{"id":499,"date":"2017-06-28T17:25:00","date_gmt":"2017-06-28T17:25:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.jp\/?p=499"},"modified":"2025-04-08T09:25:53","modified_gmt":"2025-04-08T00:25:53","slug":"research-writing-tips-editing-manuscript-discussion","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/jp\/blog\/research-writing-tips-editing-manuscript-discussion\/","title":{"rendered":"\u82f1\u8a9e\u8ad6\u6587\u306eDiscussion(\u8003\u5bdf)\u30bb\u30af\u30b7\u30e7\u30f3\u57f7\u7b46\u306e\u30b3\u30c4"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>\u3053\u3093\u306b\u3061\u306f\uff01\u82f1\u6587\u6821\u6b63\u30ef\u30fc\u30c9\u30d0\u30a4\u30b9\u3067\u3059\u3002<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u4eca\u56de\u306e\u8a18\u4e8b\u306f\u524d\u56de\u307e\u3067\u306e<a 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