/strong><strong>\u2019 <\/strong><strong>\uad6c\uc870\ub97c<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uc4f4\ub2e4\uba74<\/strong><strong>\u2026<\/strong><strong><\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\uac00 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \uc8fc\uc81c\uac00 \ub420 \uac83\uc774\ubbc0\ub85c \ub9e4\ub825\uc801\uc778 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub85c \ub9cc\ub4dc\uc138\uc694. \ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \ucc28\uc138\ub300 \uc170\uc775\uc2a4\ud53c\uc5b4\ub77c\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc4f0\uace0&nbsp;\uc788\uc9c0 \uc54a\ub2e4\ub294 \uc810\uc744 \uae30\uc5b5\ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc5ec\uae30\uc5d0 \uc138 \uac00\uc9c0 \ubc29\ubc95\uc774 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4: <\/p>\n\n\n\n<ol>\n<li>\uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc73c\ub85c \uc131\uc7a5\ud588\uace0, \uc2a4\uc2a4\ub85c \ub204\uad6c\uc778\uc9c0 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\ub294 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84 \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub85c \uc791\uc131\ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc644\uc804\ud788 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\uc9c0\ub9cc \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc5d0\uac8c \uc601\uac10\uc744 \uc8fc\uc5c8\ub358 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub85c \uc791\uc131\ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \ub204\uad6c\uc778\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc740\uc720\uc801\uc778 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub85c \uc791\uc131\ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<h3><strong>\ub9cc\uc57d\uc5d0<\/strong><strong> \u2018<\/strong><strong>\uc8fc\uc81c\uc5d0<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\ub300\ud55c<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uc5f4\uc815<\/strong><strong>\u2019 &nbsp;<\/strong><strong>\uad6c\uc870\ub97c<\/strong><strong> <\/strong><strong>\uc4f4\ub2e4\uba74<\/strong><strong>\u2026<\/strong><strong><\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc774 \uacbd\uc6b0, \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\ub9cc\uc758 \uc8fc\uc81c(\uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc5f4\uc815\uc744 \uac00\uc9c4 \uc8fc\uc81c)\ub97c \uac00\uc9c0\uace0 \uc788\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uadf8\uac83\uc774 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc5d0\uac8c \uc758\ubbf8\ud558\ub294 \ubc14\uc5d0 \uad00\ud55c \uac83\uc774\uc5b4\uc57c \ud55c\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uae30\uc5b5\ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub2e4\uc2dc \ub9d0\ud574, \uc8fc\uc81c \uc790\uccb4\ub97c \uc124\uba85\ud558\ub294 \ub370 \uc5bd\ub9e4\uc774\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc774\ud6c4\uc758 \uac01 \ub2e8\ub77d\uc744 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uc5ec \uc120\ud0dd\ud55c \uc8fc\uc81c \ub610\ub294 \uc8fc\uc81c\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc5f4\uc815\uc744 \ubcf8\uc778\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\uc5c8\ub294\uc9c0 \uc124\uba85\ud558\uc138\uc694. \ubb38\ub2e8 \ub0b4\uc5d0\uc11c \uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc778 \uc138\ubd80 \uc0ac\ud56d\uc744 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub418, \uac01 \ubb38\ub2e8\uc740 &#8220;\uac04\ub2e8\ud55c \ub17c\uc9c0\ub97c \ub2f4\uc740 \uc911\uc2ec \ubb38\uc7a5&#8221;\ub85c \uc2dc\uc791\ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3><strong>\uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \ub0b4\ub7ec\ud2f0\ube0c\ub85c \ub3c5\uc790\ub97c \uc0ac\ub85c\uc7a1\uc73c\uc138\uc694.<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \uc790\uc9c8, \uacfc\uc678 \ud65c\ub3d9 \ub610\ub294 \uc131\ucde8\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \ub2e8\uc21c\ud55c \ub098\uc5f4\uc5d0 \uad00\uc2ec\uc774 \uc5c6\uc744 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc65c\ub0d0\ud558\uba74 \uc774\ub7ec\ud55c \uc815\ubcf4\ub294 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\uc758 \ub2e4\ub978 \uacf3\uc5d0 \uc774\ubbf8 \ud3ec\ud568\ub418\uc5b4 \uc788\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub300\uc2e0 \uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc778 \uc138\uc138\ud55c \uc774\uc57c\uae30\uac00 \ud3ec\ud568\ub41c \ub0b4\ub7ec\ud2f0\ube0c\ub97c \ud1b5\ud574 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ub204\uad6c\uc778\uc9c0 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\ub294 \ub370 \uc9d1\uc911\ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub0b4\ub7ec\ud2f0\ube0c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0 \ud3ec\ud568\ud560 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub4e4\uc744 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uacc4\ud68d\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc4f8 \uc218 \uc788\uc744\uae4c\uc694? <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uba3c\uc800, \ud39c\uc744 \ub4e4\uace0 \ub9c8\uc74c\uc5d0 \ub5a0\uc624\ub974\ub294 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uacbd\ud5d8\uc744 \uc801\uc73c\uc138\uc694. \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc740 \ubd80\uc815\uc801\uc778 \uac83\uc77c \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uace0 \uadf8 \ubc18\ub300\uc77c \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ubd80\uc815\uc801\uc778 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc758 \uac00\uc7a5 \ud765\ubbf8\ub85c\uc6b4 \ubd80\ubd84\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uadf8\uac83\uc744 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ud574\uacb0\ud588\uace0, \uadf8 \uc548\uc5d0\uc11c \ucd5c\uace0\uc758 \uacb0\uacfc\ub97c \uc5bb\uc5c8\ub294\uac00 \ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub3c5\uc790\uac00 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\uc5d0 \ub4e4\uc5b4\uac00 \uc788\ub294 \uac83\ucc98\ub7fc \ub290\ub07c\uace0, \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uacaa\uc740 \ubcc0\ud654\uc758 \uc21c\uac04\uc744 \ud568\uaed8 \uacbd\ud5d8\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub3c4\ub85d \uc124\uc815\ud574 \ubcf4\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3><strong>\uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uac00\uc7a5 \uc911\uc694\ud558\uac8c \uc0dd\uac01\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc5d0 \uc9d1\uc911\ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc774\uac83\uc744 \uc77c\uc885\uc758 \ube0c\ub808\uc778\uc2a4\ud1a0\ubc0d\uc774\ub77c\uace0 \uc0dd\uac01\ud558\uc138\uc694. \ub208\uc744 \uac10\uace0 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc774 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc744 \uc6c0\uc9c1\uc774\uac8c \ud558\uace0, \ub3d9\uae30\ub97c \ubd80\uc5ec\ud558\uace0, \ud765\ubd84\uc2dc\ud0a4\uace0, \uc704\ub300\ud55c \uc77c\uc744 \ucd94\uad6c\ud558\ub3c4\ub85d \uc601\uac10\uc744 \uc8fc\ub294\uc9c0(\ub610\ub294 \uc801\uc5b4\ub3c4 \uadf8\uac83\uc744 \ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \ud658\uc0c1\uc744 \uac16\uac8c \ud558\ub294\uc9c0) \uc0c1\uc0c1\ud574 \ubcf4\uc138\uc694. \uc5ec\uae30\uc5d0\ub294 \ucde8\ubbf8, \uc74c\uc545 \uc7a5\ub974, \uc778\uc0dd\uc5d0\uc11c \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uc0ac\ub78c, \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uae30\uc5b5\uc774\ub098 \uacbd\ud5d8, \ucc45 \ub4f1 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc815\uccb4\uc131\uc758 \uc77c\ubd80\ub85c \uc0dd\uac01\ud558\uac70\ub098 \uc790\uc2e0\uc744 \uc815\uc758\ud558\ub294 \uc758\ubbf8 \uc788\ub294 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uac83\uc774 \ud3ec\ud568\ub420 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc774\ub7ec\ud55c \ud56d\ubaa9\uc744 \ub098\uc5f4\ud558\uace0 \uc774 \ud558\ub098\uc758 \uc544\uc774\ub514\uc5b4, \uc0ac\ub78c, \ub300\uc0c1 \ub610\ub294 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc758 \ub2e4\ub978 \uad00\ub828\uc131\uc774 \uc788\uac70\ub098 \ubd80\uc218\uc801\uc778 \ub2e8\uc5b4\ub4e4\ub85c \uc5f0\uacb0\ub41c \uac70\ubbf8\uc904\uc744 \uce58\ub294 \uac83\ubd80\ud130 \uc2dc\uc791\ud558\uc138\uc694. \uadf8 \ub2e4\uc74c \uc774\uac83\ub4e4\uc774 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc5d0\uac8c \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uc774\uc720\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uac04\ub7b5\ud55c \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \uc791\uc131\ud558\uc138\uc694. \ubaa9\ub85d\uacfc \uba87 \uac1c\uc758 \ubb38\uc7a5\uc744 \uc791\uc131\ud558\uba74 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub97c \uae30\uaecf\ud574\uc57c \ud55c\ub450 \uac00\uc9c0\ub85c \uc881\ud788\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc870\uae08 \ub354 \uc26c\uc6cc\uc9c8 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2><strong>\ub300\ud559 <\/strong>\uc9c0\uc6d0 <strong>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uad50\uc815<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\ubaa8\ub4e0 \ud559\uad50\uac00 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \ubc18\ub4dc\uc2dc \ud655\uc778\ud558\ub294 \ud55c \uac00\uc9c0\ub294\u00a0 \ubb38\ubc95, \uad6c\ub450\uc810, \uae30\uc220 \ubc0f \uc2a4\ud0c0\uc77c\uc5d0 \uc624\ub958\uac00 \uc5c6\ub294\uc9c0 \uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131 \ud6c4\uc5d0\ub294 <a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.ai\/ko\/proofreading\">\uc601\uc5b4 \ubb38\ubc95 \uac80\uc0ac\uae30<\/a>\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uc5ec \ubb38\ubc95\uc801 \uc815\ud655\uc131\uc744 \ud655\uc778\ud558\uace0, <a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.ai\/ko\/tools\/paraphrasing\">AI \ud328\ub7ec\ud504\ub808\uc774\uc9d5 \ub3c4\uad6c<\/a>\ub97c \ud65c\uc6a9\ud558\uc5ec \ud45c\ud604\uc744 \ub2e4\uc591\ud654\ud568\uc73c\ub85c\uc368 \uae00\uc758 \uba85\ud655\uc131\uacfc \uc124\ub4dd\ub825\uc744 \ub192\uc774\uc2dc\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.\u200b<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud55c\ud3b8 \uc720\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c \uc601\ubb38\uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4\ub294 \uc601\uc5b4\ub85c \uc5b4\ub824\uc6c0\uc744 \uacaa\uace0 \uc788\uac70\ub098 \ub2e8\uc21c\ud788 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ub2e4\uc74c \ub2e8\uacc4\ub85c \ub04c\uc5b4\uc62c\ub9ac\uace0\uc790 \ud558\ub294 \uc720\ud559\uc0dd\uc5d0\uac8c \uc774\uc0c1\uc801\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc740 <a href=\"\/ko\/intro\/editor-profile\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\ud6cc\ub96d\ud558\uace0 \uc790\uaca9\uc744 \uac16\ucd98 \uc6d0\uc5b4\ubbfc \uc5d0\ub514\ud130<\/a>\ub97c \ubcf4\uc720\ud55c \uad50\uc815 \uc5c5\uccb4\ub97c \uc120\ud0dd\ud558\ub3c4\ub85d \uc8fc\uc758\ub97c \uae30\uc6b8\uc5ec\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc9c0\uae08 \ubc14\ub85c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0\uc758 <a href=\"\/ko\/services\/admissions-editing\/english-essay\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc720\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c \uc601\ubb38\uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4<\/a>\ub97c \ud655\uc778\ud558\uc5ec \uc5d0\ub514\ud130\uac00 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uac1c\uc120\ud558\uace0 \uafc8\uc758 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \ub4e4\uc5b4\uac08 \uc218 \uc788\ub3c4\ub85d \ub3d5\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95\uc744 \uc54c\uc544\ubcf4\uc138\uc694!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u25b6 \uc6d0\uace0 \uc791\uc131 \ud6c4&nbsp;<strong>\uc804\ubb38\uac00\uc758 \uac80\ud1a0<\/strong>\uac00 \ud544\uc694\ud558\uc2dc\ub2e4\uba74, \uc5b8\uc81c\ub4e0\uc9c0 \uc800\ud76c&nbsp;<a href=\"\/ko?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc601\ubb38\uad50\uc815<\/a>&nbsp;\uc11c\ube44\uc2a4\ub97c \uc774\uc6a9\ud574\ubcf4\uc138\uc694!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><a href=\"\/ko\/services\/academic-editing?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc601\uc5b4 \ub17c\ubb38\uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4<\/a>\u2502<a href=\"\/ko\/services\/translation\/academic-paper?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\ub17c\ubb38\ubc88\uc5ed \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4<\/a>\u2502&nbsp;<a href=\"\/ko\/services\/academic-editing?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc800\ub110 \ub17c\ubb38\uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4<\/a>\u2502<a href=\"\/ko\/services\/academic-editing\/paper-thesis-dissertation?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\ud559\uc704 \ub17c\ubb38\uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4<\/a>\u2502<a href=\"\/ko\/services\/academic-editing?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\ub17c\ubb38\ucd08\ub85d \uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4<\/a>\u2502<a href=\"\/ko\/services\/academic-editing\/assignment?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\ub300\ud559 \uacfc\uc81c\/\uc601\uc5b4 \uacfc\uc81c 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