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Kilimanjaro, I decided my next adventure would be climing Mt. Everest.\u201d\u306f\u3069\u3046\u3067\u3057\u3087\u3046\u3002\u3053\u306e\uff12\u3064\u306e\u6587\u306e\u9055\u3044\u306f\u3001\u6700\u521d\u306e\u6587\u306f\u3042\u306a\u305f\u306e\u597d\u304d\u306a\u3053\u3068\u306e\u8a18\u8ff0\u3067\u3059\u3002\u5f8c\u306e\u6587\u306f\u3001\u3042\u306a\u305f\u306e\u884c\u52d5\u306e\u4ed6\u306b\u3001\u8ca2\u732e\u5ea6\u3068\u30c1\u30e3\u30ec\u30f3\u30b8\u7cbe\u795e\u3092\u540c\u6642\u306b\u8868\u73fe\u3057\u3066\u3044\u307e\u3059\u3002\u3053\u306e\uff12\u6587\u3092\u6bd4\u8f03\u3057\u3066\u3001\u3069\u3061\u3089\u304c\u8868\u73fe\u529b\u304c\u3042\u3063\u3066\u9858\u66f8\u5be9\u67fb\u59d4\u54e1\u306e\u8208\u5473\u3092\u305d\u305d\u308b\u3068\u601d\u3044\u307e\u3059\u304b\uff1f<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>\u60aa\u3044\u4f8b\uff1a\u3000\u7acb\u8a3c\u7121\u3057\u306e\u4e3b\u5f35<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>My teacher once told me that I was the most skilled and intelligent student she\u2019s ever taught, and I believed her. When I set a goal, there\u2019s no stopping me. I\u2019ll work at it until it\u2019s achieved\u2014even if it\u2019s to my own detriment.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>\u4ee5\u524d\u5148\u751f\u304b\u3089\u3001\u5148\u751f\u304c\u6559\u3048\u305f\u751f\u5f92\u306e\u4e2d\u3067\u3001\u79c1\u304c\u6700\u3082\u80fd\u529b\u3068\u77e5\u6027\u306b\u9577\u3051\u3066\u3044\u308b\u3068\u3044\u308f\u308c\u305f\u3053\u3068\u304c\u3042\u308b\u3002\u79c1\u306f\u5148\u751f\u3092\u4fe1\u3058\u305f\u3002\u79c1\u306f\u76ee\u6a19\u3092\u7acb\u3066\u308b\u3068\u3001\u4f55\u304c\u3042\u3063\u3066\u3082\u7acb\u3061\u5411\u304b\u3046\u3002\u9054\u6210\u3059\u308b\u307e\u3067\u52aa\u529b\u3059\u308b\u3002\u305f\u3068\u3048\u640d\u5931\u304c\u3042\u3063\u3066\u3082\u3002<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>\u826f\u3044\u4f8b\uff1a\u3000\u78ba\u5b9f\u306a\u7acb\u8a3c\u3092\u4e0a\u3052\u306a\u304c\u3089\u8868\u73fe<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>In sophomore year, I decided to set a goal to raise more money for Relay for Life than any other student involved. I asked my neighbors, family, teachers, and even my paster, who sat through my 20-minute prepared speech about why donating to this campaign would be the best use of his money. I spoke to community groups. I did three straight weekends of door-to-door fundraising. 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Explain why and how it has affected you.\u201d 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my high school years, my qualities of leadership, initiative, and hard work have help shape me to become the strong student I am today. As the head of our school\u2019s volunteer group, I showed that even a teenager can make a big impact. As a student achieving high grades in all three of my AP courses, I demonstrated my dedication to education about all. Finally, as a daughter of working-class immigrant parents, I have used my value of hard work to achieve things my parents never thought possible. 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