{"id":1149,"date":"2022-10-12T10:54:00","date_gmt":"2022-10-12T01:54:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.essayreview.co.kr\/?p=1149"},"modified":"2023-09-19T14:47:57","modified_gmt":"2023-09-19T05:47:57","slug":"writing-common-app-essay-prompts","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/writing-common-app-essay-prompts\/","title":{"rendered":"2022-2023 \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774(common app essay) \uc791\uc131\ubc95"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image size-full\"><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" width=\"935\" height=\"636\" src=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/04\/07142404\/%EC%BA%A1%EC%B2%98-1.jpg\" alt=\"\ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc885\ub958\uc758 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\uc2dc \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc911 \ub300\ud559 \uce21\uc774 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uc758 \uc801\uaca9\uc131\uc744 \ud310\ub2e8\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uac00\uc7a5 \ub9ce\uc774 \ubcf4\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \ubc14\ub85c \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774(common app essay)\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.\" class=\"wp-image-2966\" srcset=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/04\/07142404\/%EC%BA%A1%EC%B2%98-1.jpg 935w, https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/04\/07142404\/%EC%BA%A1%EC%B2%98-1-300x204.jpg 300w, https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/04\/07142404\/%EC%BA%A1%EC%B2%98-1-768x522.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 935px) 100vw, 935px\" \/><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<p>2022-2023 \ucee4\uba3c\uc571\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ud504\ub86c\ud2b8\ub294 <a href=\"https:\/\/www.commonapp.org\/apply\/essay-prompts\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">\ud504\ub86c\ud2b8 #4<\/a>\ub97c \uc81c\uc678\ud558\uace0 <a href=\"\/ko\/blog\/admission\/college-admissions-essay-why-there\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc791\ub144 \uc8fc\uc81c\uc640 \uac19\uc744 \uac83\uc774\ub77c\uace0 \ubc1c\ud45c<\/a>\ud588\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \ud504\ub86c\ud2b8\ub294 \uc9c0\ub09c 4\ub144\uac04 \ubcc0\ud654 \uc5c6\uc774 \uc9c4\ud589\ub418\uc5b4 \uc654\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \ud504\ub86c\ud2b8 \ud558\ub098\uac00 \ubcc0\uacbd\ub418\uc5c8\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \ub9e4\uc6b0 \ud070 \ubcc0\ud654\ub77c\uace0 \ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc774 \uc544\ud2f0\ud074\uc744 \ud1b5\ud574 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc774 \ud504\ub86c\ud2b8\ub97c \uc120\ud0dd\ud558\uace0 \ubd84\uc11d\ud558\uace0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \uac1c\uc694\ub97c \uc7a1\uace0 \uac04\uacb0\ud558\uba74\uc11c\ub3c4 \uc785\uc2dc \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc758 \ub208\uae38\uc744 \uc0ac\ub85c\uc7a1\uc744 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc744\uc9c0 \uc54c\uc544\ubd05\uc2dc\ub2e4. \uc774\ubc88 \uc544\ud2f0\ud074\uc5d0\ub294 \uac01 <a href=\"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.com\/?s=common+app+essay\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ud504\ub86c\ud2b8\uc5d0 \uad00\ud55c \uc138\ubd80\uc0ac\ud56d\uc744 \ub2f4\uc740 \uc678\ubd80 \uc544\ud2f0\ud074\uc758 \ub9c1\ud06c<\/a>\ub3c4 \ud3ec\ud568\ub418\uc5b4 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2>\ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uc65c \uc911\uc694\ud560\uae4c?<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\uad50\uc721 \uae30\uad00\uc5d0 \uc785\ud559\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud574\uc11c\ub294 \uc591\uc801 \uc815\ubcf4(\uc131\uc801 \ubc0f \uc2dc\ud5d8 \uc810\uc218)\uc640 \ub354\ubd88\uc5b4 \uc9c8\uc801 \uc694\uc18c\uac00 \ud544\uc694\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774 \uc911, \uc9c8\uc801 \uc694\uc18c\ub294 \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc758 \uc785\uc7a5\uc5d0\uc11c \uac1c\ubcc4 \ud559\uc0dd\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uce21\uc815\ud558\uae30 \ub354\uc6b1\ub354 \uc5b4\ub824\uc6b8 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc131\uc801, \uc2dc\ud5d8\uc810\uc218, \uad50\uacfc\ubaa9 \uc678 \ud65c\ub3d9 \ubaa8\ub450 <a href=\"\/ko\/blog\/admission\/college-admissions-essay-why-there\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc88b\uc740 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \uc785\ud559<\/a>\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \ud544\uc218\uc801\uc778 \uc694\uc18c\uc9c0\ub9cc \ud3c9\uade0\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uac01 \ub300\ud559\uc5d0\ub294 \ub9e4\ub144 5\uba85 \uc815\ub3c4\uc758 \uc2e0\uc785\uc0dd\uc744 \ubc1b\uc744 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uc5ec\uc720\uac00 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub530\ub77c\uc11c \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\ub294 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\ubcf4\ub2e4 \ub3cb\ubcf4\uc77c \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uc694\uc18c\uac00 \ubc18\ub4dc\uc2dc \ud544\uc694\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc785\uc2dc \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uac00 \ud569\uaca9 \uc5ec\ubd80\uc5d0 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uc774\uc720\uac00 \uc5ec\uae30\uc5d0 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ud1b5\ud574 \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc740 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uac00 \uc65c \uc774 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \ub4e4\uc5b4\uc640\uc57c \ud558\ub294\uc9c0 \uc54c \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc885\ub958\uc758 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\uc2dc \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc911 \ub300\ud559 \uce21\uc774 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uc758 \uc801\uaca9\uc131\uc744 \ud310\ub2e8\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uac00\uc7a5 \ub9ce\uc774 \ubcf4\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \ubc14\ub85c \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \ub300\ubd80\ubd84\uc758 supplemental essay \ubcf4\ub2e4 \uae38\uc774\uac00 \uae38\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc131\uaca9, \uc724\ub9ac\uc801 \uce21\uba74, \ud2b9\uc131\uacfc \ub300\ud559 \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \ubbf8\ub798\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uad00\uc810\uc744 \uc5b4\ud544\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uc88b\uc740 \uae30\ud68c\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uac00 \uc6d0\ud558\ub294 \ub300\ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \ub4e4\uc5b4\uac00\uae30 \uc704\ud574\uc11c \uac00\uc7a5 \ud544\uc694\ud55c \ubd80\ubd84\uc774 \uc88b\uc740 \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub77c\uace0 \ud574\ub3c4 \uacfc\uc5b8\uc774 \uc544\ub2d9\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub530\ub77c\uc11c \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uac00 \uc815\ud655\ud788 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc778\uc9c0 \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc774 \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ud1b5\ud574 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \ubd80\ubd84\uc744 \ubcf4\ub294\uc9c0 \uc544\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc911\uc694\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2>\ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 (common app essay) \uac1c\uc694<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc774 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574\uc11c \uac00\uc7a5 \uc815\ud655\ud558\uac8c \uc54c \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ud1b5\ub85c\ub77c\uace0 \ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ubb3c\ub860 SAT \uc810\uc218, \ud559\uc810 \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc810\uc218\ub3c4 \ud559\uc0dd\uc73c\ub85c\uc11c \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uac00 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc778\uc9c0 \uc54c \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uc9c0\ud45c\ub85c \uc791\uc6a9\ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uc758 \uc131\uaca9\uacfc \ud559\uc5c5\uc801 \uc7a0\uc7ac\ub825\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574\uc11c \uc88b\uc740 \uc2a4\ud1a0\ub9ac\ub97c \uc804\ub2ec\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ud1b5\ub85c\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub530\ub77c\uc11c \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ud1b5\ud574 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\ub4e4\ubcf4\ub2e4 \ud2b9\ubcc4\ud55c \uc810 \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud558\ub294 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \uc65c \uaf2d \ub4e4\uc5b4\uac00\uc57c \ud558\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc2a4\ud1a0\ub9ac\ub97c \uc798 \uc804\ub2ec\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud558\ub098\uc758 \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc5ec\ub7ec \ub300\ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \ubcf4\ub0bc \uac00\ub2a5\uc131\uc774 \ub192\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub530\ub77c\uc11c \ub2e4\uc591\ud55c \ud559\uad50\uc640 \ud504\ub85c\uadf8\ub7a8\uc5d0 \uc77c\uad00\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc801\uc6a9\ub420 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc73c\ub85c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc911\uc694\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4, \uc5ec\ub7ec \ud559\uad50\uc758 \uc758\uc608\uacfc\uc5d0 \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud55c\ub2e4\uace0 \ud574\uc11c \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc744 \uc628\uc804\ud788 \uc0ac\ud68c\uacfc\ud559 \ucabd\uc73c\ub85c \ucd08\uc810\uc744 \ub9de\ucd94\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \ucd94\ucc9c\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc989, \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uac00 \uc815\ub9d0\ub85c \uad00\uc2ec \uc788\ub294 \ubd80\ubd84 \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \ud559\uc0dd\uc73c\ub85c\uc11c \ub610 \uac1c\uc778\uc73c\ub85c\uc11c \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uc758 \ubaa9\ud45c \ub610\ud55c \ud3ec\ud568\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \u201cHow would you define yourself?\u201d\ub97c \ubb3c\uc5b4\ubcf4\ub294 \uc9c1\uc7a5 \uba74\uc811\uacfc\ub3c4 \ube44\uc2b7\ud558\ub2e4\ub294 \uc810\uc744 \uba85\uc2ec\ud569\uc2dc\ub2e4.\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2>\uc88b\uc740 \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 (common app essay) \uc791\uc131\ubc95<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc88b\uc740 \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \ubcf4\ud1b5 \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc744 \ud3ec\ud568\ud558\uace0 \uc788\ub294 \uacbd\uc6b0\uac00 \ub9ce\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc9c4\ubd80\ud55c \ub9d0\ucc98\ub7fc \ub4e4\ub9b4\uc9c0\ub3c4 \ubaa8\ub974\uaca0\uc9c0\ub9cc \uc9c4\uc2e4\ub418\uc9c0\ub9cc \ub208\uae38\uc744 \uc0ac\ub85c\uc7a1\uc744 \uc218 \uc788\uc744 \ub9cc\ud07c \ud765\ubbf8\ub86d\uac8c \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc778\uc9c0 \uc0dd\uc0dd\ud788 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc911\uc694\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ud1b5\ud574 \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \ubaa8\uc2b5\uc744 \ub9ce\uc774 \uc804\ub2ec\ud558\uba74 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\ub4e4\ubcf4\ub2e4 \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc758 \ub208\uc5d0 \ub4e4 \uac00\ub2a5\uc131\uc774 \ucee4\uc9d1\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc989, \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uac10\uc815, \uc0c1\ud669\uc744 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc811\uadfc\ud558\uace0 \ud310\ub2e8\ud558\ub294\uc9c0, \ubb38\uc81c\uc5d0 \ubd80\ub52a\ud614\uc744 \ub54c \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ud574\uacb0\ubc29\uc548\uc744 \ubd84\uc11d\ud558\ub294\uc9c0, \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uacfc\uc815\uc744 \ud1b5\ud574 \uc758\uc0ac\uacb0\uc815\uc744 \ub0b4\ub9ac\ub294\uc9c0 \ub4f1\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc0b4\uba74\uc11c \uadf9\ubcf5\ud588\ub358 \ubb38\uc81c\ub098 \uc5b4\ub824\uc6c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574\uc11c \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud558\ub294 \uac83\ub3c4 \uc88b\uc740 \ubc29\ubc95\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc88b\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud574\uc11c\ub294 \uc9c4\ubd80\ud55c \ub9d0\uc740 \ud53c\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ube44\uc2b7\ud55c \uc0c1\ud669\uc5d0 \uc788\ub294 \ub2e4\ub978 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\ub3c4 \ubed4\ud788 \ud560 \ubc95\ud55c \ub9d0\ub4e4 \ub9d0\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud574\uc678 \ud559\uc0dd\uc774 \uc790\uc8fc \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub294 \uc8fc\uc81c \uc911 \ud558\ub098\ub294 &#8216;\uc774\ubbfc\uc790 \uac00\uc815&#8217;\uc73c\ub85c \uc0c8\ub85c\uc6b4 \ub098\ub77c\ub098 \ubb38\ud654\uc5d0 \uc801\uc751\ud560 \ub54c \uacaa\uc5c8\ub358 \uc5b4\ub824\uc6c0\uc744 \ub2e4\ub8e8\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub9cc\uc57d\uc5d0 \ubbf8\uad6d \ub300\ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \uc785\uc2dc\ub97c \uc900\ube44\ud558\uace0 \uc788\ub294 \ud574\uc678 \ud559\uc0dd\uc774\ub77c\uba74 \uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub294 \ud53c\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub610 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc9c4\ubd80\ud55c \uc8fc\uc81c\ub294 \ubd80\uc0c1\uc744 \uacaa\uc5c8\uc744 \ub54c\uc758 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc8fc\uc81c \uc790\uccb4\uac00 \ub098\uc05c \uac83\uc740 \uc544\ub2c8\uc9c0\ub9cc \ub108\ubb34 \ub9ce\uc740 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc774 \uc774\ubbf8 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud55c \uc8fc\uc81c\uc774\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc758 \ub208\uc5d0 \ub4e4\uae30\uac00 \uc5b4\ub835\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\ub7f0 \uc8fc\uc81c \ub300\uc2e0 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \ud559\uc5c5 \ub610\ub294 \uc0ac\ud68c\uc801 \uc0c1\ud669\uc5d0\uc11c \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc131\uaca9\uc5d0 \uad00\ud55c \uc8fc\ub41c \uc7a5\uc810\uc744 \ub4dc\ub7ec\ub0b4\ub294 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 <a href=\"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.com\/5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc774 \uc790\uc8fc \ud558\ub294 \uc2e4\uc218<\/a>\ub4e4\ub3c4 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\ub7f0 \uc2e4\uc218\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574\uc11c \ubbf8\ub9ac \uc77d\uc5b4\ubcf8\ub2e4\uba74 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub97c \uc815\ud558\uace0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud560 \ub54c \uc2e4\uc218\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ud53c\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc88b\uc740 \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc4f8 \ub54c \ud544\uc694\ud55c \ub610 \ub2e4\ub978 \uae30\ubcf8\uc801\uc778 \ud301\uc5d0\ub294 \uc801\uc808\ud55c \uc5b8\uc5b4 \uc0ac\uc6a9\uc774 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uae00\uc758 \uc804\ub2ec\ub825\uacfc \uc18c\ud1b5\ub825\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\uae30 \uc704\ud574\uc11c \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc774\uc9c0\ub9cc \ucda9\ubd84\ud788 \uaca9\uc2dd \uc788\ub294 \uc5b8\uc5b4\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc911\uc694\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub2e4\uc591\ud55c \ubb38\uc7a5\uad6c\uc870\uc640 \ub2e8\uc5b4\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uace0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc804\ubc18\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc77c\uad00\ub41c \ud1a4\uc744 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc911\uc694\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \ubb34\uc5c7\ubcf4\ub2e4 \ub3c5\uc790\uc5d0\uac8c \uc9c4\uc2e4\ub418\uac8c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \uc804\ub2ec\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ub2a5\ub825\ub3c4 \uc911\uc694\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub3c5\uc790\uc640 \uad00\ub828\ud574\uc11c\ub294 \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud558\ub294 \ud559\uad50\uc758 \ubb38\ud654\ub97c \uc774\ud574\ud558\uace0 \uadf8 \ubb38\ud654\uc5d0 \uc801\uc808\ud55c \uc5b8\uc5b4\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc911\uc694\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4, <a href=\"https:\/\/www.nd.edu\/admissions\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Notre Dame<\/a> \ub610\ub294 <a href=\"https:\/\/www.byu.edu\/admissions\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Brigham Young University<\/a>\uc640 \uac19\uc774 \ube44\uad50\uc801 \ubcf4\uc218\uc801\uc774\uac70\ub098 \uc885\uad50\uc801\uc778 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud55c\ub2e4\uba74 <a href=\"https:\/\/www.emerson.edu\/admissions-aid\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Emerson College<\/a>\ub098 <a href=\"https:\/\/www.oberlin.edu\/admissions-and-aid\/arts-and-sciences\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Oberlin College<\/a>\uc640 \uac19\uc774 \ube44\uad50\uc801 \uc9c4\ubcf4\uc801\uc778 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0\uc11c\ub294 \ud6a8\uacfc\uc801\uc77c \ubc95\ud55c \ub17c\ub780\uc774 \uc788\ub294 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub294 \ud53c\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2>\ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774(common app essay)\uc758 \uae38\uc774<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub2e4\ub978 \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\uc2dc \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc640 \ub9c8\ucc2c\uac00\uc9c0\ub85c \ub9c8\uce58 \uc62c\ub9bc\ud53d \uc6b4\ub3d9\uc120\uc218\uac00 \uc62c\ub9bc\ud53d\uc744 \uc900\ube44\ud558\ub294 \uc790\uc138\ub85c \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc900\ube44\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ucd5c\ub300 \uae00\uc790\uc218\uc778 650 \ub2e8\uc5b4\ub97c \ucd5c\ub300\ud55c \uc798 \ud65c\uc6a9\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc911\uc694\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ub9c8\ubb34\ub9ac\ud588\uc744 \ub54c 50\uac1c \ub610\ub294 \uadf8 \uc774\uc0c1\uc758 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc5ec\uc720\uac00 \ub0a8\uc558\ub2e4\uba74 \ucc98\uc74c\uc73c\ub85c \ub3cc\uc544\uac00\uc11c \ub2e4\uc2dc \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc77d\uc5b4\ubcf4\uba70 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc131\uaca9\uc774\ub098 \uac00\uce58\ub97c \uc798 \ub098\ud0c0\ub0bc \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ub514\ud14c\uc77c\uc744 \ub354 \ucd94\uac00\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc744\uc9c0 \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf4\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. &#8220;\ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \ub9d0\ud558\ub294 \uac83\ubcf4\ub2e4 \ub0ab\ub2e4&#8221;\ub77c\ub294 \ub9d0\uc774 \uc788\ub4ef \ub3c5\uc790\uc5d0\uac8c \ucd5c\ub300\ud55c \uc790\uc138\ud558\uace0 \uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \uc804\ub2ec\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. 650 \ub2e8\uc5b4\uac00 \ubd80\uc871\ud558\uac8c \ub290\uaef4\uc9c8 \ub9cc\ud07c \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc778 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub530\ub77c\uc11c \ud604\uba85\ud558\uac8c \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc744 \uc798 \ubd84\ubc30\ud574\uc11c 650 \ub2e8\uc5b4\ub97c \ubaa8\ub450 \uc798 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub9cc\uc57d\uc5d0 650 \ub2e8\uc5b4\uac00 \ub118\uc5b4\uac08 \uacbd\uc6b0\uc5d0\ub294 <a href=\"\/ko\/blog\/admission\/how-to-shorten-your-college-application-essay\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uae38\uc774\ub97c \uc798 \uc904\uc77c \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95<\/a>\ub3c4 \uc874\uc7ac\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2>\ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc640 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc785\uc2dc \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \ucc28\uc774\uc810<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud558\uae30 \uc804\uc5d0 \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud558\ub824\ub294 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574\uc11c \ud30c\uc545\ud558\uace0 \uac01 \ud559\uad50\uac00 \uac1c\ubcc4\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc5b4\ub5a4 \ud3ec\ud2b8\ud3f4\ub9ac\uc624\ub97c \uc694\uad6c\ud558\ub294\uc9c0 \uc54c\uc544\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub098 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \ud559\uad50\uac00 \uc694\uad6c\ud558\ub294 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uc815\ubcf4\ub97c \ub193\uccd0\uc11c\ub294 \uc548 \ub418\ub2c8 \ub9d0\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\uc5d0\uc11c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc678 \ubd80\ubd84\ub3c4 \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf4\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc88b\uc740 GPA \uc810\uc218\uc640 \uc2dc\ud5d8 \uc810\uc218\ub97c \uac00\uc9c0\uace0 \uc788\ub2e4\uba74 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \uc774\ub7f0 \uc810\uc218\uc801\uc778 \uce21\uba74\uc744 \ub610 \ub2e4\ub8e8\ub294 \uac83\ubcf4\ub2e4 \uc131\uaca9\uc774\ub098 \ub2e4\ub978 \uad00\uc2ec\uc0ac\ub97c \ub2e4\ub8e8\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uac00 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc778\uc9c0 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uac00\uc7a5 \uc911\uc694\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uac1c\uc778\uc758 \uc131\uaca9\uc774\ub098 \uac00\uce58\uad00 \ub610\ud55c \ub2e8\uc21c\ud788 \uc131\uc801\uc774\ub098 \uc2dc\ud5d8 \uc810\uc218 \ub9cc\ud07c\uc774\ub098 \uc911\uc694\ud558\ub2c8\uae4c \ub9d0\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc774\uc640 \ube44\uc2b7\ud558\uac8c \ub9cc\uc57d\uc5d0 \ud559\uc810\uc774\ub098 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc2dc\ud5d8 \uc810\uc218\uac00 \uc88b\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc740 \ud3b8\uc774\ub77c\uba74 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \ubd80\ubd84\uc5d0 \uc5f4\uc815\uc774\ub098 \uad00\uc2ec\uc774 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574\uc11c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ucd94\ucc9c\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub610\ub294 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \ubc29\ubc95\uc744 \ud1b5\ud574\uc11c \ud559\uc5c5\uc5d0 \uc9d1\uc911\ud558\uace0 \uc131\uc801\uc744 \ud5a5\uc0c1\ud558\ub824\uace0 \ud588\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \ub178\ub825\uc744 \ub2e4\ub8e8\ub294 \uac83\ub3c4 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\ub4e4\uc740 \uc774\ub807\uac8c \ud559\uc5c5\uc801\uc778 \uc7a5\uc560\ubb3c\uc744 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ub6f0\uc5b4\ub118\uc5c8\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \uc120\ud638\ud558\ub294 \ud3b8\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uc758 \ud559\uc5c5 \uc724\ub9ac\ub098 \uac00\uce58\ub97c \uc798 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc904 \uc218 \uc788\ub2e4\uba74 \ub354\ub354\uc6b1 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc5d0\ub514\ud305<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub2f9\uc5f0\ud788 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0 \ubb38\ubc95, \ucca0\uc790, \uad6c\ub450\uc810 \uc624\ub958\ub97c \ub0a8\uaca8\uc11c\ub294 \uc548\ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc81c3\uc790\uac00 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc77d\uc5b4\ubcf4\uace0 \uc5d0\ub514\ud305\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \ucda9\ubd84\ud788 \uac00\ub2a5\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub2e4\ub978 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc5d0\uac8c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131\uc744 \ub300\uc2e0 \ub9e1\uae30\uc9c0 \uc54a\uace0 \uc724\ub9ac\uc801\uc73c\ub85c, \ub3c4\ub355\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc5d0\ub514\ud305\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95\uc774 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub300\ubd80\ubd84\uc758 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\ub294 \uac00\uc871\uc774\ub098 \uce5c\uad6c\uc5d0\uac8c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc77d\uc5b4\ubd10 \ub2ec\ub77c\uace0 \ubd80\ud0c1\ud558\ub294 \uacbd\uc6b0\uac00 \ub9ce\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub9ce\uc740 \ud574\uc678 \ud559\uc0dd\uc740 <a href=\"\/ko\/services\/admissions-editing\/english-essay\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc804\ubb38\uc801\uc778 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc5d0\ub514\ud305 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4<\/a>\ub97c \ud1b5\ud574 \ubb38\ubc95\uc774\ub098 \uad6c\ub450\uc810 \uc624\ub958\ub97c \uc218\uc815\ud558\uace0 \ub354 \ub098\uc544\uac00 \uae00\uc744 \ub354\uc6b1 \ub0ab\uac8c \uad50\uc815\ud558\ub294 \uacbd\uc6b0\uac00 \ub9ce\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5b4\ub5a4 \ubc29\ubc95\uc73c\ub85c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uad50\uc815\uc744 \ud558\ub358 \uc790\uc2e0 \uc678\uc758 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc5d0\uac8c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc77d\uc5b4\ubd10 \ub2ec\ub77c\uace0 \ubd80\ud0c1\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \ud56d\uc0c1 \ucd94\ucc9c\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3><strong>2022-2023 \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud55c \uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc778 \ud50c\ub79c<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc704\uc5d0\uc11c \uc5b8\uae09\ud588\ub4ef\uc774 \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \ubcf4\ud1b5 650\ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc774\ub0b4\ub85c \uc791\uc131\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc \uc6cc\ub4dc \uce74\uc6b4\ud2b8 \uc678\uc5d0\ub294 \uac01 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ubb38\uc81c\uc5d0 \uc5bc\ub9c8\ub098 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc2dc\uac04\uc744 \ud22c\uc790\ud574\uc57c \ud558\ub294\uc9c0 \ub610\ub294 \uae00\uc758 \uad6c\uc131\uc744 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc9dc\uc57c \ud560\uc9c0 \ub4f1\u00a0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131\uacfc \uad00\ub828\ub41c \uc790\uc138\ud55c \ubc29\ubc95\uc744 \uc81c\uc2dc\ud558\uc9c0\ub294 \uc54a\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub2e4\ud589\ud788 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0\ub294 \ud6a8\uacfc\uc801\uc778 \uc88b\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131\uacfc \uad50\uc815\uc5d0 \ucda9\ubd84\ud55c \uacbd\ud5d8\uc744 \uac00\uc9c0\uace0 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\ubc88 \uc139\uc158\uc5d0\uc11c\ub294 \ub2e4\uc74c\uacfc \uac19\uc740 \uc0ac\ud56d\uc744 \uc54c\uc544\ubcf4\ub3c4\ub85d \ud558\uaca0\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ol>\n<li><strong>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c \ube0c\ub808\uc778\uc2a4\ud1a0\ubc0d<\/strong>&nbsp;<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\uac00\uc7a5 \uc88b\uc740 \ud504\ub86c\ud2b8 \uc120\ud0dd<\/strong><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\uad6c\uc131\uacfc \ud750\ub984\uc774 \uc88b\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uad6c\uc131 \uc9dc\uae30<\/strong><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131\ubc95 &#8211; \ub0b4\uc6a9\uacfc \ud1a4\uc5d0 \uad00\ud55c \ud301<\/strong><\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<h3>1. \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c \ube0c\ub808\uc778\uc2a4\ud1a0\ubc0d<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\ube0c\ub808\uc778\uc2a4\ud1a0\ubc0d\uc740 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud558\ub294\ub370 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \ubd80\ubd84\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ud504\ub86c\ud2b8\ub97c \uc120\uc815\ud558\uae30 \uc804\uc5d0 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \ubd80\ubd84\uc5d0 \uac00\uc7a5 \ud070 \uc5f4\uc815\uc744 \uac00\uc9c0\uace0 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0 \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uadf8 \uc5f4\uc815\uc774 \uc815\uccb4\uc131\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc601\ud5a5\uc744 \ubbf8\ucce4\ub294\uc9c0 \ub4f1\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc0dd\uac01\ud574\ubcf4\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4 &#8216;\ucef4\ud4e8\ud130 \ud504\ub85c\uadf8\ub798\ubc0d&#8217;\uc744 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \uc8fc\ub41c \uac1c\ub150\uc73c\ub85c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uae30\ub85c \ud588\ub2e4\uba74 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc774\uc720\ub85c \ucf54\ub529\uc744 \uc88b\uc544\ud558\uac8c \ub418\uc5c8\ub294\uc9c0 \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \ucf54\ub529\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc5f4\uc815\uc73c\ub85c \uc5b4\ub5a4 \ud504\ub85c\uc81d\ud2b8\uc5d0 \ucc38\uc5ec\ud558\uac8c \ub418\uc5c8\ub294\uc9c0 \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc55e\uc73c\ub85c \uc815\uccb4\uc131\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5a0\ud55c \uc601\ud5a5\uc744 \ubbf8\uce60 \uac83 \uac19\uc740\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc791\uc131\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \ub2e4\ub904\ubcfc \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ub610 \ub2e4\ub978 \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc740 \uac00\uc871\uc774 \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0\uac8c \ubbf8\uce5c \uc601\ud5a5\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc790\ub9e4\uac00 \uc788\ub2e4\uba74 \uc790\ub9e4\uc640\uc758 \uad00\uacc4\uac00 \uc815\uccb4\uc131 \ud615\uc131\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5a0\ud55c \uc601\ud5a5\uc744 \ubbf8\uce58\uace0 \uc790\ub9e4\uc640\uc758 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc774 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uacfc \uc18c\ud1b5\ud558\uace0 \uad50\ub958\ud558\ub294 \ub370 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc601\ud5a5\uc744 \ubbf8\ucce4\ub294\uc9c0 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud574\ubcfc \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub3d9\uc0dd\uc740 &#8216;\ubabd\uc0c1\uac00&#8217;\uc778 \ubc18\uba74 \uc624\ube60\ub294 &#8216;\uae30\uc220\uc790&#8217;\uc758 \uc131\ud5a5\uc744 \uac00\uc9c0\uace0 \uc788\ub2e4\uace0 \ud574\ubd05\uc2dc\ub2e4. \uadf8 \uc0ac\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \uc790\ub780 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc73c\ub85c\uc11c \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc0dd\uac01\uc744 \uac00\uc9c0\uace0 \uc131\uc7a5\ud588\ub294\uc9c0 \ub4f1\uc744 \ub2e4\ub904\ubcfc \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc131\uc7a5 \uacfc\uc815\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub294 \ud765\ubbf8\ub86d\uae30\ub3c4 \ud558\uace0 \ub3c5\uc790\uc5d0\uac8c \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574\uc11c \uc815\ud655\ud558\uace0 \uac00\uc7a5 \uc9c1\uc811\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc54c\ub824\uc904 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95\uc774\uae30\ub3c4 \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \uc8fc\ub41c \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc744 \uad6c\uc0c1\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud574\uc11c \ub2e4\uc74c \ub124 \uac00\uc9c0 \uc9c8\ubb38\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \ub2f5\uc744 \uc0dd\uac01\ud574 \ubd05\uc2dc\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ol>\n<li><strong>&#8220;\ub098\ub294 \ub204\uad6c\uc778\uac00?&#8221;<\/strong>\n<ul>\n<li>\uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ub204\uad70 \uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc804\ub2ec\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uc131\uaca9\uc774\ub098 \ub2e4\ub978 \uba74\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574\uc11c \uc0dd\uac01\ud574 \ubd05\uc2dc\ub2e4. \uc131\uc7a5 \uacfc\uc815, \ud658\uacbd, \ucde8\ubbf8, \uc5b4\ub824\uc6c0\uc744 \uadf9\ubcf5\ud55c \uacbd\ud5d8, \uac00\uc7a5 \ud070 \uad50\ud6c8\uc744 \ubc30\uc6b4 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc744 \ud1b5\ud574 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790 \uc790\uc2e0\uc740 \ub204\uad6c\uc778\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc804\ub2ec\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>&#8220;\ub2e4\ub978 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uc640 \ub098\ub294 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ub2e4\ub978\uac00?&#8221;<\/strong>\n<ul>\n<li>\uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ud2b9\ubcc4\ud558\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc911\uc694\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc9c1\uc811\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ub2e4\ub978 \uc9c0, \ud2b9\ubcc4\ud55c\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc804\ub2ec\ud558\uae30\ubcf4\ub2e4 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \ud1b5\ud574 \uc804\ub2ec\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>&#8220;\ub098\ub294 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \uc911\uc694\ud558\uac8c \uc0dd\uac01\ud558\ub294 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc778\uac00?&#8221;<\/strong>\n<ul>\n<li>\ubb38\ub2e8 \ud615\uc2dd\uc73c\ub85c \uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc778 \ub514\ud14c\uc77c\uc744 \ud3ec\ud568\ud574\uc11c \ub3c5\uc790\uc5d0\uac8c \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uac00\uc7a5 \uc911\uc694\ud558\uac8c \uc5ec\uae30\ub294 \uac83, \uac00\uc871, \uc9c1\uc5c5\uc724\ub9ac, \uc131\uacf5, \ub3c8 \ub4f1\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574\uc11c \uc124\uba85\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>&#8220;\uc65c \ub098\ub294 \uc774 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \uc801\ud569\ud55c \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uc778\uac00?&#8221;<\/strong>\n<ul>\n<li>\uc2dc\uac04\uad00\ub9ac, \uc18c\ud1b5\ub2a5\ub825, \ud559\uc5c5\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uad00\uc2ec \ub4f1 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc88b\uc740 \ud559\uc0dd\uc774\ub77c\ub294 \uc0ac\uc2e4\uc744 \ub098\ud0c0\ub0bc \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uba74\ub3c4 \uc78a\uc9c0 \ub9d0\uace0 \ud3ec\ud568\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5ec\uae30\uc11c\ub3c4 \uc2a4\ud1a0\ub9ac\ud154\ub9c1 \ubc29\uc2dd\uc73c\ub85c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uac15\uc810\uc744 \ub098\ud0c0\ub0bc \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc131\uaca9\uc774\ub098 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uba87 \uac00\uc9c0 \uc0ac\ud56d\uc744 \uc801\uc5b4 \ubd04\uc73c\ub85c\uc368 \ube0c\ub808\uc778\uc2a4\ud1a0\ubc0d \uacfc\uc815\uc744 \uc2dc\uc791\ud574 \ubd05\uc2dc\ub2e4. \uc2e4\uc81c\ub85c \ud504\ub86c\ud2b8\ub97c \uc120\uc815\ud558\uae30 \uc804\uc5d0 \uc801\uc5b4 \ub454 \uac83 \uc911 \uc5ec\ub7ec \uac00\uc9c0\ub97c \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc798 \uc804\ub2ec\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0 \uc0dd\uac01\ud574 \ubd05\uc2dc\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4, \uace0\uc804 \ucca0\ud559\uc744 \uc0ac\ub791\ud558\uace0 \ud1a0\ub860 \ud300\uc5d0\uc11c \ub300\ud45c\ub97c \ub9e1\uc558\uace0 \uc815\uce58\uc801\uc778 \uc0ac\uc548\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c\uc640 \ud611\uc5c5\ud574\uc11c \ud504\ub85c\uc81d\ud2b8\ub97c \ud558\uace0 \uc788\ub294 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\ub77c\uace0 \uc0dd\uac01\ud574 \ubd05\uc2dc\ub2e4. \uc774\ub807\uac8c \ub2e4\uc591\ud55c \uacbd\ud5d8\uc744 \ub300\ub7b5\uc801\uc778 \uae00\ub85c \uc815\ub9ac\ud574\uc11c \uc5b4\ub5a4 \ud504\ub86c\ud2b8\uac00 \uac00\uc7a5 \uc801\uc808\ud560\uc9c0 \uc0dd\uac01\ud574\ubcfc \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc9c0\uc5ed\uc0ac\ud68c\uc640 \ud611\uc5c5\ud558\uc5ec \uc815\ud655\ud788 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc77c\uc744 \ud558\uace0 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574\uc11c \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774 \ud504\ub85c\uc81d\ud2b8\uc5d0\uc11c \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \ubc30\uc6e0\ub294\uc9c0 \ub610\ub294 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc131\uacf5 \ub610\ub294 \uc2e4\ud328\ub97c \uacaa\uc5c8\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ubcc0\ud638\uc0ac \ub610\ub294 \uc815\uce58\ud65c\ub3d9\uac00\ub85c\uc11c \ub354 \ud070 \ubcc0\ud654\ub97c \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ub9cc\ub4e4\uace0 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uae30\uc5ec\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc744\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574\uc11c\ub3c4 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\ub7f0 \uc9c8\ubb38\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \ub2f5\uc744 \uc0dd\uac01\ud574\ubcf4\uba74\uc11c \uc88b\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud558\ub294\ub370 \ud544\uc218\uc801\uc778 \uac1c\uc694 \uc9dc\ub294 \ub2e8\uacc4\ub97c \uc2dc\uc791\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3>2. \uac00\uc7a5 \uc88b\uc740 \ud504\ub86c\ud2b8 \uc120\ud0dd<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc88b\uc740 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0 \ud569\uaca9\uc744 \ubcf4\uc7a5\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uac00\uc7a5 \uc88b\uc740 \ud504\ub86c\ud2b8\ub294 \uc874\uc7ac\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0\uac8c \uac00\uc7a5 \uc801\ud569\ud55c \ud504\ub86c\ud2b8\ub97c \uc120\ud0dd\ud558\uac8c \ub418\uba74 \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc744 \uc798 \uc124\ub4dd\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uac15\ub825\ud55c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub2e4\uc74c \ud504\ub86c\ud2b8(\ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ud504\ub86c\ud2b8 #2)\ub97c \uc608\uc2dc\ub85c \ub4e4\uc5b4\ubcf4\uaca0\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote\"><p><em>The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?<\/em><\/p><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc624\ub298\ub0a0 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ub420 \uc218 \uc788\ub3c4\ub85d \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc744 \uc900 \uc5b4\ub824\uc6c0\uc774\ub098 \uc7a5\uc560\ubb3c\uc774 \uc788\ub2e4\uba74 \uc2dc\ub3c4\ud574\ubcfc \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uc88b\uc740 \ud504\ub86c\ud2b8 \uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uace0\ub4f1\ud559\uad50 \uc5f0\uc124 \ud300\uc5d0\uc11c \ub3cb\ubcf4\uc600\ub358 \ud68c\uc6d0\uc774\uc5c8\uc9c0\ub9cc \uac00\uc871\uc758 \uacbd\uc81c\uc801 \uc5b4\ub824\uc6c0\uc73c\ub85c \uc778\ud574 \ub354 \uc774\uc0c1 \ud300\uc5d0 \ucc38\uc5ec\ud560 \uc218 \uc5c6\uc5c8\uace0 \uac00\uc871\uc5d0 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub418\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uc544\ub974\ubc14\uc774\ud2b8\ub97c \ud574\uc57c \ud588\ub358 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\ub77c\uace0 \uc0dd\uac01\ud574 \ubd05\uc2dc\ub2e4. \ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc \uc5f0\uc124\ud300 \ucf54\uce58\ub85c \uc778\ud574 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc7ac\ub2a5\uc744 \ubc1c\uacac\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uac8c \ub418\uc5c8\uace0 \ubc14\uc05c \uc640\uc911\uc5d0 \ud2c8\uc774 \ub0a0 \ub54c\ub9c8\ub2e4 \uc5f0\uc2b5\uc744 \ud588\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc774 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \ud1b5\ud574 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc2dc\uac04\uc744 \ud76c\uc0dd\ud558\uba74\uc11c\ub3c4 \uc5b4\ub824\uc6c0\uc744 \uacaa\ub294 \ubd80\ubaa8\ub97c \ub3c4\uc6b8 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uc88b\uc740 \uc790\ub140\ub77c\ub294 \uc810\uacfc \uc5b4\ub824\uc6c0\uc744 \uc798 \uadf9\ubcf5\ud55c \ub178\ub825\ud615 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc774\ub77c\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ub098\ud0c0\ub0bc \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub300\ud559\uc5d0\uc11c \uc6d0\ud558\ub294 \uc790\uc9c8\uc744 \uac00\uc9c0\uace0 \uc788\ub294 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790 \uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4><strong>\uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc778\uc9c0 \ud655\uc2e4\ud788 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc904 \uc218 \uc788\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>\ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud560 \ub54c \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc774 \uac00\uc7a5 \ud754\ud788 \ud558\ub294 \uc2e4\uc218 \uc911 \ud558\ub098\ub294 \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \ucda9\ubd84\ud788 \uc124\uba85\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ud1b5\ud574\uc11c \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc774 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\ub97c \ubcf4\uc9c0 \uc54a\uace0\ub3c4 \ub300\ub7b5 \uadf8 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uac00 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc778\uc9c0 \ud30c\uc545\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc744 \uc815\ub3c4\ub85c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790 \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc778 \uc815\ubcf4\ub97c \ud3ec\ud568\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ubb34\uc5c7\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc368\uc57c \ud560\uc9c0 \ubab0\ub77c \ub9c9\ub9c9\ud558\uac8c \ub290\uaef4\uc9c0\ub354\ub77c\ub3c4 \uac71\uc815\ud560 \ud544\uc694 \uc5c6\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud754\ud788 \ub9ce\uc774\ub4e4 \ub290\ub07c\ub294 \uac10\uc815\uc774\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uae00\uc744 \uc4f0\ub2e4\uac00 \ub9c9\ud790 \ub54c\uba74 \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0\uac8c &#8216;\uc65c?&#8217;\ub77c\uace0 \ubb3c\uc5b4\ubcfc \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4, \uc774\ub7f0 \uc77c\ub828\uc758 \uacfc\uc815\uc73c\ub85c \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0\uac8c \ud558\ub294 \uc9c8\ubb38\uc744 \uc774\uc5b4 \ub098\uac08 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>&#8220;\ub098\ub294 \uc608\uc804\ubd80\ud130 \uc0dd\ubb3c\ud559\uc744 \uc88b\uc544\ud588\uc5c8\uc5b4.&#8221;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li><em>\ub0b4\uac00 \uc0dd\ubb3c\ud559\uc744 \uc65c \uc88b\uc544\ud560\uae4c?<\/em><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p>&#8220;\uc0b4\uc544\uc788\ub294 \uc0dd\ubb3c\uccb4\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \ubc30\uc6b0\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uc88b\uc544\ud558\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc774\uc57c.&#8221;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li><em>\ub0b4\uac00 \uadf8\uac83\uc744 \uc65c \uc88b\uc544\ud560\uae4c?<\/em><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p>&#8220;\uc65c\ub0d0\ud558\uba74 \ub098\ub294 \ud56d\uc0c1 \ubb34\uc5b8\uac00 \ud574\uccb4\ud558\uace0 \uadf8 \uc18d\uc5d0\uc11c \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc77c\uc774 \uc77c\uc5b4\ub098\ub294\uc9c0 \ubcf4\ub294 \uac83\uc5d0 \uad00\uc2ec\uc774 \ub9ce\uc558\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc774\uc57c.&#8221;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li><em>\uc774\uac83\uc774 \ub098\ub77c\ub294 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc5d0\uac8c \uc65c \uc911\uc694\ud560\uae4c?<\/em><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<p>&#8220;\ud559\uc5c5\uc801 \uad00\uc2ec\uacfc \ub354\ubd88\uc5b4 \ub0b4\uac00 \uc0ac\ub791\ud558\uace0 \uc88b\uc544\ud558\ub294 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uac83\uc744 \ub0b4\uac00 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc811\uadfc\ud558\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \ub9d0\ud574\uc8fc\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc774\uc57c.&#8221;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc774\ub7f0 \uc2dd\uc73c\ub85c \uc758\uc2dd\uc758 \ud750\ub984\ub300\ub85c \uc9c8\ubb38\uacfc \ub300\ub2f5\uc744 \uc774\uc5b4\uac00\uba74\uc11c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \ub3d9\uae30, \ud589\ub3d9, \ub450\ub824\uc6c0 \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc815\uccb4\uc131\uc744 \uad6c\uc131\ud558\ub294 \ub2e4\ub978 \uba74\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574\uc11c \ub354\uc6b1 \uae4a\uac8c \uc54c \uc218 \uc788\uac8c \ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4.\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uac00\uc871\uc774\ub098 \uce5c\uad6c\uc5d0\uac8c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \ud78c\ud2b8\ub97c \uc5bb\ub294 \uac83\ub3c4 \uc88b\uc740 \ubc29\ubc95\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uce5c\ud55c \uce5c\uad6c\ub4e4\uc740 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uc758 \uc131\uaca9\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5a4\uc9c0, \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \uc88b\uc544\ud558\ub294\uc9c0, \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \uc798\ud558\ub294\uc9c0, \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \uc6d0\ud558\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc798 \uc54c\uace0 \uc788\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc88b\uc740 \uc870\uc5b8\uc744 \ucda9\ubd84\ud788 \ud574\uc904 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\ub97c \ud1b5\ud574 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790 \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0\uac8c \uac00\uc7a5 \uc801\uc808\ud55c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ud504\ub86c\ud2b8\ub97c \uc120\uc815\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc544\uae4c\ub3c4 \ub9d0\ud588\uc9c0\ub9cc, \ud558\ub098\uc758 &#8216;\uc62c\ubc14\ub978&#8217; \uc8fc\uc81c\ub294 \uc5c6\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub3c5\uc790\uc5d0\uac8c \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790 \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc798 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\uace0 \ub124 \uac00\uc9c0 \uc8fc\uc694 \uc9c8\ubb38\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \ub300\ub2f5\ub9cc \uc798 \ub2f4\uace0 \uc788\ub2e4\uba74 \uc88b\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc4f8 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3>3. \uad6c\uc131\uacfc \ud750\ub984\uc774 \uc88b\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uad6c\uc131 \uc9dc\uae30<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \uad6c\uc131\uacfc \uac1c\uc694\ub97c \uc9e4 \ub54c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud574\ubcfc \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uc88b\uc740 \uc811\uadfc \ubc29\ubc95\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec \uac00\uc9c0\uac00 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uad6c\uc870\uc640 \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc0ac\uc6a9\uc5d0 \uc788\uc5b4\uc11c\ub294 \ucc3d\uc758\uc801\uc778 \uc2dc\ub3c4\ub97c \ud574\ubd10\ub3c4 \uc88b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc2a4\ud1a0\ub9ac\ud154\ub9c1\uc5d0 \ub354\uc6b1 \ud6a8\uacfc\uc801\uc774\ub77c\uace0 \ud310\ub2e8\ub41c\ub2e4\uba74 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0 \ub300\ud654\ub97c \ud3ec\ud568\ud574\ub3c4 \ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4.\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uac83\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uac00 \ubb38\uc7a5 \ub2e8\uc704 \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \ubb38\ub2e8 \ub2e8\uc704\uc758 \ub17c\ub9ac\uc801\uc774\uace0 \uc790\uc5f0\uc2a4\ub7ec\uc6b4 \ud750\ub984\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc21c\ucc28\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \uc804\ub2ec\ud558\uac70\ub098, \uc2a4\ud1a0\ub9ac \uc804\uac1c\ub97c \ucc28\uc6a9\ud558\uac70\ub098 \uc0ac\uac74 \uc911\uc2ec\uc73c\ub85c \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \uc804\ub2ec\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uba87\uba87 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\ub294 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud560 \ub54c \uc644\uc804\ud788 \uc0c9\ub2e4\ub978 &#8216;\uc2e4\ud5d8\uc801\uc778&#8217; \uc811\uadfc\ubc29\uc2dd\uc744 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uae30\ub3c4 \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4 \uc5f0\uadf9\uacfc \uc18c\uc124\uc5d0 \uad00\uc2ec\uc774 \uc788\ub294 \ud559\uc0dd\uc740 \ub300\ud654 \ud615\uc2dd\uc73c\ub85c \ub9c8\uce58 \uc5f0\uadf9\uc758 \ud55c &#8216;\uc52c&#8217;\uc744 \uc4f8 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc218\ud559\uc744 \uc88b\uc544\ud558\ub294 \ud559\uc0dd\uc740 \uc54c\uace0\ub9ac\uc998\uc774\ub098 \ud568\uc218\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud574\uc11c \uc778\uc0dd\uc744 \ube44\uc720\ud560 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc774\ub807\uac8c \ucc3d\uc758\uc801\uc778 \ubc29\uc2dd\uc744 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \uc704\ud5d8\ud560 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uace0 \uc808\ub300 \uc27d\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc804\ubb38 \uc791\uac00\ub3c4 \uc27d\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc740 \uc601\uc5ed\uc774\ub2c8\uae4c \ub9d0\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc694\uc810\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \ud750\ub984\uc774 \uc88b\uace0 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790 \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574\uc11c \uc798 \uc804\ub2ec\ud558\uae30\ub9cc \ud55c\ub2e4\uba74 \uc88b\uc740 \ud3c9\uac00\ub97c \ubc1b\uc744 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3>4. \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131\ubc95 &#8211; \ub0b4\uc6a9\uacfc \ud1a4\uc5d0 \uad00\ud55c \ud301<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uc644\ubcbd\ud55c \ubb38\ubc95\uacfc \uad6c\ub450\uc810\uc73c\ub85c \uc791\uc131\ub418\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud750\ub984\uacfc \ud1a4\ub3c4 \uc88b\uc544\uc57c \ud558\uba70 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uc758 \ub2a5\ub825, \uc131\uaca9, \ube44\uc804\ub3c4 \uc798 \uc804\ub2ec\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4>\uc544\ub798\ub294 \uc88b\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\uacfc \uad00\ub828\ub41c \uba87 \uac00\uc9c0\uc758 \ud301\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<ol>\n<li>\ub9d0\ud558\uc9c0 \ub9d0\uace0 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc918\ub77c. \ub2e8\uc21c\ud788 &#8216;\uacfc\ud559\uc744 \uc88b\uc544\ud55c\ub2e4&#8217;\ub77c\uace0 \uc4f0\uc9c0 \ub9d0\uace0 \ud63c\uc790 \uacfc\ud559\ucc45\uc744 \uc77d\ub294\ub370 \ud558\ub8e8\uc5d0 \uba87 \uc2dc\uac04\uc744 \ud22c\uc790\ud558\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574\uc11c \uc124\uba85\ud558\ub77c.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\ucd5c\ub300\ud55c \ub9ce\uc774 \uad6c\uccb4\uc801\uc778 \ub514\ud14c\uc77c\uc744 \ud3ec\ud568\ud574\ub77c. \uadf8 \ub514\ud14c\uc77c\uc774 \uc0dd\uc0dd\ud560\uc218\ub85d \ub354\uc6b1 \uc88b\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc9c4\ubd80\ud55c \uc5b8\uc5b4\ub098 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub294 \uc9c0\uc591\ud574\ub77c. <a href=\"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.com\/5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131 \uc2dc \uac00\uc7a5 \ub9ce\uc774 \ud558\ub294 \uc2e4\uc218<\/a> \uc911 \ud558\ub098\uac00 \uc9c4\ubd80\ud55c \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc774\ub2e4.&nbsp;<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \ubaa9\uc801\uc5d0 \uc801\ud569\ud55c \ud1a4\uc744 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud574\ub77c. \uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4, \uad50\uacfc\ubaa9 \uc678 \ud65c\ub3d9\uc774 \uc5c6\uc9c0\ub9cc \ud559\uc810\uc740 \ubaa8\ub450 A\ub97c \ubc1b\uc740 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\ub77c\uba74 \uc2e4\uc81c\ub85c\ub294 \uc5bc\ub9c8\ub098 \ub290\uae0b\ud558\uace0 \ud3b8\uc548\ud55c \uc0ac\ub78c\uc778\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \ucd08\uc810\uc744 \ub9de\ucd94\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc88b\ub2e4.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<h4>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131 \ubc0f \uad50\uc815 \ud301<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li><strong>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ucd08\ubcf8\uc740 \uc801\uc5b4\ub3c4 \ub450 \ubc88\uc758 \uad50\uc815 \uacfc\uc815\uc744 \uac70\uccd0\uc57c \ud55c\ub2e4. <\/strong>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uacfc\ub3c4\ud558\uac8c \ubd84\uc11d\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \uc88b\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc9c0\ub9cc \uae00\uc740 \ub2e4\uc2dc \ubcf4\uace0 \uad50\uc815\ud560\uc218\ub85d \ub354\uc6b1 \uc88b\uc544\uc9c4\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\ucc98\uc74c\uc5d0\ub294 \uae34 \ubc84\uc804\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud558\uace0 \ud6c4\uc5d0 650 \ub2e8\uc5b4\ub85c \uc904\uc774\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95\uc744 \ucd94\ucc9c\ud55c\ub2e4. <\/strong>\ucd5c\ub300\ud55c \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc790\uc138\ud788 \uc4f0\ub2e4 \ubcf4\uba74 650\ub2e8\uc5b4\ub97c \ub9de\ucd94\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc5b4\ub824\uc6b8 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub807\ub2e4\uba74 \ucd08\ubcf8\uc740 1,000 \ub2e8\uc5b4\ub85c \uc791\uc131\ud558\uace0 \uc774\ud6c4\uc5d0 \uae38\uc774\ub97c \uc904\uc774\ub294 \uc791\uc5c5\uc744 \ud558\uba74\uc11c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \uac00\uc7a5 \uc911\uc2ec\uc801\uc778 \ub0b4\uc6a9\ub9cc \ub0a8\uaca8\ub450\uba74 \ub41c\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ucd08\ubcf8\uc744 \uc791\uc131\ud55c \ub2e4\uc74c\uc5d0\ub294 \uc870\uae08 \uc2dc\uac04\uc744 \ub450\uace0 \ub2e4\uc2dc \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc218\uc815\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ucd94\ucc9c\ud55c\ub2e4. <\/strong>\uc2dc\uac04\uc744 \uc870\uae08 \ub450\uace0 \ub098\uc11c \ub2e4\uc2dc \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ubcf4\uba74 \uc0c8\ub85c\uc6b4 \uad00\uc810\uc73c\ub85c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ubcfc \uc218 \uc788\uac8c \ub41c\ub2e4.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>\uc804\ubb38\uac00\uc5d0\uac8c \uad50\uc815\uc744 \ub9e1\uae30\ub294 \uac83\ub3c4 \uc88b\uc740 \ubc29\ubc95\uc774\ub2e4. <\/strong>\uc815\ub9d0 \uc804\ubb38\uac00\uc77c \ud544\uc694\ub294 \uc5c6\ub2e4. \ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc \uc785\uc2dc \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uad50\uc815 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc774 \uc788\ub294 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc5d0\uac8c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uad50\uc815\uc744 \ub9e1\uae30\uba74 \ub354\uc6b1 \ud655\uc2e4\ud558\uace0 \uc815\ud655\ud788 \ubb38\ubc95, \ucca0\uc790, \uc2a4\ud0c0\uc77c \uce21\uba74\uc758 \uc624\ub958\ub97c \uc218\uc815\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub2e4.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h2>2022-2023 \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ud504\ub86c\ud2b8<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>2022-2023 \ucee4\uba3c\uc571 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \ud504\ub86c\ud2b8\ub294 #4\ub97c \uc81c\uc678\ud558\uace0 \uc791\ub144\uacfc \ub3d9\uc77c\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uac01 \ud504\ub86c\ud2b8\ub294 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\uc758 \uc0b6\uacfc \uadf8 \uc0b6 \uc18d\uc5d0\uc11c \uacaa\uc5c8\ub358 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href=\"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.com\/common-app-essay-tips-prompt-2\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">Common App Essay Prompt #2<\/a><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.com\/common-app-essay-tips-prompt-3\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">Common App Essay Prompt #3<\/a><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.koppelmangroup.com\/blog\/2021\/4\/26\/how-to-write-the-common-app-essay-prompt-4-2021-2022\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">Common App Essay Prompt #4<\/a><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.com\/common-app-essay-tips-prompt-5\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">Common App Essay Prompt #5<\/a><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.com\/common-app-essay-tips-prompt-6\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">Common App Essay Prompt #6<\/a><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.com\/common-app-admissions-essay-prompt-7\/\" target=\"_blank\" 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