{"id":205,"date":"2023-07-25T05:46:00","date_gmt":"2023-07-25T05:46:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blog.wordvice.com\/?p=205"},"modified":"2024-06-20T01:58:32","modified_gmt":"2024-06-20T01:58:32","slug":"writing-the-common-app-essay","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/blog\/writing-the-common-app-essay\/","title":{"rendered":"How to Write the Common App Essay&#8211;Examples for 2023-2024"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image size-large\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"1024\" height=\"540\" src=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/us\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/03020212\/University-Campus-1024x540.jpg\" alt=\"university of Iowa Old Capitol front\" class=\"wp-image-3143\" srcset=\"https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/us\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/03020212\/University-Campus-1024x540.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/us\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/03020212\/University-Campus-300x158.jpg 300w, https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/us\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/03020212\/University-Campus-768x405.jpg 768w, https:\/\/ee-blog-cdn.wordvice.com\/us\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/08\/03020212\/University-Campus.jpg 1100w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 1024px) 100vw, 1024px\" \/><figcaption class=\"wp-element-caption\">The Common Application is the most widely accepted undergraduate college admission application in the US. Common App Essays are a crucial part of any college applicant&#8217;s admissions materials.&nbsp;<br><\/figcaption><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<p>So, you\u2019re applying to college and are probably panicking about how to write the hardest part of your application: the Common Application essay. Don\u2019t panic! We\u2019re here to help. If you keep the following tips in mind, we\u2019re confident that you\u2019ll be well on your way to drafting a strong application essay that screams out, \u201cDear College, this is who I am, and here\u2019s why you want me!\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>So, let&#8217;s start with some basics.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>What is the Common Application Essay?<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>The Common Application centralizes the admissions process for over 900 schools. These <a href=\"https:\/\/www.commonapp.org\/members\">participating colleges and universities<\/a> all use the same common biographical and academic information forms. Most of the schools also require or accept the Common Application essay. Neat, huh? Essentially, you choose the schools you want to apply to, add them to your application list, fill in the general demographic and biographical information, upload or input academic records and standardized testing information, designate people to write you recommendations, and upload the Common Application essay. All of this is done in one place. That\u2019s it. Simple, right?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Now, many of the top-tiered schools require additional information and essays, but most of these documents can be uploaded into the Common Application. If you\u2019re applying to art schools, the schools will provide extra links on their Common Application sites. Those links will lead you to a website where you can upload your art portfolio and additional documents.&nbsp; We\u2019ll discuss such additional requirements in another post.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>What&nbsp;do I need to include in the Common App Essay?<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>While the Common Application essay regularly makes adjustments to its essay prompts, for the 2022-2023 college application season, the prompts will remain exactly the same as last year, when the rarely used prompt about solving a problem was replaced with one that was inspired by scientific research on gratitude and kindness, to, according to Common App President &amp; CEO Jenny Rickard, &#8220;help students think about something positive and heartfelt in their lives.\u201d The <a href=\"https:\/\/www.commonapp.org\/blog\/2023-2024-common-app-essay-prompts\">2023-2024 Common App Essay prompts<\/a> also still contain <a href=\"https:\/\/medium.com\/wordviceediting\/writing-about-covid-19-in-a-college-admissions-essay-f06dfc78730c\">the optional COVID-19 prompt<\/a> that appeared in 2020.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ol class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li><strong>Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, please share your story.<\/strong><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?<\/strong><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>Reflect on a time when you questioned or challenged a belief or idea. What prompted your thinking? What was the outcome?<\/strong><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>Reflect on something that someone has done for you that has made you happy or thankful in a surprising way. How has this gratitude affected or motivated you?<\/strong><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others.<\/strong><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging it makes you lose all track of time. Why does it captivate you? What or who do you turn to when you want to learn more?<\/strong><\/li>\n\n\n\n<li><strong>Share an essay on any topic of your choice. It can be one you\u2019ve already written, one that responds to a different prompt, or one of your own design.<\/strong><\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n\n<p>Did you notice a common theme among these questions? At its core, the Common Application essay is designed to make you answer the question, \u201cWHO are you?\u201d&nbsp; What colleges and universities want to know is (1) how your experiences or background have shaped you into the person you are today and (2) how who you are today is going to affect your future academic performance.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>Why is the Common App Essay important?<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>This essay is one of the most important parts of your application, and in some cases, especially for top-tiered schools, it is weighed as much as, or more than, your grades and test scores\u2014estimates say that they can account for anywhere from 10 to 30% of admission decisions. Why? Well, think about it. If most of the applicants applying to a top college have similar academic profiles, how can the schools distinguish one candidate from another? It\u2019s all in the story you craft, and we\u2019re here to help you present <strong>the best version of you<\/strong>!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>Preparing to Write Your Common App Essay<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>A good starting point for writing a successful application essay is <a href=\"https:\/\/blog.collegevine.com\/common-app-essay-examples\/#prompt2\">reading Common App essay examples<\/a> that got other students admitted to their schools of choice. However, keep in mind that you do that for inspiration only and that your goal is not to copy anyone\u2014ultimately, you\u2019ll have to come up with your very own story and present it in your very own way. The tips and \u201cdos and don\u2019ts\u201d below can help you do exactly that as you prepare to write or rewrite your Common Application essay.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>You are also well advised to ask your teachers, counselors, and other mentors for advice at any step of the process: Maybe come up with a list of potential topics and let someone who knows you and is aware of your goal (to get into your school of choice) give you feedback on what they think suits or doesn\u2019t suit you. Or make a draft of your story (maybe just in your head) and call your mentor to ask them if they would choose you as a prospective student based on that story. You can of course also seek out professional proofreaders like us to help you revise your personal statement and make it shine!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>The two main points of getting yourself ready for writing your Common App essay are (1) that admissions committees have no preference for which prompt you choose and (2) that your essay is not a place to restate what you already said on your resum\u00e9 or in the Common App \u201cactivities\u201d section. You also don\u2019t have to prove that you somehow changed the world or did something heroic. Instead, the essay is a chance for you to show the admissions committee the &#8220;you&#8221; that your friends, classmates, teachers, and family know. Our advice for where to start is to brainstorm the best (most interesting, most meaningful, most unique\u2026) stories about your life that you can think of, and <em>then<\/em> look at the question prompts and decide which one your story could be an answer to.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>Common App Essay Writing Timelines<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>Now that we agree on how important your Common App essay is, you will not be surprised if we recommend that you start working on it several months before the actual deadline. Why so early? Because you don&#8217;t want to rush or force it or regret your choice of topic when it&#8217;s too late to change. If you see this as a creative process that needs time, you&#8217;ll make the most out of it and also learn a lot along the way that will help you with writing other essays and assignments once you got into your school of choice!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>Timeline 1: Write a Common App Essay in three months<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-table\"><table><tbody><tr><td> <strong>First two weeks <\/strong><\/td><td>Don&#8217;t try to write anything\u2014just brainstorm all the stories you could tell about your life, ask friends\/family\/advisors\/mentors for input, and see how your stories could fit into the question prompts. <\/td><\/tr><tr><td> <strong>Weeks 3-4   <\/strong><\/td><td>Freewriting: Choose one prompt and one story every day, set a timer, and just write down everything that comes to your mind until the alarm goes off. Keep it light, and don&#8217;t show anything to anyone during this period. You don&#8217;t want to be too conscious about your writing yet. Just play around. <\/td><\/tr><tr><td><strong> Week 5<\/strong><\/td><td>Choose a story and a prompt and complete your first draft of your Common App personal statement. <\/td><\/tr><tr><td><strong> Week 6 <\/strong><\/td><td>Complete your second draft (this is the revision\/editing phase). <\/td><\/tr><tr><td> <strong>Weeks 7-8<\/strong> <\/td><td>Complete your third and fourth drafts. <\/td><\/tr><tr><td><strong> Week 9 <\/strong><\/td><td>Ask for feedback from advisors, mentors, or teachers. <\/td><\/tr><tr><td><strong> Week 10<\/strong> <\/td><td>Complete your final draft. <\/td><\/tr><\/tbody><\/table><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<p>Now you have one finished essay to apply with and two more weeks to show it around for more feedback in case you get second thoughts or to change it up again after sleeping on it for a couple of days.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>If this seems like way too much time to invest in and focus on your essay, then try this:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>Timeline 2: Write your Common App Essay in one month<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-table\"><table><tbody><tr><td><strong>First week<\/strong><\/td><td>Brainstorm and play around with the question prompts. <\/td><\/tr><tr><td><strong>Second week <\/strong><\/td><td>Freewriting: Write down any ideas that come to mind; don&#8217;t limit yourself with specific structure or content. <\/td><\/tr><tr><td><strong>Third week <\/strong><\/td><td>Complete the first draft of your Common App Essay. <\/td><\/tr><tr><td><strong>Fourth week<\/strong><\/td><td>Complete the second draft (this is the revision\/editing phase), ask for feedback, and complete the final draft of your essay. Edit and proofread your essay before submitting to admissions officials.<\/td><\/tr><\/tbody><\/table><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<p>Since you don\u2019t have much time for feedback if you start that late, make sure you contact your advisors\/teachers well in advance to let them know when you\u2019ll be ready so that they can schedule you in or tell you when they are available. You don\u2019t want to pressure people and step on their toes when you need their valuable input!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>Great Common App Essay Examples for 2023-2024<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>We found some of the best Common App essay examples from this year and years past to give you a sense of what kinds of essays work best to captivate admissions officials. We have listed essay examples in each section by their corresponding essay prompt to help you understand what kinds of responses are most suitable. Although your essay will be unique and might vary significantly from the examples below, read through each one to get an overall idea.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>Common App Essay Examples: Prompt #1<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\"><p><em>Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.<\/em><\/p><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>This prompt asks applicants to write about what makes them uniquely them. Whether you\u2019re writing about a hobby, your background, or how you define yourself, it\u2019s important to tell a story so central to who you are that your application would be incomplete without it.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>When answering this prompt, it\u2019s easy to repeat information that you are already presenting outside of the essay. Avoid this at all costs. Remember: the essay is supposed to add a <em>new dimension<\/em> to your application.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>See this sample essay to get a sense of what a great response to this prompt could look like.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.thoughtco.com\/handiwork-sample-common-application-essay-788395\">Handiwork<\/a> \u2013 An essay about interest in creating crafts. This student expertly illustrates their dedication to a hobby by presenting anecdotes packed with sensory details.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h4 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>Excerpt from \u201cHandiwork\u201d<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\"><p><em>I\u2019ve always been a crafter. From the early days of Kindergarten macaroni ornaments, to making my own prom dress last year, I\u2019ve had a knack for creating things. For drafting sketches, drawing plans, making calculations, gathering supplies, adding finishing touches. There is something so satisfying about holding something you, and you alone, have made\u2014something that was just an image in your mind until you set about to bring it into existence, to create something new, something different. I\u2019m sure there are hundreds of doll furniture sets out there in that same gray and pink, but there is only one with fitted (albeit with sloppy stitching) navy blue covers. There\u2019s a sense of pride there, however small.<\/em><\/p><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>Common App Essay Examples: Prompt #2&nbsp;<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\"><p><em>The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?<\/em><\/p><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>This is one of the more challenging prompts. It can be difficult to demonstrate strength and potential while writing about failure. However, if you\u2019re comfortable with introspection and making yourself a bit more vulnerable, this prompt is a great option.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>A good response to this prompt demonstrates a high level of confidence and maturity as well as humility and a willingness to learn. Simply writing about a failure does nothing; students should focus on how they handled their failures in positive ways.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>This essay example demonstrates how to approach this prompt.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.thoughtco.com\/striking-out-sample-common-application-essay-788385\">Striking Out<\/a> \u2013 An essay about setbacks and overcoming obstacles. Note the effectiveness of this kind of narrative in showing your abilities and perseverance.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h4 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>Excerpt from \u201cStriking Out\u201d<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\"><p><em>About a week later, some of my friends from the team got together at the park to hang out. When I arrived, I was a little surprised that no one seemed to be mad at me \u2013 after all, I\u2019d lost us the game, and they had to be disappointed about not making it to the semifinals. It wasn\u2019t until we split into teams for an impromptu pickup game that I started to realize why no one was upset. Maybe it was the excitement of reaching the playoffs or the pressure of living up to my brothers\u2019 examples, but sometime during that game, I\u2019d lost sight of why most of us played summer league baseball. It wasn\u2019t to win the championship, as cool as that would have been. It was because we all loved to play. I didn\u2019t need a trophy or a Hollywood come-from-behind win to have fun playing baseball with my friends, but maybe I needed to strike out to remember that.<\/em><\/p><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>Common App Essay Examples: Prompt #3<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\"><p><em>Reflect on a time when you questioned or challenged a belief or idea. What prompted your thinking? What was the outcome?<\/em><\/p><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>This is an extremely broad question \u2013 students could write about nearly anything they have ever questioned. It is important to keep in mind, however, that not all ideas and beliefs make great essays.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Students should not write about something superficial; they should write about ideas and beliefs that are central to their identities. A response to this prompt should demonstrate thoughtfulness, open-mindedness, and an ability to think analytically.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>The following essay demonstrates what it takes to address this prompt effectively.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.thoughtco.com\/gym-class-hero-common-application-essay-788394\">Gym Class Hero<\/a> \u2013 An essay about challenging an idea despite all the odds being stacked against you. Note the author\u2019s use of internal monologue to move the narrative along and captivate the reader.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h4 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>Excerpt from \u201cGym Class Hero\u201d<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\"><p><em>Where did my doubt come from? No one ever said to me, \u201cOh, you can\u2019t run a mile.\u201d I don\u2019t even remember any askance looks, any raised eyebrows implying I was out of my depth. Middle-schoolers can be a cruel bunch, but not that day. There was just that voice in my head, as clear as a bell: \u201cYou\u2019ll never be able to run a mile. You can\u2019t even climb stairs without getting winded. It\u2019s going to hurt. You\u2019ll probably pass out. You could never run a mile.\u2019 A whole mile? That voice was right. It was, in my mind, impossibly long. What was I going to do?<\/em><\/p><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>Common App Essay Examples: Prompt #4&nbsp;<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\"><p><em>Reflect on something that someone has done for you that has made you happy or thankful in a surprising way. How has this gratitude affected or motivated you?<\/em><\/p><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>As mentioned above, this prompt was added last year and inspired by scientific research on gratitude and kindness, specifically, by research on the benefits of writing about the positive influence that other people have on our lives.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>While this prompt may seem to be asking a simple question, your answer has the potential to provide deep insights into who you are to the admissions committee. Explaining what you are grateful for can show them your culture, your community, your philosophical outlook on the world, and what makes you tick.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>Common App Essay Examples: Prompt #5&nbsp;<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\"><p><em>Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others.<\/em><\/p><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>We all have had experiences that helped us grow and mature, and this prompt is therefore a good option for most\u2014if not all\u2014applicants.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>The key here is to choose the \u201cright\u201d accomplishment, event, or realization and then write about it in a way that showcases depth and self-analytical skills. When identifying a period of personal growth, try to stay within the past few years. You want to show the admissions officers who you are now, and a childhood story is not likely to accomplish this as effectively.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>This essay is a great example of how to properly approach this prompt.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\">\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/www.thoughtco.com\/sample-college-admissions-essay-student-teacher-788389\">Student Teacher<\/a> \u2013 An essay about an event that sparked personal growth. This essay example shows how demonstrating mental growth and wisdom can be just as effective as retelling how you overcame a difficulty.&nbsp;<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h4 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>Excerpt from \u201cStudent Teacher\u201d<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\"><p><em>Anthony\u2019s success wasn\u2019t just his plane. He had succeeded in making me aware of my own failures. Here was a student who was never taken seriously and had developed a bunch of behavioral issues as a result. I never stopped to look for his potential, discover his interests, or get to know the kid beneath the facade. I had grossly underestimated Anthony, and I am grateful that he was able to disillusion me.<\/em><\/p><p><em>I like to think that I\u2019m an open-minded, liberal, and non-judgmental person. Anthony taught me that I\u2019m not there yet.<\/em><\/p><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>Common App Essay Examples: Prompt #6<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\"><p><em>Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging that it makes you lose all track of time. Why does it captivate you? What or who do you turn to when you want to learn more?<\/em><\/p><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<p>Like Prompt 3, Prompt 6 is very broad, and allows students to write about nearly any interest they might have. The purpose of this question is to learn what excites and motivates an applicant. Therefore, this option is ideal for students with concrete and established passions. On the other hand, students who are not sure what they are enthusiastic about should probably consider a different prompt.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>To approach this prompt, start by listing all the topics, ideas, and concepts you care most about and then narrow those down to those you can <a href=\"https:\/\/www.thoughtco.com\/common-application-essay-option-6-losing-track-of-time-4147327\">describe, justify, and explain<\/a>.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>See the following essay, taken from this collection of <a href=\"https:\/\/apply.jhu.edu\/application-process\/essays-that-worked\/\">\u201cessays that worked\u201d<\/a>, to get a sense of what makes a great response to this prompt about passion for a hobby.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>Excerpt from \u201cLeft and Right Don\u2019t Exist\u201d<\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n<blockquote class=\"wp-block-quote is-layout-flow wp-block-quote-is-layout-flow\"><p><em>Through flying, I began to consider all points of view, regardless of my personal perspective.<\/em><\/p><p><em>Perhaps it was my ability to scan the horizon to communicate a single story, uniting contrasting outlooks, that drew me to my love for journalism and the diverse melting pot that was my community.<\/em><\/p><p><em>To me, journalism modernizes the ancient power of storytelling, filled with imperfect characters and intricate conflicts to which I am the narrator. As editor-in-chief for my school newspaper, The Wildcat\u2019s Tale, I aim to share the uncensored perspective of all students and encourage my editorial groups to talk \u2014 and listen \u2014 to those with whom they disagree. Starting each newspaper edition with a socratic, round-table discussion, I ask the other journalists to pursue stories that answer the questions: why did this happen and where will it lead?<\/em><\/p><\/blockquote>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>Additional Common App Essay Writing Tips<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-group\"><div class=\"wp-block-group__inner-container is-layout-flow wp-block-group-is-layout-flow\">\n<div class=\"wp-block-columns is-layout-flex wp-container-core-columns-is-layout-1 wp-block-columns-is-layout-flex\">\n<div class=\"wp-block-column is-layout-flow wp-block-column-is-layout-flow\" style=\"flex-basis:100%\">\n<figure class=\"wp-block-table alignleft is-style-stripes\"><table class=\"has-fixed-layout\"><tbody><tr><td class=\"has-text-align-left\" data-align=\"left\"><strong>Dos<\/strong><\/td><td class=\"has-text-align-left\" data-align=\"left\"><strong>Don\u2019ts<\/strong><\/td><\/tr><tr><td class=\"has-text-align-left\" data-align=\"left\">Write about a topic you are passionate about. When you have a lot to say about a topic, readers can quickly see the enthusiasm you have for the subject matter.<\/td><td class=\"has-text-align-left\" data-align=\"left\">Don\u2019t pick a topic you care little about. Your lack of passion will be evident in your writing. So don\u2019t pick a topic because everyone else is writing about it, especially if that subject is meaningless to you. If you do so, your essay will look lifeless\u2014that\u2019s not what you want admissions officers to think of you!<\/td><\/tr><tr><td class=\"has-text-align-left\" data-align=\"left\">How do you choose the best topic for yourself? Make a list (List 1) of hobbies, achievements, skills, and personality traits. Make another list (List 2) of ordinary routines you do\u2014things that, when noticed, would make the people closest to you say, \u201cThat\u2019s definitely you.\u201dPick an aspect from each list and combine them in a way that tells an interesting story. Select two to three events that can best highlight the two items you chose. For example, one student wrote about how her daily makeup routine and the colors she chose reflected how her confidence (both academically and personally) developed over the years. Another student wrote about how quitting one musical instrument and trying another one taught him how changing perspectives can improve a seemingly miserable situation. Now you try. What combinations can you make from your two lists?<\/td><td class=\"has-text-align-left\" data-align=\"left\">Don\u2019t write about potentially offensive topics. You don\u2019t know who the admissions officers who will be reviewing your essay are. Play it safe and avoid subjects such as religion, politics, death, or any other emotionally charged topic that might make certain readers uncomfortable. Remember, you\u2019re trying to make them like you.<\/td><\/tr><tr><td class=\"has-text-align-left\" data-align=\"left\">Answer the question. That is, make sure your topic focuses on WHO YOU ARE.<\/td><td class=\"has-text-align-left\" data-align=\"left\">Do NOT write about some amazingly interesting topic that has nothing to do with you. Remember, admissions officers want to know about YOU. So if you want to talk about the latest environmental disaster or the plight of a local ethnic tribe, make sure that story is about how that issue impacted you and shaped you as a person.<\/td><\/tr><tr><td class=\"has-text-align-left\" data-align=\"left\">Skip generalized information. Instead, provide real, specific examples to support your statements. Your attention to detail will help make you more memorable to an admissions officer who has to read hundreds, if not thousands, of essays. For example, instead of \u201cI love hiking,\u201d you could say, \u201cAfter reaching the summit of Mt. Kilimanjaro, I decided my next adventure would be climbing Mt. Everest.\u201d What\u2019s the difference between these two sentences? The first <em>says<\/em> you like something, while the second one <em>illustrates<\/em> that you do\u2014but not only that, it also shows your level of commitment and your desire for challenge. Of the two example sentences, which do you think maximizes your use of words and would be more interesting to admissions officers?<\/td><td class=\"has-text-align-left\" data-align=\"left\">Don\u2019t be generic. If someone else can pick up your draft and say, \u201cHey, that\u2019s about me, too,\u201d then you know something is wrong. Your essay should be unique. You\u2019re trying to distinguish yourself from all the other applicants, remember?<\/td><\/tr><tr><td class=\"has-text-align-left\" data-align=\"left\">Watch the word count! Your Common Application essay cannot be longer than 650 words.<\/td><td class=\"has-text-align-left\" data-align=\"left\">Don\u2019t write a novel or be too short. As you start writing, you\u2019ll soon realize that the 650-word limit does not give you a lot of space to talk about you. But that\u2019s the point. You are NOT supposed to write an autobiography cataloging everything in your life. Instead, choosing a couple of specific events is all it takes to write a rich and powerful essay. Make those words count!<\/td><\/tr><tr><td class=\"has-text-align-left\" data-align=\"left\">Edit, edit, edit!&nbsp; Did we say edit already? This essay is not something you should write in one sitting and call it a day. Instead, do the following. Draft it without editing (this way you get all your thoughts down on paper and can trim\/adjust later). Read your draft. For each sentence ask if it is adding more information about who you are. If it doesn\u2019t, it\u2019s probably good to cut it. Check spelling and grammar. Ask some adults who know you well to read for flow and organization and to make sure your essay is substantively sound. Revise again if needed.<\/td><td class=\"has-text-align-left\" data-align=\"left\">Don\u2019t use clich\u00e9s or antiquated language. This is why sharing your essay with a peer or editor and asking them to give you feedback on your language and tone can be of huge help\u2014they will definitely notice all such platitudes and tell you to cut them out!<br><br>DO NOT WRITE YOUR ESSAY AT THE LAST MINUTE. We know you\u2019re busy with tests and life, but, hey, this is your college application we\u2019re talking about. Make sure you give yourself enough time to draft it, let it simmer for a bit, and then revise it as necessary. If you struggle with organization and time management, have a look at the suggested timelines above!<\/td><\/tr><\/tbody><\/table><\/figure>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p>There are a few other <a href=\"https:\/\/wordvice.com\/blog\/5-college-admissions-essay-mistakes-to-avoid\/\">common essay mistakes <\/a>you should avoid, and reading about these in advance might help you steer clear of making a fundamental error when it comes to choosing your application essay topic.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>Preparing Your Common App Essay for Submission<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p>We know we keep repeating ourselves, but after writing your application essay, be sure to have it reviewed by a trusted friend or colleague, and edited by a professional editing service like Wordvice before you finally hand it in. 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