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Diversity Essay\ub294 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc778\uc9c0 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\uba74\uc11c\ub3c4 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc18d\ud55c \ucee4\ubba4\ub2c8\ud2f0\uc640 \ub354 \ud070 \uc138\uacc4\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc2dd\uc73c\ub85c \uc801\uc751\ud558\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \uc911\uc810\uc744 \ub450\uace0 \uc368\uc57c\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Diversity Essay\ub294 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uc758 \ubc30\uacbd, \uc815\uccb4\uc131, \ubb38\ud654, \uc2e0\ub150 \ub610\ub294 \uc18c\uc18d\ub41c \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c\uc640\uc758 \uad00\uacc4\uc5d0 \ucd08\uc810\uc744 \ub9de\ucd98 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ud1b5\ud574 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\ub97c \ub3c5\ud2b9\ud558\uac8c \ub9cc\ub4dc\ub294 \uc694\uc778\uacfc \uadf8\ub4e4\uc774 \uc785\ud559 \ud6c4 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc0c8\ub85c\uc6b4 \uad00\uc810\uc774\ub098 \ud1b5\ucc30\ub825\uc744 \uc81c\uacf5\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0\ub97c \uc54c \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub300\ud559 \ud639\uc740 \ub300\ud559\uc758 \ud559\uc0dd\ud68c\ub294 \ucea0\ud37c\uc2a4\uc758 \ub2e4\uc591\uc131\uc744 \ubcf4\uc7a5\ud558\uace0, \ubaa8\ub4e0 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc758 \ud559\uc2b5 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc744 \uac1c\uc120\ud558\uace0, \uc18c\uc678\ub41c \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c\ub294 \uc7a5\ud559\uae08\uc744 \uc81c\uacf5\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uacb0\uc815\uc744 \ub0b4\ub9ac\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uc774 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud558\uac8c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
\uc77c\ubd80 \ub300\ud559\uc740 \uc774 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc2dc \uaf2d \uc368\uc57c\ud558\ub294 \ud544\uc218 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub85c \uc9c0\uc815\ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc, \ub2e4\ub978 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \ub300\ud559\uc5d0\uc11c\ub294 \ucd94\uac00 \uc11c\ub958\ub85c \uc9c0\uc815\ud558\uace0 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub7f0 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0\uc11c \uc774 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \ub2e8\uc21c\ud788 “\uc790\uae30\uc18c\uac1c\uc11c”\uc5d0 \ubd88\uacfc\ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uc8fc\uc5b4\uc9c4 \ud504\ub86c\ud504\ud2b8\uc5d0 \ub530\ub77c \uc774 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uc758 \uc0b6\uc758 \ub2e4\uc591\uc131\uacfc \uadf8\uac83\uc774 \uadf8\ub4e4\uc744 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ud615\uc131\ud588\ub294\uc9c0\ub97c \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc904 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n
Diversity Essay\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud558\ub824\uba74 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc810\uc774 \uc790\uc2e0\uc744 \ub3c5\ud2b9\ud558\uac8c \ub9cc\ub4dc\ub294\uc9c0 \uc0dd\uac01\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub2e4\ub978 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uc640 \uad6c\ubcc4\ub418\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ubc30\uacbd \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uacaa\uc740 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uacbd\ud5d8\ub4e4\uc740 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\uae4c?<\/strong> \ub54c\ub85c\ub294 \ub2f9\uc5f0\ud558\uac8c\ub3c4 \uc6b0\ub9ac\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uacfc \uac19\uc740 \ud658\uacbd, \uc2e0\ub150 \ub610\ub294 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc744 \uacf5\uc720\ud558\ub294 \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c\uc5d0 \uc18d\ud574 \uc788\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc774 \uadf8\uc800 \ud3c9\ubc94\ud558\ub2e4\uace0 \uac00\uc815\ud558\uae30 \uc27d\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub7ec\ub098 \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uacfc \uac19\uc774 \uadf8 \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c\uc5d0 \uc18d\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc740 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc758 \uad00\uc810\uc5d0\uc11c \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uc758 \uc0b6\uc744 \ubcf4\uba74 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\ub294 \ud754\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc740 \uacbd\ud5d8\uacfc \ubc30\uacbd\uc744 \uac00\uc9c4 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc774 \ub420 \uc218 \uc788\uc73c\uba70, \uc774\ub7f0 \uba74\ubaa8\ub294 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790 \uc0ac\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \ub208\uc5d0 \ub744\ub294 \ub370 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub420 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n <\/p>\n\n\n\n Diversity Essay\ub294 \ub2e4\uc591\ud55c \ud615\uc2dd\uc774 \uc788\uc9c0\ub9cc \ubc18\ub4dc\uc2dc \ud3ec\ud568\ud574\uc57c \ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \uc815\uccb4\uc131, \ubc30\uacbd, \ubb38\ud654, \uad00\uc810, \uc2e0\ub150, \ubaa9\ud45c \ub4f1\uc758 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uce21\uba74\uc744 \uac15\uc870\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4, \uc544\ub798\uc758 \uc8fc\uc81c \uc911 \ud558\ub098\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc4f8 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \ucd9c\uc2e0 \uad6d\uac00\/\uace0\ud5a5<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \ubb38\ud654\uc801\/\uc774\ubbfc \ubc30\uacbd<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \uc778\uc885\/\ubbfc\uc871<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \ub3c5\ud2b9\ud55c \uac00\uc871 \uc0c1\ud669<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \uc885\uad50\/\ubbff\uc74c<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \uc0ac\ud68c\/\uacbd\uc81c\uc801 \ubc30\uacbd<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \uc7a5\uc560<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \uc131\ubcc4<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \uc131\uc801 \ucde8\ud5a5<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \uc131 \uc815\uccb4\uc131<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \uac00\uce58\/\uc758\uacac<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \uacbd\ud5d8<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \ub2e4\uc591\uc131\uacfc \uad00\ub828\ub41c \ud2b9\ubcc4 \ud65c\ub3d9<\/p>\n\n\n\n \uc774\uc81c ‘\ub2e4\uc591\uc131’ \uc774 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uacfc \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc0b6\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc758\ubbf8\uac00 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc0dd\uac01\ud574 \ubcfc \uc218 \uc788\ub3c4\ub85d \uba87 \uac00\uc9c0 \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \uc9c8\ubb38\uc744 \ud558\ub3c4\ub85d \ud558\uaca0\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n <\/p>\n\n\n\n \uc6b0\ub9ac\ub294 \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc73c\ub85c (\ud2b9\ud788 \uc5b4\ub9b4 \ub54c) \uc8fc\ubcc0\uacfc \uc18c\uc18d\uac10\uc744 \uac16\uae38 \uc6d0\ud558\uace0, \uadf8\ub85c \uc778\ud574 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \ub3c5\ud2b9\ud55c \uc0b6\uc758 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc774 \ud559\uc0dd \ucea0\ud37c\uc2a4\uc758 \ub2e4\uc591\uc131\uc5d0 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub420 \uc218 \uc788\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uae68\ub2eb\uc9c0 \ubabb\ud560 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud639\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84 \uc8fc\ubcc0\uc758 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uacfc \ube44\uc2b7\ud558\ub2e4\uace0 \uc0dd\uac01\ud560 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub610\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ubc30\uacbd\uc774 \uc790\ub791\uac70\ub9ac\uac00 \uc544\ub2c8\uba70, \uadf8\uac83\uc744 \ub4dc\ub7ec\ub0b4\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uadf8\ub2e4\uc9c0 \ud3b8\uc548\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\ub2e4\uace0 \uc0dd\uac01\ud560 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. <\/p>\n\n\n\n \uadf8\ub7ec\ub098 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc18d\ud55c \uc9c0\uc5ed \uc0ac\ud68c\uc758 \uc77c\uc6d0\uc774 \uc544\ub2cc \uc0ac\ub78c\uc758 \uad00\uc810\uc5d0\uc11c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uacfc \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc0b6\uc744 \ubc14\ub77c\ubcf4\uba74 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \ubc30\uacbd, \ubb38\ud654 \ub610\ub294 \uac00\uc871 \uc0c1\ud669\uc774 \uc2e4\uc81c\ub85c\ub294 \ub9e4\uc6b0 \ub3c5\ud2b9\ud558\uace0 \ud765\ubbf8\ub85c\uc6b8 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc774 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc0b6\uc5d0\uc11c \ub3c5\ud2b9\ud558\uace0 \ud765\ubbf8\ub85c\uc6b4 \uc810\uc744 \ucc3e\uae30 \uc704\ud574\uc120 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc0b6\uc758 \uc9c4\uc194\ud55c \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \ub4e4\ub824\uc8fc\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc870\uae08 \ubd80\uc871\ud55c \uc774\uc57c\uae30\uc77c\uc9c0\ub77c\ub3c4 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc774 \uacbd\ud5d8\ud558\uc9c0 \ubabb\ud55c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\ub9cc\uc758 \uc778\uc0dd\uc758 \uad50\ud6c8\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc774\uc57c\uae30\uac00 \ub418\uc57c \ud560 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\uac00 \ub0a8\ub4e4\uacfc \uc5bc\ub9c8\ub098 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc9c0, \ud639\uc740 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\ubcf4\ub2e4 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ub354 \ud2b9\uad8c\uc744 \ubc1b\uc558\uac70\ub098 \ud639\uc740 \ub354 \uc6b4\uc774 \ub098\ube74\ub294\uc9c0 \uc5b5\uc9c0\ub85c \uc124\uba85\ud558\ub824\uace0 \ud558\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc138\uc694. \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\uac00 \uc790\uc5f0\uc2a4\ub7fd\uac8c \ub098\uc624\ub3c4\ub85d \ud558\uc138. \uc790\uae30 \uc790\uc2e0, \ud589\ub3d9, \uc0dd\uac01, \uac10\uc815\uc5d0 \uacc4\uc18d\ud574\uc11c \ucd08\uc810\uc744 \ub9de\ucd94\uace0 \ub3c5\uc790\uac00 \uc790\uc2e0\ub9cc\uc758 \ubb38\ud654, \uc790\ub77c\uc628 \ud658\uacbd \ub610\ub294 \ucee4\ubba4\ub2c8\ud2f0\ub97c \uc5ff\ubcfc \uc218 \uc788\ub3c4\ub85d \ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n \uc774\uac83\uc740 \ub2e8\uc9c0 \uc11c\ub860\uc77c \ubfd0\uc774\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uc774\ub807\uac8c \ub9e4\ud639\uc801\uc778 \uc11c\ub860 \ud6c4\uc5d0 \uacc4\uc18d \uc77d\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc744 \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc740 \uc5c6\uc744 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n He\u2019s in my arms, the newest addition to the family. I\u2019m too overwhelmed. \u201cThat\u2019s why I wanted you to go to Bishop Loughlin,\u201d she says, preparing baby bottles. \u201cBut ma, I chose Tech because I wanted to be challenged.\u201d \u201cWell, you\u2019re going to have to deal with it,\u201d she replies, adding, \u201cYour aunt watched you when she was in high school.\u201d \u201cBut ma, there are three of them. It\u2019s hard!\u201d Returning home from a summer program that cemented intellectual and social independence to find a new baby was not exactly thrilling. Add him to the toddler and seven year old sister I have and there\u2019s no wonder why I sing songs from Blue\u2019s Clues and The Backyardigans instead of sane seventeen year old activities. <\/p>\n\n\n\n It\u2019s never been simple; as a female and the oldest, I\u2019m to significantly rear the children and clean up the shabby apartment before an ounce of pseudo freedom reaches my hands. If I can manage to get my toddler brother onto the city bus and take him home from daycare without snot on my shoulder, and if I can manage to take off his coat and sneakers without demonic screaming for no apparent reason, then it\u2019s a good day. Only, waking up at three in the morning to work, the only free time I have, is not my cup of Starbucks. <\/p>\n\n\n\n \ucd9c\ucc98: \u201cAll Worth It\u201d, Anonymous, published in 50 Successful IVY LEAGUE Application Essays Fourth Edition, Gen & Kelly Tanabe, SuperCollege, 2017<\/em>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n <\/p>\n\n\n\n \uc8fc\uc81c\uc640 \uad00\ub828\uc774 \uc788\ub294 \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \uacf5\uc720\ud558\ub294 \uac83 \uc678\uc5d0\ub3c4, \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc0b6\uc758 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc774 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uad00\uc810, \uc0b6\uc758 \uc120\ud0dd \ub610\ub294 \ubaa9\ud45c\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc601\ud5a5\uc744 \ubbf8\ucce4\ub294\uc9c0 \uc124\uba85\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ubc30\uacbd\uc774\ub098 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc774 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud558\uac8c \uc774\ub04c\uc5c8\ub294\uc9c0, \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc65c \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uadf8 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \uc801\ud569\ud560\uc9c0 \uc124\uba85\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub2e4\uba74 \ub354\uc6b1 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc774 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \ud604\uc7ac \ub204\uad6c\uc778\uc9c0 \uc54c \uc218 \uc788\ub3c4\ub85d \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc778\uc0dd\uc774 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc5d0\uac8c \uac00\ub974\uccd0\uc900 \uba87 \uac00\uc9c0 \uacb0\ub860\uc73c\ub85c \ub9c8\ubb34\ub9ac \uc9c0\uc5b4\ubcf4\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n […] I always thought that I had it the worst out of all my family members because I was never allowed to get anything lower than what my brother or a cousin had gotten in a class. My parents figured if they could do it, so could I, and if not on my own then with a little of their help. It was not until recently that I realized the truth in this. In my short life I have seen my father go from speaking no English, to excelling in it. I have heard countless stories about migrant farmers such as Cesar Chavez and my grandfather who had nearly nothing, yet persisted and succeeded. […] When I had trouble speaking Spanish and felt like abandoning my native tongue, I remembered my mother and how when she came to the United States she was forced to wash her mouth out with soap and endure beatings with a ruler by the nuns at her school for speaking it. When I couldn\u2019t figure out tangents, sines, and cosines I thought about my father and how it took him nearly a year to learn long division because he was forced to teach it to himself after dropping out and starting to work in the 4th grade. […] All these people, just from my family, have been strong role models for me. I feel that being labeled \u201cunderprivileged\u201d does not mean that I am limited in what I can do. There is no reason for me to fail or give up, and like my parents and grandparents have done, I\u2019ve been able to pull through a great deal. My environment has made me determined, hard working, and high aiming. I would not like it any other way.<\/p>\n\n\n\n \ucd9c\ucc98: \u201cLessons From the Immigration Spectrum\u201d, Anonymous, MIT, published in 50 Successful IVY LEAGUE Application Essays Fourth Edition, Gen & Kelly Tanabe, SuperCollege, 2017.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n <\/p>\n\n\n\n \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\ub4e4\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc2e0\ubd84\uc774\ub098 \ubc30\uacbd\uc774 \uae30\uc874 \ud559\uc0dd \ub2e8\uccb4\uc758 \uc9c8\uc744 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ub192\uc5ec\uc904\uc9c0 \uc54c\uace0 \uc2f6\uc5b4 \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc544\uc9c1 \uc2dc\uc791\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc558\ub2e4\uba74 \ub300\ud559 \ub0b4 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc870\uc9c1, \uadf8\ub8f9, \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \ud2b9\ubcc4\ud55c \uad50\uc721 \uacfc\uc815\uc774 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0 \ubbf8\ub9ac \uc870\uc0ac\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. <\/p>\n\n\n\n \ub300\ud615 \uad6d\ub9bd\ub300\ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud558\ub294 \uacbd\uc6b0, \ubcf8\uc778\uc758 \uc2dc\uc57c\ub97c \ub113\ud790 \ubfd0\ub9cc \uc544\ub2c8\ub77c \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc18d\ud55c \uc9c0\uc5ed \uc0ac\ud68c\uc758 \uc2dc\uc57c\ub97c \ub113\ud788\uae30\ub97c \uae30\ub300\ud558\uace0 \uc788\ub2e4\uace0 \uc598\uae30\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud639\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc120\ud0dd\ud55c \ub300\ud559\uc774 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uace0\uc720\ud55c \ubc30\uacbd\uc744 \uac00\uc9c0\uace0 \uae30\uc5ec\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc73c\uba70, \ubcf8\uc778\uc5d0\uac8c \uc801\ud569\ud558\ub2e4\uace0 \uc0dd\uac01\ub418\ub294 \uc804\ubb38 \ud504\ub85c\uadf8\ub7a8 \ub610\ub294 \ud559\uc0dd \uc870\uc9c1\uc744 \ubcf4\uc720\ud558\uace0 \uc788\ub2e4\uace0 \uc598\uae30\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud558\ub294 \ub300\ud559\uc5d0 \ub9de\uac8c \ub2f5\ubcc0\uc744 \uc870\uc815\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc9c4\uc9c0\ud558\uace0 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc870\uc0ac\ub97c \uc798 \ud588\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\uba70, \ub300\ud559\uc740 \ub2f9\uc5f0\ud788 \uadf8\ub7f0 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc744 \ucc3e\uace0 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud558\ub824\ub294 \ub300\ud559\uacfc \uc815\ud655\ud788 “\ub9de\ucd94\ub824\ub294” \ubc29\ubc95\uc744 \ucc3e\uc744 \uc218 \uc5c6\ub2e4\uace0 \uc808\ub9dd\ud558\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc138\uc694. \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc5d0\uac8c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc0b6\uc5d0\uc11c \uc774\ubbf8 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uacbd\ud5d8\uc744 \ud588\uace0, \uadf8\uac83\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \ub418\ub3cc\uc544\ubcf4\uc558\uc73c\uba70, \ub354 \ub9ce\uc740 \uac83\uc744 \ubc30\uc6b0\uace0 \uc2f6\uc5b4\ud558\ub294 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc784\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\uc138\uc694. \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c\uc5d0 \uae30\uc5ec\ud588\ub2e4\ub294 \uc0ac\uc2e4 \ub9cc\uc73c\ub85c\ub3c4 \ucda9\ubd84\ud55c \uacbd\uc6b0\uac00 \ub9ce\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. <\/p>\n\n\n\n \ub9e4\uc6b0 \uc815\uad50\ud55c \uc11c\ub860\uc774\ub098 \uacb0\ub860\uc774 \ud544\uc694 \uc5c6\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub54c\ub85c\ub294 \ub2e8\uc21c\ud558\uac8c \uc790\uae30 \ud655\uc2e0\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \ucda9\ubd84\ud788 \uc124\ub4dd\ub825\uc744 \uac00\uc9c8 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n […] The knowledge that I have gained from these three schools is something I will take with me far beyond college. My roommate, across-the-hall mates, and classmates have influenced my life as much as I hope to have impacted theirs. It is evident to me that they have helped me develop into the very much visible person I am today. <\/p>\n\n\n\n I have learned to step outside of my comfort zone, and I have learned that diversity is so much more than the tint of our skin. My small mustard-colored school taught me that opportunity and success only requires desire. I would be an asset to your college because as I continue on my journey to success, I will take advantage of every opportunity that is available to me and make sure to contribute as much as I can, too. Now I am visible. Now I am visible. Now I am visible, and I want to be seen.<\/p>\n\n\n\n \ucd9c\ucc98: \u201cNo Longer Invisible\u201d by Angelica, University of Chicago, published in 50 Successful IVY LEAGUE Application Essays Fourth Edition, Gen & Kelly Tanabe, SuperCollege, 2017.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc0b4\uc544\uc628 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud55c\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc815\uccb4\uc131\uc5d0 \uad00\ud55c \ud55c\uac00\uc9c0 \ud639\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\uac00\uc9c0 \ubd80\ubd84\uc5d0 \ucd08\uc810\uc744 \ub9de\ucd94\uace0, \uc774\uac83\uc774 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc0b6\uacfc \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \uc138\uacc4\uad00\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc601\ud5a5\uc744 \ubbf8\ucce4\ub294\uc9c0\ub97c \uc124\uba85\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uc758\ubbf8\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n <\/p>\n\n\n\n \uadf8\ub7ec\ub098 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc740 \ub3c4\ub300\uccb4 \ub0b4\uac00 \uc0b4\uc544\uc628 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ub9d0\ud574\uc57c \ud558\ub0d0\uace0 \ubb3c\uc744 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uccab\ubc88\uc9f8 \ub2e8\uacc4\ub294, \ub2e4\ub978 \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc758 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\uc5d0\uc11c \uc601\uac10\uc744 \uc5bb\uc740 \ub2e4\uc74c \uc81c3\uc790\uc758 \uad00\uc810\uc5d0\uc11c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc778\uc0dd\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc0dd\uac01\ud574\ubcf4\uace0, \uc5b4\ub5a4 \ubd80\ubd84\uc774 \ud765\ubbf8\ub85c\uc6b8 \uc218 \uc788\uc744\uc9c0 \uace0\ubbfc\ud574 \ubcf4\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n Diversity Essay\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \ub450 \uac00\uc9c0 \uac04\ub2e8\ud55c \uc811\uadfc \ubc29\uc2dd\uc740 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc18d\ud55c \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c\uc5d0 \uc911\uc810\uc744 \ub450\uac70\ub098 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc815\uccb4\uc131\uc5d0 \uc911\uc810\uc744 \ub450\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. <\/p>\n\n\n\n \uccab \ubc88\uc9f8 \ubc29\uc2dd\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \ud0dc\uc5b4\ub09c \uacf3 (\uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uadf8 \uacf3\uc5d0\uc11c \ubc30\uc6b4 \uac83)\uacfc \ub354 \uad00\ub828\uc774 \uc788\uace0, \ub450 \ubc88\uc9f8 \ubc29\uc2dd\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc744 \ud55c \uac1c\uc778\uc73c\ub85c \ubcf4\ub294 \uac83 \ubfd0\ub9cc \uc544\ub2c8\ub77c \uc0ac\ud68c\uc758 \uc77c\ubd80\ub85c\uc11c \ubcf4\ub294 \ubc29\uc2dd\uc5d0 \ucd08\uc810\uc744 \ub9de\ucd94\uace0 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n \uc7a0\uc2dc \uc2dc\uac04\uc744 \ub0b4\uc5b4 \uc549\uc544\uc11c \u200b\u200b\uc774 \ub450 \uac00\uc9c0 \uc811\uadfc \ubc29\uc2dd \uc911 \ub354 \ub04c\ub9ac\ub294 \ubc29\uc2dd\uc744 \uc0dd\uac01\ud574 \ubcf4\uc138\uc694. \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \ub098\uc11c\ub294 \uc544\ub798 \ud65c\ub3d9\ub4e4\uc744 \ud574\ubcf4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ucd94\ucc9c\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4 : \ubaa9\ub85d\uc744 \ub9cc\ub4e4\uac70\ub098 \ucc28\ud2b8\ub97c \uadf8\ub9ac\uac70\ub098 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\uc758 \ucd08\uc11d\uc774 \ub420 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ud0a4\uc6cc\ub4dc\ub4e4\uc744 \uc774\uc6a9\ud558\uc5ec \ud0a4\uc6cc\ub4dc\ub9f5\uc744 \ub9cc\ub4e4\uc5b4\ubcf4\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n \uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4, “\uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c” \uc811\uadfc \ubc29\uc2dd\uc744 \uc120\ud0dd\ud55c \uacbd\uc6b0 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc18d\ud55c \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c\uc758 \ubaa9\ub85d\uc73c\ub85c \uc2dc\uc791\ud558\uc2ed\uc2dc\uc624. \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c\ub294 \ub2e4\uc591\ud55c \uc694\uc778\ub4e4\uc5d0 \uc758\ud574 \uc815\uc758\ub420 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \uacf5\ud1b5 \uc7a5\uc18c: <\/strong>\uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc774 \uac19\uc774 \uc0b4\uac70\ub098 \ud568\uaed8 \uc77c\uc744 \ud55c\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \uacf5\ud1b5 \ud589\ub3d9: <\/strong>\uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc774 \ud568\uaed8 \ubb34\uc5b8\uac00\ub97c \ub9cc\ub4e4\uac70\ub098 \ud568\uaed8 \ubb38\uc81c\ub97c \ud574\uacb0\ud55c\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \uacf5\ud1b5 \uad00\uc2ec\uc0ac: <\/strong>\uad00\uc2ec\uc0ac, \ucde8\ubbf8 \ub610\ub294 \ubaa9\ud45c\ub97c \uae30\ubc18\uc73c\ub85c \ud558\uc5ec \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc774 \ubaa8\uc778\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \uacf5\ud1b5 \uc0c1\ud669: <\/strong>\uc6b0\uc5f0\uc774\ub098 \uc0ac\uac74\uc73c\ub85c \uc778\ud558\uc5ec \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc774 \ubaa8\uc778\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n \ubaa9\ub85d\uc744 \uc791\uc131\ud588\ub2e4\uba74 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc18d\ud55c \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c \uc911 \ud558\ub098\ub97c \uc120\ud0dd\ud558\uace0 \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0\uac8c \ubcf4\ub2e4 \uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc778 \uc9c8\ubb38\uc744 \ud558\uc2ed\uc2dc\uc624.<\/p>\n\n\n\n \uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4:<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \uadf8 \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c\uc758 \uc77c\uc6d0\uc73c\ub85c\uc11c \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744<\/em> \ud588\uc2b5\ub2c8\uae4c?<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c\ub97c \uc704\ud574 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc885\ub958\uc758 \ubb38\uc81c\ub4e4\uc744 \ud574\uacb0<\/em>\ud588\uc2b5\ub2c8\uae4c?<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc601\ud5a5\ub825<\/em>\uc774 \uc788\ub2e4\uace0 \ub290\uaf08\uc2b5\ub2c8\uae4c? \ubb34\uc5c7\uc774\uc5c8\uc2b5\ub2c8\uae4c?<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \ubc30\uc6b0\uac70\ub098 \uae68\ub2ec\uc558\uc2b5\ub2c8\uae4c?<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \ubc30\uc6b4 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc744 \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c \uc678\ubd80\uc5d0\uc11c\ub294 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc801\uc6a9\ud560 \uc608\uc815\uc785\ub2c8\uae4c?<\/p>\n\n\n\n \ubc18\uba74\uc5d0 “\uc815\uccb4\uc131”\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc4f0\uae30\ub85c \uc120\ud0dd\ud588\ub2e4\uba74, \uc790\uc2e0\uc744 \uc815\uc758\ud558\ub294 \ub2e4\uc591\ud55c \ubc29\uc2dd\uc744 \uc0dd\uac01\ud574 \ubcf4\uace0 \uc774\ub4e4\uc758 \ubaa9\ub85d\uc744 \uc791\uc131\ud558\uc2ed\uc2dc\uc624.<\/p>\n\n\n\n \uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4:<\/p>\n\n\n\n \ub098\uc758 \uc815\uccb4\uc131\uc740\u2026<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \uc218\ud559 \uc560\ud638\uac00<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \ubcf4\uc774\uc2a4\uce74\uc6b0\ud2b8 \ub9ac\ub354<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \ucde8\ubbf8\uc0dd\ud65c \uc791\uac00<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \ub3d9\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc758 \ubca0\uc774\ube44\uc2dc\ud130<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \ub2e4\uc591\ud55c \uc5b8\uc5b4\ub97c \uad6c\uc0ac\ud558\ub294 \uc0ac\ub78c<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \ud1b5\ucc30\ub825 \uc788\ub294 \uba85\uc5b8 \uc218\uc9d1\uac00<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \uc77c\ubcf8\uacc4 \ubbf8\uad6d\uc778<\/p>\n\n\n\n \u2022 \uac00\uc871, \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c \ud639\uc740 \uc0ac\ud68c\uc758 \uc5ec\ub7ec \uc9d1\ub2e8\uc5d0\uc11c \uc218\ud589\ud558\ub294 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc5ed\ud560<\/p>\n\n\n\n \uac00\ub2a5\ud55c \ud55c \ub9ce\uc740 \uc815\uccb4\uc131\ub4e4\uc744 \uc790\uc720\ub86d\uac8c \ub098\uc5f4\ud558\uc138\uc694. \uadf8\ub7f0 \ub2e4\uc74c \uc774\ub7ec\ud55c \uc815\uccb4\uc131\ub4e4\uc744 \ud1b5\ud574 \ubc1d\ud600\uc9c0\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ub2e4\uc591\ud55c \uba74\ubaa8\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc0dd\uac01\ud574 \ubcf4\uc138\uc694. <\/p>\n\n\n\n \uadf8\ub7f0 \ubaa8\uc2b5\ub4e4 \uc911 \ud558\ub098\uac00 \ub2e4\ub978 \uac83\ubcf4\ub2e4 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc5d0\uac8c \ub354 \uc911\uc694\ud55c\uc9c0, \ud639\uc740 \uc228\uae30\uace0 \uc2f6\uc740 \uac83\uc774 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0 (\uc788\ub2e4\uba74 \uc65c), \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc5b4\ub824\uc6c0\uc774 \uc788\uc9c0\ub294 \uc54a\uc558\ub294\uc9c0 (\uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4, \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc774\ub7ec\ud55c \ubaa8\uc2b5\ub4e4\uc744 \ubc1b\uc544\ub4e4\uc774\ub294 \uacfc\uc815\uc5d0\uc11c \ud639\uc740 \uadf8\ub7ec\ud55c \ubaa8\uc2b5\ub4e4\uc774 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc18d\ud55c \ubb38\ud654\ub098 \uc0ac\ud68c\uc5d0\uc11c \uc804\ud600 \ubc1b\uc544\ub4e4\uc5ec\uc9c0\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc544\uc11c) \uc0dd\uac01\ud574 \ubcf4\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n \uc804\ubc18\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc774 Diversity Essay\uc5d0\uc11c \ucc3e\ub294 \uac00\uc7a5 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \ud2b9\uc9d5\uc740 \uc9c4\uc815\uc131\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub4e4\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \ub204\uad6c\uc778\uc9c0, SAT\uc640 \uc131\uc801 \uc678\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \ubaa8\uc2b5\uc744 \uac00\uc9c0\uace0 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0, \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \ud604\uc7ac \uc774\ub7f0 \ubaa8\uc2b5\uc744 \uac00\uc9c0\uac8c \ub418\uc5c8\ub294\uc9c0 \uc54c\uace0 \uc2f6\uc5b4\ud558\uba70 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc774 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc744 \uae30\uc5b5\ud560 \ub9cc\ud558\uac8c \ud558\ub294\uc9c0 \uc54c\uace0 \uc2f6\uc5b4\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. (\uc774\ub4e4\uc740 \ud569\uaca9\uc2dc\ud0ac \uc0ac\ub78c\uc744 \uacb0\uc815\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uc218\ucc9c \uac1c\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc77d\uc5b4\uc57c \ud55c\ub2e4\ub294 \uc0ac\uc2e4\uc744 \uae30\uc5b5\ud558\uc138\uc694!)<\/p>\n\n\n\n \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\ub4e4\uc740 \ub610\ud55c \ub204\uad6c\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uac00 \uc9c4\uc815\uc131\uc774 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c “\uc721\uac10”\uc744 \uac00\uc9c0\uace0 \uc788\uc744 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc774 \uae00\uc5d0 \uc124\uba85\ub41c \ucc3d\uc758\uc801\uc778 \uacfc\uc815\ub4e4\uc744 \uac70\uce5c\ub2e4\uba74, \ubcf8\uc778\uc758 \uc9c4\uc9dc \ubaa8\uc2b5\uacfc \uc194\uc9c1\ud568\uc744 \ub04c\uc5b4\ub0b4\ub294 \ubc29\ud5a5\uc73c\ub85c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ubc30\uacbd\uacfc \uacbd\ud5d8\ub4e4\uc744 \uc790\uc5f0\uc2a4\ub7fd\uac8c \ub418\ub3cc\uc544\ubcfc \uc218 \uc788\uc744 \uac83\uc774\uace0, \uadf8\uc800 \ub2e8\uc21c\ud558\uac8c \u201c\uba4b\uc9c4 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\u201d\ub97c \ub9cc\ub4dc\ub294 \uac83\uc5d0\uc11c \ubc97\uc5b4\ub0a0 \uc218 \uc788\uc744 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n <\/p>\n\n\n\n \uc5ec\uc804\ud788 Diversity Essay\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud558\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574\uc11c \uc798 \ubaa8\ub974\uaca0\ub2e4\uba74, \uc5ec\ub7ec \ub300\ud559\ub4e4\uc774 \uc2e4\uc81c \uc785\ud559\uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\uc5d0 \ud3ec\ud568\ud558\ub294 Diversity Essay \ud504\ub86c\ud504\ud2b8\ub97c \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf4\uaca0\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n <\/p>\n\n\n\n University of California\ub294 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uc5d0\uac8c 8\uac1c\uc758 \ud504\ub86c\ud504\ud2b8( \u201cpersonal insight questions<\/a>\u201d\ub77c\uace0 \ubd80\ub984) \uc911\uc5d0\uc11c 4\uac1c\ub97c \uc120\ud0dd\ud558\uac8c \ud558\uace0, \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc5d0\uac8c \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc54c\ub9ac\uace0 \uc2f6\uc740 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc744 \ub2f4\uc544 \uac01\uac01 \ucd5c\ub300 350\ub2e8\uc5b4\uc758 \uc9e7\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 4\ud3b8\uc744 \uc81c\ucd9c\ud558\ub3c4\ub85d \uc694\uad6c\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774 \ud504\ub86c\ud504\ud2b8\ub4e4\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \ucc3d\uc758\uc801 \uce21\uba74(2\ubc88), \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uac00\uc7a5 \ub6f0\uc5b4\ub09c \uc7ac\ub2a5(3\ubc88), \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc131\uaca9\uc758 \ub2e4\ub978 \uce21\uba74\ub4e4\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \ubb3b\uc9c0\ub9cc \uadf8 \uc911 \ub450 \uac00\uc9c0(5\ubc88\uacfc 7\ubc88)\ub294 “Diversity Essay \ud504\ub86c\ud504\ud2b8”\ub77c\uace0 \ubd80\ub97c \uc218 \uc788\uc744 \ub9cc\ud55c \uc9c8\ubb38\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5ec\uae30\uc11c\ub294 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \ub9c8\uc8fc\ud55c \uac00\uc7a5 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \ub3c4\uc804\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud558\uace0, \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c\ub97c \ub354 \ub098\uc740 \uacf3\uc73c\ub85c \ub9cc\ub4e4\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \ubcf8\uc778\uc774 \ud55c \uc77c\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n University of California<\/a>\uc6f9\uc0ac\uc774\ud2b8\uc5d0\uc11c\ub294 \ud504\ub86c\ud504\ud2b8\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc124\uba85\uacfc \uc124\ub4dd\ub825 \uc788\ub294 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud558\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc870\uc5b8\ub3c4 \uc81c\uacf5\ud558\ubbc0\ub85c \uc774 \uacf3\uc5d0 \uc785\ud559\ud558\ub824\ub294 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc740 \ud559\uad50\uac00 \uc81c\uacf5\ud558\ub294 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc9c0\uce68\ub4e4\uc744 \uc798 \ud65c\uc6a9\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n <\/p>\n\n\n\n \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc9c1\uba74\ud588\uc5c8\ub358 \uac00\uc7a5 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \ub3c4\uc804\uacfc \uc774 \ub3c4\uc804\uc744 \uadf9\ubcf5\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \ud588\ub358 \uc77c\ub4e4\uc744 \uae30\uc220\ud558\uc138\uc694. \uc774 \ub3c4\uc804\uc774 \ubcf8\uc778\uc758 \ud559\uc5c5\uc801\uc778 \uc131\ucde8\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc601\ud5a5\uc744 \ubbf8\ucce4\uc2b5\ub2c8\uae4c?<\/p>\n\n\n\n (Describe the most significant challenge you have faced and the steps you have taken to overcome this challenge. How has this challenge affected your academic achievement?)<\/p>\n\n\n\n \ub3c4\uc804\uc740 \uc9c0\uadf9\ud788 \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \uac83\uc77c \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uace0, \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c\ub098 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0\uc11c \uc9c1\uba74\ud55c \uac83\uc77c \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8 \ub3c4\uc804\uc774 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc5d0\uac8c \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uc774\uc720\ub294 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc785\ub2c8\uae4c? \uc774\uac83\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc9c1\uba74\ud55c \uc7a5\uc560\ubb3c\uacfc \uadf8 \uacbd\ud5d8\ub4e4\uc744 \ud1b5\ud574 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \ubc30\uc6e0\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud560 \uc88b\uc740 \uae30\ud68c\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5b4\ub824\uc6c0\uc744 \uadf9\ubcf5\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc758 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc744 \ubc1b\uc558\uc2b5\ub2c8\uae4c? \uc544\ub2c8\uba74 \ud63c\uc790 \uadf9\ubcf5\ud588\uc744\uae4c\uc694?<\/p>\n\n\n\n <\/p>\n\n\n\n \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \ud559\uad50\ub098 \uc9c0\uc5ed \uc0ac\ud68c\ub97c \ub354 \ub098\uc740 \uacf3\uc73c\ub85c \ub9cc\ub4e4\uae30 \uc704\ud574\uc11c \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc77c\uc744 \ud588\ub098\uc694? (What have you done to make your school or your community a better place?)<\/p>\n\n\n\n \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c\ub97c \uc18c\uaddc\ubaa8 \ub2e8\uc704, \ud300 \ub610\ub294 \uc7a5\uc18c\ub97c \ud3ec\ud568\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uc6a9\uc5b4\ub85c \uc0dd\uac01\ud558\uc138\uc694. \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uace0\ub4f1\ud559\uad50, \uace0\ud5a5 \ub610\ub294 \uc9d1\uacfc \uac19\uc774 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc0dd\uac01\ub300\ub85c \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c\ub97c \uc815\uc758\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\uacf3\uc5d0\uc11c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5ed\ud560\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud558\uc138\uc694. \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c\uc5d0\uc11c \ud574\uacb0\ud558\uace0 \uc2f6\uc740 \ubb38\uc81c\uac00 \uc788\uc5c8\ub098\uc694? \uc65c \ud574\uacb0\ud558\uace0 \uc2f6\uc5c8\ub098\uc694? \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ud55c \ub178\ub825\uc744 \ud1b5\ud574\uc11c\ub294 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \ubc30\uc6e0\ub098\uc694?<\/p>\n\n\n\n <\/p>\n\n\n\n Duke University<\/a>\ub294 Duke\uc5d0 \uad00\ub828\ub41c \uc9c8\ubb38\uc5d0 \ub2f5\ud558\ub294 \uc9e7\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \ubb3c\ub860 \ucee4\uba3c\uc571(Common Application) \ud504\ub86c\ud504\ud2b8 \ub610\ub294 Coalition Application \ud504\ub86c\ud504\ud2b8 \uc911 \ud558\ub098\uc5d0 \ub300\ud558\uc5ec \ud55c \ud398\uc774\uc9c0 \ubd84\ub7c9\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub3c4 \uc694\uad6c\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n \ub610\ud55c, \uc6d0\ud55c\ub2e4\uba74 (\ud544\uc218\ub294 \uc544\ub2d8) \uac1c\uc778\uc758 \uace0\uc720\ud55c \uacbd\ud5d8, \uc2e0\ub150 \ubc0f \uac00\uce58, \ubc30\uacbd \ubc0f \uc815\uccb4\uc131\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ubb3b\ub294 4\uac1c\uc758 \ud504\ub86c\ud504\ud2b8\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \ucd5c\ub300 2\uac1c\uae4c\uc9c0 \uc9e7\uc740 \ub2f5\ubcc0\uc744 \uc81c\ucd9c\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub2e4\uc591\uc131 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub97c \ub2f4\uc740 \uc774\ub7ec\ud55c \uc9e7\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uac01\uac01\uc758 \ucd5c\ub300 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218\ub294 250\ub2e8\uc5b4\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n We seek a diverse student body that embodies the wide range of human experience. In that context, we are interested in what you\u2019d like to share about your lived experiences and how they\u2019ve influenced how you think of yourself.<\/p>\n\n\n\n We believe there is benefit in sharing and sometimes questioning our beliefs or values; who do you agree with on the big important things, or who do you have your most interesting disagreements with? What are you agreeing or disagreeing about?<\/p>\n\n\n\n What has been your best academic experience in the last two years, and what made it so good?<\/p>\n\n\n\n Duke\u2019s commitment to diversity and inclusion includes sexual orientation, gender identity, and gender expression. If you\u2019d like to share with us more about your identity in this context, feel free to do so here.<\/p>\n\n\n\n <\/p>\n\n\n\n Duke University\ub294 \ucea0\ud37c\uc2a4\ub97c \ub2e4\uc591\ud558\uace0 \uc57c\ub9dd, \ud638\uae30\uc2ec, \uc7ac\ub2a5, \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \ub048\uae30\uac00 \uc790\ub784 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uacf3\uc73c\ub85c \ub9cc\ub4e4\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \ub2e4\uc591\ud55c \uacbd\ud5d8, \ubc30\uacbd, \uad00\uc2ec \ubc0f \uc758\uacac\uc744 \uac00\uc9c4 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc744 \ucc3e\uace0 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc785\ud559 \uc704\uc6d0\ud68c\ub294 “\uadf8\ub3d9\uc548 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uac00\uc84c\ub358 \uae30\ud68c\uc640 \uc704\uae30 \uc548\uc5d0\uc11c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc131\ucde8\ud55c \uac83\ub4e4\uc744 \uace0\ub824\ud560 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \u201d \uadf8\ub7ec\ub2c8 \uaf2d \uadf8\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \ud574 \uc8fc\uc138\uc694!<\/p>\n\n\n\n <\/p>\n\n\n\n University of Washington<\/a>\uc740 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc131\uaca9\uc774 \ub9cc\ub4e4\uc5b4\uc9c0\uac8c\ub41c \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uae34 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774(650\ub2e8\uc5b4), \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ub098\uace0 \uc790\ub780 \uc138\uacc4\uc640 \uadf8 \uacb0\uacfc \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ubbf8\ub798 \ub300\ud559\uc758 \ub2e4\uc591\uc131\uc5d0 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub420 \uc218 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0\ub97c \uc124\uba85\ud558\ub294 \uc9e7\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774(300\ub2e8\uc5b4)\ub97c \uc694\uad6c\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc9c0\uae08\uae4c\uc9c0 \uad50\uc721\uc744 \ubc1b\uc73c\uba70 \uacbd\ud5d8\ud55c \uc7a0\uc7ac\uc801\uc778 \uc5b4\ub824\uc6c0\uc774\ub098 \ud55c\uacc4\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc744 \ucd94\uac00 \uc815\ubcf4\ub85c \uc81c\ucd9c\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. The University of Washington \uc2e0\uc785\uc0dd \uc791\ubb38 \uc6f9\uc0ac\uc774\ud2b8\ub294 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud558\uace0 \ud3ec\ub9f7\ud305\ud558\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95(\ubc0f \uc798\ubabb \ud558\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95)\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uba87 \uac00\uc9c0 \ud301\ub3c4 \uc81c\uacf5\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc131\uaca9\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\uac70\ub098 \uadf8 \uc131\uaca9\uc774 \ub9cc\ub4e4\uc5b4\uc9c0\ub294 \ub370 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub41c \uacbd\ud5d8\uc744 \uc124\uba85\ud558\uba74\uc11c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc0b6\uc758 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \ub4e4\ub824\uc8fc\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n (Tell a story from your life, describing an experience that either demonstrates your character or helped to shape it.)<\/p>\n\n\n\n \uc6b0\ub9ac\uc758 \uac00\uc871\uacfc \uc9c0\uc5ed \uc0ac\ud68c\ub294 \uc885\uc885 \uc6b0\ub9ac\uc640 \uc6b0\ub9ac\uac00 \uc18d\ud55c \uc138\uacc4\ub97c \uc815\uc758\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c\ub294 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \ubb38\ud654 \uadf8\ub8f9, \ub300\uac00\uc871, \uc885\uad50 \uadf8\ub8f9, \ub3d9\ub124 \ub610\ub294 \ud559\uad50, \uc2a4\ud3ec\uce20 \ud300 \ub610\ub294 \ud074\ub7fd, \ub3d9\ub8cc \ub4f1\uc744 \ud3ec\ud568\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \ud0dc\uc5b4\ub09c \uc138\uacc4\uc640 \uadf8 \uacb0\uacfc \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 UW\uc5d0 \ub2e4\uc591\uc131\uc744 \ub354\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc744\uc9c0\ub97c \uc124\uba85\ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n (Our families and communities often define us and our individual worlds. Community might refer to your cultural group, extended family, religious group, neighborhood or school, sports team or club, co-workers, etc. Describe the world you come from and how you, as a product of it, might add to the diversity of the UW.)<\/p>\n\n\n\n \uc774 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \ud544\uc218\ub294 \uc544\ub2c8\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uc911\uc694\ud558\ub2e4\uace0 \uc0dd\uac01\ud558\ub294 \ubd80\ubd84\uc774 \uc788\ub2e4\uba74 \ucd94\uac00\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uae30\uc7ac\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4 \ub2e4\uc74c\uacfc \uac19\uc740 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc744 \ub2f4\uc744 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n – \uad50\uc721\uc744 \ubc1b\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \uc5b4\ub824\uc6c0\uc744 \uacaa\uc740 \uc801\uc774 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n – \uc9c1\uc7a5\uc774\ub098 \uac00\uc871\uc758 \uc758\ubb34\ub85c \uc778\ud574 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ud65c\ub3d9\ub4e4\uc5d0 \uc81c\ud55c\uc774 \uc788\uc5c8\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n – \ub2e4\ub154\ub358 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0\uc11c \ub3c5\ud2b9\ud55c \uaddc\uc81c\ub098 \uae30\ud68c\ub97c \uacbd\ud5d8\ud588\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n <\/p>\n\n\n\n University of Washington\uc758 \uc0ac\uba85\uc740 “\ud65c\ubc1c\ud55c \uad50\uc721 \ud658\uacbd”\uc744 \uc870\uc131\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \ucea0\ud37c\uc2a4\uc5d0 \ub2e4\uc591\ud55c \uad00\uc810, \ubc30\uacbd \ubc0f \uc7ac\ub2a5\uc744 \uac00\uc838\ub2e4\uc8fc\ub294 \ub6f0\uc5b4\ub09c \uc9c0\uc801 \ub2a5\ub825\uc744 \uac00\uc9c4 \ud559\ubd80\uc0dd\uc744 \ub4f1\ub85d\ud558\ub3c4\ub85d \ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. Diversity Essay\ub294 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc774\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uae30\uc5ec\ud560 \uac83\uc778\uc9c0 \uc54c\ub9b4 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uae30\ud68c\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n <\/p>\n\n\n\n University of Michigan<\/a>\uc5d0\uc11c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc18d\ud55c \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c\ub4e4 (\uc9c0\uc5ed, \uc885\uad50, \ubbfc\uc871, \uc18c\ub4dd \uc218\uc900 \ub610\ub294 \uae30\ud0c0 \uc694\uc778\uc73c\ub85c \uc815\uc758\ub428) \uc911 \ud558\ub098\ub97c \uc124\uba85\ud558\ub294 Diversity Essay\ub294 Common Application \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc774\uc678\uc5d0 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uac00 \ubc18\ub4dc\uc2dc \uc81c\ucd9c\ud574\uc57c \ud558\ub294 \ub450 \uac00\uc9c0 \ud544\uc218 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc911 \ud558\ub098\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc740 \uacf5\ud1b5\ub41c \uc9c0\uc5ed, \uc885\uad50, \ubbfc\uc871, \uc18c\ub4dd \uc218\uc900, \uc694\ub9ac, \uad00\uc2ec\uc0ac, \uc778\uc885, \uc774\ub150 \ub610\ub294 \uc9c0\uc801 \uc7ac\uc0b0\uc73c\ub85c \uc815\uc758\ub418\ub294 \ub2e4\uc591\ud55c \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0\/\ub610\ub294 \uadf8\ub8f9\uc5d0 \uc18d\ud574 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc18d\ud55c \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c \uc911 \ud558\ub098\ub97c \uc120\ud0dd\ud558\uace0, \uadf8 \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c\uc640 \uadf8 \uc548\uc5d0\uc11c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc704\uce58\uc5d0 \ub300\ud558\uc5ec \uc124\uba85\ud558\uc2ed\uc2dc\uc624.<\/p>\n\n\n\n (Everyone belongs to many different communities and\/or groups defined by (among other things) shared geography, religion, ethnicity, income, cuisine, interest, race, ideology, or intellectual heritage. Choose one of the communities to which you belong, and describe that community and your place within it.)<\/p>\n\n\n\n <\/p>\n\n\n\n University of Michigan\uc740 “\uac01 \ud559\uc0dd\uc744 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uba74\uc5d0\uc11c \ub6f0\uc5b4\ub098\uac70\ub098 \uc644\ubcbd\ud55c \uc0ac\ub78c”\uc73c\ub85c \ubcf4\ub294 \uac83\uc5d0 \uc790\ubd80\uc2ec\uc744 \uac16\uace0 \uc788\uc73c\uba70, \uac00\uc7a5 \ub192\uc740 \uc2dc\ud5d8 \uc810\uc218\ub97c \ubc1b\uc740 \ud559\uc0dd \ubfd0\ub9cc \uc544\ub2c8\ub77c \ub2e4\uc591\ud55c \ubc30\uacbd, \uad00\uc2ec\uc0ac \ubc0f \uc5f4\uc815\uc744 \uac00\uc9c4 \uac00\uc7a5 \ud65c\ubc1c\ud55c \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc744 \ubaa8\uc9d1\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. <\/p>\n\n\n\n \ub610\ud55c, \ubaa8\ub4e0 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc744 \uc704\ud558\uc5ec \ud559\uc2b5\ud658\uacbd\uc758 \uc9c8\uc744 \ub192\uc774\uace0 \ucea0\ud37c\uc2a4 \ub0b4\uc758 \ub2e4\uc591\uc131\uc744 \ucc3d\ucd9c\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uc18c\uc678\uacc4\uce35 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\ub4e4\ub3c4 \uace0\ub824\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub9cc\uc57d \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc774 \uc124\uba85\uacfc \uc798 \ubd80\ud569\ud55c\ub2e4\uace0 \uc0dd\uac01\ud55c\ub2e4\uba74 \uc774\uc81c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \ub4e4\ub824\uc904 \ucc28\ub840\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4!<\/p>\n\n\n\n <\/p>\n\n\n\n Diversity Essay\uc758 \ud575\uc2ec\uc740 \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc5d0\uac8c \uc131\uc801\uacfc \ub808\uc96c\uba54, \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \ud559\ub825 \ub4a4\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc774 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0\ub97c \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\ub294 \uac83\uc774\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \ud53c\ud574\uc57c \ud560 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub294 \ub9ce\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc0ac\uc2e4 \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc5b8\uae09\uc744 \ud53c\ud558\ub294 \ubb38\uc81c\ub4e4\uc744 \ub418\ub824 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uad00\uc810\uc5d0\uc11c \uc774\uc57c\uae30 \ud574\ubcfc \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n \uc720\uc77c\ud558\uac8c \ud53c\ud574\uc57c \ud560 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc740 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc885\ub958\uc758 \ubc94\uc8c4 \ud589\uc704, \ud2b9\ud788 \uc544\ub3d9 \ud559\ub300 \ubc0f \ubc29\uce58\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8 \uc608\ub85c, The University of Washington \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ud504\ub86c\ud504\ud2b8 \uc6f9\uc0ac\uc774\ud2b8\uc5d0\ub294 \u201c18\uc138 \ubbf8\ub9cc \uc544\ub3d9\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \ud559\ub300\ub098 \ubc29\uce58\uac00 \ubc1c\uc0dd\ud588\ub2e4\uace0 \ubbff\uac8c \ud558\ub294 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc11c\ub958\ub4e4\uc740 \uc544\ub3d9 \ubcf4\ud638 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4 \ud639\uc740 \uacbd\ucc30\uc5d0 \uc2e0\uace0\ub418\uc5b4\uc57c \ud55c\ub2e4.\u201d \ub77c\uace0 \uba85\uc2dc\ub418\uc5b4 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n \uac04\ub2e8\ud788 \ub9d0\ud574\uc11c, \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc5d0\uac8c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uacfc\uc7a5\ud558\uac70\ub098 \uc2ec\uc9c0\uc5b4 \uafb8\uba70\ub0b8 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub77c\uace0 \ubbff\uc744 \ub9cc\ud55c \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uadfc\uac70\ub3c4 \uc81c\uacf5\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc73c\uba74\uc11c \ub208\uc5d0 \ub744\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc989, \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub294 \uc9c4\uc815\uc131\uc774 \uc788\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc218\ucc9c \uac1c\uc758 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\ub97c \uc77d\uc5b4\ubcf4\ub294 \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\ub4e4\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc2e4\uc81c \ubaa8\uc2b5\ubcf4\ub2e4 \ub354 \uba4b\uc9c0\uace0, \ub354 \uc131\uc219\ud558\uace0, \ub354 \ud765\ubbf8\ub86d\uac8c \ubcf4\uc774\ub824\uace0 \ud55c\ub2e4\uba74 \uadf8 \uc0ac\uc2e4\uc744 \uaff0\ub6ab\uc5b4 \ubcfc \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n \ub610\ud55c, \uc804\ubb38 \uc5d0\ub514\ud130\uac00 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc77d\uc5b4\ubcfc \uc218 \uc788\uac8c \ud558\uc5ec \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uac00 \uc798 \uc4f0\uc5ec\uc84c\uace0 \uc624\ub958\uac00 \uc5c6\ub294\uc9c0 \ud655\uc778\ud558\uc138\uc694. \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \ud558\uace0 \uc788\ub354\ub77c\ub3c4 \ud45c\uc900\uc801\uc774\uba74\uc11c \uaca9\uc2dd \uc788\ub294 \uc815\ud655\ud55c \uc601\uc5b4\ub85c \ud45c\ud604\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n \ud559\uad50\ub9c8\ub2e4 Diversity Essay\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc694\uad6c \uc0ac\ud56d\uc774 \ub2e4\ub985\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc785\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc774\ub098 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ud504\ub86c\ud504\ud2b8\uc5d0 \uad00\ub828\ub41c \uc138\ubd80\uc815\ubcf4\ub294 \uac01 \ud559\uad50 \uc785\ud559\ucc98 \uc6f9\uc0ac\uc774\ud2b8\uc5d0\uc11c \ucc3e\uc744 \uc218 \uc788\uc73c\ubbc0\ub85c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc4f0\uae30 \uc804\uc5d0 \uc694\uad6c\ud558\ub294 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218 \uc81c\ud55c\uc774\ub098 \uadf8 \ubc16\uc758 \uac00\uc774\ub4dc\ub77c\uc778\uc744 \ubc18\ub4dc\uc2dc \ud655\uc778\ud558\uc138\uc694!<\/p>\n\n\n\n \uc774\uc81c Diversity Essay\uac00 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc778\uc9c0 \uc54c\uc558\uace0, \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud558\ub824\uace0 \ud558\ub294 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \uc81c\ucd9c\ud574\uc57c \ud558\ub294 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uac00 \uc694\uad6c\ud558\ub294 \ubc14\ub97c \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ucc3e\ub294\uc9c0 \uc54c\uc558\uc73c\ubbc0\ub85c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc4f0\uae30 \uc804\uc5d0 \ubbf8\ub9ac \uacc4\ud68d\ud558\uace0, \ubaa8\ub4e0 \ub178\ub825\uc744 \uae30\uc6b8\uc77c \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ucda9\ubd84\ud55c \uc2dc\uac04\uc744 \uac00\uc838\ubcf4\uc138\uc694. \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0\uc758 Common App Essay \uc791\uc131 \ubc29\ubc95<\/a>\uc5d0 \uad00\ub828\ub41c \uae00\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc4f0\uae30 \uc704\ud55c \ud0c0\uc784\ub77c\uc778\uacfc \ucc3d\uc758\uc801\uc778 \uc900\ube44 \ubc29\ubc95\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc544\uc774\ub514\uc5b4\ub97c \uc81c\uacf5\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. <\/p>\n\n\n\n \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc5b8\uc81c\ub098\ucc98\ub7fc, \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0\uc758 \uc804\ubb38\uc801\uc778 \uc720\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc601\uc5b4 \uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4<\/a>\ub294 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c \uc804\uccb4\uc5d0 \uc624\ub958\uac00 \uc5c6\uace0, \ubcf8\uc778\uc774 \uc120\ud0dd\ud55c \ud559\uad50\uc758 \uc785\ud559 \uc704\uc6d0\ud68c\uc5d0 \uc2a4\uc2a4\ub85c\uc758 \uc7a0\uc7ac\ub825\uc744 \ucd5c\ub300\ud55c \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc904 \uc218 \uc788\ub3c4\ub85d \ub3c4\uc640\ub4dc\ub9bd\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud574\uc678 \ub300\ud559\uc6d0 SOP \uc791\uc131<\/a> \ub610\ub294 \uc804\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc808\ucc28<\/a>\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \ub354 \ub9ce\uc740 \ud559\uc220 \uc790\ub8cc\ub97c \ubcf4\ub824\uba74 \uc720\ud559 \uc5b4\ub4dc\ubbf8\uc158 \uc790\ub8cc<\/a> \uc6f9\uc0ac\uc774\ud2b8\ub97c \ubc29\ubb38\ud574 \ubcf4\uc138\uc694. \uc774 \uacf3\uc5d0\uc11c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131 \uae30\uc220\uc744 \ud5a5\uc0c1\uc2dc\ud0a4\ub294 \ub370 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub418\ub294 \ub354 \ub9ce\uc740 \uae00\uacfc \uc601\uc0c1\uc790\ub8cc\ub4e4\uc744 \ubcfc \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n <\/p>\n\n\n\n \u25b6 \uae00 \uc791\uc131 \ud6c4 \uc804\ubb38\uac00\uc758 \uac80\ud1a0<\/strong>\uac00 \ud544\uc694\ud558\uc2dc\ub2e4\uba74, \uc5b8\uc81c\ub4e0\uc9c0 \uc800\ud76c \uc601\ubb38\uad50\uc815<\/a> \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4\ub97c \uc774\uc6a9\ud574\ubcf4\uc138\uc694!<\/p>\n\n\n\n \ud504\ub9ac\ubbf8\uc5c4 \uc720\ud559\uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c \uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4<\/a>\u2502\uc5b4\ub4dc\ubbf8\uc158 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4<\/a>\u2502\uc5b4\ub4dc\ubbf8\uc158 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ubc88\uc5ed \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":" Diversity Essay\ub294 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc778\uc9c0 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\uba74\uc11c\ub3c4 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc18d\ud55c \ucee4\ubba4\ub2c8\ud2f0\uc640 \ub354 \ud070 \uc138\uacc4\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc2dd\uc73c\ub85c \uc801\uc751\ud558\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \uc911\uc810\uc744 \ub450\uace0 \uc368\uc57c\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub300\ud559\uc785\ud559\uc744 \uc704\ud574 \uc4f0\ub294 Diversity Essay\ub780 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc778\uac00\uc694? Diversity Essay\ub294 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uc758 \ubc30\uacbd, \uc815\uccb4\uc131, \ubb38\ud654, \uc2e0\ub150 \ub610\ub294 \uc18c\uc18d\ub41c \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c\uc640\uc758 \uad00\uacc4\uc5d0 \ucd08\uc810\uc744 \ub9de\ucd98 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ud1b5\ud574 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\ub97c \ub3c5\ud2b9\ud558\uac8c \ub9cc\ub4dc\ub294 \uc694\uc778\uacfc \uadf8\ub4e4\uc774 \uc785\ud559 \ud6c4 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc0c8\ub85c\uc6b4 \uad00\uc810\uc774\ub098 \ud1b5\ucc30\ub825\uc744 […]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":8,"featured_media":2520,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":[],"categories":[9,23],"tags":[993,50,59,120,994,788,302,995,61,93],"yoast_head":"\nDiversity Essay \uc608\uc2dc \ubc0f \uc8fc\uc81c<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n
\ub2e4\uc591\uc131\uc774\ub77c\ub294 \uac00\uce58\uac00 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc815\uccb4\uc131\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc601\ud5a5\uc744 \ub07c\uce58\ub098\uc694?<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n
Cornell University<\/a>\uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uc758 Diversity Essay\uc5d0\uc11c \ubc1c\ucdcc\ud55c \uc608\uc2dc<\/h4>\n\n\n\n
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MIT(Massachussetts Institutite of Technology)<\/a>\uc5d0 \uc81c\ucd9c\ub41c (\ud569\uaca9) \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc608\uc2dc<\/h4>\n\n\n\n
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University of Chicago<\/a>\uc5d0 \ud569\uaca9\ud55c Angelica\ub77c\ub294 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uac00 \uc791\uc131\ud55c \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc608\uc2dc<\/h4>\n\n\n\n
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\ub300\ud559\uc5d0\uc11c \uc81c\uacf5\ud558\ub294 Diversity Essay \uc0d8\ud50c \ud504\ub86c\ud504\ud2b8<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n
Diversity Essay \uc0d8\ud50c #1:<\/strong> University of California<\/strong><\/a><\/h3>\n\n\n\n
UC \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ud504\ub86c\ud504\ud2b8 #5.<\/strong> <\/h4>\n\n\n\n
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UC \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ud504\ub86c\ud504\ud2b8 #7.<\/strong> <\/h4>\n\n\n\n
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Diversity Essay \uc0d8\ud50c #2:<\/strong> Duke University<\/strong><\/a><\/h3>\n\n\n\n
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Diversity Essay \uc0d8\ud50c #3:<\/strong> University of Washington<\/strong><\/a><\/h3>\n\n\n\n
\uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ud504\ub86c\ud504\ud2b8 <\/strong>[\ud544\uc218] <\/h4>\n\n\n\n
\uc9e7\uc740 \uae00 \ud504\ub86c\ud504\ud2b8<\/strong> [\ud544\uc218] <\/h4>\n\n\n\n
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Diversity Essay \uc0d8\ud50c #4:<\/strong> University of Michigan<\/strong><\/a><\/h3>\n\n\n\n
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Diversity Essays\uc5d0 \uad00\ub828\ub41c \uc790\uc8fc \ubb3b\ub294 \uc9c8\ubb38<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n
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Diversity Essay\uc758 \uae38\uc774\ub294 \uc5b4\ub290 \uc815\ub3c4\uac00 \uc801\ub2f9\ud55c\uac00\uc694?<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n
\ubbf8\uad6d \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559\uc744 \uc704\ud55c Diversity Essay \uc900\ube44 \uc804\ub7b5<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n