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10 Opening Lines from Stanford Admission Essays<\/h2>\n\n\n\n
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  1.  I change my name each time I place an order at Starbucks.<\/li>\n\n\n\n
  2. When I was in the eighth grade I couldn’t read.<\/li>\n\n\n\n
  3. While traveling through the daily path of life, have you ever stumbled upon a hidden 4. pocket of the universe?<\/li>\n\n\n\n
  4. I have old hands.<\/li>\n\n\n\n
  5. I was paralyzed from the waist down. I would try to move my leg or even shift an ankle but I never got a response. This was the first time thoughts of death ever cross my mind.<\/li>\n\n\n\n
  6. I almost didn’t live through September 11th, 2001.<\/li>\n\n\n\n
  7. The spaghetti burbled and slushed around the pan, and as I stirred it, the noises it 9. gave off began to sound increasingly like bodily functions.<\/li>\n\n\n\n
  8. I have been surfing Lake Michigan since I was 3 years old.<\/li>\n\n\n\n
  9. I stand on the riverbank surveying this rippled range like some riparian cowboy -instead of chaps, I wear vinyl, thigh-high waders and a lasso of measuring tape and twine is slung over my arm.<\/li>\n\n\n\n
  10. I had never seen anyone get so excited about mitochondria.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n

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