{"id":1006,"date":"2022-05-18T22:33:00","date_gmt":"2022-05-18T13:33:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.essayreview.co.kr\/?p=1006"},"modified":"2023-10-23T10:21:05","modified_gmt":"2023-10-23T01:21:05","slug":"5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid\/","title":{"rendered":"\ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131\ubc95 &#8211; \ud53c\ud574\uc57c \ud560 \uc2e4\uc218 top5"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>\ud559\uc810\uc774\ub098 \uc131\uc801(GPA)\uc744 \ud3ec\ud568\ud558\uc5ec \uc131\uc801\ud45c\uc5d0 \uae30\uc7ac\ub41c \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc815\ub7c9\uc801 \uc815\ubcf4\ub294&nbsp;\ub300\ud559\uc5d0 \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud558\ub294\ub370 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uc694\uc18c\uc774\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uc22b\uc790\ub294 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc758 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\uc758 \uc77c\ubd80\ub9cc\uc744 \ub9d0\ud574\uc90d\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 <a href=\"\/ko\/services\/translation\/essay\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc5d0\uc138\uc774<\/a>\ub294 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc194\uc9c1\ud55c \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \ub4e4\ub824\uc8fc\ub294 \ub370 \ud6e8\uc52c \ub354 \uac15\ub825\ud55c \uc5ed\ud560\uc744 \ud55c\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub798\uc11c \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \ubd80\uc11c\ub294 \uc22b\uc790\uc5d0 \ub530\ub77c \ucd08\uae30 \ub4f1\ub77d\uc744 \uacb0\uc815\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc9c0\ub9cc, \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ubc14\ud0d5\uc73c\ub85c \ucd5c\uc885 \uacb0\uc815\uc744 \ub0b4\ub9bd\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><a href=\"\/ko\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0<\/a>\ub294\ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc544\uc8fc \uc798 \uc54c\uace0 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub9e4\ub144, \uc6b0\ub9ac\ub294 \ub300\ud559\uc5d0 \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud558\ub294 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\ub85c\ubd80\ud130 \uc601\uc5b4\uad50\uc815\uc774 \ud544\uc694\ud55c \uc218\ucc9c\ub9cc \ub2e8\uc5b4\ub4e4\uc744 \ubc1b\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub7ec\ubbc0\ub85c, \uc6b0\ub9ac\ub294 \uc88b\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774, \ub098\uc05c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774, \ud6cc\ub96d\ud55c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub4e4\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc4f0\uc600\ub294\uc9c0, \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\ub4e4\uc758 \uad00\uc2ec\uc744 \ub04c\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc774 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \ud574\uc57c \ud558\ub294\uc9c0 \uc54c\uace0 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc5ec\uae30 \uc6b0\ub9ac\ub294 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \uce58\uba85\uc801\uc778 \uba87\uba87 \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc2e4\uc218\ub97c \uc0b4\ud3b4 \ubcf4\uace0 \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc758 \ub300\ud559\uc5d0 \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud560 \uc785\uc2dc \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uac1c\uc120\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud55c \ubc29\ubc95\ub4e4\uc744 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud558\uace0 \uc88b\uc740\uc601\uc5b4 \uc785\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\ub97c \uc4f0\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95\uc744 \ub2e4\ub8f0 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2>\uc88b\uc740 \uc785\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc778\uac00\uc694?<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud53c\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc2e4\uc218\ub97c \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf4\uae30 \uc804\uc5d0, \uc88b\uc740 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uac00 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \ud558\ub294\uc9c0 \uc758\ub17c\ud574 \ubd05\uc2dc\ub2e4. \ud6a8\uacfc\uc801\uc778 \ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\ub294 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uac1c\uc778\uc801, \ud559\ub825\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uad11\ubc94\uc704\ud558\uace0 \ud3ec\uad04\uc801\uc778 \ud1b5\ucc30\ub825\uc744 \uc81c\uacf5\ud558\uace0, \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc0c1\ub2f4\uc790\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \ubaa9\ud45c\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uac1c\uc694\ub97c \uc81c\uacf5\ud558\uace0, \ub300\ud559\uc774 \uc900\ube44\ud55c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c(essay prompt)\uc5d0 \uc9c1\uc811\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \ubd84\uba85\ud558\uac8c \ub300\ub2f5\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc88b\uc740 \ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc4f0\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95\uc744 \ubc30\uc6b0\ub294 \uac00\uc7a5 \uc88b\uc740 \ubc29\ubc95 \uc911 \ud558\ub098\ub294 \uc131\uacf5\uc801\uc778 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc774 \uc4f4 \uac83\uc744 \ubcf4\ub294 \uac83 \uc544\ub2c8\uaca0\uc2b5\ub2c8\uae4c?<\/p>\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">\n<figure class=\"aligncenter size-full\"><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" width=\"1200\" height=\"675\" src=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/12170059\/Copy-of-Copy-of-EXAMPLES-OF-SUCCESSFUL-COLLEGE-PERSONAL-STATEMENTS-1-1.jpg\" alt=\"\ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131\ubc95\uc744 \ubc30\uc6b0\ub294 \uac00\uc7a5 \uc88b\uc740 \ubc29\ubc95 \uc911 \ud558\ub098\ub294 \uc131\uacf5\uc801\uc778 \uc608\uc2dc\ub4e4\uc744 \ubcf4\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.\" class=\"wp-image-1008\" srcset=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/12170059\/Copy-of-Copy-of-EXAMPLES-OF-SUCCESSFUL-COLLEGE-PERSONAL-STATEMENTS-1-1.jpg 1200w, https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/12170059\/Copy-of-Copy-of-EXAMPLES-OF-SUCCESSFUL-COLLEGE-PERSONAL-STATEMENTS-1-1-300x169.jpg 300w, https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/12170059\/Copy-of-Copy-of-EXAMPLES-OF-SUCCESSFUL-COLLEGE-PERSONAL-STATEMENTS-1-1-768x432.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 1200px) 100vw, 1200px\" \/><\/figure><\/div>\n\n\n<p><a href=\"\/ko\/blog\/admission\/examples-of-successful-college-personal-statements\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\ud6cc\ub96d\ud55c \ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774<\/a>\uac00 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc4f0\uc600\ub294\uc9c0 \uc54c \uc218 \uc788\ub3c4\ub85d \uc131\uacf5\uc801\uc778 \uac1c\uc778 \uc9c4\uc220\uc758 \uba87 \uac00\uc9c0 \uac15\ub825\ud55c \uc608\ub97c \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf4\uc138\uc694. \ub300\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \uc608\uc2dc\ub97c \uc77d\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\ub4e4\uc774 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \ucc3e\uace0 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0 \uc815\ud655\ud788 \uc774\ud574\ud558\ub294\ub370 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc744 \uc904 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2><strong>\uc720\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc798 \uc4f0\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95&nbsp;<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc77c\ub2e8 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uba87\uba87 \uc131\uacf5\uc801\uc778 \ub300\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc608\uc2dc\ub4e4\uc744 \uc77d\uc5b4\ubcf8\ub2e4\uba74, \ub450 \ubc88\uc9f8 \ub2e8\uacc4\ub294 \uc720\uc6a9\ud55c \uc870\uc5b8\ub4e4\uacfc \uccb4\ud06c\ub9ac\uc2a4\ud2b8\ub4e4\uc744 \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf4\ub294 \uac83\uc774\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\uac83\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \ub300\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc4f0\uae30 \uacfc\uc815\uc744 \uacc4\ud68d\ud558\ub294 \ub370 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub420 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4, \uadf8\ub798\uc11c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc4f0\uae30 \uc2dc\uc791\ud558\uae30 \uc804\uc5d0 \uc774 \uc870\uc5b8\ub4e4\uc744 \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf4\uace0 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc644\uc131\ud558\ub294 \ub3d9\uc548 \uadf8\uac83\ub4e4\uc744 \ud655\uc778\ud574 \ubcf4\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/medium.com\/wordviceediting\/quick-tips-for-how-to-conquer-the-college-application-essay-2ad41bbff70\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc815\ubcf5\ud558\ub294 \ud301<\/a><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/medium.com\/wordviceediting\/six-tips-for-proofreading-your-college-admissions-essay-9b7f76b6a280\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc601\ubb38 \uad50\uc815\ud558\ub294 6\uac00\uc9c0 \ud301<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h2>\uc720\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \uc2e4\uc218\ub97c \ud558\uba74 \uc548\ub418\ub294 \uc774\uc720&nbsp;<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\ube44\ub85d \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc704\uc5d0 \uc5b8\uae09\ub41c \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uae0d\uc815\uc801\uc778 \uc870\uc5b8\ub4e4\uc744 \ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0 \ud3ec\ud568\uc2dc\ud0a8\ub2e4\uace0 \ud560\uc9c0\ub77c\ub3c4 \uc5ec\uc804\ud788 \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ub9ce\uc774 \ud558\ub294 \ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc2e4\uc218\ub4e4\uc744 \uc778\uc2dd\ud558\uace0 \ud53c\ud558\ub294 \uac83\ub3c4 \uc911\uc694\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\uac83\uc758 \uc911\uc694\uc131\uc740 \uc544\ubb34\ub9ac \uac15\uc870\ud574\ub3c4 \uc9c0\ub098\uce58\uc9c0 \uc54a\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ubd80\uc815\uc131 \ud3b8\ud5a5(Negative bias)\uc740 \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc774 \uae0d\uc815\uc801\uc774\uac70\ub098 \uc62c\ubc14\ub978 \uc0dd\uac01\uacfc \ube44\uad50\ud558\uc5ec \ubd88\ucf8c\ud55c \uc0dd\uac01\uacfc \uac10\uc815\uc744 \uae30\uc5b5\ud558\uace0, \uc624\ub798 \ucc38\uace0, \ud589\ub3d9\ud560 \uc2ec\ub9ac\ud559\uc5d0\uc11c\uc758 \uac1c\ub150\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub7ec\ubbc0\ub85c, \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\ub4e4\uc740 \ube44\ub85d \uc774 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\uac00 \uba87\uba87 \ubd80\uc815\uc801\uc778 \uc0ac\uac74\uc774\ub098 \uc0c1\ud669\uc744 \ud3ec\ud568\ud558\ub354\ub77c\ub3c4 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \uadf8\uc774\uc57c\uae30\uac00 \ub2f4\uace0 \uc788\ub294 \uae0d\uc815\uc801\uc774\uace0 \uc0dd\uc0b0\uc801\uc778 \uc694\uc18c\ub4e4\uc5d0 \uc9d1\uc911\ud574\uc11c \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \ud480\uc5b4\ub0b4\uc57c\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2>\uc2e4\uc218\ub97c \ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \uc758\ubbf8\ud569\ub2c8\uae4c?&nbsp;<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub2f9\uc2e0\uc758 Personal statement\ub294 AI\ub85c \uc791\ub3d9\ub418\ub294 \ubb38\ubc95\uacfc \ub9de\ucda4\ubc95 \uac80\uc0ac \uc18c\ud504\ud2b8\uc6e8\uc5b4\ub85c \uc2a4\uce94\ub418\uc5b4 \uac04\ub2e8\ud55c \uc2e4\uc218\ub97c \uc644\uc804\ud788 \uac00\ub824\uc9c8 \ubfd0\ub9cc \uc544\ub2c8\ub77c, \uc2e4\uc81c \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\ub4e4\uc5d0 \uc758\ud574 \uc77d\uace0 \ud574\uc11d\ud558\uace0 \uc810\uc218\uac00 \ub9e4\uaca8\uc9d1\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\ub4e4\uc740 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc774\uc720\ub85c\ub4e0 \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc758 \ub300\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uac70\uc808\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc73c\uba70 \uc544\uc8fc \ub178\ub828\ud55c \uc804\ubb38\uac00\ub4e4\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc785\uc2dc\uc804\ubb38\uac00 Randi Heathman\uc758&nbsp; <a href=\"https:\/\/www.unigo.com\/admissions-advice\/is-every-college-essay-read-how-many-admissions-officers-read-them\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener nofollow\">\uc65c \uc785\ud559\uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\ub4e4\uc774 \uc2e4\ud328\ud558\ub294\uac00<\/a> \uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uae00\uc744 \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubd05\uc2dc\ub2e4:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote\"><p><em>\ube48\uc57d\ud55c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \ubc84\ub824\uc9d1\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub9cc\uc57d \ud55c \ud559\uc0dd\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uac00 \ud6cc\ub96d\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uac70\ub098 \uc88b\uc9c0 \uc54a\ub2e4\uba74, \uc785\ud559 \uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uadf8\ub0e5 \uc9c0\ub098\uccd0 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc131\uc801\uacfc \uc2dc\ud5d8 \uc810\uc218\ub85c \ubc14\ub85c \ub118\uc5b4\uac00 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc785\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\ub97c \ud3c9\uac00\ud560 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub098\uc05c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uc77d\ud788\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc7ac\uace0\uc758 \uc5ec\uc9c0\uac00 \uc5c6\uc8e0. \ub098\uc05c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\ub4e4\ub85c \ud558\uc5ec\uae08 \ub450 \uac00\uc9c0 \uc911 \ud558\ub098\ub97c \uac00\uc815\ud558\uac8c \ud560 \uac83 \uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. 1) \uc88b\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc4f0\ub294\ub370 \uc2dc\uac04\uc744 \ub4e4\uc774\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0\uc11c\uc758 \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc758 \ubbf8\ub798\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \ucda9\ubd84\ud788 \uc2e0\uacbd \uc4f0\uc9c0 \uc54a\uac70\ub098 2) \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc740 \ud559\ubb38\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uadf8\ub4e4\uc758 \ub300\ud559\uc774\ub098 \ub300\ud559\uc5d0 \uac08 \uc218 \uc5c6\uc744 \uc218\uc900\uc774\ub2e4. \ub450 \uac00\uc9c0 \uac00\uc815 \ubaa8\ub450 \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc774 \uc785\ud559\ud558\ub294 \ub370 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc774 \ub418\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc744 \uac83 \uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/em><\/p><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc5ec\uae30 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uac00\ub974\uce68\uc744 \uc54c\uaca0\ub098\uc694? \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc758 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \uadf8 \uc8fc\uc81c\uc5d0&nbsp; \ub300\ub2f5\ud560 \ubfd0\ub9cc \uc544\ub2c8\ub77c \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c \uc790\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc9c0\ub098\uce60 \uc5b4\ub5a0\ud55c \uc774\uc720\ub3c4 \uc8fc\uc5b4\uc11c\ub294 \uc548 \ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc774\ub7f0 \uc774\uc720\ub85c \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc740 \ub2e4\uc74c\uc758 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \ub17c\uc220\uc5d0\uc11c \ud754\ud788 \ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \uc2e4\uc218\ub4e4\uc744 \uc801\uadf9\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ud53c\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2>\ud53c\ud574\uc57c\ud560 \ud754\ud788 \ud558\ub294 \uc2e4\uc218\ub4e4<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub2e4\uc74c\uc740 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \ud53c\ud574\uc57c \ud560 \uc2e4\uc218 \uc720\ud615\uc744 \ubd84\uc11d\ud78c \ubaa9\ub85d\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">\n<figure class=\"aligncenter size-full\"><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" width=\"677\" height=\"452\" src=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/12170130\/shattered.jpg\" alt=\"\ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud560 \ub54c \ud53c\ud574\uc57c\ud560 \ud754\ud788 \ud558\ub294 \uc2e4\uc218\ub4e4\uc744 \ud655\uc778\ud574\ubcf4\uc138\uc694.\" class=\"wp-image-1009\" srcset=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/12170130\/shattered.jpg 677w, https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/12170130\/shattered-300x200.jpg 300w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 677px) 100vw, 677px\" \/><figcaption class=\"wp-element-caption\">\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc4f8 \ub54c \uc2e4\uc218\ub97c \ud558\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc138\uc694.<\/figcaption><\/figure><\/div>\n\n\n<h3>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc81c\ubaa9 \ub2e4\uc2dc \uc5b8\uae09\ud558\uae30&nbsp;<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub9ce\uc740 \ub300\ud559\ub4e4\uc740 \uc785\ud559 \uacfc\uc815\uc744 \ub354 \ud6a8\uc728\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ub9cc\ub4e4\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uace0\uc548\ub41c \uc5c4\uaca9\ud55c \ub2e8\uc5b4 \uc218 \uc81c\ud55c\uc744 \uc81c\uc2dc\ud558\uace0, \ub610\ud55c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uac04\uacb0\ud558\uac8c \uc4f0\ub3c4\ub85d \uac15\uc694\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc608\ub97c \ub4e4\uc5b4 \ube4c\ub77c\ub178\ubc14 \ub300\ud559(Villanova University)\uc5d0\ub294 \ub450 \uac00\uc9c0 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uac00 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc790\uc720 \uc120\ud0dd \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 250\ub2e8\uc5b4\ub85c \uc81c\ud55c\ub418\ub294 \ubc18\uba74, &#8220;\uc65c \ub178\ubc14\uc778\uac00?(Why Nova?)&#8221;\ub294 100\ub2e8\uc5b4\ub85c \uc81c\ud55c\ub418\uc5b4 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4!&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uadf8\ub798\uc11c \ub9cc\uc57d \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc815\ub9d0\ub85c \uc785\ud559\uc758 \uae30\ud68c\ub97c \ub9dd\uce58\uace0 \uc2f6\ub2e4\uba74, \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc8fc\uc81c\ub97c \ub300\ub2f5 \uc548\uc5d0\uc11c \ubc18\ubcf5\ud558\uc138\uc694. \ubca0\ud14c\ub791 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\ub4e4\uc774 \uc989\uc2dc \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc989\uac01 \ud3d0\uae30\ud560 \uac83\uc774\ub2e4. \uadf8\uac83\uc740 \uac8c\uc73c\ub974\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\uace0 \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc774 \uadf8\ub4e4\uc758 \uc2dc\uac04\uc744 \uc874\uc911\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\ub294 \uac83\uc73c\ub85c \ud574\uc11d\ub429\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc740 \uc790\uc2e0\uc774 \ub204\uad6c\uc778\uc9c0, \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \ubaa9\ud45c, \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \ubaa9\ud45c \ub300\ud559\uacfc \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc5f0\uacc4\ub418\uc5b4 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0\ub97c \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc904 \uc218 \uc788\ub294 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uae30\ud68c\uac00 \ud544\uc694\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3>\ubed4\ud55c \ud45c\ud604(Cliches)\uc744 \uc774\uc6a9\ud558\ub294 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \ud53c\ud574\uc57c \ud560 \uac00\uc7a5 \ud070 \uc2e4\uc218 \uc911 \ud558\ub098\ub294 \ub2e4\uc74c\uc744 \ud3ec\ud568\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc2dd\uc73c\ub85c\ub4e0 \uc2ec\uc624\ud558\uac70\ub098 \ubc30\ud0c0\uc801\uc774\uac70\ub098 \ub610\ub294 \ud3ec\uc2a4\ud2b8\ubaa8\ub358\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ubcf4\uc774\ub824\uace0 \ud558\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc138\uc694. \uc774\ub7f0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ud1b5\ud574 \ucd5c\uace0\uc758 \uc791\uac00\ub098 \ub420 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc785\ud559\uc744 \uc704\ud55c \ud6c4\ubcf4\uac00 \ub420 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc5c6\uc744 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc2e4\uc81c\ub85c \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uac83\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uad00\uc810, \uc790\uc2e0\uac10, \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc6b0\uc120 \uc21c\uc704\uc640 \ubaa9\ud45c\ub97c \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ud2b9\ubcc4\ud558\uac8c \ub4e4\ub9ac\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \ud544\uc0ac\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ub178\ub825\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc744 \ub2e4\ub978 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\ub4e4\uacfc \ubcc4\ub2e4\ub97c \ubc14 \uc5c6\uc774 \ub4e4\ub9ac\uac8c \ub9cc\ub4e4 \uac83\uc774\uace0, \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\ub4e4\uc740 \uac00\uc9dc\ub97c \ubc1c\uacac\ud558\ub294 \ub370 \uc804\ubb38\uac00\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc5d0\uac8c\ub294 \uc790\uc6d0\uc774 \ub9ce\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc544\uc774\ub514\uc5b4\uac00 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\ub9cc\uc758 \uac83\uc774 \ub418\ub3c4\ub85d \ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4>Cliche\ub97c \uc774\uc6a9\ud55c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc608\uc2dc<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>\uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \uc88c\uc808\uc774\ub098 \uc5b4\ub824\uc6b4 \uacb0\uc815\uc744 \uc124\uba85\ud560 \ub54c, &#8220;This event was a disparate result antithetical to my character,&#8221;\ub77c\uace0 \uc4f0\ub294 \ub300\uc2e0, \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc774\uba74\uc11c \uc194\uc9c1\ud574\uc838\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5ec\uae30 \uc774\ub7ec\ud55c \uac10\uc815\uc744 \ud45c\ud604\ud558\ub294 \ub354 \uc88b\uc740 \ubc29\ubc95\uc774 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4: &#8220;This is a decision I am not proud of, but it helped me learn a valuable lesson and put me in a better place today. Without this formative experience, I wouldn\u2019t be the kind of person who applies myself in every challenging circumstance.&#8221;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3>\ub108\ubb34 \ub9ce\uc740 \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \uc815\ubcf4\ub97c \uacf5\uc720\ud558\ub294 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774&nbsp;<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc740 \uc544\ub9c8\ub3c4 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uac00 \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \uac83\uc774\uc5b4\uc57c \ud55c\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ub9ce\uc740 \uacf3\uc5d0\uc11c \uc77d\uc5c8\uc744 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub300\ud559\ub4e4\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \ud559\ub825\ubfd0\ub9cc \uc544\ub2c8\ub77c \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \uc138\uacc4\uad00\uacfc \uc131\uacf5\ud55c \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uacfc\uc758 \uc0c1\ud638\uc791\uc6a9\uc744 \uc54c\uace0 \uc2f6\uc5b4\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc774\uac83\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uae34 \uc2dc\uac04 \ub3d9\uc548 \ud639\uc740 \ub108\ubb34 \uc0c1\uc138\ud558\uac8c \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \ubb38\uc81c\ub4e4\uc744 \ub17c\uc758\ud574\uc57c \ud55c\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uc758\ubbf8\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc885\uad50\ub098 \uc815\uce58\uc640 \uac19\uc740 \ub17c\uc7c1\uc758 \uc5ec\uc9c0\uac00 \uc788\ub294 \uc8fc\uc81c\uc870\ucc28\ub3c4 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uad00\uc810\uc774 \ud569\ub9ac\uc801\uc774\uace0 \uacf5\ud3c9\ud558\ub2e4\uba74 \ud658\uc601\uc744 \ubc1b\ub294 \uacbd\uc6b0\uac00 \ub9ce\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc740 \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \uacbd\uacc4\ub97c \uc874\uc911\ud558\uace0, \uc778\uc2dd\ud558\uace0, \uc720\uc9c0\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc904 \uc218 \uc788\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\uac83\uc740 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc704\uc6d0\ud68c\uac00 \ucc3e\uace0 \uc788\ub294 \ud575\uc2ec \uc0ac\ud68c\uc801\uc778 \uae30\uc220\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4>\ub108\ubb34 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc815\ubcf4\ub97c \uacf5\uc720\ud55c\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc758 \uc608\uc2dc<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li>\ub2f9\uc2e0\uc758 \uc131\uc801\uc778 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \ub17c\ud558\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc138\uc694. \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc758 \uc131\uc801 \uc131\ud5a5\uc740 \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc758 \uc804\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \uc815\uccb4\uc131\uc758 \ud575\uc2ec \ubd80\ubd84\uc77c \uc218 \uc788\ub2e4. \ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \ud65c\ub3d9\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc790\uc138\ud55c \ub0b4\uc6a9\uc740 \uc5b8\uae09\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc74c\uc73c\ub85c\uc368 \uc774\uac83\uc744 \uc81c\ud55c\ud558\uc138\uc694. \ub300\ubd80\ubd84\uc758 \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\ub4e4\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc0ac\uc0dd\ud65c\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uba85\ud655\ud55c \uc138\ubd80\uc0ac\ud56d\uc5d0 \ud638\uc758\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \ubc18\uc751\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc744 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\ub294 \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \ub300\uc911\uc758 \uc77c\uc6d0\uc774\ub77c\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uc0c1\uc2dd\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc774\ud574\ud558\uc138\uc694.&nbsp;<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\uc774\uc0c1\ud558\uac70\ub098, \ubd88\ubc95\uc801\uc774\uac70\ub098, \ubd80\ub3c4\ub355\ud55c \ud589\ub3d9\uc774\ub098 \ubbff\uc74c\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uace0\ubc31\ud558\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc138\uc694. \ub9cc\uc57d \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc774\uc0c1\ud55c \uc9d1\ucc29\uc744 \uac00\uc9c0\uace0 \uc788\ub2e4\uba74, \uadf8\uac83\uc744 \ud63c\uc790\ub9cc \uc54c\uace0 \uc788\uc73c\uc138\uc694. \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc138\uc0c1\uc744 \ubc14\ub77c\ubcf4\ub294 \uc2dc\uac01\uc774\ub098 \ud559\uc0dd\uc73c\ub85c\uc11c\uc758 \uc131\uacf5\uc5d0\uc11c \uc911\uc694\ud55c \ubd80\ubd84\uc77c \uacbd\uc6b0\uc5d0\ub9cc \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc131\uaca9\uc774\ub098 \uc120\ud638\ub3c4\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \ub3c5\ud2b9\ud55c \uce21\uba74\uc744 \ud3ec\ud568\uc2dc\ud0a4\uc138\uc694.<\/li>\n\n\n\n<li>\ub2e4\ub978 \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc744 \ubaa8\uc695\ud558\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc138\uc694. \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc740 \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc758 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559\ucc98\uc7a5\uc774 \ub204\uac00 \ub420 \uac83\uc778\uc9c0 \uacb0\ucf54 \uc54c\uc9c0 \ubabb\ud55c\ub2e4. \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc740 \uc138\uc0c1\uacfc \uc18c\ud1b5\ud558\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95\uc744 \uc54c\uace0 \uc2f6\uc5b4\ud558\uba70, \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\ub294 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc131\uc219\ud568\uacfc \ud3ec\uad04\uc801\uc778 \uad00\uc810\uc744 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\ub294 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uccab \ub2e8\uacc4\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3>\ub3d9\uc815\uc2ec\uc744 \ubd88\ub7ec\uc77c\uc73c\ud0a4\ub294 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc774 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc2e4\uc218\ub294 \uac1c\uc778 \uc815\ubcf4\ub97c \uc9c0\ub098\uce58\uac8c \uacf5\uc720\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uacfc \ub9e4\uc6b0 \ube44\uc2b7\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\ub7f0 \uc720\ud615\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \ubcf4\ud1b5 \uc785\ud559 \uc704\uc6d0\ud68c\uac00 \ud559\uc0dd\uc5d0\uac8c \uc77c\uc5b4\ub09c \ubd88\ud589\ud55c \uc77c\uc744 \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\ub4e4\uc774 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc744 \ubd88\uc30d\ud788 \uc5ec\uae30\uae30\ub97c \ubc14\ub77c\uba74\uc11c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc5d0\uac8c \uc77c\uc5b4\ub0ac\ub358 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \ub054\ucc0d\ud55c \uc77c\ub4e4\uc744 \ub098\uc5f4\ud55c \uae34 \ubaa9\ub85d\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub178\ud2b8: &#8220;sympathy approach\ubc95&#8221;\uc740 \ud6a8\uacfc\uac00 \uc5c6\uc744 \uac83 \uac19\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub9ce\uc740 \uc608\ube44\ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc774 \ubd80\ubaa8\ub2d8\uc758 \uc774\ud63c, \uce5c\uad6c\ub098 \uac00\uc871\uc758 \uc8fd\uc74c, \uc758\ud559\uc801 \ubb38\uc81c, \uc7a5\uc560, \uc815\uc2e0\uac74\uac15 \ubb38\uc81c, \uc0ac\uace0 \ub4f1\uc744 \uacaa\uc5c8\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub9cc\uc57d \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc774\ub7ec\ud55c \uc0b6\uc744 \ubc14\uafb8\uac70\ub098 \uc815\uccb4\uc131\uc744 \ud615\uc131\ud558\ub294 \uc0ac\uac74\ub4e4\uc744 \ud3ec\ud568\uc2dc\ud0a4\uae30\ub97c \uc6d0\ud55c\ub2e4\uba74, \uadf8\uac83\ub4e4\uc740 \uadf8\ub4e4\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc744 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc73c\ub85c\uc11c \ud615\uc131\ud588\ub294\uc9c0, \ubb34\uc5c7\uc744 \ubc30\uc6e0\ub294\uc9c0, \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc5ed\uacbd\uc744 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ub2e4\ub8e8\uc5c8\ub294\uc9c0 \uc124\uba85\ud558\ub294\ub370 \uc0ac\uc6a9\ub418\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \ud55c \uc0ac\ub78c\uc73c\ub85c \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc131\uc7a5\ud588\ub294\uc9c0, \ud639\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc138\uacc4\uad00\uacfc \uc131\uaca9\uc774 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ubc14\ub00c\uc5c8\ub294\uc9c0 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\uc5b4 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \ud6cc\ub96d\ud55c \ud6c4\ubcf4\uac00 \ub420 \uc218 \uc788\uac8c \ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4>\ub3d9\uc815\ud45c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \uc608\uc2dc&nbsp;<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li><strong>&#8220;Everyone around me kept me from succeeding.&#8221; 2000\ub144\ub300 \ucd08\ubc18\uc758 \ub77d \uc720\ud589\uac00\uc758 \uac00\uc0ac\ucc98\ub7fc, \uba87\uba87 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub4e4\uc740 \uadf8\ub4e4\uc758 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc744 \uc8fc\ubcc0\uc758 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc5d0 \uc758\ud55c \uace0\ud1b5\uacfc \uc5b5\uc555\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\uac83\uc740 \ub2e8\uc9c0 \uc790\uae30 \ud328\ubc30\ub97c \uc2dc\uc778\ud560 \ubfd0\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ube44\ub85d \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uacc4\ud68d\uc744 \ubc14\uafb8\uac70\ub098, \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc744 \ud654\ub098\uac8c \ud558\uac70\ub098, \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc2dd\uc73c\ub85c\ub4e0 \ud574\uce58\ub294 \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc77c\uc774 \uc77c\uc5b4\ub0ac\ub354\ub77c\ub3c4, \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \ud560 \uc218 \uc5c6\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \ubc30\uc6b4 \ud6c4\uc5d0 \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uc6b0\uc120\uc21c\uc704\ub97c \ubc14\uafb8\uace0 \uc131\uacf5\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc5c8\ub294\uc9c0 \ubcf4\uc5ec\uc8fc\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \uc7ac\uad6c\uc131\ud558\uc138\uc694.<\/strong><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>&#8220;Becoming injured my senior year ruined my plans.&#8221; <\/strong>\ub9cc\uc57d \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc6b4\ub3d9\uc120\uc218\uc774\uace0 \uacbd\ub825\uc774\ub098 \uc7a5\ud559\uae08 \uc9c0\uae09\uc73c\ub85c \uc778\ud55c \ubd80\uc0c1\uc744 \ub2f9\ud588\ub2e4\uba74, \uadf8\uac83\uc740 \ud070 \ubb38\uc81c\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc7a0\uc7ac\ub825\uc740 \ub2e8\uc9c0 \uc2e4\ud328 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc0ac\ub77c\uc9c0\ub294 \uac83\uc774 \uc544\ub2d9\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5b4\ub5a4 \uc0ac\uac74\ub4e4\uacfc \uc601\ud5a5\ub4e4\uc774 \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc744 \uc804\uc5d0 \uc788\ub358 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc73c\ub85c \ub9cc\ub4e4\uc5b4 \uc8fc\uc5c8\ub4e0 \uac04\uc5d0, \uc5ec\uc804\ud788 \uacfc\uac70\uc758 \ud55c \ubc88\uc758 \ubd88\ud589\ud55c \uc0ac\uac74\ubcf4\ub2e4 \ub354 \uc911\uc694\ud558\ub294 \uc0ac\uc2e4\uc744 \uc78a\uc9c0\ub9c8\uc138\uc694.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\">\n<figure class=\"aligncenter size-full\"><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" width=\"941\" height=\"470\" src=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/12170152\/sad.jpg\" alt=\"\ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud560 \ub54c \uac1c\uc778 \uc815\ubcf4\ub97c \uc9c0\ub098\uce58\uac8c \uacf5\uc720\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uc8fc\uc758\ud558\uc138\uc694.\" class=\"wp-image-1010\" srcset=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/12170152\/sad.jpg 941w, https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/12170152\/sad-300x150.jpg 300w, https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/12170152\/sad-768x384.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 941px) 100vw, 941px\" \/><figcaption class=\"wp-element-caption\">\uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\uc774 \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc77d\uace0 \uc774\ub7f0 \ud45c\uc815\uc744 \uc9d3\uc9c0 \uc54a\uac8c \ud574\uc8fc\uc138\uc694.<\/figcaption><\/figure><\/div>\n\n\n<h3>\uc790\uae30 \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0\uac8c\ub9cc \uacf5\uc744 \ub3cc\ub9ac\ub294 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774&nbsp;<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \ucd5c\uace0 SAT \uc810\uc218, \ub192\uc740 \ud3c9\uc810, \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc0c1\uc744 \ubc1b\uc744 \uc9c0\ub77c\ub3c4, \uc774 \uac04\ub2e8\ud55c \uc9c4\uc2e4\uc744 \uc78a\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc138\uc694: \ubc14\ub2e4\uc5d0\ub294 \ud56d\uc0c1 \ub354 \ud070 \ubb3c\uace0\uae30\uac00 \uc788\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc544\ubb34\ub9ac \ud6cc\ub96d\ud55c \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc790\ub77c \ud560\uc9c0\ub77c\ub3c4, \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc790\ub791\uc2a4\ub7ec\uc6cc\ud558\ub294 \ucc99\ub3c4\ub97c \uae30\uc900\uc73c\ub85c \ub2f9\uc2e0\ubcf4\ub2e4 \ub354 \ub098\uc740 \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc774 \uc788\uc744 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uadf8\ub807\ub2e4\uba74, \ub9ce\uc740 \uacfc\uc5c5\uc744 \ub2ec\uc131\ud55c \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\ub85c\ubd80\ud130 \ub3cb\ubcf4\uc774\ub824\uba74 \ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \ubb34\uc5c7\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc368\uc57c \ud560\uae4c\uc694?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uacb8\uc190\uacfc \uad00\uc810\uc744 \uc2dc\ub3c4\ud558\uc138\uc694. \uc2e0\uc6a9\uc774 \uc788\uc5b4\uc57c \ud560 \uacf3\uc5d0 \uc2e0\uc6a9\uc744 \uc8fc\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uc78a\uc9c0 \ub9c8\uc138\uc694. \uc5b4\ub290 \ub204\uad6c\ub3c4 \ud63c\uc790 \uc0b4\uc544\uac08 \uc218 \uc5c6\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0, \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc740 \uadf8 \ub3d9\uc548 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc744 \ub3c4\uc640\uc900 \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c \uc778\uc815\uc744 \uc904 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uace0\ub4f1\ud559\uad50 \uc120\uc0dd\ub2d8\uc774\ub098 \uba58\ud1a0\ub4e4\uc758 \uae30\uc5ec\ub97c \uacbd\uc2dc\ud558\uac70\ub098 \ucd5c\uc18c\ud654\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\ub3c4\ub85d \ub178\ub825\ud558\uc138\uc694. \uc785\ud559 \uc0c1\ub2f4\uc0ac\ub4e4\uc740 \uad50\uc721 \uc804\ubb38\uac00\ub85c\uc11c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \ub2e4\uc74c \ub2e8\uacc4\uc758 \ud559\ubb38\uc801 \uad50\uc721\uc790\ub4e4\uacfc \uad50\ub958\ud560 \uc900\ube44\uac00 \ub418\uc5b4 \uc788\ub294\uc9c0 \uc54c\uc544\ubcfc \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub7ec\ubbc0\ub85c \uce5c\uad6c, \uac00\uc871, \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uc131\uc7a5\ud558\uace0 \ubc1c\uc804\ud558\ub3c4\ub85d \ub3c4\uc6b4 \uba58\ud1a0\ub4e4\uc744 \ud3ec\ud568\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \ub300\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0 \uc88b\uc740 \uc8fc\uc81c\uac00 \ub420 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4>\uc790\uae30 \uc790\uc2e0\uc5d0\uac8c \uacf5\uc744 \ub3cc\ub9ac\ub294 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc608\uc2dc<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<ul>\n<li><strong>&#8220;I was valedictorian and did it all by myself.&#8221; \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc740 \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc758 \ud559\uc5c5 \uc131\ucde8\ub3c4\uac00 \ub2e4\ub978 \ubaa9\ud45c\ub4e4 \uc911\uc5d0\uc11c \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc758 \ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\uc5d0 \uc911\uc694\ud558\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc790\ub791\uc2a4\ub7ec\uc6cc\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \ubc30\uc6b0\ub3c4\ub85d \ub3c4\uc640\uc900 \ub204\uad70\uac00\uc5d0\uac8c \uacf5\uc744 \uc778\uc815\ud558\uc138\uc694. \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc740 \ub3c5\ud559\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc558\uc5b4\uc694!<\/strong><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>&#8220;In the end, I found the only person I could rely on was myself.&#8221; <\/strong>\uc5b4\ub5a4 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc740 \ub9e4\uc6b0 \ud798\ub4e0 \ubc30\uacbd\uc744 \uac00\uc9c0\uace0 \uc788\uace0, \uadf8\ub798\uc11c \uba87\uba87 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc740 \uadf8\ub4e4\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \uc774\uac83\uc744 \uac15\uc870\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uc720\ud639\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\ub2e4. \ud558\uc9c0\ub9cc \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559\ucc98\ub4e4\uc740 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \uadf8\ub4e4\uc758 \ud559\uad50\uc5d0\uc11c \ub300\ud559\uc0dd\uc73c\ub85c\uc11c \ub300\ud559 \ucee4\ubba4\ub2c8\ud2f0\uc5d0 \uac00\uce58\ub97c \ub354\ud558\uae30\ub97c \uc6d0\ud55c\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uae30\uc5b5\ud558\ub77c. \uc544\ubb34\ub9ac \ub611\ub611\ud55c \ud559\uc0dd\uc774\ub77c\ub3c4 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc758 \uae30\uc5ec\ub97c \uc778\uc815\ud558\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc73c\uba74 \uc774\ub807\uac8c \ud560 \uc218 \uc5c6\ub2e4.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3>\uc601\uc5b4 \uad50\uc815\uc744 \ubc1b\uc9c0 \uc54a\uc740 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774&nbsp;<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\ub300\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ub9dd\uce58\ub294 \ud655\uc2e4\ud55c \ubc29\ubc95\uc740 \ubb38\ubc95\uc774\ub098 \ucca0\uc790 \uc2e4\uc218\ub4e4\ub85c \uac00\ub4dd \ucc28 \uc788\ub294 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc791\uc131\ud558\ub294 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uacfc\uc815\uc740 \ub9e4\uc6b0 \uacbd\uc7c1\uc774 \uce58\uc5f4\ud558\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc7a5\uc810\uc744 \ud544\uc694\ub85c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc740 \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc4f4 \ud6c4\uc5d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc900\ube44\uc758 \uc0c1\ub2f9\ud55c \ubd80\ubd84\uc744 \ud3b8\uc9d1\uacfc \uad50\uc815\ud558\ub294\ub370 \uc368\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc9c1\uc811 \uac80\ud1a0\ud558\uace0 \uc218\uc815\ud558\ub294 \uac83\ubd80\ud130 \uc2dc\uc791\ud558\uc138\uc694. \uadf8\uac83\uc744 \uc18c\ub9ac\ub0b4\uc5b4 \uc77d\uc5b4\ubcf4\uc138\uc694. \uc628\ub77c\uc778 \uc2a4\ud3a0\ub9c1\uacfc \ubb38\ubc95 \uccb4\ud06c \uc18c\ud504\ud2b8\uc6e8\uc5b4\ub85c \uba87 \ubc88 \ud6d1\uc5b4\ubcf4\uc138\uc694. \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uac01 \ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c\ub97c \ucd5c\uc18c\ud55c \uc9c0\uc6d0 \ub9c8\uac10 2\uc8fc \uc804\uc5d0 \uc77c\ucc0d \uc2dc\uc791\ud558\uc138\uc694. \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc740 \ub610\ud55c \ud53c\ub4dc\ubc31\uc744 \ub4e3\uae30 \uc704\ud574 \uce5c\uad6c, \ubd80\ubaa8\ub2d8, \ub610\ub294 \uc120\uc0dd\ub2d8\uaed8 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc8fc\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uace0\ub824\ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\uac83\uc740 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc774 \uc0c1\ub2f9\ud788 \ub2e4\ub978 \uad00\uc810\uc744 \uc904 \uc218 \uc788\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc774 \ub9ce\uc740 \ubc29\ubc95\uc73c\ub85c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ud5a5\uc0c1\uc2dc\ud0a4\ub294\ub370 \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc744 \uc904 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0\uac00 \ub300\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \ud5a5\uc0c1\uc2dc\ud0a4\ub098\uc694?<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0 \uc5d0\ub514\ud130\ub4e4\uc740 \uc11d\uc0ac\ub098 \ubc15\uc0ac \ud559\uc704\ub97c \uc18c\uc9c0\ud558\uace0 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\uac83\uc740 \ub2f9\uc2e0\uc774 \ub2e4\ub978 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4\uc5d0 \ube44\ud574 \ubcf4\uc7a5\ub41c \uc804\ubb38\uc9c0\uc2dd\uc744 \uc5bb\uace0 \uc788\ub2e4\ub294 \uac83\uc744 \uc758\ubbf8\ud558\ub294\ub370, \uc774\uac83\uc740 \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc73c\ub85c \uc5d0\ub514\ud130\ub4e4\uc740 \ud559\uc0ac \ud559\uc704\ub97c \uc18c\uc9c0\ud558\uba74 \ub418\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc6b0\ub9ac\uc758 \uc5d0\ub514\ud130\ub4e4\uc740 \uc11d\uc0ac\ub098 \ubc15\uc0ac \ud559\uc704\ub97c \uac00\uc9c4 \uacbd\ud5d8\uc774 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc5f0\uad6c\uc790\ub4e4\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub610\ud55c \ubbf8\uad6d \uc720\uba85 \uc7a1\uc9c0 Wired.com\uac00 \uaf3d\uc740 \ucd5c\uace0 \ub4f1\uae09\uc758 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4 \uc911 \ud558\ub098\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc6b0\ub9ac\ub294 \uace0\uac1d \ub9cc\uc871\uc744 \ubaa9\ud45c\ub85c \uc774\ub7ec\ud55c \uc778\uc815\uc744 \ubc1b\uc558\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc6b0\ub9ac\ub294 \uc6b0\ub9ac\uac00 \uad50\uc815\ud558\ub294 \ubaa8\ub4e0 \ud559\uc0dd\uc758 \uac00\uce58\ub97c \uc81c\uacf5\ud560 \uac83\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2>\uc644\ubcbd\ud55c \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc704\ud55c \ub2e4\uc74c \ub2e8\uacc4\ub294?&nbsp;<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc6b0\ub9ac\ub294 \ud6cc\ub96d\ud55c \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574\uc11c \ub9ce\uc740 \uac83\uc744 \ubc30\uc6e0\uae30\ub97c \ubc14\ub78d\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub7fc \ub2e4\uc74c\uc740 \ubb58\uae4c\uc694?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3>\ub098\ub294 \ub300\ud559\uc785\ud559 \uacfc\uc815\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \ub354 \ub9ce\uc774 \ubc30\uc6b0\uace0 \uc2f6\ub2e4.<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc804\ubb38\uac00\ub4e4\ub85c\ubd80\ud130 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uacfc\uc815, \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub098 \ucd94\ucc9c\uc11c\uc5d0 \ub300\ud55c \ub354 \ub9ce\uc740 \uc870\uc5b8\uc744 \ubc30\uc6b0\ub294 \uac83\uc5d0 \uad00\uc2ec\uc774 \uc788\uc73c\uc2e0\uac00\uc694? <a href=\"\/ko\/academy-admission\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0\uc758 \ub9ac\uc18c\uc2a4\ud398\uc774\uc9c0<\/a>\ub97c&nbsp; \ud655\uc778\ud558\uc2ed\uc2dc\uc624.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3>\ub098\ub294 \ub098\uc758 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc758 \uc804\ubb38\uc801\uc778 \uc601\uc5b4 \uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4\uc5d0 \uad00\uc2ec\uc774 \uc788\ub2e4.&nbsp;<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>\uc6b0\ub9ac\uc5d0\uac8c \ub9e1\uaca8\uc8fc\uc138\uc694. \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc601\uc5b4 \uad50\uc815\uc5d0\uc11c\ubd80\ud130 \uace0\uae09 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc9c0\ub3c4\uae4c\uc9c0, \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc740 \ub300\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ud5a5\uc0c1\uc2dc\ud0a4\ub294 \ub370 \ud544\uc694\ud55c \ub3c4\uc6c0\uc744 \ucc3e\uc744 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3>\ub098\ub294 \uc9c0\uae08 \ub300\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uac1c\uc120\ud560 \uc900\ube44\uac00 \ub418\uc5b4\uc788\ub2e4.<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p><a href=\"\/ko\/services\/admissions-editing\/english-essay\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc601\ubb38 \uad50\uc815<\/a> \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4 \ud398\uc774\uc9c0\uc5d0\uc11c \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4 \ubc0f \uc138\ubd80\uc0ac\ud56d\uc744 \ud655\uc778\ud558\uc2ed\uc2dc\uc624. \ub610\ub294 \ubc14\ub85c \ub4e4\uc5b4\uac00\uc11c <a href=\"\/ko\/pricing\/proofreading-prices\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0 \uac00\uaca9 \uacc4\uc0b0\uae30<\/a>\ub97c \uc0ac\uc6a9\ud558\uc5ec \uac00\uaca9 \uacac\uc801\uc744 \ubc1b\uc544 \uc8fc\ubb38 \ud504\ub85c\uc138\uc2a4\ub97c \ubc14\ub85c \uc2dc\uc791\ud560 \uc218\ub3c4 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u25b6&nbsp;\uae00 \uc791\uc131 \ud6c4&nbsp;<strong>\uc804\ubb38\uac00\uc758 \uac80\ud1a0<\/strong>\uac00 \ud544\uc694\ud558\uc2dc\ub2e4\uba74, \uc5b8\uc81c\ub4e0\uc9c0 \uc800\ud76c&nbsp;<a href=\"\/ko?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc601\ubb38\uad50\uc815<\/a>&nbsp;\uc11c\ube44\uc2a4\ub97c \uc774\uc6a9\ud574\ubcf4\uc138\uc694!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><a target=\"_blank\" href=\"\/ko\/services\/admissions-editing\/english-essay?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc720\ud559\uc9c0\uc6d0\uc11c \uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4<\/a>\u2502<a target=\"_blank\" href=\"\/ko\/services\/admissions-editing\/english-essay?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4<\/a>\u2502<a target=\"_blank\" href=\"\/ko\/services\/admissions-editing\/sop?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">SOP \uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4<\/a>\u2502<a target=\"_blank\" href=\"\/ko\/services\/admissions-editing\/cv-resume?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">CV\/\uc774\ub825\uc11c \uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4<\/a>&nbsp;\u2502<a target=\"_blank\" href=\"\/ko\/services\/admissions-editing\/letter-of-recommendation?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\ucd94\ucc9c\uc11c \uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4<\/a>&nbsp;\u2502&nbsp;<a target=\"_blank\" href=\"\/ko\/services\/admissions-editing\/cover-letter?utm_source=wordvice-blog&amp;utm_medium=post&amp;utm_campaign=inlink_click\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">\ucee4\ubc84\ub808\ud130 \uc601\ubb38\uad50\uc815 \uc11c\ube44\uc2a4<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>\ud559\uc810\uc774\ub098 \uc131\uc801(GPA)\uc744 \ud3ec\ud568\ud558\uc5ec \uc131\uc801\ud45c\uc5d0 \uae30\uc7ac\ub41c \ubaa8\ub4e0 \uc815\ub7c9\uc801 \uc815\ubcf4\ub294&nbsp;\ub300\ud559\uc5d0 \uc9c0\uc6d0\ud558\ub294\ub370 \uc911\uc694\ud55c \uc694\uc18c\uc774\uc9c0\ub9cc, \uc22b\uc790\ub294 \ud559\uc0dd\ub4e4\uc758 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\uc758 \uc77c\ubd80\ub9cc\uc744 \ub9d0\ud574\uc90d\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub294 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559\uc0ac\uc815\uad00\ub4e4\uc5d0\uac8c \uc5ec\ub7ec\ubd84\uc758 \uc194\uc9c1\ud55c \uac1c\uc778\uc801\uc778 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ub97c \ub4e4\ub824\uc8fc\ub294 \ub370 \ud6e8\uc52c \ub354 \uac15\ub825\ud55c \uc5ed\ud560\uc744 \ud55c\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub798\uc11c \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \ubd80\uc11c\ub294 \uc22b\uc790\uc5d0 \ub530\ub77c \ucd08\uae30 \ub4f1\ub77d\uc744 \uacb0\uc815\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc9c0\ub9cc, \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc9c0\uc6d0 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \ubc14\ud0d5\uc73c\ub85c \ucd5c\uc885 \uacb0\uc815\uc744 \ub0b4\ub9bd\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0\ub294\ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":4,"featured_media":1007,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":[],"categories":[29,9],"tags":[800,799,663,801,281,802],"yoast_head":"<!-- This site is optimized with the Yoast SEO plugin v17.7.1 - https:\/\/yoast.com\/wordpress\/plugins\/seo\/ -->\n<title>\ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131\ubc95 - \ud53c\ud574\uc57c \ud560 \uc2e4\uc218 top5 - \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0 \ube14\ub85c\uadf8<\/title>\n<meta name=\"description\" content=\"\ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \uce58\uba85\uc801\uc778 \uba87\uba87 \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \uc2e4\uc218\ub97c \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf4\uba74\uc11c \uc804\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131\ubc95\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc54c\uc544\ubcf4\uc790. \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uac1c\uc120\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud55c \ubc29\ubc95\ub4e4\uc744 \ud655\uc778\ud558\uba70 \uc88b\uc740 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc4f0\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95\uc744 \uc54c\uc544\ubcf4\uc790.\" \/>\n<meta name=\"robots\" content=\"index, follow, max-snippet:-1, max-image-preview:large, max-video-preview:-1\" \/>\n<link rel=\"canonical\" href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid\/\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:locale\" content=\"ko_KR\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:type\" content=\"article\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:title\" content=\"\ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131\ubc95 - \ud53c\ud574\uc57c \ud560 \uc2e4\uc218 top5 - \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0 \ube14\ub85c\uadf8\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:description\" content=\"\ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \uce58\uba85\uc801\uc778 \uba87\uba87 \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \uc2e4\uc218\ub97c \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf4\uba74\uc11c \uc804\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131\ubc95\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc54c\uc544\ubcf4\uc790. \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uac1c\uc120\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud55c \ubc29\ubc95\ub4e4\uc744 \ud655\uc778\ud558\uba70 \uc88b\uc740 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc4f0\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95\uc744 \uc54c\uc544\ubcf4\uc790.\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:url\" content=\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid\/\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:site_name\" content=\"\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0 \ube14\ub85c\uadf8\" \/>\n<meta property=\"article:published_time\" content=\"2022-05-18T13:33:00+00:00\" \/>\n<meta property=\"article:modified_time\" content=\"2023-10-23T01:21:05+00:00\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:image\" content=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/12165821\/5-College-Admissions-Essay-Mistakes-to-Avoid.jpg\" \/>\n\t<meta property=\"og:image:width\" content=\"1200\" \/>\n\t<meta property=\"og:image:height\" content=\"675\" \/>\n<meta name=\"twitter:card\" content=\"summary_large_image\" \/>\n<meta name=\"twitter:image\" content=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/12165821\/5-College-Admissions-Essay-Mistakes-to-Avoid.jpg\" \/>\n<meta name=\"twitter:label1\" content=\"Written by\" \/>\n\t<meta name=\"twitter:data1\" content=\"Wordvice\" \/>\n\t<meta name=\"twitter:label2\" content=\"Est. reading time\" \/>\n\t<meta name=\"twitter:data2\" content=\"9\ubd84\" \/>\n<script type=\"application\/ld+json\" class=\"yoast-schema-graph\">{\"@context\":\"https:\/\/schema.org\",\"@graph\":[{\"@type\":\"WebSite\",\"@id\":\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/#website\",\"url\":\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/\",\"name\":\"\\uc5d0\\uc138\\uc774\\ub9ac\\ubdf0 \\ube14\\ub85c\\uadf8\",\"description\":\"\\ub2e4\\ub978 \\uc6cc\\ub4dc\\ud504\\ub808\\uc2a4 \\uc0ac\\uc774\\ud2b8\",\"potentialAction\":[{\"@type\":\"SearchAction\",\"target\":{\"@type\":\"EntryPoint\",\"urlTemplate\":\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/?s={search_term_string}\"},\"query-input\":\"required name=search_term_string\"}],\"inLanguage\":\"ko-KR\"},{\"@type\":\"ImageObject\",\"@id\":\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid\/#primaryimage\",\"inLanguage\":\"ko-KR\",\"url\":\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/12165821\/5-College-Admissions-Essay-Mistakes-to-Avoid.jpg\",\"contentUrl\":\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/12165821\/5-College-Admissions-Essay-Mistakes-to-Avoid.jpg\",\"width\":1200,\"height\":675},{\"@type\":\"WebPage\",\"@id\":\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid\/#webpage\",\"url\":\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid\/\",\"name\":\"\\ub300\\ud559 \\uc785\\ud559 \\uc5d0\\uc138\\uc774 \\uc791\\uc131\\ubc95 - \\ud53c\\ud574\\uc57c \\ud560 \\uc2e4\\uc218 top5 - \\uc5d0\\uc138\\uc774\\ub9ac\\ubdf0 \\ube14\\ub85c\\uadf8\",\"isPartOf\":{\"@id\":\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/#website\"},\"primaryImageOfPage\":{\"@id\":\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid\/#primaryimage\"},\"datePublished\":\"2022-05-18T13:33:00+00:00\",\"dateModified\":\"2023-10-23T01:21:05+00:00\",\"author\":{\"@id\":\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/#\/schema\/person\/e9c892a1e4761aeb42d9423680a07a5a\"},\"description\":\"\\ub300\\ud559 \\uc785\\ud559 \\uc5d0\\uc138\\uc774\\uc5d0\\uc11c \\uce58\\uba85\\uc801\\uc778 \\uba87\\uba87 \\uc77c\\ubc18\\uc801\\uc778 \\uc2e4\\uc218\\ub97c \\uc0b4\\ud3b4\\ubcf4\\uba74\\uc11c \\uc804\\ubc18\\uc801\\uc778 \\ub300\\ud559 \\uc785\\ud559 \\uc5d0\\uc138\\uc774 \\uc791\\uc131\\ubc95\\uc5d0 \\ub300\\ud574 \\uc54c\\uc544\\ubcf4\\uc790. \\ub300\\ud559 \\uc785\\ud559 \\uc5d0\\uc138\\uc774\\ub97c \\uac1c\\uc120\\ud558\\uae30 \\uc704\\ud55c \\ubc29\\ubc95\\ub4e4\\uc744 \\ud655\\uc778\\ud558\\uba70 \\uc88b\\uc740 \\ub300\\ud559 \\uc785\\ud559 \\uc5d0\\uc138\\uc774\\ub97c \\uc4f0\\ub294 \\ubc29\\ubc95\\uc744 \\uc54c\\uc544\\ubcf4\\uc790.\",\"breadcrumb\":{\"@id\":\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid\/#breadcrumb\"},\"inLanguage\":\"ko-KR\",\"potentialAction\":[{\"@type\":\"ReadAction\",\"target\":[\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid\/\"]}]},{\"@type\":\"BreadcrumbList\",\"@id\":\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid\/#breadcrumb\",\"itemListElement\":[{\"@type\":\"ListItem\",\"position\":1,\"name\":\"Home\",\"item\":\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/\"},{\"@type\":\"ListItem\",\"position\":2,\"name\":\"\\ub300\\ud559 \\uc785\\ud559 \\uc5d0\\uc138\\uc774 \\uc791\\uc131\\ubc95 &#8211; \\ud53c\\ud574\\uc57c \\ud560 \\uc2e4\\uc218 top5\"}]},{\"@type\":\"Person\",\"@id\":\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/#\/schema\/person\/e9c892a1e4761aeb42d9423680a07a5a\",\"name\":\"Wordvice\",\"image\":{\"@type\":\"ImageObject\",\"@id\":\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/#personlogo\",\"inLanguage\":\"ko-KR\",\"url\":\"https:\/\/secure.gravatar.com\/avatar\/9f4974ae6b89931f62d67dbea6bba9cb?s=96&d=mm&r=g\",\"contentUrl\":\"https:\/\/secure.gravatar.com\/avatar\/9f4974ae6b89931f62d67dbea6bba9cb?s=96&d=mm&r=g\",\"caption\":\"Wordvice\"},\"url\":\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/author\/shj\/\"}]}<\/script>\n<!-- \/ Yoast SEO plugin. -->","yoast_head_json":{"title":"\ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131\ubc95 - \ud53c\ud574\uc57c \ud560 \uc2e4\uc218 top5 - \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0 \ube14\ub85c\uadf8","description":"\ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \uce58\uba85\uc801\uc778 \uba87\uba87 \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \uc2e4\uc218\ub97c \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf4\uba74\uc11c \uc804\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131\ubc95\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc54c\uc544\ubcf4\uc790. \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uac1c\uc120\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud55c \ubc29\ubc95\ub4e4\uc744 \ud655\uc778\ud558\uba70 \uc88b\uc740 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc4f0\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95\uc744 \uc54c\uc544\ubcf4\uc790.","robots":{"index":"index","follow":"follow","max-snippet":"max-snippet:-1","max-image-preview":"max-image-preview:large","max-video-preview":"max-video-preview:-1"},"canonical":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid\/","og_locale":"ko_KR","og_type":"article","og_title":"\ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131\ubc95 - \ud53c\ud574\uc57c \ud560 \uc2e4\uc218 top5 - \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0 \ube14\ub85c\uadf8","og_description":"\ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \uce58\uba85\uc801\uc778 \uba87\uba87 \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \uc2e4\uc218\ub97c \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf4\uba74\uc11c \uc804\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131\ubc95\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc54c\uc544\ubcf4\uc790. \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uac1c\uc120\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud55c \ubc29\ubc95\ub4e4\uc744 \ud655\uc778\ud558\uba70 \uc88b\uc740 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc4f0\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95\uc744 \uc54c\uc544\ubcf4\uc790.","og_url":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid\/","og_site_name":"\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0 \ube14\ub85c\uadf8","article_published_time":"2022-05-18T13:33:00+00:00","article_modified_time":"2023-10-23T01:21:05+00:00","og_image":[{"width":1200,"height":675,"url":"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/12165821\/5-College-Admissions-Essay-Mistakes-to-Avoid.jpg","type":"image\/jpeg"}],"twitter_card":"summary_large_image","twitter_image":"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/12165821\/5-College-Admissions-Essay-Mistakes-to-Avoid.jpg","twitter_misc":{"Written by":"Wordvice","Est. reading time":"9\ubd84"},"schema":{"@context":"https:\/\/schema.org","@graph":[{"@type":"WebSite","@id":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/#website","url":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/","name":"\uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0 \ube14\ub85c\uadf8","description":"\ub2e4\ub978 \uc6cc\ub4dc\ud504\ub808\uc2a4 \uc0ac\uc774\ud2b8","potentialAction":[{"@type":"SearchAction","target":{"@type":"EntryPoint","urlTemplate":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/?s={search_term_string}"},"query-input":"required name=search_term_string"}],"inLanguage":"ko-KR"},{"@type":"ImageObject","@id":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid\/#primaryimage","inLanguage":"ko-KR","url":"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/12165821\/5-College-Admissions-Essay-Mistakes-to-Avoid.jpg","contentUrl":"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/kr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/01\/12165821\/5-College-Admissions-Essay-Mistakes-to-Avoid.jpg","width":1200,"height":675},{"@type":"WebPage","@id":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid\/#webpage","url":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid\/","name":"\ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131\ubc95 - \ud53c\ud574\uc57c \ud560 \uc2e4\uc218 top5 - \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub9ac\ubdf0 \ube14\ub85c\uadf8","isPartOf":{"@id":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/#website"},"primaryImageOfPage":{"@id":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid\/#primaryimage"},"datePublished":"2022-05-18T13:33:00+00:00","dateModified":"2023-10-23T01:21:05+00:00","author":{"@id":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/#\/schema\/person\/e9c892a1e4761aeb42d9423680a07a5a"},"description":"\ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\uc5d0\uc11c \uce58\uba85\uc801\uc778 \uba87\uba87 \uc77c\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \uc2e4\uc218\ub97c \uc0b4\ud3b4\ubcf4\uba74\uc11c \uc804\ubc18\uc801\uc778 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131\ubc95\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574 \uc54c\uc544\ubcf4\uc790. \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uac1c\uc120\ud558\uae30 \uc704\ud55c \ubc29\ubc95\ub4e4\uc744 \ud655\uc778\ud558\uba70 \uc88b\uc740 \ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774\ub97c \uc4f0\ub294 \ubc29\ubc95\uc744 \uc54c\uc544\ubcf4\uc790.","breadcrumb":{"@id":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid\/#breadcrumb"},"inLanguage":"ko-KR","potentialAction":[{"@type":"ReadAction","target":["https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid\/"]}]},{"@type":"BreadcrumbList","@id":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/admission\/5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid\/#breadcrumb","itemListElement":[{"@type":"ListItem","position":1,"name":"Home","item":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/"},{"@type":"ListItem","position":2,"name":"\ub300\ud559 \uc785\ud559 \uc5d0\uc138\uc774 \uc791\uc131\ubc95 &#8211; \ud53c\ud574\uc57c \ud560 \uc2e4\uc218 top5"}]},{"@type":"Person","@id":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/#\/schema\/person\/e9c892a1e4761aeb42d9423680a07a5a","name":"Wordvice","image":{"@type":"ImageObject","@id":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/#personlogo","inLanguage":"ko-KR","url":"https:\/\/secure.gravatar.com\/avatar\/9f4974ae6b89931f62d67dbea6bba9cb?s=96&d=mm&r=g","contentUrl":"https:\/\/secure.gravatar.com\/avatar\/9f4974ae6b89931f62d67dbea6bba9cb?s=96&d=mm&r=g","caption":"Wordvice"},"url":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/author\/shj\/"}]}},"amp_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1006"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/4"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1006"}],"version-history":[{"count":17,"href":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1006\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":4285,"href":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1006\/revisions\/4285"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/1007"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1006"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1006"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/ko\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1006"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}